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PostSubject: Kazuki Shirubaken [Finished]   Tue Oct 14, 2008 6:40 pm

Name: Kazuki Shirubaken
Age: 25
Gender: Male
Looks:While Kazuki is rather tall, standing about 6'4, he is rather lankey. He is very scrawny and some can mistake him as being malnourished or physically weak. Most often happens when he is admitted into the hospital by new nurses. He prefers wearing lose fitting clothing. Both being rather plain as they are usually a blank shirt and pants. His black hair is always uncempt and drooping over his face. His eyes are a dark blue and almost look to be glazed over.

He carries his sword on his back, wrapped with a majority of the robe. The remainder of the robe is wrapped around his abdomen underneath his shirt as a security measure.

Personality:Always calm. Almost never shows extreme emotions but there are times when he is extremely distressed that those with keen eyes can catch on. He remains this way even in battle, calm and calculating. People are often turned away from him as his personality can be hard to like. His trust is also something he does not give out freely. He has very few who can truely call him a friend because of this. That however, does not translate into his communication skills as he is able to co-operate fairly easily with others, but is often restrained to missions only.

Special Characteristics: Chakra Sense
Special Effect: Kazuki was born with the extrasensory ability to sense another's presense. When activated, he is able to sense the enemy's direction, the size of an approaching, unseen force, and the approximate strength of an opponent. Ranking in Weak, Medium and Strong. He can only sense within a 25 meter radius of himself.

Skill and Rank Information
Village: Konohagakure
Rank: Jonin

Elements:Main: Wind, Sub: Lightning
Skills Specialties: Main: Weaponry, Sub: Ninjutsu

Weapons:

Claymore: A Claymore shortened enough for use in one hand. One of the final two creations of Kazuki's father before his death. The blade is a weave of silver and steel giving it a distinct shine when held to the sunlight.

Robe of Omnipresence: Mayuri Shuribaken's greatest, and final work. The robe is in fact a fifty meter long, 0.3 meter wide cloth. It is wolven with fine threads of specially tempered steel that look, feel and act as a cloth of equivalent size made from wool. When imbuned with chakra, the robe increases in its strength and can be moved to the will of the user. At one end is the emblem of the Shirubaken family.


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PostSubject: Re: Kazuki Shirubaken [Finished]   Tue Oct 14, 2008 6:55 pm

History and RP Sample
History:

Pre-Academy Arc:

Born in the rural village of Kiriesaki, nestled at the foot of the mountains. Kazuki was the only son of the village blacksmith and his wife who was a medical nin in the Leaf Village. She was often away on business and his father spent the majority of his time in the shop making tools for the local famers. He also was a well known producer of high grade weapons that surpassed most equipment given out in the Villages for ninja.

Due to his parents always being away, Kazuki was raised for the most part by his Grandfather. A former Jonin for the Leaf who was forced to retire when he lost his leg during a mission. Seeing as he was a former instructor though, from the day Kazuki learned to walk, his grandfather had been teaching chakra control and training his body. While other children were playing in the fields, he was learning how to hide his presence and approach undetected.

His life was like that until he reached the age of seven. Constant training and waiting for the occasional visit from his mother while his father would work late into the night and wake early in the morning. However, two months after his seventh birthday, everything changed for him.

That year they had endured an extremely dreadful rainy season and the fields were already partially flooded while the river was well in the danger zone. This wasn't a new occurance for the villagers as times like this came around every three to five years or so. What they didn't realize was the fact there had been a small landslide overtop the dam, heavily damaging it until it could no longer hold back the waters.

The dam collapsed around noon the day after the rains stopped, sending down a massive landslide that engulfed the village. Kazuki was trapped inside his home with his grandfather. They were lucky enough to have one room intact, even though the building was completely buried under rubble. Kazuki's grandfather acted oddly, he was breathing heavily and kept telling Kazuki to stay calm and look for a way out.

Kazuki did notice his grandfather's sudden weiryness but did as he was told, he searched the room but could find no exit so he began digging through some of the debris, hoping he could break through to the surface. His grandfather meanwhile, sat in a dark corner of the room telling Kazuki to stay calm and keep digging. Which he did. He dug for an entire day before he finally broke through to the surface and sunlight shone into the room.

