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PostSubject: Saruno Kazura [Wedding Update]   Fri Nov 28, 2008 7:37 pm

Basic Character Information:
Name: Kazura; Saruno
Age: 21
Gender: Male
Clan: Kazura -Kaosu's 1st branch-

Looks:

Saruno stands about 7 feet, 4 inches tall, with a large cloak surrounding his upper torso and his lower part of the leg area. Yet this is his normal clothing. In other cases, the cloak can be a nice shade of black or white, maybe a hint of blue in the center of the large hat he wears on his head out on the places he visits. With his feet of the uniform, he wears a pair of dense-wood sandals, keeping things, like rocks, grass and sand from his feet, he uses a small bit of a white sock on the sides of the wood-area, the straps hooking upwards around the large toe and the medium-area toe. These straps are mostly a blackish or a red color, depending on his mood. On another occasion, he can wear a short cloak, a nice shade of red or crimson, the hat he wears a streak of white and red. This is when he feels in the mood for some free time or some 'Other' ways of his entertainment. He also wears a small set of sealed bandages on his right optical, in which has a powerful 'Bloodline' sealing tag on the front of the optical, in which keeps back all effects of it. Because Saruno is of the Kazura clan, and possesses the ability to shape the hair color, wing colors, etc. with the temporal change of his emotions, his hair is mostly a nice shade of black when he is in his 'casual' sort of way. And last but not least, the wings on his back, when in a dark sort of way, are a nice shade of black, which absorb a lot of heat, in an obvious sort of way. The feathers on each of the wings are purely real, grown from birth and can have the ability to fly. When Saruno had the wings to a point where the cloak he was wearing didn't hold the wings all so snugly, he fitting the back of his cloak to two large zippers, where he can slip the wings from under his cloak to out upon his back, out of the snugness of the cloak.
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When in such a state in a casual kind of an 'Advanced' battle state, he has the ability to . His eyes are just a plain crimson, or maybe a few streaks of white and black in between. He wears a full-length jacket that wraps around his torso all so snugly. This jacket contains a vast amount of chain, crossing over his shoulders and the sides of his stomach. With these chains at hand, he can swirl them off the jacket and use them for offensive of defensive purposes. There are also two bucklers that hand out in a 'U' like fashion, acting like small balancing area. In other parts of his body, he wears a small eye-patch on his right optical, keeping it from anyone sight. This eye patch is a nice black hue and covers his entire optic to the eyebrow and a small bit below. A string is attached to both sides to keep the patch stable. Due to a condition, he cannot remove the eye patch unless certain doom is upon him. Besides that, Saruno also wears a small gauntlet, on his left and right wrists, holding each a mechanism inside of them. These mechanisms are made purely of a steel-like substance, and can be utilized for the Raiton Elemental Release. The mechanisms can be hidden in the socket of it, and be retracted to over 2 feet in length. These metal spikes can also be used in offense and in defensive purposes.

Shy: When Saruno is in a shy state of mind, he tends to wear a set of white or brownish clothing, best suited for this kind of emotion. This clothing is best made as an arched-open shirt or jacket, and a set of brown/white pants, which have at least 2 or three side pockets on the end of the leg areas, below the main pockets. His hair is mainly shifted to a brown-type of shade, a bit within a shiny-sort of way. And a scary part of this state of Saruno's being, a set of pure 'Neko' ears lift up on his head, obviously making it a shy state. In this state, and saruno's type of emotion, Neko's are prematurely extremely shy, thus, being in this state of mind. He continues to wear the bandage over his right optical, nothing in between or anything else.

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Berserk/Battle: With Saruno's 'Berserk' or simple battle style, it's a simple set of emotions. Obviously, within his Berserk state, he tends to be incredibly angered and the power of his Yuui blade kicks in. The Armor of Yuui, when the power sets contains the body in a wave of energy and forms various amounts of shapes around the Shoulders, elbows, knees, legs, feet, hands, wrists, and torso area. His head is left uncovered to the fact the blade cannot utilize the power to move armor that far up in the body, besides for a small trinket of metal going from the bandaged-eye area and moving backwards around the head until it connects with the other side of the trinket. This armor is mainly a black-sort of color and has the design of a Crow or a black bird, mainly just a first option of a Phoenix. On some other types of battle-course, he can utilizing massive abilities, like summon up power beyond his mortal understanding, due to the blade taking over his very mind.

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Normal/Everyday Life: Within Saruno's everyday life, which is his usual, emotionless state. He mainly has just his regular clothing, a typical white and crimson shaded jacket and bandages around his right eye.(Not in tone with pic.) The jacket contains of a small scroll in the center pocket in the left flank of the jacket, holding his Tou no Ranmyaku quite steadily. Just in case he needs to use it. Also, he keeps a steady amount of kunai and Shurican in his right sleeve, in case he needs to use it out of bounds. And that is the appearance of this type of emotional setting.


Personality: Saruno is the kind of person who has a bit of 'Mixed' emotions; he can shift from his Shy state to his emotionless state in just a speck of time, no doubt. He can immediately shift his berserk state into his shy state, but takes a bit of time with that, it's his kind of being born that way, his hair, his wings, everything on his just says his mood, his emotions, almost everything about him. He is a mysterious kind of person, in almost every way possible. His kind of work is different in ways that not even his sister or his brother knows about. Saruno tends to think on his own behalf, and mostly for the people he loves the most, he can listen to the problems of each of the people, tend to them in a manner that all will enjoy, and much more to his taste. Even when a crisis may pop up in the great village he is protecting, he is the first one to know, and the first one to strike, even when it's a minor threat, he will take care of it with much needed ease and care for that type of emergency. A small bit of information he will not enjoy to hear, will be handled in a way, most people won't like, in the least of their worries. If an enemy will not talk during an interrogation, he is still calm, and just unleashes something that might help the situation, and may help in some other way. If someone gets hurt and gets sent to the Hospital, he will know about it and send something or someone to help the hospital work it out a bit faster. In his shy kind of way, he will do things that will not allow mostly anyone to see him, all ways around.

Basic Clan Information
Kekkei Gekkei: Ayatsuriryoku.
Chakra Cost: 1-200
Description: Shown in Clan Outline.
Special Effect: Manipulation of chakra, Great Chakra control.
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Skill and Rank Information
Village: Ex-Shichiyougakure no Sato
Rank: S classed missing ninja.

Special Characteristics: 1. Third state KG. 2. Angelic Wings. 3. Scar on Arm/right eye.
Special Effects:

1. Ability to Conjure only 'Kurai Shitsunen' without the specialty of Genjutsu. This can only conjure that technique only. No other Genjutsu can be learned.

2. Ability to fly w/ use of chakra.

3. Scar on arm is a battle scar. Scar on right eye is part of KG effect.

Elements: Raiton[Lightning Release], Suiton[Water Release], Fuuton[Wind Release]
Skills Specialties:

Primary: Ninjutsu
Secondary: Genjutsu

History and RP Sample

Rp Sample: -Recent Post-

Saruno was walking through the land of the moon's forests for a time, after not being there for a long time. He wanted to see if he could remember a bit of his past. And he just might.

A swift breeze entered through the dark woods of the forest, the sun shining brightly overhead. Small streams of light flowed through open areas in the tops of trees, giving small amounts of light to the forest. Small footsteps came from Saruno's sandals, small bits of dirt flicking in the air in front of him. He was simply bored, and trying to see if he could remember anything about his past. He knew he had something to do with the forest, but the memory was wiped out long ago. He wondered why, but it wasn't important right now. As he approached a tree on the side of the trail, a small bird chirped it's voice in the air, just before flying to a bug and swallowing it whole. It was just nature he guessed, just continuing to walk.

As he approached a small clearing, Saruno immediately remembered the area. Petrified trees, dust, bones, bloodstains on the crushed trunks of trees showed in the flattened land of the clearing. His eyes widely opened, letting memories just fly past them, remembering all too well.

