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PostSubject: Shukumei Naraku [Approved]   Thu Sep 18, 2008 10:49 pm

Name: Shukumei Naraku

Age:21

Gender: Male

Village: None

Rank: S-Rank Missing Ninja

Clan Hyuuga [Main Branch]
Hyuuga and Byakugan Information

The Hyuuga clan were one of the founding noble families of Leaf village. The clan itself is said to be the ancestors of the Uchiha clan who possess the bloodline of the Sharingan eye. Each clan member possess the "Byakugan" or "White Eye." When the "Byakugan" is activated, the clan member gains an extra-sensory perception, which gives them penetrating sight and telescopic vision. This allows them to see the internal chakra circulation system in other beings. This vision also grants the member a near 360 view of their surroundings. The higher the skill of the clan member, the further the distance from which they can sense incoming attacks. Unfortunately the vision does have a weakness, a small blindspot that extends outwards from their upper back.

The clan uses this ability in conjunction with their own chakra creating the Juuken (gentle fist) fighting style. By focusing the chakra to their finger tips, they can press the tenketsu or chakra pressure points of their opponents body. When the finger nears the tenketsu the chakra is forced out, collasping the targetted tenketsu for a period of time. The tenketsu serve as the connectors and exit points for the chakra pathways. So when they are stopped by the Hyuuga clan member, the ninja greatly loses his or her ability to utilize their chakra for jutsu.

These great powers lead to internal strife within the family. Because the eye grants such a unique and powerful ability, the clan became possessive and over-protective of it. Seeing only the main family as worthy users and inheritors of the eye, the heads of the clan began to place restrictions on those branch family members not in power. What resulted were two Hyuuga lines, the powerful main family who would represent the line, and the branch family who were directed to protect the main family and bear the cursed seal.

The cursed seal is placed on the foreheads of branch family members. It serves as a means to protect the secrets of the Hyuuga Byakugan eye. If the branch family member was to ever betray the main family or be killed in battle, the seal would be activated to destroy the body's secrets. Thus forcing the branch family to further bow to the will of the main family.


Byakugan Eye Variations


Normal Hyuuga Clan Member Eye

The normal eye for a Hyuuga clan member differs from a normal human eye. The iris and pupil are barely discernable with both appearing a milky white in color. The pupil itself is larger than a typical humans and it is outlined by a black region. The sclera remains normal except the larger size of the pupil reduces ones ability to view it.


Byakugan Activated Clan Member Eye

Once the eye is fully activated, the hidden iris becomes more apparent. Also when providing blood and chakra for the eyes' bloodline vision, veins will bulge lateral to each eye.


Kekkei Gekkei: Byakugan
Chakra Cost: -
Description:The Hyuuga clan were one of the founding noble families of Leaf village. The clan itself is said to be the ancestors of the Uchiha clan who possess the bloodline of the Sharingan eye. Each clan member possess the "Byakugan" or "White Eye." When the "Byakugan" is activated, the clan member gains an extra-sensory perception, which gives them penetrating sight and telescopic vision. This allows them to see the internal chakra circulation system in other beings. This vision also grants the member a near 360 view of their surroundings. The higher the skill of the clan member, the further the distance from which they can sense incoming attacks. Unfortunately the vision does have a weakness, a small blindspot that extends outwards from their upper back.
Special Effect: Listed in Description.

Chakra points: 1400

Looks:

Shukumei is 6'1" tall. He normally wears black, white, and/or grey. The way he dresses is fairly different to a point. Wearing a leather jacket sometimes as it protects from a variety of weathers. He wears two neclaces, both are of no extreme importance. Although the neclaces look like a fashion add-on, they are truly used for those strange situations where you need string or metal. He wears either a black or brown belt, not only to make sure he doesn't trip over his pants, but for those random occasions when a belt is thought of. He wears gloves, differing in color and type to protect his hands, or otherwise.
Shukumei is scarred on different areas of his body, a few across his chest, his back, arms, legs, and other places. He has black hair, naturally, tho it tends to fade to a strange brown every now and again. His eyes are brown, often changing in color aswell depending on lighting, and often season. His body is extremely fit, due to intense training physically, he is alot stronger then he appears, and he appears fairly strong, his shoulders are wider then average also promoting this.

Personality:
Shukumei is a free spirit, he does not like being told what to do, tho knows there are times when it is neccesary. He is smart, quick to react in crisis. He seldom has fun and thus takes every chance he gets to do so. He trusts few people, and becoming one of those few people is definately not a walk in the park. Often he seems too harsh, tho, this is likely not his intent. Quite, he speaks only when absolutely neccesary, but when around anyone he truly trusts, he speaks his thoughts. He is very cautious, it is unlikely he will walk into a situation that he has not thought about. He takes in information everywhere he goes, abosorbing everything that happens, often even little details are caught in his mind being questioned. He enjoys warm breezes as they calm him down. He commonly acts with little emotion of others and his only *Current* concern is his own well being.
His tactical mind makes him almost fearless beleiving he can eventually overcome any obstacle. However, it is very difficult for him to kill anyone weaker than him unless he beleives that their existance will only put a strain on his own. He is extremely good at extracting information from people because of his use of words.
He doesn't enjoy many things in life, aside from a good opponet, and the chance of fighting someone who could possibly defeat him, providing him with an honorable death. He has a small code of honor in which he goes by, however, this is known only to him, and changes frequently through different reasons. He seeks knowledge, to know all the worlds secrets. Although he also strives to know as many jutsus as possible, it is not the biggest thing on his mind and he works only as much as needed to do this. His current wants are to run a mercinary organization, or an organization with a unique purpose, one that he can understand and sympathize with. He is a very light sleeper, feeling that he is constantly being followed or watched. This makes him very aware of his sorroundings, even more than the Hyuuga bloodline traits.

Special Characteristics:
Shao-Fun Monk Spirit tatoo design: An anchient tradition of the Shao-Fun monks. The ink of this tatoo is made of a sacred ink created from the blood of ancheint demons combained with the blood of humans. This sacred ink has speacial abilities allowing the bearer to attack spirit formed demons and demons that switch through dimension which would normally make them untouchable. The tatoo empowers the bearer's attacks on the creatures because of its sacred substance, the touch of the ink from the tatoo is a lethal poison to all demons and spirits, the inflicted damage from the tatoo acts as a dimensional anchor to the creatures and pulls them into the dimension of the wearer allowing for sealing or absolute destruction. The effect of lethal poison or potency to any demons or spirits is only activated when the seal is in absolute activation. The sacred tatoo glows a bright blood red when in the range of anyone possesing a spirit or demon entity aswell as outside demon and spirits, the tatoo dissapears when activated. This effect also allows him to physically strike chakra based substances, including pure chakra forceably. After absolute activation, which is the second form of activation, the user is drained of energy and disabled physically for 24 hours. Absolute activation is performed by will of the user. This lasts until the user has left the presence of the being which was targeted during the activation. This seal does not effect the user's spirit or any form of the user negatively, outside of the exaughstion effect.

Over-Thought: Shukemei's parents experimented on themselves in attempts to enhance their own minds, in the process their offspring was effected by this. He constantly thinks about every little detail in every situation, easily putting the most complicated situations together, many times without meaning to. The downfall to this is he questions what people do, unlikely to trust others because he thinks about little things and reason for little things. Making things much more complicated then they have to be.

Lightning Demon: A demon imprisoned in Shukumei's body. The demon cannot share chakra with Shukumei, and is bound only by the mind. The demon provides only knowledge due to its great age. If the chakra seal on the demon is broken, this may change.

Training Based:
-Extreme Reaction/Reflex Speed.
-Extreme Strength.
-Extreme Speed.
-Above Normal Flexability.

+Byakugan


Special effects: Listed in Descriptions.

Elements: Lightning ; Wind

Skills Specialties:Main: Taijutsu ; Sub: Fuuinjutsu


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PostSubject: Re: Shukumei Naraku [Approved]   Thu Sep 18, 2008 11:54 pm

Jutsus

Bunshin no Jutsu - Clone Technique
Character Use: General Skill
Rank: E
Range: -
Chakra Cost: 5
Damage: -
Type: Supplementary
Description: Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. The Bunshin technique creates a copy of the ninja without substance. The copy resembles the ninja in every way. This clone can function as a distraction or as means to confuse one's opponent. As soon the Bunshin gets attacked or comes into contact with an opponent, it will disperse.

Gouwan - Strong Arm
Rank: --
Range: -
Chakra: Recirculatory - none
Description: Gouwan is a taijutsu technique used to utilize powerful strikes. User will first build up a high amount of chakra to her fist and then release it in an instant. Increasing the strength behind the blow.


Kawarimi no Jutsu - Change of Body Stance Technique
Rank: E
Range: -
Chakra Cost: 10
Damage:
Type: Supplementary
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themself with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.

Nawanuke no Jutsu - Escaping Skill
Rank: E
Range: -
Chakra Cost: 5
Damage:
Type: Supplementary
Description: Nawanuke no Jutsu is a very basic Ninjutsu technique that allows a ninja to escape from rope binds.

Kakuremino no Jutsu - Magic Cloak of Invisibility Technique
Rank: E
Range: -
Chakra: 5
Type: Supplementary
Description: Kakuremino no Jutsu is a very basic Ninjutsu technique. The ninja uses a camouflage cloth to cloak themselves in the background.

Henge no Jutsu - Transformation Technique
Rank: E
Range: -
Chakra Cost: 10
Type: Supplementary
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.

Kanashibari no Jutsu - Temporary Body Paralysis Technique
Rank: D
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m ~ 10m)
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage:
Type: Supplementary
Description: Kanashibari no Jutsu is an advanced Ninjutsu technique used to temporarily bind an individual or animal. With the person frozen in place, the ninja can either take the opportunity to attack or to retreat.