Kazuki immediately went back to help his grandfather to escape when he was pushed away. His grandfather just glared him down and told Kazuki that the exit was only large enough for him to slip through. That he should go to the nearest town and get help as the village was quite isolated and barely had travellers come through. Most being the odd ninja looking for weapons.

Reluctantly, Kazuki leaves his grandfather and looks upon his ruined home. What had used to be lively fields now lay quiet, buried under meters of mud and stone. He made his way through the debris and undertook the two day hike down to the nearest village for help. He arrived on the morning of the second day, not having stopped for sleep and nearly collapsed at the town gates. He made his way to the village head's office where he was able to rally a search party to leave immediately.

Once they arrived at the village, moral was low as they did not expect to find any survivours, but within a few hours they managed to pull out a few. They continued to dig over the next several days unearthing a majority of the village's population, including Kazuki's father. Kazuki however, ran immediately back to his home to tell his grandfather that help had arrived. But what he saw was his grandfather lying dead in the same corner he had been sitting in when Kazuki left. The extra light now flooding into the room revealed a large stain of dried blood. Further inspection had shown that he was impailed by a splintered piece of wood that had struck his back when the mudslide hit.

Kazuki's father did all he could to consol him over the loss, but was unsure what exactly to do as he had little skill as a father. The next week they held funeral rights for all who had perished and by then the Leaf Village had finally caught word and Kazuki's mother arrived two days later.

With the village destroyed along with the dam, everyone was forced to find new homes. Kazuki and his family moved to the Leaf Village as it was the most practical choice and his father's business could run smoother with a solid client base.

So they moved there and six months later his father had his business all set up and Kazuki began seeing more of his parents. However, he became distant and never tried to make friends. Continuing his training on his own at night and when his father was in the shop.

Academy Arc:

Several years passed and Kazuki planned on entering the academy to begin becoming a ninja like his grandfather had wanted. However, his father was strictly against it. He made weapons and weapons were made to kill. He didn't want his son weilding the same weapons he made to kill another. His mother though, had a more open mind and managed to convince his father onto allowing him to enter.

His academy days were short as he graduated quickly, already knowing many of the basics he breezed through the classes and became a genin. Before he met his teacher however, his father fell ill. And no matter how hard the staff at the hospital tried, they could not cure what ailed him. They could just identify it as a non-contagious virus that affected the heart. He had less than a month at most to live. His life could be prolonged if he was put under constant watch at the hospital but he decided that he would make the best of his last days.

He then spent the entire day with Kazuki, discussing what he planned to do as a ninja, any plans for his future and such. It was the longest period of time Kazuki had ever spent with his father. The very next morning, he barred himself up in the shop where he remained for three weeks. The sound of his hammer echoed long into the night and early in the morning. He finally came out on the day Kazuki was to meet his squad. His condition had severely worsened and he could no longer stand, but hte entire time he wore a smile on his face.

Genin Arc:

Kazuki went and met with his squad. Their teacher gave them a simple initiation test to assess their abilities. And to know where they specialize. His team consisted of himself, a male genin who was a proficient genjutsu user and a kunoichi who was extremely skilled in ninjutsu. He however, was told that while he was well balanced in many of the areas, he had nothing he accelled at and should try and find what suits him best.

With those words in mind, he headed home to find his father bedridden and his mother by his side. This would be the last he saw of his father alive. His mother was forced back to the hospital that evening and Kazuki said goodnight to his father.

That morning, he awoke to find two boxes by his bedside, along with a note. The final word s of his father saying he should contunie the path he had chosen and he was sorry he could not be around to watch him. Inside the box was a large claymore and a long scarf made of wolven steel. His father's final works. When Kazuki entered his father's room, he saw him lying in his bed. A smile on his face.

Starting that day, Kazuki carried his sword around with him always. He left the cloth hidden in his home, practising with it at night. Planning to use it as his secret weapon during the chunnin exams. His skill with a blade grew quickly and he was soon the frontline member of his squad. Protecting the other two while they preped their jutsu.

Chunnin Exams Arc:

In time, the chunnin exams came around and his squad was given the go ahead to participate. The written exam was a breeze and the group passed without any difficulties. Moving on to the second stage and the Forest of Death. There, they recieved a Heaven's scroll and took their place at the 25th gate. The exam started and the group immediately charged deep within the depths of the forest.