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Hundreds of soldiers, shinobi, Kunochi, warriors and massive weaponry were marching towards one person, Saruno himself. Saruno was simply standing at the end of the forests' clearing. He held his blade, Yuui, at hand, his right palm simply moving with the crimson leather handle. The steel was hidden under it to keep it's shade. As the army moved closer to Saruno, weapons raised, his eyes were lit up like the demon's, He was in the berserk state, the Yuui Armor covering his entire body. Black crow etchings in his Wrist, arm, leg, shin, foot, and wing armor, glowing with a flow of black and white chakra. This wasn't to Saruno's will, the blade had his emotions, his body, his very strength of living. This was the true power of a Tou no Ranmyaku, a Sword of chaos, especially, the second most powerful, Yuui.

Saruno's marked arm swirled into the air, slashing a massive burst of black/white mixed chakra, in a massive wave of power. As the sword slashed it's way towards the army, the wave of power smashed through trees in it's path, pushing back the army with a massive, and more intense surge of strength. The wave of power ripped through the bodies of the shinobi, tearing through their hearts, their skin, everything. The Kunochi were torn to shreds, bones flying to the ground, burning their very reminisce. Warrior's shields and blades were shattered in just a motion of the black/white mixed chakra, tearing through their heads, and slashing their bones to dust, burning them to nothing. A single stroke of a sword, a Tou no Ranmyaku, killed an entire army of warriors. Fires races across the broken set of warriors, beginning to race towards the center of the stroke, racing around in a complete circle. Saruno, without any emotion whatsoever let his right palm flow towards the ring, saying in a dark kind of voice, "Dark Implosion...." the words he let out of his pale, crimson lips. A massive explosion of burning, explosive energies slashed through every corner of the forest, of that area, burning through trees, petrifying them, charring the bones and blood.

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Falling to his knees in despair, Saruno set his palms on his face, his fingers through his hair. He closed his eyes in pain of the memory, tears streaming down his cheeks. He remembered something he didn't want to remember, something horrible. 'Why...why did i do this...' he thought to himself, the grass under his knees swaying over in a cool, and gentle breeze. Yuui, on his back simply glowed with a yellow-like chakra. It seemed to remember it's triumph, with Saruno's body of course. He didn't want to get rid of the blade, since it's protection helps him on many journeys, and good protection against others. It was a terrible loss, to the people of the country, and to his own free will.


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Weapons:


Basic Weaponry:
x40 Shurican
x40 Kunai
x10 Reels of Copper wire.
x20 Shards of Narusu Crystal(In a special pouch).
x80 Explosive Tags.
x2 Summoning scrolls.

Advanced Weaponry:
Name: Yuui -Purple Flame-

Description
    -Looks: Yuui is about nine feet in length and is carried in a sheath that allows the effect of it's chakra draining still. Within the sheath's internal structure is small crystals of Narusu, making the unsheathing of the blade glow a small red light. The blade's color is mostly a silver to a black, depending on the state it is in. Within the armor state, the hilt, and the blade of the sword shift to a Crimson/Black mix, affecting Saruno by shifting onto his body and creating an armor that allows him to deflect most elemental ninjutsu. But when this state is active, it takes an enormous amount of chakra to actually pull off. When the state is done, all the parts of armor is instantly decreased back to the blade and returns to it's normal color/shade.

    Within it's technique state, it begins to shift to an abnormal color, a shade of crimson, the hilt of a blackish color. It has an opposite effect of the armor state. It actually begins to absorb the elemental chakra from a technique, but takes the same amount of chakra from Saruno himself. It can utilize this to deflect and throw back the chakra with almost twice the power.

    -Capabilities: Charged with enough chakra, the blade can fire bolts of concentrated chakra towards an object or person. Within the bolts, are Katon Elemental fires, which can burn through some high-density steel, but not all. Within it's 'Technique' and 'Armor' states, it can affect Saruno within moment's of it's direct contact. In a state of pure chakra, it begins to emit a purple-like flame from it's blade. All the rest shown above.


Story: Being centered within the depths of the cavern of sorrow, it was mended with the stone and material known as 'Materite', known for it's almost unbreakable nature. It is said that many have tried to break the accursed blade with many of the strongest man-made weapons in the world. But all have failed. Only a small damage has been dealt to the blade on it's great strain. This was thousands upon thousands of years ago. It was sealed away in the darkness of the cavern of sorrow for fear of it's great power. Only one who has mastered the art of the sword, and has power beyond any normal shinobi can wield the blade and be bestowed it's power of the darkness and Oblivion intent power.

About a millennium later, the Kazura clan began to find out the Tou no Ranmyaku, the blades of chaos and started to use them to their power in combat. Within the darkness of the blade's power, Yuui, was named the Second most powerful sword in the nine blade arsenal. This particular sword is named for it's almost limitless power, but also for it's chakra draining effect which drains the chakra of the wielder until they have little to none left in their system.
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Ultima-ninjutsu.



Name: Ninja Art Release • Seal of Stage -Ninpouton • Natsuin Dankai-
Rank: C-S
Description:
There are 5 Stages in the Ninja Art Release • Seal of Stage Ninjutsu:

-First Stage: Seal of Chaos - Natsuin Ranmyaku -
Rank: C
Chakra Cost: 80 (Activation) [10CC per sphere]
Description: The seal of Chaos is set on the ground below the user, glowing with the color of the chakra used to place it down, creating a larger long-range radius for attacks based on the user's performance. The user can channel chakra through the area of the seal and throw small sphere-like chakra blasts through the air.


-Second Stage: Seal of Destruction - Natsuin Toukai -
Rank: B
Chakra cost: 213 (Activation) [30CC per sphere]
Description: After setting the seal of Chaos down, the Seal will enlarge to a farther diameter, further increasing power over 2 fold. The ground around the seal will begin to shatter upwards and the user can use them to the advantage of throwing them at the opponent. If the opponent is within the boundaries of the Seal, the user can impact several hits against them when they form a large amount of chakra into their palms.


-Third Stage: Seal of Havoc - Natsuin Sangai -
Rank: B
Chakra Cost: 400 (Activation) [40CC per sphere]
Description: After setting the Seal of Destruction down, the seal will further enlarge to a diameter of 30 meters, increasing power to over 8 fold, causing major damage to the muscular system and chakra network after the use. Utilizing the abilities of the First stage, the user can cast more powerful channels of chakra blasts, more fierce than the last.


-Fourth Stage: Seal of Annihilation - Natsuin Kaimetsu -
Rank: A
Chakra cost: 450 (Activation) [50CC per sphere]
Description: After setting the seal of Havoc, the user will have 4 more seals of Annihilation around them, setting on the four edges of the seal, further increasing power to over 20 fold over, causing major harm to the muscular system and chakra network to over half of what the user used in the activation of the technique. Utilizing massive power, the user can perform a larger amount of power to the opponent, the aim of the user increased to a point where they can pinpoint the target and utilize power beyond their normal standards. The spheres of chakra blasts will further increase in power as the aim increases as well.


-Fifth Stage: Seal of Oblivion - Natsuin Shitsunen -
Rank: S
Chakra Cost: 550 (Activation) [80CC Per sphere]
Description: After utilizing the Seal of Annihilation, the diameter of the seal will increase to over 500 meters, increasing power and aim 90 fold. This will cause major damage on the muscular system, actions of the user, nervous system breakdown, chakra network destruction, etc., Causing more harm to the user than the other four seals. The power of the user, within it's inhuman state can impact heavier blows to the opponent with ease if the target is within range of the seal, seven more seals will show upon the user, utilizing the chakra of that user and place it to a setting where the strength and power is increased to a point where they can shift strength to smash a boulder into oblivion with ease. The chakra blast spheres will increase in a size that a single sphere can cause a crater in the ground with absolute no problem, but takes a larger amount of chakra to utilize. Aftermath problems include the breakdown of the nervous and muscular system, along with the destruction of the chakra network, thus, killing the user in it's place. There would be no possible escape of death once this technique has been conjured, absolute death is certain.



Additional Information: When utilizing the chakra sphere function, you cannot just 'hit' an opponent and throw a sphere at him/her. There is a distinct time limitation in which the user can hit and throw a sphere at a time. When using the Hand-to-hand Combat style of the Seals, you cannot use the Function of the spheres unless shifted to a Ninja art stage of the seals, thus separating the amount of chakra usage ad the amount of power bestowed upon the user.
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[Non Elemental Ninjutsu • Regular Techniques]

Name: Kawarami No Jutsu -Replacement Technique-
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: E
Chakra Cost: 5-10
Element: N/A
Description: This jutsu lets the user quickly switch places with another nearby object, such as a plant (normally a section of a log), an animal, or even another person within reach, leaving the opponent open to a counter-attack. Explosive tags can be attached to the replacement for an added surprise. Fundamentally, all ninja know this technique.