Kage Shuriken no Jutsu - Shadow Shuriken Technique
Rank: D
Range: Mid (5m ~ 10m), Far (10m+)
Type: Attack
Chakra: 25
Description: Kage Shuriken no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing a giant Fuuma Shuriken. When throwing the shuriken, the ninja will also throw a second giant shuriken to hide in the shadow of the first. The hidden secondary shuriken can then approach the target without their being aware.

Pierce
Rank: B
Chakra: 75
Element: Wind
Description: The user throws a ranged type weapon at a target, with a focus accelerated continuous flow of wind chakra onto the ranged weapon, the weapon can pierce through a siege castle wall, through and through. The after effect of the force from the thrown weapon often creates an extreme suction to the area in which it flew through. If it hit a brick wall piercing through one stone, it is likely it would drag the entire wall right after it, for a short distance. This can be done to many thrown weapons at once.

Ignite
Rank: C
Chakra: 55
Element: Wind
Desctipion: A thrown weapon is hit with an extreme force of wind shattering it, the shattered pieces act as shrap metal in an explosion shooting out into multiple directions at extreme speeds.


Kai - Release
Rank: Unknown
Range: -
Chakra Cost: -
Type: Supplementary
Description: Kai is a Ninjutsu technique which allows the ninja to avoid the effects of a Genjutsu illusion. After forming the needed handseals, the Genjutsu technique will not affect the ninja. The ninja can also use the technique on another individual who was unable to avoid the attack. After forming the needed hand seals, the ninja touches the one affected to end the affect of the spell.

Shunshin no Jutsu - Body Flicker Technique
Rank: D
Range: -
Chakra Cost: 20
Type: Supplementary
Description: Shunshin no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. The ninja will appear and disappear in an instant, allowing them to retreat or attack suddenly. To facilitate the movement the ninja will often use nearby elements such as mist, sand or leaves to mask their appearance or disappearance.

Jutsu Name: Nerve Release
Rank: D
Range: -
Chakra Cost: 35
Damage:
Element: Lightning
Description: User sends a light pulse of lightning through their body, this releases tension from muscles that are stunned or other factors preventing the body from moving aswell, ultimately removing all paralysis effects. However, it also increases the body's system fuctions, making poisonous effects twice as effective, and will exaughst the person greatly if repeated more then 3 times per day. This can be used on any directly touched target, including user, even if user is already paralyzed or otherwise.

Jutsu Name: Static Ignition
Rank: D
Range: 5x5x5 meters
Element: Lightning
Chakra: 35
Description: User charges up chakra into a lightning based attack, when released, the move will not visibly send anything out, only a slight silvery glow where it was released, and then nothing. However, the user charged up static that ignites many dead organic substances, aswell as light, flammable substances within the area. The charge, however, does not effect the user, as it is released from their body out. This jutsu can be used to destroy explosive traps attached with tags in the area, aswell as be used in a variety more defensive and offensive strategies.

Lighting Bolt
Rank: C
Chakra Cost: 45
Element: Lightning
Description: A Bolt of lighting 3x3ft is launched towards target. Being lightning, it is unpredictable and almost impossible to block.

Chain Lightning
Rank:B
Chakra Cost: 90
Element: Lightning
Description: Similar to lightning bolt, except the bolt continues onto select targets in the area, possible returning to the original target.

Shocking Wind
Rank: C
Chakra Cost: 50
Element: Lightning
Description: Amplifies any wind with a lightning current, the current of lightning is blended in with the wind, thus making it impossible to notice until contact.

Lightning Burst
Rank: C
Chakra Cost: 55
Element: Lightning
Description: A burst of wind that launches from user in a 360 degree angle. This move is sort of like rotation, except is alot higher in damage. This jutsu WILL prevent any Taijutsu/Close combat Weaponory users from getting near user when jutsu is used. The lightning continues and does not disperse, unless naturally or until it hits a conductor or something of that sorts. The lightning has a possability of paralyzing the hit target/s temporarily.

Lightning Daggers
Rank: C
Chakra: 10/Dagger
Element: Lightning
Description: Daggers of Lightning fire at target, due to them being lightning, they are difficult, if not impossible to block. The daggers can slice through solid wood and possibly rock. They vary in amounts depending on how much chakra is used.

Lightning Quake
Rank:C
Element: Lightning
Chakra: 50
Description: User releases lightning into the ground, the lightning travels through conducters and strikes target from beneath.

Taijutsu:

Chakra Impact
Rank: D
Chakra Cost: 30
Element: -
Description: During Melee combat, user builds up chakra into contact points of their body, feet, knees, fists, etc. Upon contact with target, user will release the chakra in a burst. This will cause a small amount of extra damage, it will also Traumatize the targets chakra points in the area of contact. By doing this, the target will have extreme difficulty withdrawing chakra, or emiting chakra from those points. The chakra burst from this attack is possible to spread outside of the body thus contact is not neccesary, however, close range is.

Nerve Strike Style: An attack used by an extremely advanced Taijutsu user allowing them to hit nerves swiftly making the attacks extremely lethal. The User may also use this technique to disable parts of the opponets body outside the chakra system.


Shao-Monk Style: An extremely advanced form of Taijutsu in which possesor constantly uses. This form of Taijutsu allows the user to parry weapons, and other attacks using only speed and their hands. This technique is used as an advanced Taijutsu defence against all attacks aside from Genjutsu and most Ninjutsu.

Open-Palm Style: See Shao-Monk and Nerve Strike Style. User combines the two into a fast attacking approach with open palms, each strike has a greater chance of breaking and damaging the structure both internal and extrenal of the body.

Impale: An extremely difficult attack that requires first the pinning of an opponet. Once pinned, user straightens their hand and with great strength can ram their hand through the opponets ribcage into the heart. This requires a precise hit between the ribs, moving the apart or breaking them in addition.
Chakra: 15

Horn Strike: A quick attack in which the user rapidly hits the opponet in the eyes with closed fists or open palm. If hit with closed fists, the eyes will water and the ability for hit target to see will be minimized. If hit with open palm, the eyes jam backwards and have a chance of quite litteraly exploding from force in target's head.
Chakra: 15

Breath-Taker: A powerful hit to target's throat often causing the neck to break.
Chakra: 10

Genjutsu:

Nehan Shouja no Jutsu- (Temple of Nirvana Technique)
Rank: A
Chakra Cost: 130 + 35 every 2 posts
Description: Nehan Shouja no Jutsu is a Genjutsu technique that allows the caster to place a large body of people into a unconscious state. The target can avoid the spell by forming and using the dispel skill.

Ripples of Insanity
Rank: C
Chakra Cost: 55
Type: Genjutsu
Description: Target sees strange ripples in the air and area around them ( Like ripples of a mirage only much larger and more visible) , this causes great confusion aswell as difficulty forming handseals, throwing any weapons, or using taijutsu. Target also begins to hear voices influincing them to commit suicide, aswell as many other suicidal/homicidal thoughts. Target has a very high chance to beleive the voices are his/her own thoughts. Ends in 6 posts.

Mirrors of Fear
Rank:C
Chakra Cost: 55
Type:Genjutsu
Description: Target beleives he/she is sorrounded by endless amounts of Mirrors. Images and sound may be placed within the mirrors to strike great fear into the opponet. Ends in 4 posts.

Subconscious Wounds
Rank: B
Chakra Cost: 115
Type: Genjutsu
Description: Target sees cuts appear on him/her self. They feel pain from the cuts thus beleive they exist. Wounds appear in stages, first starting out small. Small cuts start out in irratating locations such as the palms, joints, and crevises of fingers, toes, etc. The cuts grow larger and appear on other areas. The target then sees blisters appearing on their hands and feet as if they were holding and standing on extremely hot charcoal. Ends in 4 posts.

Fall of Titans
Rank: C
Chakra Cost: 55
Type: Genjutsu
Description: Effected Target(s) see themselves falling into an endless black, the consistent falling has a very high chance of causing heart attack or other problems within the body. Also effects the mind, possibly corrupting it through hopeless descent into nothingness. Ends in 3 posts.

Desacrated Kings
Rank: B
Chakra Cost: 90
Type: Genjutsu
Description: Effected target(s) see an ornately decorated crown, one that a king would wear fall from the sky. A strange rain begins to poor, however, the rain is not water, the rain is acid. This effect seems to last for an hour, however, occurs in a time of 10 seconds. 2 posts time.

Purge of Pharaohs
Rank: B
Chakra Cost: 110
Type: Genjutsu
Description: Effected target(s) see swarms of scarabs attack them from random directions. The scarabs appear to be consuming the target as they go. Crawling into the skin of the victim, making their ways to the skull and slowly consuming the bodys. This event happens 10 times within the genjutsu. The genjutsu lasts 10 seconds time in reality. Ends in 5 posts.

Gofuu Kekkai - Five Seal Barrier
Rank: Unknown
Range: -
Type: Defense, Attack
The five "kin" (prohibition) seals act together to form a barrier to the entrance of their Something. The place itself is marked with one tag, and four other tags are located within a few hundred meters of each other. To remove the barrier, all five tags must be removed at the same moment.
Knowing that the barrier has this weakness, one adds a further protection. When the four surrounding tags are removed, a doppelganger of the person who removed it will emerge from the ground and battle them. The doppelganger can utilize all the same moves as the original, even bloodline techniques.