There, Kazuki inadvertantly took lead of the squad and began directing them through the woods. Using his ability to sense where the enemies were at all times, he was able to guide his team past the stronger groups and stealthily approach one weak group. They easily annilated the team and retrieved the Earth Scroll they carried. Excited over their victory, but not wanting to take too many risks, they immediately headed for the tower. And with Kazuki's guidance again, they made it to the tower without encountering any other teams. Upon arrival they noticed that several other teams had arrived beforehand. Simply looking at them they could tell that they would be the more serious competition.

They waited the remaining four days for the last of the groups to slowly trickle in and were given the date of the final exam. Kazuki did notice the whole time though, there was one ninja who stood out from the others, he had a particularily high bloodlust about him and was constantly glancing over at his group. A feeling in the pit of his stomach told him he did not want to meet him in combat.

So with that, the second exam came to a close and the genin were given a month off for recovery and ready themselves for the final exam. Kazuki began carrying around the robe with him. Using it as a sort of sheath for his blade. But when the opportunity arised, he would train with it. Taking care to ensure there were no prying eyes nearby to catch him and his secret weapon.

Third Exam:

The month passed quickly and the streets were crowded with spectators and vendors looking to make an easy buck. Kazuki entered the stadium and watched the opening ceremony, watching the list and carefully studying the list. The first thing that sprang out at him was the second round. If he were to win the match, he would likely face the genin that worried him most.

His first match was realitively simple as his opponent was a part of a weaker group who had barely passed the second exam. When the match ended, Kazuki was relieved that he had not needed to reveal the abilities of his robe because, as he had predicted, the genin had moved on and he would be facing him.

The rest of the matches passed and Kazuki entered the arena. His stomach cramped with nerves that did not transfer to his expression as he gazes into the darkness of the entrance as his opponent emerges onto the field. He had jet black hair that covered most of his face and fell to his shoulders. His attire consisted of a type of assassin's uniform. a dark blue, skin tight full body outfit with some light armour placed over vital areas.

As he approaches his spot, Kazuki could feel a strong aura emitting from him, completely unlike the opponent he faced before. This guy was on a different level and it would take quite a bit to take him out. The proctor begins the match and immediately, Kazuki draws his blade, the robe flying off and falling to the ground. Now was not the time to use it. He steadied his blade and charged forth.

He attacked without relying on his ability to sense his opponent as he was trying to make him reveal his techniques. Which, after the first round of slashes, worked. The genin leaped back and performed a handsign. Immediately, his hair uncovered his eyes which began to glow blood red and everything around Kazuki turned black. In every direction, darkness and there was absolute silence.

"Genjutsu" he thought to himself as he stood in place. Unable to discern his opponent's location. In reality, Kazuki had stopped moving and now stood in the middle of the arena motionless. Grinning his opponent creaped closer, drawing a kunai and staring intently at Kazuki's throat.

Inside the illusion, Kazuki begins focusing. Shutting down his five senses and using his ability only. A strong response appeared and he raised his sword arm. The genin stood shocked as his kunai was blocked and he was thrown back. Kazuki walking towards him, following him with closed eyes. The genjutsu was still in effect but it was not stopping him. The genin then thinking it was simply a fluke, charges again. Recieving a slash across the face from the tip of the blade.

The would was enough to break the illusion and Kazuki opens his eyes, staring at his opponent he stands up straight and readies himself. His oppenent attempts to charge, but finds his leg caught as the robe had wrapped around and was now holding him in place. He looks back to a grinning Kazuki as the robe springs from the ground and ties the genin. Kazuki charges over and after placing the blade to the genin's throat, is declaired the victor.

From there, Kazuki moved on to win the final match and graduated to Chunnin along with three other genin. One being his squad mate. With the conclusion of the tournament and his recent promotion, he leaves the arena and visits his father and grandfather's graves. Informing them of his recent success and how thankful he was to them.


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PostSubject: Re: Kazuki Shirubaken [Finished]   Tue Oct 14, 2008 6:56 pm

Chunnin Arc:

Kazuki was given a few weeks off before officially beginning his duties as a Chunnin. He was to review all his new responsibilities and duties he would now be carrying out. He also recieved his new chunnin outfit, which after trying on, immediately decided against wearing it. It just felt too stuffy for him as he prefered his usual attire.