Name: Bunshin no Jutsu - Clone Technique -
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: E
Chakra Cost: 5-10
Element: N/A
Description: This technique creates intangible clones of the user. The clones are simply illusions and will dissipate when they come into contact with something. The illusions can be seen through by the Byakugan and the Sharingan. A person with normal eyes can also distinguish the clones from the original, since the clones will not disrupt the area around themselves with their movement (won't kick up dust, crush grass, etc.).

Name: Henge no Jutsu - Transformation Technique -
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: E
Chakra Cost: 5-10
Element: N/A
Description: This jutsu allows the user to assume the appearance of another person, animal, or object. Fundamentally, all ninja know this jutsu. The transformation jutsu is considered to be among the more difficult E-ranked techniques, since it requires constant emission of chakra while mentally maintaining the form. On top of that, the user would be, most likely, interacting with the environment. This puts much mental
strain on the inexperienced ninja.

Name: Nawanuke No Jutsu - Rope Release Technique -
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: E
Chakra Cost: 5-10
Element: N/A
Description: A basic jutsu that allows a ninja to free themselves if they have been tied up.
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[Raiton Ninjutsu • Lightning Release Ninja Techniques]

Name: Lightning Release • Lightning Burst -Raiton • Raikou Ba-suto
Rank: B
Element: Raiton[Lightning Release]
Chakra Cost: 120
Description: Lightning Release • Lightning burst is an advanced ninjutsu Technique. Utilizing massive amounts of chakra within the chakra network, with the proper chakra control, the user can burst out a surge of lightning elemental chakra. This expelled chakra can push away most weapons and attacks in a blast from the body, and can block most Metal-type weaponry, Ranged attacks, and Close range attacks equal or lesser than the Rank of this technique. This technique takes a massive amount of chakra to utilize, and is not intended for extreme use. Techniques with Fast-paced fighting styles, and higher speed-like techniques can get past this technique. Also with the protection of the lightning it can block off most metal-like weaponry, anything else besides metal is a big weakness against it, which it means, anything heavier than a 150lbs. blade can get past the extreme amounts of energy.

Name: Lightning Release • Shadow Lightning -Raiton • Kage Raikou-
Rank: A
Element: Raiton[Lightning Release]
Chakra Cost: 120-200
Description: Raiton • Kage Raikou is utilized by Saruno Kazura. With the massive chakra Saruno possesses, he can use this jutsu without flaw. Moving a large portion of chakra within his left or right index and middle finger, he can form it into a condensed blast of chakra, in the form of lightning. Utilizing the lightning element, it can be almost matched with Ranmyaku Shitsunen. The Kage Raikou takes a large amount of Saruno's chakra, making it only necessary to use in a battle.

Name: Chaos Oblivion! -Ranmyaku Shitsunen-
Rank: A
Element: Raiton[Lightning Element]
Chakra Cost: 120-200
Description: Ranmyaku Shitsunen is utilized by Saruno Kazura. Forming the needed hand seals, Saruno can use his chakra control along with this jutsu. Once active, tens, to hundreds of bolts of lightning would course through the ground or sky above him within moments, and the movements of the lightning can be controlled at his will. The lightning can still be dodged, but only with high speed equal to his own. Since this is such a high-leveled technique, it takes a large amount of chakra for each bolt of lightning to be conjured.

Name: Shadow Nova (Kage Shisei)
Rank: A
RP post: 2 (1 Charge)
Range: Short (5 ~ 10m) Medium (10 ~ 15m)
Element: ~
Chakra Cost: 200
Description: Kage Shisei is an Advanced form of the Raikou Ba-suto technique. Forming the needed hand seals, the user will begin to channel great waves of lightning elemental chakra through their chakra network, and condensing it around their body, but keeping a precise amount per part of the body. If the technique does not keep a balance of chakra throughout the body, it will cancel, along with the chakra used in it. The body will release a large blast of Lightning elemental chakra throughout the area in a massive explosion around 10-15m in diameter, using a large amount of chakra with the blast, but will burn or destroy everything in it's path.

Name: Shadow Pulse! -Aneiparusu!-
Rank: C-A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Raiton[Lightning Release]
Chakra Cost: 50 - 200
Description: Utilizing the ability to condense chakra into many patterns and formats, Saruno can channel a small amount of Raiton chakra into his left or right palm and release it in massive streams of chain-like patterns. This pattern can knock back other types of techniques, equal or lesser to the rank of this technique. But if charged with higher amounts of chakra, the rank can double and block higher amounts of attacks with just a simple Pulse. Since this is condensed chakra, it will look like black waves of energies, instead of the regular blue and yellow coloring.

Name: Shadow Wave! -Aneinami!-
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Raiton[Lightning Release]
Chakra Cost: 120
Description: Utilizing the ability to condense chakra into various patterns and shapes, he can condense a small sphere into the palm of his left or right hand and utilize it to it's fullest potential. He can smash his other hand, or smash it against an object or person and send a massive surge of dark lightning towards that area. Since it is a lightning elemental release technique, it takes a large amount of chakra to use.
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Suiton: Water Release

Name: Daibakufu no Jutsu - Grand Waterfall Technique
Rank: A
Chakra Cost: 120
Description: Suiton • Daibakufu no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. After doing the needed hand seals a column of water will circle the ninja and then a large force of water will erupt to hit the attacker. Due to the force of the water the target will be fully enveloped by the water and at its mercy as is pulls them away.

Name: Suirou no Jutsu - Water Prison Technique
Rank: C
Chakra Cost: 25
Description: Suirou no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique that utilizes water to imprison an opponent. The ninja forms the necessary hand seals which causes the water to form around the target into a spherical prison which only allows for limited movement. The ninja must keep their body touching the water prison to maintain its existence. If the contact is broken, the water falls away and their target is released. When combined with a bunshin technique, the ninja can imprison their target but still allow for a clone to attack others nearby.

Name: Takitsubo no Jutsu - Waterfall Basin Technique
Rank: B
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m)
Chakra Cost: 100
Description: Suiton • Takitsubo no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. The ninja will do the necessary hand seals to create a large volume of water.


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[Non Elemental Techniques]

Name: Kage Bunshin no Jutsu - Shadow Clone Technique
Rank: B
Element: N/A
Chakra Cost: ~
Description: Kage Bunshin is a Jounin level Ninjutsu technique. The normal Bunshin technique creates a copy of the ninja that lacks any substance. The Kage Bunshin distributes the ninja's chakra evenly among the clones and creates a real copy with form and substance. The clone itself can also utilize any jutsu the original ninja knows. When the clone finally disperses, any new knowledge it has gained is passed back to the original ninja and any additional clones. This makes Kage Bunshin an excellent training method if the ninja has the chakra capacity and stamina to maintain the Kage Bunshins for an extended period of time. This allows the ninja to essentially reduce the time it takes to train and learn with each clone added. This is especially true when used with Tajuu Kage Bunshin.

Clan Techniques.

[Kekkei Genkai Ninjutsu + Genjutsu • Bloodline Trait Ninja Techniques + Illusionist Arts]

[Genjutsu • Illusionist Arts]

Name: Dark Oblivion - Shitsunen Kurai
Rank: S
Range: Short (0 ~ 5m)
Jutsu Type: Genjutsu/Doujutsu
Elemental Affinity: N/A
Clan: Kazura -Kaosu-

Description: With the greatness of the Kazura Clan's Chakra manipulation, this can only be used in the third state, with the right or left optical of the member. With intense control of chakra, the user can spark this genjutsu to automatic envision, meaning that the user can use it by looking into the others optics. The Genjutsu is supposedly to create a darkness, all around the user and the target, the user fading away, memories from the target's mind is extracted, the nightmares and terrible memories from long past is extracted, making them see it more realistically. The memories will tap into the nervous system of the target, making them see, feel, hear, and smell real, no matter what it is. The Genjutsu will degrade the will of the target by each memory or nightmare extracted from the target's mind, making almost every last piece of will vanish as they see what they fear and quiver in pain and suffering. With increased usage of the Doujutsu, the user's optical will become more and more degraded along with a higher chance of Blindness after each usage.
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[Ninjutsu • Ninja Techniques]

Novice-Level

Name: Kakuhan no Chakra -Chakra Whip-
Rank: C-A
Range: Short (0 ~ 5m) Medium (10 ~ 15m)
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu
Elemental Affinity: N/A
Clan: Kazura -Kaosu-

Description: With the efficiency of the Kazura clan's Chakra manipulation, a member can create a short-stemmed or long-stemmed whip with a little flaw in the technique. A constant flow of chakra in the brim of the whip can keep it's painful strikes in a constant motion. A simple crack of the whip, charged with enough chakra can snap through skin in a second, and only a small density-kind of steel. Higher amounts of chakra and great amounts of training can easily increase the strength of the whip, being able to do as a member pleases.

