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PostSubject: Slender (A.K.A Slen)   Wed Jul 21, 2010 4:15 pm

Basic Character Information:

Name: (Unknown) Called 'Slender' for his unnatural thinness, and height. Shortened to Slen.
Age:25
Gender: Male
Clan:None


http://th04.deviantart.net/fs47/PRE/f/2009/173/c/9/Ninja_Dude_Tallis_by_shoujoartist.jpg
The man who became Slen was an average ninja, good enough to be of use to his village, but lacking the special qualities to become a Jounin. He dressed in black, wore a mask, and kept out of the way.

Looks:http://th07.deviantart.net/fs71/PRE/i/2010/132/f/b/Slender_Man_by_Joshua_J249.jpg
Slen is 6'9, and unnaturally pale. His hair is shock white, and a multitude of threads bind his mouth closed. He can still somehow make himself understood by loosening the threads. His hands, fingers, arms, and legs are unnaturally long and thin, while as strong or stronger than normal flesh. He looks incredibly freaky.

Personality: Slen is a ninja with conflicting goals. Originally, he was a kindhearted ninja, but having lived with sadistic tendrils inside him, he learned he has to be cruel than them to control them. So naturally, he is quite cruel and fickle when the mood takes him. Otherwise, he is quite fickle, having a very loose system of rules and morals. He will do his best to stay away from others, a habit gained from years of coming withing a couple feet of people, because the threads would kill them. He is apt to keep his distance, and is always on guard, appearing incredibly paranoid. People usually stay away from him, and he likes that.

Basic Clan Information

N/A

Skill and Rank Information

Village:Formerly of Moon.
Rank: Special Chuunin.

Special Characteristics: Unnaturally tall, and has completely white skin.
Elements:Earth, but prefers physical confrontation.
Skills Specialties: Stealth, Psychological Manipulation


Jutsu

Name: Nawanuke no Jutsu (Rope Escape Technique)
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Short, 0-10 feet.
Element: N/A
Description: A basic jutsu taught at the Ninja academy. When a ninja is tied with rope, he can undo the knots and escape using this technique.

Name: Shunshin no Jutsu (Body Flicker Technique)
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Short, 0-15 feet.
Element: N/A
Description: This jutsu allows the users to appear and disappear in an instant. This is very useful when trying to escape or attack suddenly. The users often uses nearby elements, like mist, sand or leaves, to mask their disappearance or appearance.

Name: Genjutsu Kai (Genjutsu Release)
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Medium, 10-30 feet.
Element: N/A
Description: Dispels a Genjutsu of rank C or less. Also dispels any kind of Genjutsu of rank B and lower from an ally. This requires basic Genjutsu resistance to perform.

Name: Kawarimi no Jutsu (Substitution Jutsu)
Rank: E
Range: Short, 0-10 feet.
Element: N/A
Description: A substitution jutsu which involves switching the ninja's body for another object of the same weight, usually a piece of wood. This can create an opening to attack the enemy or to escape. This can only be used when there is an escape way for the ninja (not trapped in a prison, nor unable to move). This can only be used three times in a battle.


Name: Henge no Jutsu (Transformation Jutsu)
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Short, 0-10 feet.
Element: N/A
Description: Allows the user to transform physically, and completely, into another person or object, as long as it doesn't surpass the person's size by 50 lbs or more.


Name:Contrasted Colors
Rank: C
Type: Genjutsu
Element: None
Description: A genjutsu that changes all the colors of the targets mind to black or white. Can be thrown of by someone with sufficient skill in genjutsu resistance. Slightest eye-contact necessary.

Earth Release: Earth Corridor
Rank: B
Type: Ninjustu
Element: Earth
Description:This jutsu will cause the earth in the surrounding area to rise up and over a target and create a cavern, imprisoning the target. The user can leave an opening to allow attacks to go in to strike down the trapped adversaries, and close it up to prevent escape.

Earth Release: Hiding Like a Mole Technique
Rank: C
Type: Ninjustu
Element: Earth
Description:This technique changes earth into fine sand by channeling chakra into it, allowing the user to dig through it like a mole. The user can pinpoint where they are, despite being underground, by sensing the magnetic forces. They can also sense what is happening on the surface and use that information to launch a surprise attack on the enemy. One can also hide deep in the ground, escaping to a depth where the enemy can't reach.