His first year as Chuunin went by as a rather uneventful year. He was given only simple escort missions and nothing overly dangerous. His first difficult mission finally came and it was to gather information on a village on the boarder of the Fire Nation. A Leaf ninja who had been in the area had reported the villagers behaving oddly and overnight, completely abandoning the village completely. When he went in to study further, contact was lost and no word has been recieved from the village in question for over a week.

He was to proceed in a team of three lead by a jonin. His other partner was a Chunnin who had won the Chunnin exam the year before he did. The group headed out and encountered no trouble for the majority of their journey, however, the closer they approached the boarder, the more nervous people in the towns seemed. Walking down the streets, the civilians would part the streets, taking children indoors and constantly watching the shinobi. Fear livid in their eyes.

As they approached the village, Kazuki began to get the feeling they were being pursued. The ensuing attack on the squad proved this when several Cloud nin ambushed the party as they entered a small clearing in the woods. The group was able to dispatch the group with little difficulty. Most thanks to the Jonin leading them as he delt with four on his own.

Now knowing what had happened to their informant, they approached the village as discreetly as possible. From their vantage point they were able to see a majority of the village center. The report was true, the village was abandoned of villagers. The only signs of life were the few Cloud ninja who now occupied it. From what they could see, there was extremely tight security around a warehouse as there was always a minimum of three ninja guarding the entrances. Crates were also constantly being brought in from the Southern entrance of the Village.

Once nightfall came, the group moved around to the southern entrance, there they waited until another caravan arrived and the Jonin incapacitiates the crew by casting a genjutsu over them, taking and opening several of the crates. Inside were large stockpiles of weapons and various scrolls which could cause serious harm if used against the Leaf Village. They then removed the cargo and its crew before casting a transformation jutsu and moving into the Village.

They were able to fool the guards and enter the warehouse where the walls were lined with crates and larger seige weapons. Immediately, the group began placing explosive tags over the crates and inside the weapons. They then caused a large commotion bringing all the ninja into the warehouse before sealing them in and detonating the tags.

Upon returning to the Village and giving their report, Kazuki and his squadmate were promoted to Jonin for their efforts at quelling a possible war.


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PostSubject: Re: Kazuki Shirubaken [Finished]   Tue Oct 14, 2008 7:06 pm

RP Sample: "Drip... drip" The consistant sound of falling water echoed through the humid darkness with the steadiness of a metronome. Atop a secluded ledge, Kazuki waited in absolute silence. Not moving his body even an inch as to avoid disturbing even the smallest pebble. The catacombs were narrow and long. Any noise could easily be carried for miles. Because of this, he even limited his breaking to one breath per three minutes.

He had been waiting in the darkness for well over six hours and the exchange time was now only minutes away. The Village had recieved word of Black Market trading occurring in the caverns around the Merchant town of Izilude. It was well known that Black Market goods were constantly coming and going through the town. However this time they had an informant as well as a location and time of one of the major trade routes. If it was to be shut down, the market in the area would fall into chaos and the Leaf could move in and close them down permanently.

The route involved navigating through the miles of underground catacombs with only a few paths leading to a secure exit. Because of the danger the caves possessed, only a brave few who entered their depths and returned know the safe routes. Unfortunately, none of these people are known by the Leaf Village. The informant knew the layout of the first two hundred meters in as he used to play there as a child. So, using his directions, Kazuki was able to locate a suitable location for hiding. If the information was correct, then a caravan should be coming through this area and meet up with another contact at the cave entrance. If all goes well, he should be able to take out the caravan and capture the contact in one fell swoop.

The minutes ticked by to the echo of the water and there was no sign of the caravan. Twenty minutes after the scheduled time, the sounds of footsteps and old wooden wheels could be heard echoing through the cavern. A glow from an oil lamp began to illuminate the darkness and the forms of three men and a large wagon began creeping along the cave floor.

Silently, Kazuki made his move. Unravelling his robe from around his sword he glides it along the ceiling, creating noose-like appendages that began to lower to the men's throats when a fourth presence alerts him to call off his attack. Leaping from his hiding place as several senbon are lodged into the rockface. Upon landing on the floor he looks over to a Hidden Rain ninja glaring at him through his shadowed face. The cart quickly evactuating the area.