Name: Tou Chakra -Chakra Blade-
Rank: B
Range: Short (0 ~ 5m)
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu
Elemental Affinity:
Clan: Kazura -Kaosu-

Description: On the efficiency of the Kazura Clan's Chakra manipulation, a member can create a blade of pure chakra. The blade can be as hard as steel, and as sharp as a dagger. The chakra of the member will begin to flow out from the desired point of the body, (arms, palms, etc), and begin to take shape into a blade. The amount of chakra used, depends on the size of the blade, and can be cast away by a higher-level technique.

Intermediate-level

Name: Chakra Blade Slash - Chakra Tou Tateru
Rank: B
Range: Short (0 ~ 5m) Medium (10 ~ 15m)
Jutsu Type: Kenjutsu/Ninjutsu
Elemental Affinity: N/A
Clan: Kazura -Kaosu-

Description: With the efficiency of the Kazura Clan's Chakra Manipulation, a member can use this along with the Chakra Blade Technique. Within the Blade, a member can slash a large amount of chakra with the blade, causing a slash made of pure chakra, and can be cut through a small density steel, but travels in a straight line, making it easy to dodge. The length of the Slash depends on the amount of chakra within the body.

Name: Ultima Chakra Sword Slash - Kyuukyoku Tou Tateru 尾音節中心輪剣斜線〔カット〕
Rank: A
Range: Far (15m+)
Jutsu Type: Kenjutsu
Elemental Affinity: N/A
Clan: Kazura -Kaosu-

Description: With the efficiency of the Kazura Clan's Chakra manipulation, a member can use this along with the Chakra Sword Technique. With the sword, the member can use a large amount of their chakra to create a slash of chakra more powerful than the normal chakra slash technique, being able to use it in a circular formation of the slash, not along the ground, but also in the air, if used in a circular slash. With the intense amounts of chakra being given off, the user may feel a bit worn out with the slash if used alot of chakra beforehand.

Master-Leveled

Name:Angelic String Smash - Ultimate Pull
Rank: A
Range: Short (0 ~ 5m)
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu
Elemental Affinity: N/A
Clan: Kazura -Kaosu-

Description: With the abilities of the Kazura Clan's Chakra manipulation, they can conjure this technique with little flaw. Channeling a large amount of chakra within the user's left or right fist, or a desired area, the strength of the muscular system will increase. If smashing into an opponent, the user can send the chakra into the impacted area of the opponent, creating a chakra string in the process. When pulled, the strength of the user with the chakra still channeled, can easily snap a bone, muscle tissue, etc in a slight movement of a wrist.

Name:Angel Strike - Ultimate Pound
Rank: B
Range: Short (0 ~ 5m)
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu
Elemental Affinity: N/A
Clan: Kazura -Kaosu-

Description: With the abilities of the Kazura Clan's Chakra manipulation, they can channel chakra into a desired part of the limbs and induce a large amount of more striking damage than a normal hit to the desired area. If holding the channeled chakra too long or too short, it will disappear if not in a constant motion of chakra.
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History Of Saruno Kazura

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Childhood Arc
Saruno was born at a ninja hospital in the Shichiyougakure area, with unusual traits in mind, even the medical ninja had problems with that kind of infant. He had markings of a soon-to-grow wings on his back, a seemingly inhuman amount of chakra, even though he was just born. It was amazing that a member of the Kazura clan had such traits when they were born, several of the members of the clan had respected Saruno for many years of his life. At the time he was 2 years old, he was already walking and talking, wandering about the streets of his clan's housing ring, only to be picked up by his mother, who took him back to their house. He lived with alot of his family, including his 3 brothers, 4 sisters, his father and mother, and two of his cousins, they lived in a rarely large house in the center of the clan housing ring, which was the home of the great Leader of the clan, known as Toshiro Kazura, who had mastered hundreds of jutsu in his time as leader of the clan. His wife was known as Sasina Kazura, named after the great hero of the clan hundreds upon thousands of years before their generation, she had a shy kind of personality around her family and friends, but not so much when she was exposed to a certain kind of crystal, which affected Saruno as well, due to his traits. The crystal was known as 'Narusu', a crystal found deep in the ground under a certain mountain in the Crescent moon country. It affected Sasina and Saruno by turning their emotions to rage and fierce power, it scared most of the members of the clan because of their power, banishing the crystal from the use of the clan, for fear of spread of the trait. At the time of 5, he had a half-set of wings, they had only grown so much as at the point where the feathers are beginning to grow, but not being able to fly yet. He was just starting to learn how to use his chakra as a source of his power, moving it around to move rocks, pebbles, and leaves around the streets of his clan housing area, moving them to make patterns in the dirt like a drawing, which impressed his father, Toshiro, on his use of his chakra. His brother, Kuroyami Kazura, showed him to use a simple technique to use with his chakra, a small sphere, about the size of a marble. He showed him how to play with the marble in games and such, telling him it was a great thing to learn farther in his life. He practiced it alot in his spare time, out of sleeping and eating, training his power with the fun he has, he used his marble trick to fool around with cats and dogs, laughing with joy as he did that.

Academy
About the age of 7, he had began his days at the academy. It was rough for Saruno in the days of the academy due to his, 'Condition'. His hair changed color with each mood he has, but only keeps the color by being one emotion, it changed from Light colors to Dark colors, and everything in between. This started to happen when he was first exposed to the 'Narusu' mineral when he was 5 years old. During the academy days, he began to train his chakra control to try and master a couple of the jutsu, like Bunshin no jutsu, and E rank jutsu like that. His older brother, who was a Chuunin at the time, taught him to use a couple E rank jutsu to work with great chakra control, and use them to the advantage of his chakra. Days past, then weeks, his chakra levels rose, and so did his chakra control, fulfilling the way of his clan. He had learned the ways of his clan's Ayatsuriryoku techniques and began to train them to his advantage. His power was unrelenting to whatever he practiced on, but got tired out too easily, he was still a young boy. His sister, Kairi, his oldest sister was always helping him out with his medical problems, and tried to help him out when he was practicing too advanced moves for his type of level. Even though his chakra was outstanding, he used it mostly up when he was training, but he never gave up on anything he trained on. This impressed his father very much. Around the third year at the Academy, when he was only 10 years of age, they put him to the test of the Bunshin jutsu test. When he came up to do his Bunshin, he was practicing a B Class move for years, even though it was only to call upon a single clone. He performed the Kage Bunshin no jutsu at such a level, even his teachers were impressed by this level of chakra. He had passed his days at the Academy. A person from the Konohagakure no Sato area had been visiting the area for the past few months, and teaching Saruno that technique, since he had the chakra for it, and for what he would and could do. Since this was such a high-level technique for an Academy student, he was rushed to the hospital for a such a number of times, his sensei had trouble teaching him.

Death to the Kazura (Story)

The night was young, trees were swaying the breeze, leaves floating down on the air, towards the ground as it flew off the branches, a peaceful night, so or people thought of this full-moonlit night. The cerulean moon shined above the houses in a safe-like housing ring just outside a village twenty miles from the area, the place was calm, peaceful, lights in people’s houses off, the dark showing from the moonlight of the sky. It was the thirtieth of May, in the springtime of the country; flowers were blooming in the gardens of young gardeners, in window boxes of people’s houses, showing their bright, cheerful nature, it was a perfect season, for the perfect clan. Footsteps race across the ground, pounding against the brown dirt of the road before hundreds upon thousands of armored men. The men were running at high speeds, giant twin blades strapped to their back, shining with the blue moonlight above. They were headed in one direction, the housing ring of the Kazura Clan.