Hakke no Fuuin Shiki - Eight Divination Signs Seal Style
Rank: -
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m)
Type: Supplementary
Hakke no Fuuin Shiki was a Fuuinjutsu technique. The Hakke no Fuuin Shiki is used in conjunction with the Shiki Fuujin technique to seal demons within the stomach of Target. The Hakke no Fuuin Shiki allows the two Shishou Fuuin to leak the demon's chakra back into target's own chakra.

Chakra Seal (Unnamed)
Rank: -
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m)
Type: Supplementary
AN unnamed demon chakra sealing tag. It quickly stops the chakra flow from a demon.

Immortality Interupted
Rank: S
Element: Lightning
Type: Ninjutsu ; Taijutsu ; Genjutsu
Chakra Cost: 400
Description: The user of this jutsu first releases a warning lightning bolt within the range of an opponet. Once done, the user taunts the opponet, getting them to look at him. Using quick movements, the user gets behind the opponet. However, the opponet sees the user fall forward to the ground in a poof of smoke, this is the genjutsu part of the jutsu. Following the poof of smoke, the target cannot move, they feel paralized throught their body. Having swiftly moved behind the opponet with the cover of the genjutsu, the user can perform an attack on the opponet during the brief pause from the paralyzing genjutsu. Blocking this attack is nearly impossible, unless the opponet has eyes on the back of their heads. Even so, the opponet, logically, would be looking at where the user of the jutsu dissapeared on the ground, followed by automatic questioning due to the human mind. Blocking the attack would also be nearly impossible, due to these factors.


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Fatality
Rank: B
Type: Genjutsu
Chakra: 115
Description: The skies of the area form black funnel clouds in the skies, bolts of lightning rain down near the target as rain poors on them. Their heart rate increases rapidly, their body begins to feel weak from fear. The effect continues after the Genjutsu is ended. as it convinces the mind and subconscious that the body has actually undergone this situation. The effects of this are the opponet's vision blurs, the bolts of lightning produce deafening echoes creating an aftershock effect. Similar to a flashbang exploding while your focusing on it with your senses.

Hold
Rank: B
Chakra: 115
Type: Genjutsu
Description: The target freezes, they cannot move. Ice slowly begins to form around their body. Extreme chill overtakes them making them weak, their nerves feel as if burning needles are being pushed into every pore. Their body slowly begins to shut down. Their ability to function minimizes. The effect continues after the Genjutsu is ended. as it convinces the mind and subconscious that the body has actually undergone this situation.

-Lightning Combo
Chain Reaction: The Silver Serpent
Name: Silver Serpent; Variation One
Rank: S
Chakra: 375
Type: Lightning
Description: A basic yet powerful lightning attack in which the user releases a condensed cone of lightning about 2ft Wide, and about 16 feet long. Length and size is changeable.
Name: Silver Serpent; Quick Surge
Type: Lightning
Description: A basic yet powerful lightning attack in which an accelerated bolt of lightning is launched down the center of Silver Serpent; Variation one. The bolt splits Silver Serpent; Variation one, into two parts while it runs down the middle, the split bolts now move much faster.
Name: Silver Serpent; Shocking Grasps
Type: Lightning
Description: A jutsu that turns specified lightning attacks into the form of serpents, the lightning serpents have at this point been increased in power and the lightning serpents turn a silvery-snow color looking as a lightning storm from hell. The serpent's jaws open and clash onto target, engulfing the target with lightning. If used properly, the three preveous bolts of lightning will become as described in jutsu defintion.
Name: Silver Serpent; The White Fangs
Type: Lightning
Description: The fangs of the snakes from preveous combinations deal an extremely large shock to the point of contact making the hit target surge with lightning. This often causes temporary paralysis, significant nerve damage, brain damage, and/or/aswell as a variety of other tissue damage to the body.
Name: Silver Serpent; Lightning Strike
Type: Lightning
Description: User of this jutsu jumps into the lightning of preveous Silver Serpent combination attacks. He/she is then removed from sight and strikes from the front of the lightning snake with either weapon, another jutsu, or both.

Specializing Wind Attacks-
Wind Daggers
Rank: C
Chakra Cost: 60
Element: Wind
Description: Daggers of condensed razor sharp wind launch at target, due to them being wind, they are nearly unblockable, and invisible to the naked eye. The amount varies on the chakra used, and each dagger has the capabilities of penetrating solid wood, and possibly rock.

Wind Prison
Rank: C
Chakra Cost: 60
Damage:
Element: Wind
Description: Creates a prison of supercondensed wind around target that on contact can rip through solid stone without slightest difficulty. The wind can mold to the sorroundings of the target, and can be increased or decreased in size.

Wind Burst
Rank: C
Chakra Cost: 60
Damage:
Element: Wind
Definition: A Burst of wind launches from user in a 360 degree angle. This move is sort of like Rotation, except is a bit higher in damage. This jutsu WILL prevent any Taijutsu/Close combat Weaponry users from getting near user when this jutsu is used. The wind continues and weakens gradually.
Clan Jutsus:

Hakke Kuushou - Eight Divination Signs Air Palm
Rank: D
Chakra Cost: 30
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m ~ 10m)
Element: -
Description: Hakke Kuushou is a ranged Taijutsu technique utilized by Hyuuga. Extending chakra from their body, user will thrust their palm at their target. This will send out an invisible wave of chakra that can knock his/her opponent back. It is unknown if this wave can also collapse his target's tenketsu points.

Hakke Rokujuuyonshou - Eight Divination Signs, Sixty-Four Palms of the Hand
Rank: D
Chakra Cost: 30
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m)
Element: -
Description: Rokujuuyonshou is a Taijutsu technique unique to the Hyuuga bloodline. Hakke Rokujuuyonshou is a special technique passed down through the main family line. When an opponent is within the clan members divination field of attack, they can quickly begin their assault. The technique allows the clan member to use the Byakugan eye to see the inner chakra coils system. Using the Jyuuken style, they can force their chakra through their hands into the tenketsu of the opponent's body through 126 strikes. First the clan member will strike 2 times, then 4, 8, 16, 32 and finally 64. This damage forceably closes 64 tenketsu, stopping the chakra flow of the opponent. This then limits their opponents ability to use jutsu.

Hakke Hyakunijuuhachishou - Eight Divination Signs, One-Hundred and Twenty-Eight Palms of the Hand
Rank: C
Chakra Cost: 55
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m)
Element: -
Description: Hakke Hyakunijuuhachishou is a Taijutsu technique unique to the Hyuuga bloodline. Hakke Hyakunijuuhachishou is a variation of Hakke Rokujuuyonshou, a technique passed down through the main family line. When an opponent is within the clan members divination field of attack, they can quickly begin their assault. The technique allows the clan member to use the Byakugan eye to make nearly double the normal 126 strikes, striking 254 times against their individual foe or opponents. First the clan member will strike 2 times, then 4, 8, 16, 32, 64 and finally 128 times.

Hakkeshou Kaiten - Eight Divination Palms of the Hand, Heavenly Spin
Rank: D
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage:
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m)
Element: -
Description: Hakkeshou Kaiten is a Taijutsu technique unique to the Hyuuga bloodline using the Jyuuken. Kaiten is a special technique passed down through the main family line. Kaiten takes advantage of several of the unique abilities of the Byakugan eye. Byakugan gives the clan member an almost complete 360 degree view of their surroundings. This allows the member to see all angles of attack.
If an attack is near, the clan member will release a large of amount of chakra from their tenketsu. The member then begins to spin like a top, creating a whirling vortex that can nullify almost any attack.

Shugo Hakke Rokujuuyonshou - Guardian Eight Divination Signs, Sixty-Four Palms of the Hand
Rank: C
Chakra Cost: 55
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m)
Element: -
Description: User will emit chakra from their palms and move their arms in sweeping pattern movements to provide a full 360 degree range of protection for their body. This chakra will be also be able to cut through most any target which dares penetrate the protective sphere. By expelling a more sharper, stronger and more flexible amount of chakra, they can increase it's effectiveness against more massive incoming objects. User creates an absolute defence this way.


Backstory Jutsus [Not usable by character, strictly backstory based.]:
Spirit & Demon Body Conjunction Tear (Unarmed)
Rank: S
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m)
Type: Attack
User must first traumatize the body of target and minimize the chakra use of both demon and possesor of demon within target. Once done, user makes handsigns of each element and several variations of secret handsigns passed down from the Shou-Fun Monks. Grasping target with one or both hands, the user rips both the soul and the demon from target. The target, however, must have a demon within their body. This attack is performed only when the performer has the Shao-Fun Monk Tatoos, the tatoo empowers a majority of the attack.

The Damned
Rank: S
Range: Close (0-m ~ 5m)
Type: Seal
User must first perform Spirit & Demon Body Cunjunction Tear. Once done, user can seal the demon/soul into an object. The object, if destroyed, also destroyers the possesing soul/demon. This attack is performed only when the performer has the Shao-Fun Monk Tatoos, the tatoo empowers a majority of the attack.

Backstory/History:
Pre-hand events to the birth of Shukumei.
Shukumei's parents, Lei and Kayl where excited when Kayl found out that Lei was pregnant. He had hoped for a child, and so he was to receive one. Lei and Kayl had gone through much together, however, were growing farther and farther apart. Lei always over-reacted and Kayl had quite the temper, however he never hit Lei even in the most brutal of rages. They both hoped the baby would bring them closer together... Their hopes were wrong. Lei went through stages of depression and Kayl didn't know what he could do. One day Lei randomly went through a phase of anger insulting Kayl, telling him such things as the world would be better without his existance. This went on for months. One month from the due date of the baby, Kayl could no longer handle Lei, however, because he had no one else, slit his wrists in front of Lei and ran a sword across his stomach letting out his intestine onto the ground in front of Lei. At that moment Lei went into labor and gave birth without any doctors. The baby was three weeks early and was given birth over the body of his father. Lei didn't even name the baby before she impaled herself with the sword that Kayl had used to kill himself.