"Looks like your ambush failed you pathetic Leaf". He laughs as his voice bounds off the walls creating an infinite echo that engulfed Kazuki. "What's with the silence?" He taunts as the light from the cart fades. "Stunned as to why your plan failed?" He takes a few steps forward as the cavern fades to absolute darkness. "Well..." The voice echoes before a swift breeze passes Kazuki and it returns in his ear as nothing more than a whisper "We just cut the legs off the noisy cricket". With that, the splash of a puddle and swift sound of thin objects cutting the stale air and impailing a soft object are heard.


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PostSubject: Re: Kazuki Shirubaken [Finished]   Tue Oct 14, 2008 7:08 pm

Name: Kawarimi no Jutsu (Body Replacement Technique)
Type: Supplementary
Rank: E
Cost: 5
Description:
This jutsu lets the user quickly switch places with another nearby object, such as a plant (normally a section of a log), an animal, or even another person within reach, leaving the opponent open to a counter-attack. Explosive tags can be attached to the replacement for an added surprise, which Sasuke has done twice in the anime. Fundamentally, all ninja know this technique.
The anime has a number of other objects being used for this jutsu, such as a boulder, mud, a scarecrow, and even a large rolled-up carpet. These items are usually nowhere in sight, suggesting that they are merely gags meant to lighten up the situation and not an actual part of the jutsu. Additionally, the normal practice of switching places with a section of log is done in several places that have no such thing anywhere nearby.


Name: Shunshin no Jutsu (Body Flicker Technique)
Type: Supplementary
Rank: D
Cost: 20
Description:
This jutsu is a high-speed movement technique, allowing a ninja to move short distances at an almost untraceable speed. To an observer, it appears as if the user has teleported. A puff of smoke is occasionally used to disguise the user's movements. It is accomplished by using chakra to temporarily boost the user's reflexes. The amount of chakra required depends on the overall distance between the user and their intended destination.

Name: Henge no Jutsu (Transformation Technique)
Rank: E
Cost:5
Type: Supplementary
Element: None
Description: This jutsu allows the user to assume the appearance of another person, animal, or object. This is one of the basic jutsu taught at the Konoha Ninja Academy. Fundamentally, all ninja know this jutsu

Name: Bunshin no Jutsu (Clone Technique)
Rank: E
Cost: 5
Type:Supplementary
Element: None
Description: This technique creates intangible clones of the user. The clones are simply illusions and will dissipate when they come into contact with something. The illusions can be seen through by the Byakugan and the Sharingan. A person with normal eyes can also distinguish the clones from the original, since the clones will not disrupt the area around themselves with their movement (won't kick up dust, crush grass, etc.).

Name:Kai - Release
Rank: D
Cost: 20
Type: Supplementary
Element: None
Description: Kai is a Ninjutsu technique which allows the ninja to avoid the effects of a Genjutsu illusion. After forming the needed hand seals, the Genjutsu technique will not affect the ninja. The ninja can also use the technique on another individual who was unable to avoid the attack. After forming the needed hand seals, the ninja touches the one affected to end the affect of the spell

Name: Afterimage Blade
Rank: B
Cost: 60 per clone
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Lightning
Description: By focusing lightning chakra into a weapon, after swinging it will create a clone of the weapon in the air. The clone is made of pure chakra and can be controlled by the user's thoughts. The blades can travel for a long distance, however the farther away they are, the faster they fade as it becomes more difficult to keep their form at a distance from the user. The farthest distance Kazuki has been able to maintain them is approx. 75 meters. However a single blade can reach 100 meters. The most Kazuki can create at one time is nine.

Name: Wind Charge
Rank: C
Cost: 45
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Wind
Description: By focusing wind chakra behind the body and releasing it in bursts, one can increase their speed when moving.

Name: Electro-tension
Rank: C
Cost: 50-100 (depending on how much is charged)
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Lightning
Description: By spreading lightning chakra throughout one's body, they can increase their reaction speed and increase their overall speed. The more lightning chakra focused, the faster they can move, however focusing too much will have the opposite effect. Causing paralysis or damage to muscle tissue.

Name: Muscle Programming
Rank: A
Cost: 120 per use
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Lightning
Description: By focusing lightning chakra into a limb or body one can enter a program. The program will work by moving the muscles on its own without having to send a message to the brain then the brain sending the message back. Through this method, one can greatly surpass the limitations of the body and move with lightning fast reations. An example of this ability would be programming it so that the moment the body felt a pierce from a sharp point, the right arm would immediately swat at it. Possibly deflecting an oncoming projectile.