Darkness fell heavily onto the night, the moon blocked out by the clouds overhead, it was seemingly going to be the worst night, in the history of the clan. Two figures stand at the top of the Wall surrounding the housing ring, guards, each holding a large spear on their back, a blade in a sheath on their sides, ready for any encounter they may face. A sound of unsheathing swords was heard by one of the guards, ready for battle, the guard held onto the crimson hilt of the blade he had on his right side. Before he could even so much as move a muscle in that arm, blood fell. An arrow struck onto the center of the chest plate of the guard, piercing his heart in an instant; Amazing accuracy for the deadliest shot. Hundreds more begin to strike out onto the plain of the hills around the clan, striking the guards that surround it, but only few begin to strike back. Power is unleashed upon the attackers, smashing through the hills like a knife through butter, heads roll, blood flies; it was the battle for life and death.
Few remained with the attackers of the clan; many remain for the guards that protected it, worn out from the use of their energy, swords shattered in their palms. Bodies of slain guards and attackers litter the ground around the clan housing ring, blood soaking into the ground, it was a blood fest, and nothing could have stopped it, only destruction comes of fighting.

Two hours pass, the guards reform with new recruits, only in the dead of night, the sound of a wolf howls over the night, towards the moon above. A powerful surge of energy was felt by one of the guards at the top of the wall, feeling great pain with the power growing near. Two of the guards near him come forth to him, to try and calm him, but just left him alone, because of the calm he claimed to have, saying it was nothing. But it wasn’t, his arms were burning, the power growing near the area, making him just feel like he is on fire, screaming in pain with all the power he was feeling, crouching onto the stone floor below.

A blast of power ripped through the trees of the area around the guarding ring, shattering through the ground. Two guards stepped forward to the blast of energy, slashing their blades to the ground as another slash of power ripped through the other one, canceling it out in an instant.

The man who was in pain stepped up, his eyes as white as the purest snow, a large sword in his right palm, burning with large amounts of crimson energy, He jumped from the tower, stepping onto the ground below the area he was, 100 feet above where he is now.


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PostSubject: Re: Saruno Kazura [Wedding Update]   Fri Nov 28, 2008 8:57 pm

Two guards on the ground ran to the man, asking what he was doing. Ten seconds later, blood flies on the ground below, limbs fall onto the ground, staining it crimson with the blood flowing out of them, two guards lay dead on the ground. Nothing could stop this man; his power was inhuman to any standard, power rushing through his veins, crimson energy flowing around him with an eerie red glow. This was the beginning to the end of the Kazura.

Days later, the man returned to the area, hundreds of men behind him, ready and armed for combat, swords in their hands, adamant armor surrounding them, protecting them from the pouring rain around them, the mud covering their boots. Clouds covered the sky, the moon shining above them, shining against their armor, brightening them up. The leader of the set of warriors stepped up to the front of them line, giving a war speech that frenzied them into a war cry, running towards the wall that protected the clan housing ring with swords raised.

A messenger bursts through the door of the clan leader’s house, the leader already sitting up on his bed, his right eye covered in a bandage, already knowing about the attack. He quickly got dressed in his battle clothing, swords on his back, two fingerless gloves on his palms, ready to go in an instant. After a few moments of thinking what to do, he immediately vanished from the room, appearing on top of his house, looking towards the flames of war at the other end of the housing ring, his cloak swaying in the cool evening breeze.

The biggest of the attackers ravaged through the gate of the housing ring, flames setting through the burnt areas. The adamant armor they were wearing had large spikes on their shoulders and torso area, bloodstains on them all, after killing over 50 guards on the wall, a bloodied sword in their palms. They were obviously the best of the attackers, meaning they were captains and commanders of the force. They had also large symbols on the fronts of their helmets, the symbol of another clan, a large dragon wrapping around a symbol of peace and war, meaning they were the Varino clan, the clan of war and oblivion.

The wife of the leader, who was lying on the bed with the leader, noticing the coverings on the other side of the bed, was uncovered. She quickly sat up, looking through the window on her side of the room, watching the flames of war rage through the gates around the clan housing ring, a horrified expression showing. Soon after, she ran out of the house, in only her nightgown, showing with the black outlining, a white trim around the neck and arm area, she was scared of what might happen to the rest of the clan if the guards of the clan didn’t protect them well enough to escape. Her name was Sasina Kazura, named after the hero of the clan hundreds of years ago, who helped save the clan from war, and from ultimate destruction. Soon after, she went back in the house; slamming her fist on the table she had near the door, alerting three children in the house, which they knew something was wrong.

Three of the children walked down the stairs of their two story house, their names were; Kairi, Saruno, and Kuroyami Kazura, three of the five children of the leader, which was of royal clan blood, each of their strength more powerful than the next. Their mother was tearing away at the sight of the flames of war she saw with her two cerulean eyes, watching the other clan members die off from the blades of the attackers, blood spurring onto the ground, heads rolling, limbs being ripped from their bodies, it was true blood shed. Saruno Kazura was the first to watch this happen, his heart sank, even at this young age, when he has mastered some of the clan techniques, he never knew about this attack until now.

Frightened at the sight of the flames of war, they began to run up to their rooms, only for their mother to stop them, beginning to speak to them what to do next. She told them to run from the area, making sure they get somewhere safe while the clan members begin to run out the attackers, even if they have to die to do so. Tears were streaming down her cheeks, looking back out to the flames of war and began to run out in her battle-like clothing, ready to fight to the end.

Kuroyami, the oldest of the Kazura family members, began to run upstairs to the bedrooms of the other two Kazura, waking them up and getting them out of bed and dressed, he was getting ready to leave. They took out their bags and filled them up with some of their clothes, a basket of food and stuff to find food with, and many other necessary items, ready to set out on their journey.

A scream was heard from downstairs of the four bedrooms, it was Kairi, screaming as she passed out on the floor of the living room. Saruno immediately ran down the wooden steps of his house, finding a large man in a crimson and black cloak, holding his unconscious sister in his left arm, facing the other way than him. The man was about seven feet tall, a normal sized muscular man, a sword on his back, about half of his normal size. As the man turned around, he noticed Saruno behind him, turning to face him as he let up a small chuckle, a demented chuckle.

Saruno knew he had to save his sister from the man, so he drew his blade from the side of his robe, charging forth to the man; in a single second, the man slamming his right palm upon the blade, sending Saruno back to the wall behind him, shattering it slightly. He knew he was powerful, very powerful, so he had to use one of the clan’s forbidden techniques, the Dark Oblivion technique, used in interrogation to make the target fear what they see and hear, almost like oblivion itself.
A large spark of pain ripped through him as a crimson scar began to rise up towards his right eyes, covering it over in a dark eerie light. He was still laying on the ground, partly unconscious as the scar began to burn with great pain on his eye, making him scream in pain, in a new, darker voice, covering his eyes with his palms. The man looked over to Saruno, beginning to wonder what he was doing; beginning to take the blade out of its sheath on his back, the silver of the blade was burning with a cerulean energy, aiming the tip of the blade towards Saruno.

It was too late to figure an attack from afar when Saruno was activating the Clan’s secret technique, which was turning the right or left eye into a weapon of the mind, turning a deep Grey. When Saruno stood up from the floor, his arms limp at this side, he looked to the man before him, his right eye just making even demons themselves cry in pain. The glare of Saruno just pierced through the man, the iris of the eye swirling around with lines to the iris, as I the eye was a weapon itself. The man began to feel limp with his arms and legs, the room around him just seemed to melt away he stepped back, dropping Kairi and the sword in his palm, stepping back once more, towards the flame he had created when he broke in, the man was in the deep state of the dark oblivion technique, making him scream in fear as demons roamed around him, strapping his arms and legs in chains worst than hell. Only this was in his mind, everything was normal, just Saruno turning the man’s fears against him and turning hell to him through his mind, making him see, feel, hear, and even smell the fears, making it seem all too real.