A wandering monk by the name of Fial went into the house to find the event had taken place. He saw the baby and picked him up. He knew little of raising babys however felt a child raised by his temple would grow to be a great leader in his temple, the temple of Shao-Fun. He took the baby but not before blessing the bodys that were laying one on the other both a greousome death. He felt there was no other way except to burn the bodys inside the house with the house coming down on top of them. He felt this would set them free. He took the child to the temple and entered the room of the elders. He showed them the baby and told them the story and what he had done. The elders approved of his actions and called a meeting of the monks. This meeting was to name the baby. They disccused the child's future before finnaly coming up with a name. They named him Shukumei Naraku.

Shukemei's parents however did not leave him with nothing. He was the product of two extremely powerful Genjutsu users who prided themselves on experimenting with the mind. These expirements passed down to Shukumei in the form of super-human intellegence and the natural proficiency with Genjutsu. Both his parents were part of the Hyuuga clan. Tho their expirements had almost made them outcasts.

The monk schedule was simple. Spiritual training, Martial Arts, and exorcism of demonic presences and spirits. The Spiritual training involved much into detail of tracking by spirit, the anchient spirits, the human spirit and soul. Each monk could eventually locate anything in the area due to a trained 360 degree spirit energy senses. The martial arts the monks learned were vital to the monk's survival. The monks were taught a very unique, powerful, and anchient form of Taijutsu. This form of Taijutsu taught the monks each point in and on the body to disable other parts of the body. Direct hits or slight hits of nerves causing other body parts to shut down until other re-activation nerves were triggered. This of course could be used to mortally wound and so it was law that the monks only use the art in very dire situations. Each monk gradually went up in weights, the highest lifting monk in the temple carried two weights on each of his arms and legs with a combined weight of 8000lbs. The sealing arts the Monks were taught involved sealing of spirits, demons, lost souls, earthbound souls, and a variety of other seals. However, there were many devised by anchient monks that could extract peices of a human soul or
evan an entire human soul from a body. The monks kept these locked under the temple of elders.The abbey had a vast library with knowledge from nearly every event in recorded history, and many those that were not recorded anywere else. Many fabled documents also existed in this library. All the items in the Shao-Fun temple made the temple constantly under attack by raiders.
There was one monk whom knew of the Hyuuga clan abilities, he was in fact a Hyuuga himself. He taught Shukumei the ways of this clan, how they used their abilities, and how their jutsus worked.


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PostSubject: Re: Shukumei Naraku [Approved]   Thu Sep 18, 2008 11:56 pm

Shukumei grew up not knowing the fate of his parents and had been told that only the gods could tell him his fate or his past. He received the monk tatoos when he was 6. He grew up following the monk schedule, however, he advanced much faster in all the training and so took much of his time into the books in the great library. When he was 12 he was capable of lifting half that of the heaviest lifter in the temple, he could out-seal almost any of the monks aswell as track spirits from a greater distance then many. When he was 13, he found he had many dreams of future events and moved alot of actions on these dreams. When he was 14, he had read every thing in the great library and was hungry for knowledge. His extreme bordome came from his completion and absolute mastery of everything the monks could teach him. One day he heard of the great scrolls under the temple of elders and saught them out. He snuck out one night and found the scrolls, studying them without consequence. Once done he placed them back as they were and moved back to his room, however, not before noticing ninja sneaking over the Abbey walls. He sounded the alarm and outran monks from within their sleeping quarters. The group attacking the Abbey was none they had seen before. There were easily 100 ninja moving over the walls. The monks were sorrounded. Shukumei knew many he loved would die this night. The battle began. It lasted for approximately four days, six hours. When it was done, Shukumei and one of the elders were the only ones alive. The elder however, was dieng. He walked to the elder who was coughing up blood. He teared from the eyes as he watched the last of his temple die. His furry roared as he ran for the anchient sealing scrolls. He followed the seals step by step without error and tore the remaining souls from each attacking ninja storing every one of them in a possesion from one of the deceased monks. When he was done, he burried the items so that none of the attaker's souls may ever rest, so they would sit in the items for all eterenity.

He wandered from the temple, continuing the practices of the monks each day. He swore on his soul that he would search out each and every demon and earthbound spirit, destroying them as the monks taught him to do. Defending himself against every ninja that challenged him, he faught almost every day of his life until the moment he met a young female ninja from the hidden mist country. He and she talked, fell in love and had planed to marry. He was 16 at this time. They were set to marry on her 17th birthday, however, somehow other shinobi from the village discovered this and told the Kage of the village. She was called to trial for treason. She was found guilty and sentenced to death. He watched his love die in front of him, the last person he would have concern for. He vowed that day to seek revenge on those whom have commited such crimes and became self-righteous on a personal crusade.

Shukumei faught his first demon, anchient demon who was tearing through a village. They faught, demon and man for three days, the demon never tiring, Shukumei never losing morale. Shukumei fell back, the demon had struck Shukumei into near defeat. As the darkness began to consume the eyes of Shukumei, he heard the voices of the monks from his temple.
"Arise, you dare not fall to this creature, you dare not dishonor our memory."
He tried to speak to the spirits, however he could not. He was simply speachless, tears running from his eyes as he had the flashback of watching every one of his brothers die. Everyone one of those he loved. He stood, fearless, staring into the eyes of death. He tapped into the sacred seal of the Shao-Fun and charged the demon, memory and honor of the monks in his heart. He tore through the demon's face strike by strike. The demon began to waver. However, Shukumei did not let up, attacking again and again, avoiding each move the demon made. He would not and could not stop. He charged the demon one last time and the beast fell, dispersing into nothingness. Shukumei teared from the eyes,
"Brothers.. Help me.. Forgive me.. Please! Do not leave me!"
He cried until he passed out.

The villagers did not beleive their eyes, a demon had fallen to Shukumei. They took him in and nursed him to health. He awoke in a dark room, a single window covered with blinds was to his left. To his right, about five feet away was a closet, and adjacent to the bed on the left was a desk, his sword and clothes lay on top of it. He tried to sit up, but quickly fell back in pain, his chest was wrapped in goz, down to his waist. He tilted his head up, scooting back on the bed. He looked closer at the room, it was small, only a door was left out of his vision on the far right wall next to the window. A shadow passed the window and the doorknob turned. Shukumei stared intently as the door creaked open and the figure walked in. A young women, maby 17 entered the room. She was pretty, wearing a light blue shirt and a matching long-skirt. Her eyes were a dark green that glistened as the light glanced off them, her hair a strange curly brunette. Her face was pale with a slight red on her cheeks.
She entered the room and looked over at Shukumei with conscerned eyes. Silently she walked over to him and observed, her head tilted to the right slightly.
"How are you feeling?" she asked, her voice quiet, kind, and comforting.
Shukumei grunted as he forced himself to sit up against the wall.
".. Been better..." he said, his voice cracking slightly.
".. Thats alright, you took a beating against that monster.. But.. we thank you, it would have killed everyone.. and.." she paused, realizing she was babbling. "Anyways, your healing, and thats what matters right now. The doctor says you should be up and running in less than a week."
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PostSubject: Re: Shukumei Naraku [Approved]   Thu Sep 18, 2008 11:57 pm

Shukumei nodded and stayed quiet, sliding back down on the bed. He clentched his chest as the sharp pain from his attempt of sitting up, and passed out. He attemted to stand, his hand quickly grasping his chest, he groanded slightly, falling back to the bed. Delilah reacted slowly, pressing her hand against his forhead, and grabbing the soup off of the table. She looked at him, and he looked back. Her hands move with the soup closer to his mouth, he leaned up, drinking slowly.
".. When your well, you can leave.." she said in a soft tone.
He looked up at her and nodded lightly.
She helped him finish the soup, and set the bowl back on the table. She turned around for a moment, cleaning up the small mess on the table, and turned back, to find Shukumei asleep once again.
He awoke to the sun rising three days later, Shukumei felt as tho his body was fully healed and attempted to sit up. His first try failed and he slumped back down onto the bed roughly. Pausing to catch his breath, he tried again and succesfully stood, tho, his legs gave out and he fell to knee. He pushed himself once more and stood, refreshed. He looked over to where his clothes lay and unwrapped his wounds, they were all healed.. Strange.. He did not question it and picked up his clothes, putting them on, followed by his gear and weapons, his sword was last. He looked over to the door and stretched. Then saw a shadow once again at the window, he watched the door intently. It opened..
A man stepped inside, he was older, in his 50s. He was tall and slim, his hair was receeding and grey. He had a beard that hung down slightly lower then his neck and he wore a grey shirt with blue pants, similar to what Shukumei normally wore. He glanced over to Shukumei, wrinkling his old nose.
".. Say lad, your awake, our village thanks you greatly for what you did. That creature would have killed us all, your welcome to leave at anytime, you are no hostage here."
The old man spoke quickly, nodded in appreciation, and stepped out the door closing it lightly behind him.
Shukumei yawned and his stomach rumbled with hunger, he grasped it lightly.
'Gotta get something in this stomach, haven't eaten in like a week.' he thought to himself as he opened the door.