History and RP Sample

History:

When the man who became Slen was born, nothing special happened. No stars crossed the night sky, no villages were attacked. he only special thing about was the fact that it was so mundane. His father was a former A.N.B.U, who was working undercover as a chunin, and was present for his birth, His mother was in fact, a high-grade chunin, who knew exactly what his father worked as. They raised him as a ninja, and he knew how to handle a kunai without cutting himself before he could read.

He went to the Ninja Academy at a regular age, and absorbed as much information as he could, cross-referencing with the local library. He underperformed occasionally, so he would not stick out much, and kept away from any local bullies. Being one of the middle students, he was paired with the highest grade, and the lowest grade. Their sensei gave them a standard test, which they all passed.

They kept their first couple missions on a low danger level, but gradually upped the risk, until they were performing protection and escort missions left and right. The lowest grader actually turned out to be a savant at fighting, but..... sucked at reading and short term memory. The best student was good at pretty much everything.... except self esteem. Never having failed at anything before, the first time he faced someone better than him, he almost had a nervous breakdown. It took the intervention of his other two teammates to defeat the opponent. After some positive re-enforcement, and a crash course in accepting defeat, they all got along much better. After a year, their sensei nominated them for the chunin test.

The first test was a simple one, simply reaching a location, with all the chunin of the village trying to capture you.

They passed the first test with admirable time, finishing on the second day of a three-day time-limit.

The second test was harder, having to escort of the Jonin through a crowded marketplace, without him being 'killed'.

They passed that one, almost failing but managing to succeed.

The third test, like most, was a simple battle-royale.

Slen came in fourth, and his teammates tied for first.

1rst to tenth place were made chunin, and they stuck together, until a fateful mission.....

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Not much is known of 'Slen's' history.

He was a normal ninja, until one day he found a dying ninja, and either forced, or was given the secret of the Earth-Grudge-Fear by the ninja. When he attempted the operation on himself, severe side-effects occurred. He immediately experienced extreme pain as he grew dramatically in height, and most of the pigment drained from him, leaving every inch of him perfectly white. He returned to his village, and was subsequently attacked, as no-one recognized him. He discovered that the threads of the Grudge Jutsu had a slight mind of their own, when they skewered people he had lived with for years, and took their insides. When he tried to scream out, and beg them to listen, to stop attacking him, several threads sewed his mouth shut. He ran, and snagged a scroll, that later turned out to be the Color jutsu. He spent awhile learning it, and some more time gaining control over the threads. They may still act on their own at times however, and despise everything except Slen. He will take jobs for money, but more often goes for jobs with mass eliminations, rather than personal assassinations. Though that does not mean he won't take it for the right price.

He currently wanders the land, taking jobs, never staying in a fixed location for long, for fear he will be hunted down.

Hopes to whatever god will take him that he finds a village, as he is tired of constantly looking over his shoulder.

Rp Sample:

Slen came upon the camp of a group of bandits he had been hired to eliminate. They were hiding out in a forest, a perfect hunting ground. He spent an hour preparing, then, he struck.

Suddenly, a bandit vanished at the corner of a campfire. No-one noticed.

Liquid began to drip onto the face of one of the bandits, and the bandit looked up. Screams immediately rang out as his sight fixed upon his comrade impaled upon a tree breach.

The rest of the night, he had fun with them, vanishing a bandit every half an hour, and displaying them in interesting place.

Finally, after it was almost dawn, and half of the bandits had been eliminated, he moved on to eliminating them in twos. And when a group of five were left they decided to make a run for it. Slen snagged the last one almost casually, and threw him into the others, knocking the other four into the ground. He formed claws from threads on one hand, and skewered a bandit with it. His mouth opening and threads leaping from it, binding another one. The threads constricted, crushing the bandit, and two of the others ran. Slen's hand reached out after them, threads lashing out to trip them, when he felt a sudden pain in his chest. The third bandit stayed, and had stabbed him in the chest, perforating one of his hearts. Slen cursed, and his hand punched out crushing the man's throat. The other two bandits were dragged back to their doom by his other hand.

It was going to be a long night, Slen decided, as he stepped on the throat of one of them. He hadn't figured out how to make the heart extraction a quick process, and he needed another one. The odd thing about it was that it could only be extracted from the living.

He knelt down to the whimpering bandit. "Soon, I bet you're going to envy you friends there. Oh, well. I guess you got the short end of the stick."

Slen's hand plunged into the bandit's chest, and his other hand sank into his own.