Saruno took advantage of this moment, calling his siblings, who were already watching the scene, running out the door on an instant, going through their secret passage from their house to outside of the ring, which they made when they were younger. Kuroyami held Kairi in his arms, jumping from tree to tree, trying to outrun the flames of war behind them, leaving small footprints in the bark of the wood. Not too soon from their home, a large warrior stepped up in front of the, stopping them as they stepped on a branch on a tree near the edge of a stream, looking at them with the warrior’s crimson eyes. Saruno stepped up, still in pain from the technique he used earlier, he was going to risk himself for the safety of his family, and he told them to keep going while he held up the warrior. Kuroyami and the other fled the scene, the warrior looking at Saruno with a dark glare, telling him it was foolish for a boy to fight a warrior; which wasn’t all too foolish for Saruno, he was ready, even if it cost him his life.

The warrior moved up in his attack stance, moving towards Saruno with a dark glow of energy surrounding him. Saruno quickly moved his palm to the air, a blinding white light, beginning to tear through the trees, he was performing a dark move, which was only used when in extreme danger and only used by an older part of the royal family. Blasts of lightning surrounded the area, blasting through the ground, heading itself form the sky, energy was bursting from the heavens, smashing through trees, the leaves and grass around were burned, it was an ultimate attack, for the ultimate destruction. The lightning pierced through the guards armor, blood began to splatter onto the bark of the tree he was standing on, burning the blood as it passed by, this was the worst of fate, a small spark of the lightning began to charge, beginning to surge forwards, then sideways. Saruno didn’t expect the attack to go this far. Soon after, a large explosion ripped through the trees, burning through the grass, causing a large pillar of energy flowing up through the heavens, breaking through some clouds overhead, sending Saruno through hundreds of trees, heading in the direction of the running siblings.

A swift breeze begins to take place, Kuroyami and his siblings begin to walk through an open area in the dead center of the forest, after escaping a large blast of white energy behind them. It was madness. Fighting a person who was much stronger than he was, high above his normal level. This wasn't the end of it, nor was the beginning, this was the beginning of the end.

Aftermath
Moments later, Kuroyami began to enter a large, green plain the middle of the great forest, tired a bit from the sprint they had to do, away from the blast of energy racing towards them only moments ago, but vanished as soon as they found someone in that plain, it was Saruno. He gave the last of his strength, putting him into an unconscious state of mind, for defeating one of the strongest opponents he had faced in months to come. He had a small smile on his expression as he slept, his energy slowly building inside of him, he had defeated a strong opponent, one who could release ones’ self from the ‘Oblivion Darkness’ technique, which was to restrain someone into a deep, terrifying kind of trance, putting one’s fears onto that person. They had escaped the rein of terror, and the destruction of themselves, but had to run, from their own family.

This was the end of the rain of the Kazura clans’ greatness, and the downfall of the greatest clans in the world. Blood was splattered on the walls of the houses, or what was left of them. The great leader of the clan, slashed his way through hundreds of the attackers, not a single injury, blood on his blade, he was faced with one of the highest ranking members in the Varino clan, Azunara, the great master of oblivion. Toshiro was the great leader of the clan, master of chaos art, and the great master of the blades of chaos. Yuui was his blade of chaos*, the second most powerful blade in the nine blade arsenal.
The great battle commenced, the blade of Azunara was great in power and in speed, and it slashed through Toshiro’s armor with ease, making blood spatter on the ground below them. A cheating instinct kicked Toshiro into one of his clan’s houses, smashing through the brick walls of the great household. It was the end of the greatest Kazura, but also, the end of the great oblivion. Toshiro was not going to give up without a fight, not one bit.

A blast of power ripped through the ground around the household, knowing no one was in the house at the time, raising the sword in front of him as it aimed towards the man before him. The power in Toshiro was great, and also knew he would die either way, but he chose to die for his clan, and nothing else.

Once more, he pounded his blade against the ground to his opponent, shading a powerful, bright light through the air, sending the waves of power to every corner of the area. The secrets of the Kazura clan was great, he needed to make sure, no one took onto the Kazura’s secret, even though he had to leave the responsibility of reviving the clan in the hands of his five children. He smiled at the thought, letting his children take the torch of leadership. The wave of power rippled towards Azunara, sending the entire scene into an explosion so fierce, it made everything around him in an eighth mile diameter shatter into the air, creating a much larger scale of the dark technique.

As the blast recedes, he lays on the ground, his opponent lying dead before him, himself only partly unconscious. His wife, Sasina runs up to him, putting him in her arms as her tears flowed down her cheeks, telling him she would be nothing without him to comfort her, he was the only one for her, no matter what anyone says. Toshiro lightly grasped her left palm, holding it up to his cheek, saying he loved her, no matter what, and death couldn’t tear the love of them apart, no matter what happened. His grasp lightened as he let down a small cough, this was the end of Toshiro Kazura, the great leader of the Kazura clan.

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PostSubject: Re: Saruno Kazura [Wedding Update]   Fri Nov 28, 2008 9:00 pm

Ten Years Later First person POV.