He looked at the slightly ruined town, many buildings still stood, and many passerbys smiled and bowed to him. He looked around, the town seemed cheerful and happy, strange to him as he knew nothing of happiness anymore. Taking a few steps out he turned and closed the door, walking onto a paved road. He looked around, quite as he was, he did not bother to ask anyone for directions to a restraunt, instead, he followed the smell of food. His nose led him right into the local ramen shop. As he stepped in, everyone stopped what they were doing and stared at him. He looked over to the bar and sat down in a corner chair.
"Hello." he said towards the waitress that walked over to him.
"Uhm.. Hi hun, you recovered ok it seems." she said cautiously, trying not to intrude. She smiled lightly at him.
"Yes, thank you. Bring me whatever you favor please, im starving." he said with a slight nod, smiling back to be seen as descently mannered.
"Sure, ill be right back." she said and hurried off into the back kitchen.
The waitress was young, maby 19, she seemed to produce light. Her features were near perfection, she was pretty, her eyes wide with affection for Shukumei, their greenish blue showing graciously in the light. Her hair was light, as if produced the color of the sun. Why was everyone in this town so bright, so beautiful? This question lingered in Shukumei's mind, in the back of his mind. He knew only that in this world of darkness and evil, such perfection was inexistant, yet here it was, in this small town. He intended to leave it as fast as possible, its grace began to make an indent on his strong selfless nature, it began to make him think of happiness, his own happiness. The waitress arrived as quickly as she had left sat the bowl down in front of him. She smiled lightly and waited. Shukumei looked up at her, then down at the bowl and slowly tasted the food. He nodded in approval, but she still did not leave her stance. He looked up at her.
"It's good, thank you." Shukumei said with a half smile.
"Your welcome!" she said, still standing in front of him.
"The Chef says it's on the house, and even if he didn't, I wouldn't think of charging you for it." she finished.
"Oh.. Thank you.." he said with another half smile.
"Mhm." she responded, marching off gracefully to the next customer.
Shukumei ate, not looking away from his bowl until he had finished. When he was done, the waitress came over to him, and took his bowl, setting it aside. She smiled at him as he stood to leave. He proceeded to walk out the door when a hand grasped his shoulder, turning him around. In a blink, lips met his own, the waitress kissed him. He looked at her in slight amazement, he did not expect to be touched, much less kissed. She smiled at him and said, "Come visit us later..."
Shukumei nodded and walked out the door, he thought about her for quite some time after that. Maby his own wants could be in that town. Why was he the one who had to save people? Why him? Why can't someone else do it? All these questions shot into his mind. He wandered a while...
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PostSubject: Re: Shukumei Naraku [Approved]   Thu Sep 18, 2008 11:57 pm

Shukumei wandered off into the forest looking for something to do. Later, he would meet up with - and end up fighting over a breifcase full of nothing but paper. They would be setup, and have to fight their way out together. This is just a precurser to the great friendship and ultimate alliance Shukumei and - would form, their paths bound like a crossroad, their fates interlocked.
One year later when Shukumei was 18, he returned to the village in search of the woman, he wanted to see her once more, it was strange, he felt as if he had to say something to her. He searched for her and heard she left looking for him. He did not know how to respond to this, he stayed at the village for another week, hoping she would show up. He talked to her family, and they had no idea, if she was not a week behind him, where she might be. Shukumei held to the possability of everything falling into place when it was to. Let fate handle her path, he could do nothing but wait for her. He waited another week, awkwardly and could wait no longer. He had priorities, his thoughts could wait, he had a mission. He had a destiney. He left the village and continued his quest, to slay demons and spirits alike, to stop all that threatened life in any form good. To continue that which he swore to do so very long ago.
Shukumei traveled long years around the world. His travels brought him to many people. Tho revered in some places, respected in others, Shukumei was neutral everywhere. He felt it best to keep nuetral as to provoke no enemies, his enjoyment of killing long before stopped.
The rain poored over head, the lightning whirled everywere. Shukumei was lost in a strange area, his geographical location, he was unsure of. The plains were dark, as it was night. There were large trees spread across the valley seperated by great distances. The grass, yellow and dry, even with the pooring rains.
Shukumei hooded himself and took a look around. In the distance stood a man, wandering in fields of lightning which seemed to dance around him. Watching from a distance, Shukumei noticed the man had symbols formed under him, seals of sorts.
Moving closer to the man, Shukumei was spotted. They were seperated by a good 75 yards.
"Come Lad, I know your curious.. See what I have.. See what I do.." The old man spoke aloud in Shukumei's direction. Unsure of what to do, Shukumei simply followed the old man's directions. Arriving adjacent to the old man he said, "What.. What are these symbols?.. I see lightning.. Light?.. Time?.. What is this?...". His words came swiftly towards the old man, tho in a straight forward tone. The old man stood slightly, as he was preveously on one knee. Adjusting himself to look at Shukumei he said, " This lad, is what has given power to me for so long.. I only wish there was someone I could show the same gratitude... You see, long I have lived, and it has taken too long for me to die. Centurys ago, they called me by the name of Ahikil, now, I am not known. I have walked through many lives, lived many aswell, and still I wonder, why we live to begin with.. Tho, it has come to my realization that we live to pass on what we have learned.." Shukumei interrupted, ".. Why are you telling me this?..". The old man stood up fully and spoke, "I tell you this for my own good... So I may live.. You seem to be the only one around in my time of dieng.. Conveneint.. For me.." The man grabbed Shukumei's shoulders and spoke swift words. The seal below them released in a hypnotic burst of light. There, arose, a man with no visible features. He stood, an anchient demon of light and time, one who controlled both. The old man laughed, "Thank you boy.. Now it is I who shall own this land." The old man made handsigns to seal the demon, tho not in time. With one quick snap, the man dropped to the ground dead, with a broken neck.
Moments later, Shukumei's tatoos glew a bright bloody red and consumed his body, then in a flash, molded into his skin without a trace of existence. He charged the Demon who seemed to dissapear. Not out of this dimension, but out of existence. A laugh so evil and demonic, ".. You cannot expect to fight me with your hands boy.." The demon said unaware. Shukumei activated his byuukagan and smashed into the demon. "You do not know me demon.. Nor will you...".
The two faught for what seemed days, lightning roared and smashed around them. There was blood everywere, there was demon blood everywere. A clash of fists and chakra roared for miles around, until that unsuspecting moment.. Shukumei made fast handsigns, he could not fight this demon, he was too powerful, and thus had to seal him. He ripped the demon from what looked like existence, tho there was nothing around to seal him in except himself. The area enveloped in darkness..

With quick thoughts, Shukumei rammed the demon into his own body performing every seal possible to keep the demon there. As he did this, his tatoo's glowed red still and merged into his body.. They never unmerged as a demon was always near and so they would stay. His body surged with the pain of the seals he smashed into himself, he almost feinted. Sheer will power kept him awake, tho it would take much much more to keep him alive. He ran into the blackness that was preveously the alter of a demonic being, fearing he was stuck in a realm of evil. He emerged into reality, seeing the plains, feeling the breeze infested with rain that felt as needles smashing into his bloodied body. He glanced up at the sky with bloodshot eyes and saw a spiraling storm of lightning clouds and heard the devastating roar of thunder. The unsatisfied gods seemed to rain their wrath upon the body of Shukumei. An unbearable need to flee overtook him, his body shot with adrenaline as he charged into the night towards the black foggy horizon.
Shukumei left the dark plains, fatigued, dieng, the power of the demon, tho sealed away, pulsed through his veins. That which he hated so dearly, had become part of him. Many people would kill themselves, becoming what it was they hated, what they hunted so passionately, without a single thought. Shukumei knew only that killing himself would not bring other demons, other evils from this world out of existence, and he had to continue his quest even if he himself had to die in the end. He was destined to destroy all that could cause harm to the world and people within it, he was not sure why he felt chosen to do this, why he had to save the world. Tho a wide goal, it was the only goal he had left, and he thought maby thats why. He lived not for himself, he could not live for himself. He hated himself, and had to live with letting his brothers down, he let the others die and could not save them, he was at fault, he had to carry out their quest until his last breath, it was only right, it was the only resolve to the undefineable horror that had happened at the temple. He had to live every moment from here out with a demon lurking in his body, it was justified, he was to be plauged with evil because of his deeds. He thought over every factor of the situation he had gotten into by trusting in himself, and knew that in order to survive, tho it caused much chaos, he had to trust in himself to get past this phase, trusting the untrustable is a sin on its own, and dishonored the memory of his brothers, but if he had to dishonor them to bring peace to their name, then it must be done, it must be done if it takes his last ounce of blood. Hatred within himself does not neccesarily accompany distrust within himself, tho it was to be a side-effect, and untameable beast lurking in the depths of his heart.
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PostSubject: Re: Shukumei Naraku [Approved]   Fri Sep 19, 2008 12:06 am