Name: Wind Slash
Rank: C
Cost: 40
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Wind
Description: Fires a highspeed blade of wind from a weapon.

Name: Cloth Spear
Rank: C
Cost: 50
Type: Weaponry
Element: Lightning
Description: By charging a cloth with electric chakra, it can be thrown like a spear. With the lightning chakra, the radius of the tip can be expanded for a larger damage area.

Name: Omnipresent Robe
Rank: E
Cost: 10 regular, 15 elemental boosted (per post)
Type: Weaponry
Element: None
Description: By focusing chakra into his robe, the robe takes on powerful defensive, as well as offensive. qualities. The robe can be moved by the will of the user and can be turned into various forms such as spears or shields. When in use, the robe generally floats freely around the user. By focusing elemental chakra into the robe, it can take on increased properties. Wind would cause it to become razor sharp and able to cut through most substances. Lightning increases its overall speed.
Name: Thunderdome
Rank: B
Cost: 80
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Lightning
Description: After charging the robe with lightning chakra, it then surrounds the target in a dome shape. Once the target is inside, the dome is filled with continuously striking lightning bolts.

Name: Kage Bunshin no Jutsu - Shadow Clone Technique
Rank: B
Cost: 60 per clone
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: None
Description: This jutsu distributes the ninja's chakra evenly among the clones and creates a real copy with form and substance. The clone itself can also utilize any jutsu the original ninja knows. When the clone finally disperses, any new knowledge it has gained is passed back to the original ninja and any additional clones. This makes Kage Bunshin an excellent training method if the ninja has the chakra capacity and stamina to maintain the Kage Bunshins for an extended period of time. This allows the ninja to essentially reduce the time it takes to train and learn with each clone added.

Name: Afterimage Quick Strike
Rank: B
Cost: 40 per clone
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: None
Description: A moment before striking, Instant clones appear at different angles around the opponent, moving and attacking in a co-ordinated attack with the user. The clones dissapear immediately after use. Kazuki can summon a total of five clones in one attack.


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PostSubject: Re: Kazuki Shirubaken [Finished]   Tue Oct 14, 2008 7:18 pm

Before you finish, heres something you need to fix right away. Looks cannot be: Avatar, give at least two paragraphs on several things you wear, what you carry, different hair styles, etc. Thanks.

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PostSubject: Re: Kazuki Shirubaken [Finished]   Tue Oct 14, 2008 7:26 pm

Figured as much and planned to. Just RP sample is much larger and would take far more effort to think off lol.
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PostSubject: Re: Kazuki Shirubaken [Finished]   Thu Oct 16, 2008 5:50 pm

All right, ready for approval.
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PostSubject: Re: Kazuki Shirubaken [Finished]   Thu Oct 16, 2008 9:33 pm

Fun Fun!
OK first Change your history into Arcs,
And then you shall be good!
Great job, APPROVED! *After the arcs.*

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PostSubject: Re: Kazuki Shirubaken [Finished]   Fri Oct 17, 2008 7:17 am

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PostSubject: Re: Kazuki Shirubaken [Finished]   Fri Oct 17, 2008 11:49 am

Good good as Far As I see it approved!
And remember to do your best as a village jounin as we currently need alot of them!
But also if you ever decide to go missing, There is always room for you in the Tentsurugi.
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If you wanted to whenever your character needs a good killing spree.
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PostSubject: Re: Kazuki Shirubaken [Finished]   Fri Oct 17, 2008 7:22 pm

Your special charataristic is similar to both the Uchiha and the Hyuuga.

Your taking the prediction and then taking the chakra sensory, i'd say thats a no. Not to mention a Kilometer is quite a bit. You might try having one or the other, without the extents of the clan.
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PostSubject: Re: Kazuki Shirubaken [Finished]   Fri Oct 17, 2008 8:52 pm

Ok, changed the ability around a bit.
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PostSubject: Re: Kazuki Shirubaken [Finished]   Fri Oct 17, 2008 9:09 pm

Ok, I have a better idea.
There is a jutsu in my profile in the A ranks. It is like Dome barrier or something. It is a cannon jutsu and does the same thing as your special ability. How about your special ability be improved ability with sensing/tracking jutsus like it.
Theres realy no way to fairly have that, if it can tell you the strength and exact area of someone, it can also allow you to block nearly every attack, so, im going to go with a no on it, sorry.
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PostSubject: Re: Kazuki Shirubaken [Finished]   Fri Oct 17, 2008 10:28 pm