A dark wind passes through an open window in a large building, made entirely of a solid stone, granite. Tough rock I’ll say; A lab resigns’ in the building, a giant glass tube in the center of the top floor, a man in the center of the massively shaped tube, wire and suctions cups placed no his chest and arms, he lays unconscious, floating in the water surrounding him. He has a small oxygen mask around his nose and mouth, keeping him alive and well in the tube. Saruno Kazura, that is I, and I am the man in that tube. Even though I am half unconscious, a can hear some words that they are saying.
“Lower down the temperature of that water! Keep his power limited!” one of them shouts to the other.
“Stop it! I’m doing that now!” the other one shouts, and then reading the scale of power, it reads normal.
A swift wind enters through the open window of the lab once more, triggering a small mass of mice running silently across the floor. It was dull; they didn’t really see it, since they were so involved in arguing themselves to death. It was slightly annoying listening to them, hearing their damned conversations, every last word, I hated being the one stuck in the tube, and it was annoying. I couldn’t do anything, I was a lab rat. They had found a survivor of the Kazura clan and wanted to test my power to see if they can restore it. Yet I don’t really think so. It’s not that easy reviving such an ancient form the Kazura clan’s hard work just by copying it, it’s not that easy being me or my brothers and sisters.
I begin to close my eyes, drifting off in a deep sleep, which is the only thing I can really do when I’m in there. My charts read normal as I slept. A dream. That’s what I was having until I met a memory which triggered something in my emotions, something bad. A surge in my power showed up on the charts: maxing it out on the red. I didn’t know what that meant on the chart, but in my dream, I saw a mirror, seeing myself in that tube, hearing the men just shouting, “His power levels are off the charts the glass can’t handle the pressure, it’s going to break!”
I woke from unconsciousness, this time completely; my arms were just burning with power, as if they were on fire. My nails just grew to a length where I could tear something out of someone’s chest. I was nothing but a monster. Energy raced across my arms, my legs, and my torso, everywhere. The glass soon shattered my feet land on the moist floor below them. I had broken out of the containment, or so I thought.
Dozens of darts soared from the walls of the room, piercing my skin with an instant of it touching my raw flesh. I felt a bit dizzy with the feeling of a sleeping powder entering my bloodstream, making me fall headfirst onto the floor before him, on a couple pieces of broken glass. I had fallen once more.
Moments pass, then hours, my body just feels limp as I sleep with the poison deep inside my bloodstream. It was pure torture, being a lab rat for a couple of bastards. I hated being a person who could do nothing, even when I could smash through a glass tube like nothing even was there. This was beyond annoying. This was pure torment.
About the next day, darkness out on the night, the full moon shining through the window of the room, I was wondering what time it was, and then looking to the side of the tube, the water around me making a bit of noise, but not too loud. It was midnight, twelve o’ clock. I was so tired, even when I was sleeping the entire day, the whole day, only to be woken up by a dream and gone berserk. Scary, boring, annoying; emotions that I have right now, being in a giant glass tube, doing nothing but floating on the water; An air mask on my mouth and nose, ear plugs in my ears to keep from the water from entering my ears. They sure did want their subject to be comfortable; the water was nice and warm, like a hot spring, steaming delight. It was purely heavenly, but also, like I said, annoying on so many levels. Even though I was being used like this, I actually had time to think to myself, and about my past. I still wonder though…who was that girl at the academy? Why did the Ukiku attack my clan that fateful day?
A blur in my emotions just made me drift off into a deep sleep, my muscles calm, relaxed with the hot water surrounding me, my eyes slowly closing, the crimson shine of them dimming as my gaze blurs to nothing but darkness, black, dark emotions, just, nothing. A memory of the Academy popped up in a dream, it was about the time where I met Rin, and she was so nice to me at the academy days; she always helped me with assignments that were tough on me, kept away bullies and such, and loved me all the same when my hair or my wings just changed color. It was soothing on those thoughts, so very soothing.
A drift of bubbles swept up the tank, through my shorts and to the top of the tank of water, seeming like they were releasing me, but just changing the water. A small bubble popped on my face, awakening myself with that feeling of pain on the top of my nose. My crimson shaded eyes opened immediately, seeing the two men just staring at me, nothing happening, like an illusion.
My right eye was still its normal shade of gray, ever since those years ago. It was a permanent state of mind, the ‘Oblivion Darkness’ technique had to make either the right or left eye gray in all standards, but is permanent either way, it can’t be removed.
A strike of electricity chocked through the tank, I felt nothing, it was powerful yes, over 100,000 kilowatts of pure energy, and I felt nothing. It was like I was immune to the power of that, a powerful jolt of electricity, nothing. The tank was completely filled to the brim with water, except for me, which was inside the tank of course; I could be electrocuted at any time, no matter the situation. I don’t have the power to escape this, no power since the Berserk state kicked in, it’s like it drained him.
I sighed lightly, just feeling like falling asleep once more, my eyes only half open. It was so boring, having nothing to do but float in a tank, nothing at all. Occasional bubbled flowed through the tank when it was time to clean it, as usual. I didn’t eat, I didn’t drink anything, and I only slept when I felt like it, which was a lot of the day, and watch those people just push buttons and look at a screen, maybe eating. It was the worse.
I looked out to the closed glass window on the edge of the room, looking out at the crescent moon overhead, a few clouds covering the lower part of it. A beautiful night, for a person who is powered by the night and the moon above; the fuller the moon was; the higher extent my power was. I was still wondering if my brother, Kuroyami, had found this lab yet, seeing if he would make an escape plan to break me out. Hopefully soon, I can’t do pretty much anything with their traps and containment priorities around. It’s just too hard for me to escape by myself, much too hard.
A surge of lightning struck through the ground outside of the lab, clouds roaming over the moon’s view in just a moment. A storm had been brought to this area, but so fast? How? I asked myself so many times before the thing would be able to strike again. A roar of thunder roamed about the area once more, rattling hundreds of the beakers and test supplies around, even the giant containment chamber I was in, cracking it only slightly. A rumble of earth shook the ground once more, this time, much more violently, cracking the chamber once more, more and more until water started to leak out of it, feeling the flow just pull me towards the crack. My mask flew off like something just pulled it off, maybe something did. The glass shattered once more, this time the pieces flying everywhere, and away so I can walk around without fear of the glass stabbing into my feet.
I knew who was rescuing me, Kuroyami? No. This was my sister, Kairi. She could move clouds to her will and use it to start thunderst6orm or create earthquakes to a magnitude of 4.8, which was powerful in her taste, but she never used it. She was all too shy to use it past 2.0. She could turn intangible and pass through objects with ease, not a person being able to see her. She was truly special, that why the man wanted to capture here, all too easily.
Moments pass once more; I walk outside with my left hand in my sister’s right, running down the dirt road with loud, ear-ringing alarms not too far behind us. This was the thrill of the chase, running from the people who captured me, running for my life with my sister helping me along the way. This should be good. The adrenaline rush just waved through me, making me run a bit faster than I would usually, my sister picking up pace as well. Kairi was fast when she wanted to; she was way to shy to be able to do anything on her own. ‘Who sent Kairi to help me?’ I thought within my head. At the last step of the dirt road, I looked out over the cliff before us, and then just tore off the white shirt over my chest, revealing the wings that were on my back. This was a birth trait I had over the years; hiding it from my friends, for fear they wouldn’t like me if I did have them. But they were useful all the same.
Crunching my feet against the ground, I jumped into the air, my pure white wings opening on the sight. A giant fluff of wind opened them in an instant, letting me fly into the air with much ease, my sister in my arms. She didn’t have wings at the moment, yet she would grow them to their full extent soon enough, even though she was a few years older than me. The sound of energy surging towards me caught my attention, turning my direction to the left as I narrowly dodged a blast of crimson energy, burning against a feather on the right wing, making me almost flinch out of control. I kept my distance in the air. The big adrenaline rush was the best, the feeling of power had my control, and the sprint in the air was so very awesome. Kicking my feet together, I felt myself jump through the air, bursting through the waves of speed as nothing was pulling me back, nothing at all.
Kairi was still in my arms as I land over twenty miles away from that accursed laboratory. The grueling tests, the starvation I had to go through, it was pure torture from the very start. I still wonder how I survived. Noticing a small figure out in the distance of the forest around me, it was a very familiar figure, seemingly like a person I knew. Kairi was unconscious at the time; she didn’t know anything about the person. Slowly, I moved towards the figure, a bit curious at the notice of such a person. The shadowed figure moved forward, curious about me. It was strange, seeing a person after such a long time, 5 years is the time where I haven’t seen anyone else but the people in the lab, occasionally someone to check the status of the lab. It was truly amazing.
This person stepped up from the shadows of the forest, showing that it was a woman, about my age, I would say around the age of eighteen to nineteen at the most. Her hair was reaching down to her shoulders, and a bit farther, shining a bit with a bit of a crimson outlook. The moonlight above just showed its full figure. Her beauty was unimaginable. Her eyes sparkled with a purple tint, her black eyelashes just going along with it. She was purely something unique.
“Hello” she began to say in her heavenly voice, “And who might you be in my forest?”
I gulped a bit, seeing her wonderful beauty, almost distracted me from her words, but I responded promptly, “Hello, I am Saruno Kazura, and this is my sister, Kairi Kazura” I said in my soft, yet dark-toned voice. It’s been some time since I last spoke to another person; I’ve been silent, yet cursing at time the lab workers, and some other thoughts in his head.
“It’s nice to meet you, I am Kami Anibara” she said once more in her soft, heavenly voice, “Since you’re out here, would you like to take a bit of time to go to my house?”
“O-of course Kami…” I said in my soft, dark voice.
Stepping slightly to my front side, she began to walk into the shadows of the forest, myself following her sound of the footsteps. It was a silent, cold kind of night; my wings were curled onto my torso, keeping myself warm, along with Kairi, unconscious, in my arms. Kami’s hair flowed as she walked, the moonlight from the trees simply glowing in her beautiful nature. Being half naked was a bit embarrassing, especially around the opposite gender. I was always the shy type when around girls or women; it was sort of my kind of nature to be shy. Other times in battle, I was the outgoing, powerful type. I had a unique trait to have a whole lot of power.
A large house appeared in the distance of the forest beginning to show its beautiful night. The sky was clear, the stars shining softly in the black, moonlit sky. It was truly a night to remember. My bare chest shivered a bit in the freezing cold wind that passed over the forest. ‘Chilling’ that’s what I thought at the moment of reaching the house with Kami holding the doorknob of the door. I was a bit nervous, my face almost turning red, but blue at the cold touching my face; truly cold here, so very much.
“Here we are” Kami said in her soft voice, turning the knob of the door and pushing it into the dark house.
“I thank you for letting us come in…” I said in my dark kind of tone, stepping into the dark house with Kami not so far in front of me.
“It’s no problem Saruno, feel free to spend the night if you wish” she said in her soft voice, lighting a candle to show her only wearing a one-piece apron and a pair of jeans and a white shirt. It was seemingly like she was going out for some herbs or fruit or some kind of vegetables, she looked like some cook, maybe not, ‘some’ cook, she looked skilled in that, and maybe a bit more.
My face lit up in a moment’s notice of the candle lighting up, I was so cold going out in that freezing weather, yet I heated up at the sight of her clothing. I saw Kami notice my red expression, looking down at her clothing, then blushing a bit on her cheeks, she didn’t notice she was still wearing this kind of clothing, I sort of knew at her expression.
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PostSubject: Re: Saruno Kazura [Wedding Update]   Fri Nov 28, 2008 9:09 pm