He wandered through what seemed like endless rocky plains. The grass raised and fell, constantly changing from grey to yellow, and back again. It seemed as if the ground was stained with blood everywhere he looked, in panic and disorder, his adrenaline pulsing through his veins like needles as he walked. Shukumei's vision blurred, his eyes bloodshot with terror and panic, he wandered farther and farther and farther from the remains of his most rescent chaos, his most rescent encounter with the darkness of himself. Predators followed him slowly, cautiously. Often fighting was heard from different animals as another began a charge at Shukumei. They were wanting the taste of his flesh so bad, that they killed eachother for trying to get there first. Birds of Prey circled overhead, following him and waiting for the animals in chaos to leave their dieng to die, so they too may feed. A feast of blood and flesh upon the plains of chaos that Shukumei dwelled on, he cursed himself and the world around every step he took made him weaker, every breath he took choked with blood. His body was bruised and bloody, slashes in the flesh of his chest and arms from the battle with the demon began to surge with pain as the cold needle pressing winds hit Shukumei head on. He stumbled out of the bloodied plains, embracing death as it became more inevitable.
All was lost, there was no way for Shukumei to go on, he had lost massive amounts of blood. His only hope would be that of something he could not hope for. His chance to live would come with the arrival of another stranger. One who could house him for only a few days, one that could provide for him, keep his dieng body safe long enough to heal, impossible to Shukumei, he was dieng and he deserved to die. His mind began to wander farther into the darkness. Every step he took, he fell more and more into fatal condition. The demon was rescently sealed, and without the seal, would be unable to heal itself aswell. The vicious circle of life, the loving hands of death. They grew closer and closer to Shukumei, he felt the cold chill of the reaper over his shoulder.
All of this would go away, if he would only give up the will to live, and stop fighting. That, he could not do. Whats dead should stay dead, and because he was not dead, he would not die.
There, in his sites, tho blurred, was a forest. The beauty of shades of green among the grey plains overtook his sadness. It all seemed to go away as he got closer to the warmth of the forest. He could see the sun start to rise over its tree tops, he felt the warmth begin to envelope his cold, dieng body. He would die watching the sunrise, perfect..
Those were his last thoughts before he passed out on the ground in front of the forest, his bloodied body limp.
The forest had tall trees, many of various varieties. The tree tops were not as thick as many larger forests, tho they were thick enough that someone would not be spotted in their tops. This was a great factor of the forest, because if it had not been for that part of the forest, then Delilah would not have been there to find him, and nurse him back to health. The irony in death for Shukumei, is that everytime he seemed to be on the verge of death, his life was saved at the cost of another.
Delilah was a troublesome woman, she had lived her life a rouge, stealing what she needed to survive. She was a Shinobi at one point, from the Lightning country. Tho many past secrets made her flee from that place, at a very young age. She had been there by fate, or by chance, in the tree tops over Shukumei's dieng body. Neither of which made sense to Shukumei. There was no more reason for him to live, why he was consistently forced to was absent to him, his possesing demon, and all those who felt his wrath. Delilah was gathering a special fungi in the tree tops above, when she heard the thump of Shukumei hitting the ground. She moved cautiously to the edge of the forest, and looked at him, her eyes unflintching. Looking down at Shukumei, she could see his shirt torn nearly off his body, blood ran down all parts of him. She could see on the horizon line the predators and scavengers just waiting for that moment, the moment that just happened, when Shukumei hit the ground. The predators charged at his body, smashing into eachother. Yelping and screaming was heard from all the beasts as some turned on others, while the smarter ones headed straight for the target. Delilah didn't have much time to think, she jumped down from the tree tops, drawing her sword.
If you looking into Delilah's past, she was a master with the sword, her father had taught her, and his father before him. She was an only child, to most familys, the only child being a female at the time was a curse. To her father, it was a blessing. Her mother died at child birth, and her father had to raise her alone, he taught her the ways of Honor, and everything about swords, from craftsmanship, to masterfully weilding it blindfolded.
Her sword rang with a beuitiful sound, one that only a true master of swords could appreciate. Her eyes locked onto the predators incoming, she slashed throgh one, then another, then another, killing them all off, one by one by one. She stood, bloodied, tired, and unsure if protecting the fallen man was a good idea or not. Tho, her intuition told her it was the right thing to do. She picked Shukumei up, barely able to hold him, and slowly got him to her house. The journey was nearly an hour long, when Shukumei was placed on the bed, he was nearly dead.
The are sorrounding the house was tree locked, there was only one way in, and one way out. The house itself was fairly small, a two bedroom, with windows on each side. A secret door that led to underground tunnels, a water trough outside, and a fair amount of traps laid in the sorrounding forestry to provide food for Delilah.
She threw all the items off her table, laying him down gently on it. Quickly starting a fire, moving for a rag and clean water, she tore off his shirt and pulled down his pants. He was wounded badly, and past scars were seen all over his body. She noticed the strange ears he had, tho ignored that factor almost entirely. She dipped the rag in water and began to clean Shukumei off. She got done with his face, his legs, and began to work on his chest, when he awoke, looking her in the eyes.
She jumped back, almost dropping the rag. Then moved closer tilting her head in concern. He looked at her for only a minute longer, before his eyes closed slowly.
She moved back in cautiously, when she was sure he was asleep, she finished cleaning him off. Unfortunately, the only clean clothes she had were her own, and they certainly would not fit Shukumei. He would have to remain naked. She decided that when he woke up, it would be best if he was atleast covered by a blanket of some sorts. Combined with her staying up the whole night, she decided to let Shukumei sleep in her bed. She lifted the covers, gently put him under them, and put the covers back over him.
Through all this Delilah was sore. Through all this, Shukumei was having a war within his mind once again, between the demon and him. Tho the war was with words, as Shukumei's seals were greater then many legendary Kages.
".. You seal me in your pathetic body mortal, you try my patience.. I am going to rip your mind in to millions of tiny pieces, I am going to feed you my chakra until you cannot stand anymore, I am going to kill all those you ever love, and ever come in contact with.. You will be my slave, I will torture you, whip you, and eventually, I will eat you..." The demon roared in its cage.
Shukumei stared into the beasts eyes and responded, "Creature, you are no more able to do any of that, then I am able to love. Your threats are empty, your rage is uesless. You cannot do anything to me but help me, give me strength, power. You will not live if I die, because I will destroy us both. You will not move, think, blink, act, scare, cry, fear, hate, mourn.. You will do nothing.. You will sit in your damn cage, until I take my last breath, and kill you with it.. Your best bet, is to get on my good side, and do it before I lose my patience, and seal even your chakra in that cage.."
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PostSubject: Re: Shukumei Naraku [Approved]   Fri Sep 19, 2008 12:06 am

The demon laughed, as demons do and responded, ".. Fear for thought, I am not a being that dwells in cages forever Mortal, for now, you have what you need from me, and for now, I will remain in your assistance, however, shoud you attempt anything, I will unleash my chakra, and hell will feel your soul being forced out of this body.."
Shukumei stood, smashing his palms onto the cage, a roaring echo raged as he spoke, "I will not speak these words again, because if I do, it will be with my fingers.. You do not threaten me, you do not speak to me as you are supirior.. You have lost this war demon, accept it, because it is your only chance to remain existant.."
With that, Shukumei tossed and turned in the bed. Delilah awoke to this, and gently laid her hands on his forehead. He turned, only for a moment more, before relaxing to her touch. Even tho he did not know her, he was comforted by her presence, and that was enough to calm the rising waves of the battle within his soul. She pulled her hand back gently, and rested it on her lap, once again, drifting to sleep.
Delilah woke up early the next day, preparing breakfast, reseting the table, and had managed to find old clothes out of her fathers things that would fit Shukumei. She layed them out on the chair next to his bed, and finished setting the table. For breakfast, she was having nothing, but Shukumei was having a sort of remedy soup Delilah's father used to make after long periods of work and exaughtion. She paused after she was done setting the table, and stared down at him. He startled for a moment, then again. She was dazed, staring at him. He awoke, and looked back at her, into her eyes. They were both momentarily gone from this world, each seeming to look into the soul of the other.
Delilah smiled and walked up to him, "How are you feeling?".
He blinked roughly once and looked back over to her, ".. Why did you help me?.."
Her expression went from a smiled, to nothing. She glanced down at the floor, then back up to him.
".. Would you have left me to die other there?.." she asked in a kind, curious voice.
He closed his eyes, ".. Thanks.."