The sensing strength part, that only means he can tell how dangerous an enemy is by the aura they give off. Thus if they are too strong, he knows to retreat or not. And knowing an enemy's location is limited because it can only work for one target and takes a massive amount of concentration. Useless in battle, meant for persuing a single target. And like i said, he cannot sense jutsu or weaponry, he only knows when the opponent has made an attack.
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PostSubject: Re: Kazuki Shirubaken [Finished]   Sat Oct 18, 2008 1:22 am

Still predicting an offensive move. That gives you the initiative to put up a defence..
Here, I will conscider this. Your character can sense the FIRST attack made on HIM, giving him the opportunity to defend, however, does not know where, what, or how the attack will hit. The following attacks you cannot predict. You can sense an opponet's power, however, not down to rank and chakra level. You may be off by a rank sometimes, other times not at all. This is effective for a range of 300 feet radius around you at most, limited to 45 feet below you as you are passing through solid objects.
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PostSubject: Re: Kazuki Shirubaken [Finished]   Sat Oct 18, 2008 6:02 am

IMO It should also cost chakra.
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PostSubject: Re: Kazuki Shirubaken [Finished]   Sat Oct 18, 2008 4:59 pm

One time only? Come on, seriously that's a little much. Like I said, I removed the predition of movements. He can't predict when an attack will occur, only that it HAS occurred. He only senses that danger is near and how dangerous something is. Say, if a ninja were stalking him, he would get this uneasy feeling. If he were to attack, the feeling would instantly spike, warning him of the danger present. And he can only judge their strength in three levels. Weak- easily beatable. Medium- They are above or below his level, but cannot be sure. Strong- Beyond his current strength.
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PostSubject: Re: Kazuki Shirubaken [Finished]   Sat Oct 18, 2008 5:04 pm

The first attack on him, by one ninja.
If there are more than one, then you sense one attack, and the other if it hapens. Other then that, you can sense the strength.
By the way, the gut feeling your talking about is often the case in any battle-hardened human being.
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PostSubject: Re: Kazuki Shirubaken [Finished]   Sat Oct 18, 2008 5:16 pm

What's the first move in most ninja conflicts. A thrown kunai or something alike. Real helpful ability when EVERYONE always avoids something like that. Something like that is literally pointless. Its gotten to the point where I shouldn't have the ability because it would do ABSOLUTELY NOTHING TO HELP AT ALL!. Most genin here have a better ability than this. Seriously, I JUST KNOW WHEN I'M BEING ATTACKED IS THAT TOO MUCH TO ASK!?
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PostSubject: Re: Kazuki Shirubaken [Finished]   Sat Oct 18, 2008 5:19 pm

Yea, you know when your being attacked.
Isn't that what I said?
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PostSubject: Re: Kazuki Shirubaken [Finished]   Sat Oct 18, 2008 5:26 pm

That's the ability really, he senses danger on a higher scale than normal ninja. You have it so that it works once per enemy than shuts down or something.
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PostSubject: Re: Kazuki Shirubaken [Finished]   Sat Oct 18, 2008 5:29 pm

Hmm.
It makes no sense that he senses danger twice for one single enemy.
If he sense danger for an enemy, then he continues to sense danger, what would he do, he wont be having a teaparty after being attacked..
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PostSubject: Re: Kazuki Shirubaken [Finished]   Sat Oct 18, 2008 5:43 pm

Well you won't let me know from which direction the attack is coming from...

At this point, its no longer an ability is it? Because "any battle-hardened human being" can also instantly tell when they are outmatched or not right? Unless I can tell the approximate direction the attack is coming from, I'm just your average jonin. No special abilities..
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PostSubject: Re: Kazuki Shirubaken [Finished]   Sat Oct 18, 2008 5:56 pm

Unfortunately, I don't see how you would tell where an attack is coming from. And no, a battle-hardened human being cannot neccesarily tell when they are outmatched.
As for being average, I realy don't care. Not everyone has a special ability, not everyone will have a special ability. If you want something that someone who is experienced has, then I guess that is it then isn't it?
Unless your character has been in war, intense missions, etc, for years at a time, then you don't have the abilities of a battle-hardened person, and you can conscider it a special characteristic anyways..
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