"Its not your lucky day, my new friend."

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Sometime later, Slen walked out from the forest. The job had decent pay, and tonight, he was going to have his favorite food, as a celebration.

Tonight was duck dumpling night.


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PostSubject: Re: Slender (A.K.A Slen)   Thu Jul 22, 2010 11:44 am

Hai ^-^ How's it going, here to check your app if it's finished =P

Few small problems, otherwise everything is good m'kay? Lets see...

Roleplay and History are goodi, good amount of detail in you're role sample, congrats on that^ ^ Though I'd perfer history in arcs, like Birth Arc, Academy Arc, Genin arc, such and such, thats not required... Do you only want one jutsu? Because I strongly suggest adding the 6 basic jutsu, and two personal jutsu. If you don't want an element thats okay, but add Taijutsu or Kenjutsu to your speciality if you will?

I'm glad you have a picture, but can you type up maybe 4 sentences of appearance? if you have trouble explaining what it looks like lemme know, I'm more than happy to help. Personality is a good start, but have you considered adding maybe 2 more sentences? Maybe about how you're character acts around other people, if they like to be by themselves or in groups, that kind of thing.

And for the clan...Kekkei Genkai is for Clans only, but you can add this to you're jutsu. If you'd like a clan feel free to make one, I'll try to make the experiance as painless as possible.

http://narutor.forummotion.com/jutsu-creation-f8/the-5-basic-academy-jutsu-t2269.htm#26734
A link to the basic jutsu if you'd like to add them. If you want and Taijutsu/Kenjutsu or want to make one, go ahead ^_^

Please don't give up D: I'm not trying to be mean, I promise.

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PostSubject: Re: Slender (A.K.A Slen)   Fri Jul 23, 2010 9:43 pm

Updated.


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PostSubject: Re: Slender (A.K.A Slen)   Fri Jul 23, 2010 10:57 pm

No Earth Grudge Fear.
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PostSubject: Re: Slender (A.K.A Slen)   Sun Jul 25, 2010 6:09 pm

I was gunna bring that up at a later date, Don't discourage him. And........go away >.>..RAWR MY SPACE. >\



Arcs for the History if you would please..Almost done don't worry. Village? If you don't want a village then it's Missing nin Chuunin, or Wanderer...o.o; As soon as you get rid of Earth Grudge Fear, you'll be all set. Or, you could enter it as a jutsu for future use if you get Jounin.

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PostSubject: Re: Slender (A.K.A Slen)   Tue Sep 07, 2010 4:45 am

Actually, I was going to have him attempt to join a village.

As for the Earth-Grudge-Fear, how about it has not manifested some of its changes yet, (like threads) and he is not able to control the threads, or heart-transfer, until he reaches Jonin-level.

As gaining and using the justu is a critical part of his backstory, as it drastically alters his appearance.

Also, I have completed what I believe to be what you requested with the 'Arcs' matter.


A question, how active are these threads? There does not seem to be a great deal of posting happening.
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PostSubject: Re: Slender (A.K.A Slen)   Tue Sep 07, 2010 5:13 pm

Actually, this site has been in hibernation for quite some time, and its only recently getting back up to speed. For now, I'll RP with you, whenever you feel the need :3

The idea for Earth Grudge Fear is good, but its the same as using it for future use kinda...


And uhm....Before you get approved, you're avy is fuggin huge O.O''' Mini-size it please?...Yeah. it's distracting as hell.

If Earth grudge fear changes his appearance, than could you do something like a before and after thing?

Joining a village would be good, but...I prefer you give me some type of village from whence your character was born. It doesn't have to be real, it could like the Village hidden in the Rainbows or some stupid shit.


Other than this, you're very near done :3

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PostSubject: Re: Slender (A.K.A Slen)   Tue Sep 07, 2010 7:18 pm

Alright, I gave him a before and after pic and description, and changed it so he is formerly of the Moon village.

Afterall, what better place for some who look like a B-movie monster to appear from, than a place full of beaches?
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PostSubject: Re: Slender (A.K.A Slen)   Wed Sep 08, 2010 10:16 am

Good good...Uhm, so no village eh? I'll have to add it as a Wanderer or just, well A missing nin.

I'll give you maybe 1 more day to make any beauty changes to your app, then I'll move this to Approved.

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PostSubject: Re: Slender (A.K.A Slen)   Mon Nov 22, 2010 3:31 pm

Just barely passed...Though I could nitpick.

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