Shukumei did not quiver during his sleep, he had tamed the beast within him, and began to heal. The demon provided an abnormally quick healing pace for him, and without his knowledge, infusing his wounds with chakra, to help that much more. The better the health Shukumei was in, the better health the demon would be in when they awakened the following afternoon.
The afternoon became night, with the night, the sun set and the moon rised. The moon.. It was a blood red this night, there were no clouds overhead, the stars were greatly revealed. One would say that this moon brought death and misery to the world this night. Tho, Shukumei knew better, this night he awoke, and this night he felt his heart, he felt love, once more.
Delilah watched him sleep again, she sat on an old oak chair with her legs together, her hands folded together resting in the space between them. Her eyes glistened a mysterious green in the moonlight that shone through the windows in the bedroom. She watched Shukumei sleep, silently, carefully observing him, helping him, protecting him.
It was nearly 11:15 at night, Shukumei opened his eyes lightly, the moonlight blinding his vision momentarily. He looked over, his shoulder at the wall, then at his feet, then over to Delilah. His vision started from her hands up, slowly gliding across, as if she were a field of flowers. Her image, at that exact moment, was beyond seraphim to Shukumei. He could not dream to wake up to anyone prettier. His eyes caught descriptions of Delilah, as if written in a delicate poetry. Her skin, a peach of silk. Her lips, delicate, soft. Her hair, curls of passionate sunlight. Her eyes, ... Her eyes..
He smiled lightly, taking in a deep breath. Pausing momentarily, and then sitting up.
Delilah reached out lightly, to help him up, but he got up as if he were never wounded. She moved her hands back with a light smile.
".. How.. How long..." Shukumei began, before Delilah cut him off.
".. Not very long, from when you ate, till down, maby 14 hours.."
Her voice was unique, soft, a tone so pure, it would echo through to roars of lightning, to calm the waking sea.
Shukumei lifted the blanket, seeing his body bare. He looked over to Delilah, and she smiled at him, blushing slightly. He shook his head momentarily and then turned, facing her, his hands holding the blanket in place. He looked up at her, into her eyes, shifting his head slightly right and spoke.
".. Do you have anything I could.. Maby.." his shoulders raised slightly and then dropped back down.
She looked down to the side of the bed, picking up some clothes. Handed them to him, and looked at him again.
He looked at her, holding the clothes with both hands. He looked as if waiting.
Tho it took her a minute, she realized he had not intended to dress in front of her. She put on an 'OH!' face, even tho she had seen everything there was, with the exception of his backside. She turned around in the chair, making a slight creek with it.
Shukumei smiled and dressed quickly. He wore a grey shirt, with faded blue pants. He placed his hand on her shoulder lightly, to signify he was done. Tho she reacted strangly to it, looking at the hand and taking in an awkward breath.
She turned back around and faced him. The rest of that night was Shukumei telling her the tale of his life. However, she did not return the favor, she merely stated her father had passed, and she lived on her own.
Shukumei was well enought to give up the bed for her that night, tho she did not ask him to. He gave it up by his own choice, and she made him a pallet next to the bed. Shukumei waited until she slept, then crept out of the house, leaving her where she slept. He could not take any chances of putting her in the path of the death and agony that followed him wherever he went, and so he left, never to see her again. He may later regret it, tho, he regreted many such things, and this would put no harm on his sleep. He was indeed growing to be heartless, a trait provided without a doubt by the demon that was now caged inside of him.
Shukumei walked through the dark forest until he came upon a small town, he walked around the town examining the dark streets, looking for an inn or similar. He found one after about 15 minutes of walking. The inn was dark, a building of older looks. It was two stories tall painted with a faded brown, the windows were bared and the bars were slightly rusted. The door to the inn was brown with scratches on the bottom right hand corner, an animal, probably a dog resided inside aswell. Shukumei walked towards the inn cautiously and took a hand onto the doorknob, he opened it slowly, the door creaked. He observed the room as he stepped inside, the room was small, with staircases on both sides of the desk that sat centered in front of him about 10 feet away. Dark stains on the desk from a cup, and sign in clipboard accompanied by a pen lay on the desk. A silver bell sat on the edge of the desk.
Shukumei entered fully closing the door. The room was lighted dimly and the floor creaked as he walked forward extending a hand to ring the bell. As he got to the desk however, a man appeared, as if he was there the entire time, invisible. The man was dark, he had black hair and brown eyes with a nose that poked out of his face like a carrot. His face was wrinkled and old, a creepy smile on his face. His skin was the same color as his tattered clothes, strangely, an old grey. If ever you were to see a ghost, this man looked to be exactly that.
"Hello! How may I help you this evening?" The man said cheerfully.
Shukumei blinked, his response came studduringly, "Uhm.. Yes, I would.. like a room for the night.. uhm.. please..".
The man nodded and pointed to the sign in clip board, "Please, sign in, first nights are free, not many come around here anymore, ill let'cha stay just so the ol' place dun' rot of boredom."
Shukumei nodded and signed the sheet of names on the clipboard. He examined it, the last visit was nearly two years ago, and the person never signed out.
Shukumei walked up the stairs, the man handed him a key that said room 69.
"First door on your left." said the Man at the desk.
Shukumei looked down the dark hallway lighted by a single torch at the end. There was room after room after room, the house seemed to be excessively larger then it had looked outside. Turning, Shukumei grasped the door handle to the room with the gold letters "69". He took the key inserting it into the keyhold and turned it. He turned the handle and pressed on the door, it opened with a creek. He took out the key and walked inside closing the door behind him.
The room was as dark as the others, a lightswitch on the side, he flicked the switch and a light centered in the room, uncovered. A lightbulb in the ceiling. There was a bed against the wall to his left, and a desk to the right of the bed. The room was creepy, but that didn't bother Shukumei. He locked the door, sat the key on the desk, and layed down on the bed falling asleep quickly. There was no moon that night, Shukumei slept peacfully. The next morning when he woke up, he walked to the desk and signed out leaving the key on the strange desk. He turned, opened the door, and left the inn. The town itself seemed deserted, the old man wasn't at the desk, tho curious, Shukumei did not investigate, he left the town headed to Konoha, the land of fire.
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PostSubject: Re: Shukumei Naraku [Approved]   Fri Sep 19, 2008 12:07 am

Shukumei proceeded to the fire country, anxeously. He wondered what dwelled in those lands, his curiousity to explore and hunt would cause him to travel to the vast areas of the world, searching for whatever lay in the darkest corridors of the deepest seas. He was walking down a long path sorrounded by forests, the beauty of it twirled around him like dancing stars in full moons light. The sun was high in the sky, it was mid day, a warm breeze blew from the east, blowing his hair back slightly as he walked. His expression was blank, as it usually was, despite the happiness of his sorroundings. He wore his usual clothes, grey and blue. Birds chirped their songs of glory all over.
Shukumei had traveled far, all without money. He did not realize how much he needed it until he thought of how he would live, where, how much it would cost, his journeys, resources. Never did he expect for the prices to soar as they were in his head. He frowned, he needed a way to make money and had none. He walked long and far thinking of what it is he could do to obtain money for his travels arriving at a crossroads shortly there after. Six people walked, two females and four males. He nodded his head in greetings as they passed eachother. They all were dark figures, mysterious, not much was shown except their natural figure which was covered by brown robes. Shukumei could see the glistening of weapons under their robes and took cautious steps.
He heard whispers of mercenary work on the cost, apparently there were many ships looking for hired help. Shukumei thought about it for quite some time, maby working on the seas wouldn't be so bad. Tho, he had read many tales, pirates, sea beasts, plauge. All of this was out in the open sea and he was not sure if he had the ability to fend off something of these sorts, sure, he was a demon hunter, strong, worthy of anything the earth could throw at him. Conquiring the seas however, were not gifts he was born with. He ignored the robed figures and continue onwards toward Konoha, the land of fire.
He arrived in Konoha only days later from hearing of mercenary work in the great oceans. Looking around Shukumei was not impressed with the supposed greatest lands of all, he was in fact disgusted by their claim to be the greatest land. He did not enter the gates of Konoha, as they appeared to be locked, but instead wandered around the area in absolute secracy, no doubt Konoha had guards all about their lands, and he needed not the trouble. Shukumei stayed that night in the forest, staring at the stars. Where did they come from? How were they existant? All these things he thought about, fate, his fate, the fate of those around him. What was to come of this world, this land, these people? How would they end, or, have they even begun. He dreamed that night of the demon within him...
"Pitiful mortal, you worry about the fate of all and lies of time. You need only worry about yourself for now. I have the oddest feeling we will become great allies, and even better enemies.." The demon within him spoke in the echoing darkness of his dreams. No response did Shukumei's subconscious produce, his mind only obsorbed what the demon said like a dry sponge set into the ocean. Echoing blackness overtook his dreams, and ended the same.
He awoke to sunrise, a glistening over the mountains. Shukumei shot up, beads of sweat dropping from his forehead. He quickly stood, securing his weapons and gear before looking to the direction of the great oceans. He had no other alternative but to take to the seas and earn his keep by his labor. Wandering through the forests until he arrived at the crossroads, he followed the path that the hooded figures took hoping it would lead him to the ocean. Days passed and he saw nobody along the road, every night he had strange dreams of his demon, the past, the dreadful deeds of the being that rested inside of him. Every night, he yearned to kill the creature more and more, until the yearning became a lust of rage and faded into carelessness of the creatures unspeakable deeds. The demon, a demon..
Shukumei walked through a path guarded by mountains on all sides, roughing up a rockbound hill the sweet scent of an ocean breeze hit him like a raging bull. He looked at the waters that spread vastly beyond the horizon. The sunrise over the ocean was greater then any other. Below the hill a port town was just waking up, many a boats and sailors, mercenaries, doctors, merchants, the town was swarmed with all kinds of people wanting all kinds of goods. There was not a corner in the town uninhabited by some type of seller, buyer, or hirerer. Shukumei walked through the lively town to one of the many docks searching for work. He pushed past the crowd asking people if they knew someone looking for work. Each grunted with no response, ignoring him like an outsider. Shukumei tried for hours on end to find work on a ship or otherwise, but failed horribly. Giving up for the day, he walked to the local bar and inn. Entering the building the loud rucus of drunks and scent of spilled alchohol overwhelmed him. He shook his head slightly and continued entering, pushing through the doorway. He looked around the dimly lighted room at the bar, across, sailors, merchants, the same crew as outside all dwelled in this disgusting place. Mercenaries sat cornerbound their weapons clearly visible waiting for the passerby to request their assistance. Shukumei's face remained blank as he walked slowly, cautiously around the room. He sat at an uninhabited table, looking around the room much more closely then he had before, hoping to catch word of some random adventure that he would possibly catch pay for. He observed with great intent as the crowds changed, however, one man did not, he sat as Shukumei sat in the opposite corner of the room looking at the crowds. Their eyes locked, Shukumei tilted backwards slightly. The man stood and proceeded slowly towards Shukumei. Standing at the table, he removed the shadowy hood that blocked his full face. It couldn't be! It was! Shukumei stood swiftly.
"Gabriale Diamond, how are you brother?" Shukumei said to the man.
"I've been good Shukumei, and yourself?" Gabriale responded.
"Great, what brings you to this sickening place? I didn't knew you sailed, or is that the reason your here?.."
"I'm not very good on the seas, but these days, it seems to be the only work I can find. Why are you here my friend, your not a sea fairer either are you?"
"Oh no." He responded, "I don't do well at sea, but it seems were bound by a rope, im looking for the same work as you. Any work I can find."
The two stood in silence for a moment, each nodding in agreement. A small rucus at the bar caught the attention of the pair. A man had bumped into another and they turned in drunken anger at eachother.
".. Lets leave before this happens..." said Gabriale.
"Don't have to tell me twice." Shukumei responded, standing up and walking out the door alongside Gabriale. They walked speechless, both seeming to walk towards the same place, down a dark road back up the hills.
"So, where you headed?" asked Shukumei in bland curiousity.
"Well, im not sure, I was thinking of starting a group, maby doing some sort of hiring work, if you get what I mean." said -.
"I get what you mean all to well my friend, I was thinking the same thing.. Maby.. We should continue as a team, who knows, we might strike rich on the first job. Two assasins are better then one, if I do say so myself." remarked Shukumei with a slight smirk.
"Yea, well, lets find a camp or make one somewhere and we can discuss it in further detail. Who knows, maby this could get us rich. Tho, I do recall our last meeting wasn't exactly cherry topped in the beginning, we both work rather hazerdously. If we team, to do whatever jobs, we need to make sure we have eachothers backs. I mean sure, me getting all the money is fine, but what if im the one in a predicament." said Gabriale slightly sarcastically, or so it seemed. Shukumei and Gabriale had a preveous meeting in which they ended up almost killing eachother over a suitcase full of paper, nothing more than paper. Tho, neither of them opened the suitcase till they were deadlocked in a situation that they needed to work togethers to get out of. No matter the case, they trusted eachother with their lifes, this, was quite the opposite of a mistake.
They made camp a few hours into the hills on a flatland area easily defended. A chokepoint in the hills, unless they were attacked from above, was the only entrance in. Anyone attemting to steal, kill, or be mischevious around this area would be heard, found, and disposed of by one of the two in this crevous of the hills.
That night they discussed past events of their lifes. Laughter echoed through the mountains as if the gods were towering over the sleeping port town below. They formed an alliance, again, and would head in seperate directions temporarily, ending up, hopefully, in the same place in the end. They parted the next morning..
Shukumei set out into the forest, he decided that although he was a Hyuuga, he could not call himself that. He had to take take the identity of what the monks named him, Shukumei Naraku. Without a defined path, and only an ideal, he and Gabriale walked their seperate ways, likely to meet eachother again very soon...
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PostSubject: Re: Shukumei Naraku [Approved]   Fri Sep 19, 2008 12:09 am

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Cirrus followed Darijiro down the hall, queitly, examining every single area of the house that was in his sight, down to the very type of lighting used, and the paint on the walls. The area of each wall, the size of each door, the scent of each spot, tho he was not sniffing, merely using remote drafts of air to check. He caught the size, type, relative weight, strength, and capabilities of every door in the house, just by site. He was not trusted in this zone, it would be foolish to trust him, especially because he is only trustable if he likes you. He did not like anyone in this area, not within 100 yards. Not only that, what if he had to use the restroom? What if he had to get a drink?.. Oh well, he wanted to see the response of these folks anyways, when he turns on the sink to get some water, and when they hear their restroom door open, and close, knowing everyones asleep. He wanted to know what they were capable of, and why it is they would invite him so curtiously into their house, not only knowing that they are hunted as missing ninja, but inviting a man whom has shown them no mercy, who set another rouge shinobi to die at their doorstep. He attended their wedding to get his image into their heads, as respectable, kind, trustworthy, and all the other sorts, was a brilliant idea. Not his own, it was Ahikil's, but still, brilliant.
He knew this treasure hunter may have what he was looking for, because what he was looking for was the definition of anchient. The family scroll of the Zhao, containing the last seal, the ultimate power of his clan. He would do what it took, and not a question less to find this scroll, even if it ment invading the space, privacy of this home. Disrespecting the courtesy of this creature of a man, was only what happened along the way. The woman, Lukia, need not be disturbed, he did not know her, and thus, would not like to. Love had a curious way of working, obviosuly, she did not know fully of Darijiro's demonic pressence, and his lies, Cirrus was sure, would not get to Lukia. Thus, why love was curious. His observations led him farther to his goal, tho he only had three goals, this would remove one from his list.
In order to acheive one goal, he needed power, and this would give him an ultimate strength, only matchable by that of a maximum power Sharingan, or, so he has heard from his clan, based on legends of anchient times. Ahikil, however, knew of a power greater than that of his clan's ulitmate power. The power of the Phoenix, was by far greater, and by receiving the power of his clan, he receives the absolute control of the Phoenix, and the absolute, is all he needed to unleash his strength into Cirrus, and overcome his will, to once again, be born into this world, a chaotic Lord, knowing little match.
Cirrus entered the room, he examined it thoroughly with a single glance, he saw no windows, he saw no bathroom, no second doors, no second rooms. It was an empty room, virtually minimal all around, however, it beat sleeping in a cave. Fortunately, during the night, Cirrus would snag a couch, and drag it into the room, locking himself back in. That is, when he was done snooping. He listened intently to the words of Darijiro, he spoke of watching Cirrus, not trusting him, and spoke in a tone of one who was all too comfortable locking him in this room. Even surveleince couldn't keep Cirrus at bay, partially because he wasn't going to leave the room, or so the cameras would say. They would see no handsigns, they would only see the image of Cirrus, tidely sleeping next to the wall in a corner. As planned.
Cirrus picked through the clothes, getting a basic black shirt, and jeans out that matched him. He was comfortable in these colors, however, knew all to well to check the clothes for anything that may be of sensory, or any other substance. He would do this later, as to not arise suspicion. He set the clothes he was to wear in a corner, and observed the room further, before realising that the clothe stack was left in here. When he did decide to sleep, he had a pillow, which made him smile lightly. He watched the door close, and smiled, yawning a bit, taking off his clothes in a corner, and putting the others on. He sat his dirty clothes in the opposite corner.
He ran his hand across the floor, across the walls, as if feeling the texture. He located all the 'bugs', or, as a professionally trained Jounin, with extremitys of first hand experience would casually check for bugs. He shifted through his clothing, and realized, that all his gear was in the clothing in the corner. He checked through his pockets, pulling out three feathers. He sat a black feather, and a basic looking feather in the center of the room, putting a white feather in his pocket. He left his weapons pouch, and his sword sitting in the corner.
He yawned once more, and sat in a corner, he closed his eyes, and tilted his head down, tho not asleep, merely, planning the approach. This could take some time, he would wait a few hours, and begin by activating the sound-break feather. Then, he would turn out the lights with the black light feather, of course, those were only simple plans to put everyone else in the dark. He would develope heat in each area of the room, making heat sensory impossible. No light, no sound, no specified heat sensors. Everyone would be left in the dark. Tho, an outbreak like this would be quite irratating and instantly would call everyone into his room. If he was to do it, he would only break the sound, and wouldn't break the light. Would he make a clone?.. No, that is expected. He could just darken the room, but once again, it would immediately ruin the plan of surprise. As he thought, Ahikil slipped into his mind. Hey, idiot, do you think I gave you the power to bend light because I wanted you to sleep well at night?.. Use it, I think you can get creative with colors eh?.. Use that damn shadow clone thing of yours, while hiding yourself by breaking the light around you.. It makes sense now doesn't it boy? I would slap you for your ignorance, but im in your damn head.. Fool, remember, if you get yourself killed, then I have to take over.. Now that I think about it, get yourself killed so I can.. Or get yourself in gear.. Ahikil sent the thoughts running through Cirrus's head. Cirrus responded snapily in his mind, Your opinion is appreciated, however, if I kill myself, your ass will NOT be taking over my body, and you forget your place Ahikil, you are my guest in my body... Ahikil laughed in Cirrus's head, Boy, yet you sit here like an idiot, you are their guest, in their house.. Do not critisize me, you know full well I have the power.. Tempt me, and I will kill HER... . Cirrus stopped Ahikil immediately, if you were in his mind, you would immediately see a sword fly at Ahikil. You do not touch, you do not think about even looking at her, ever.. You know full well what I will do to protect her, and you know that I will rip my own skull open, just so I can kill you.. Just so you will never get the chance to touch her.. . Ahikil responded, Then get moving boy, don't cry to me, I have no feelings for her, you do.. Get your plan moving, I don't want to wait here all night.. The power, I want to feel the power.. And so do you.. . This conversation made Cirrus's expression darken, he was enraged, tho activated the void, as to eliminate all emotion. He could not get what he needed by being angry. Besides, he needed to make sure that the scroll wasn't here, and if it was, then he might just have to kill to get it. In any case, time would tell whether or not it was. So Cirrus would wait, sitting in this corner, counting time, developing a plan, and ultimately disrespecting the courtesy of these people. It sounded like such a sin, to someone who had a concern for courtesy. If he was caught, he would likely be at bladepoint, he could easily prevent himself from being seen, but being heard, he could only go so far, and there was so little he had that wasn't deadly, that wouldn't make someone scream. He would have to think up something for that aswell, he knew all too well what happens when one person screams in a house guarded by a sleeping demon. He would be in a situation of life or death, tho he knew he could easily escape, or otherwise. It was still, not the kind of situation he needed to be in.
More thoughts ran through his head, I could probably just offer him money for it, if he does have it..Those thoughts were cut off by his absolute hatred for bargaining, and his enjoyment of chaotic fun. He would go as planned, and not a step off.
Cirrus, missed something, whether he was just being lazy, or whatever the case, he seemed to miss the bed sitting in front of him, which was clearly hidden by the fact that he forgot to check the area to his right, he was stuck looking at everything near the clothes pile, and not just that, there was a door, to the right of the bed, hidden by the inexistant shadows. If Cirrus weren't arguing with Ahikil, and enraged, he would have seen this, and fortunate that he did too, because all thats left now, was to play the pillow trick.. Or take a realy realy realy long shower..
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PostSubject: Re: Shukumei Naraku [Approved]   Fri Sep 19, 2008 12:23 am

Wow very swell great job Todd!
You even counted your own Cp right and added chakra costs to your jutsus.
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