“I will cook up something for you to eat, if your sister wakes up, I’ll cook her something as well” she said in her voice, tailing off to the kitchen.
As she left the room, I noticed a small tail, maybe a swamp cocktail? No, I know those things that were a real tail; from a person who likes cats a bit too much that she might be half cat, a Neko. The hair on the tail was a usual red, like her hair on her head, still being more mysterious as the moment’s pass by.
I set Kairi sitting up in a chair next to me, still unconscious at the motion of being in the air at such a high speed. I knew she wouldn’t wake up till at least morning, maybe earlier, but I knew I had to take care of her till then. Kami came back into the room, a small platter of assorted foods on the paper of that tray. She set it on the table at the end of the room, the table already being set for two, a small lit candle in the middle. It was a bit of a shy motion of me to sit down. But I did, at the other end of the table where Kami sat, I sat before her.
“Come on, lets eat” she said in her soft voice, picking up a small loaf of bread.
“Thank you Kami” I said in my dark voice, also picking up a small portion of bread and a small dabble of gravy.
The food was delicious, the gravy was just right, not too hot or cold, the bread was thoroughly cooked to perfect tenderness. She was an amazing cook, just knew it. As I reached over to the chicken, she smiled lightly, at her gaze; I knew that she wanted to see me eat, she was happy to see people eat her cooking, that’s what her expression was saying. Taking a small bone off the chicken, with meat attached, I placed it on my plate, my fork pressing into it with my knife cutting through it.
“This is very delicious” I said in my dark kind of voice, “You’re an amazing chef”
“Why thank you, I enjoy seeing people like my cooking so very much” she said in her heavenly like voice, giggling all so slightly.
That giggle, it made my face flush with a small bit of crimson. She was so beautiful, she was perfect. She was an amazing chef, beautiful, I wondered a couple things, but kept them to myself. I dug into the chicken as politely as I could, with a fork and knife; I hope I was as polite as I was powerful. Seeing over the table to her purple tinted eyes faced towards her food, I saw her simply prick around with it with her fork, seemingly like there was something on her mind, what was it?
‘I wonder what she’s thinking about…’ I thought to myself, taking another fresh bite to the chicken on my fork.
Kami took a bite of the chicken on her fork, setting it back down as she chewed, it seemed like she was an angel, a beautiful angel from heaven itself. I was so memorized; I didn’t even notice my jaw was open. I heard her giggle to make me notice that it was open, so I quickly closed it. This was an enjoyable dinner, I could say that. We were laughing at each others jokes, and didn’t even notice the world around us until a small flicker of light was seen on the candle’s edge. It was about to go out, so she quickly exchanged it for a new one. The new candle light almost lit up the entire room, just showing its beautiful intention, it was almost as beautiful as her itself.
“So, what should we do now?” Kami asked in her heavenly voice, shifting the fork to the edge of her plate.
“I’m, I’m not very sure Kami…” I said in my sort of dark tone, placing my silverware on the edges of my plate.
It seemed like we didn’t know what to do now, she didn’t know from the tone of voice she used, confused, and somewhat a bit of a pleasured one. I didn’t know it at first, but when I thought about it a bit, it knew it. I saw her softly move up from the table, taking hers and my own dish and take it to the kitchen. As she left, her tail was swaying, maybe in enjoyment? Probably, her expression almost showed it all, nothing said it wasn’t something. But I didn’t know yet, not one bit.
After hearing some running water after a bit, I gently walked over to where Kairi was sitting down, she was still unconscious, she may just be asleep, so I just left her where she was, she didn’t need to be disturbed, so it was safe to keep her there, for now anyway. I saw her roll a bit, maybe she was in a bit of pain, Nightmare, Something? Well it was something, so I needed to do something, but I couldn’t, I’m not really a doctor, I’m not cut out to do anything but wrap up a wound. I know my herbs from plants and other things in between, it’s something all right.
After the running water stopped somewhere in the kitchen, I saw Kami enter into the room once more, her soft expression telling me to come a bit closer. So I did. After I did, She looked up to me with her soft-tinted eyes, smiling just lightly. I knew she wanted something, but what? I asked myself that a couple times, then she looked down. Something was bothering her, so I placed my left palm on her shoulder, smiling a bit to her.
“Is anything wrong?” I asked her softly, hoping for a response.
“C-can you come with me for a while Saruno?” she said, almost stuttering.
She seemed like the shy type, but I really didn’t think so all that back when they were having dinner. She went out of the room, so I followed, into the darkness of the house, she seemed to know where she was going, and I was just following the sound of her footsteps. I couldn’t see squat in this darkness, maybe my nose, but that was it. The sound of her footsteps stopped, so I stopped as well.

Captured/Rebirth (Sorry to cut it off, but i'm not done with that chapter yet. xD)

After being captured by a high-ranking Anbu Member of the Konohagakure no Sato area, he was turned over the Konoha Prison, where he was to speak about the properties of the Akatsuki. By doing so, he was removed from the akatsuki ranks, his ring relocated to another person. Since he said everything he knew about the Akatsuki to Hizashi Hyuuga, an Anbu of the time, he was sent to the Prison for some time to come. Being saved by the Hokage's orders, he is not to be killed, since he is a valuable information source about the Akatsuki and missing ninja of the time. While he was in prison, he wanted to fix his mistakes, he wanted to become a good guy for a change, maybe help the village out, but he doubts that would happen, ever. No one will trust him, not even her friends for being catpured, he still wonders if he is alive or not. But for now, he will await the Kage Bunshin he sent to the Moon to check on Kairi and Kami, seeing if he would be able to tell Kami how much she means to him, and how much he loves him. He has a small box in his back pocket, a diamond-encrusted ring, ready for a marriage for something. It was his special treasure, nothing would make him give it up.
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PostSubject: Re: Saruno Kazura [Wedding Update]   Thu Jan 01, 2009 6:33 pm

Bump of Annoyance...
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PostSubject: Re: Saruno Kazura [Wedding Update]   Thu Jan 01, 2009 6:38 pm

Im a fool for long backstories.. ><
Anything other then backstory added?
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PostSubject: Re: Saruno Kazura [Wedding Update]   Thu Jan 01, 2009 7:04 pm

Just the techniques that were approved by Minoichi....And i added a bit to the Looks. The advanced battle state is questionable by you, okay?

I'm going to post the mechanisms in the Equipment section soon enough.
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PostSubject: Re: Saruno Kazura [Wedding Update]   Thu Jan 01, 2009 7:34 pm

Im also going to need a list of what is approved by minichi plez :D
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PostSubject: Re: Saruno Kazura [Wedding Update]   Thu Jan 01, 2009 7:47 pm

And your character has trained with these in a topic?
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PostSubject: Re: Saruno Kazura [Wedding Update]   Thu Jan 01, 2009 7:58 pm

One of them, Aneiparusu, i'm still going to train the rest, don't worry....Okay? I'm not that lazy.
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PostSubject: Re: Saruno Kazura [Wedding Update]   Thu Jan 01, 2009 8:09 pm

Old application to continue use until your done updating.
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PostSubject: Re: Saruno Kazura [Wedding Update]   Thu Jan 01, 2009 9:14 pm

Da hell do i have to update now?
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PostSubject: Re: Saruno Kazura [Wedding Update]   Fri Jan 02, 2009 1:26 am

Oh, funny, I say that all the time. "The hell does he have to update now?"
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PostSubject: Re: Saruno Kazura [Wedding Update]   Fri Jan 02, 2009 10:35 am

No, seriously, what do i have to update?
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PostSubject: Re: Saruno Kazura [Wedding Update]   Fri Jan 02, 2009 10:02 pm

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Normal/Everyday Life: Within Saruno's everyday life, which is his usual, emotionless state.

Grammar error right there. Looking over it the way you use it should be fine, just marking it though.

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Personality: Saruno is the kind of person who has a bit of 'Mixed' emotions,

Grammar error on emotions
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Personality: Saruno is the kind of person who has a bit of 'Mixed' emotions;

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state, and saruno's type of emotion,

Capitalize Saruno.

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. Ability to Conjure

Make conjure lowercase.

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, kunochi,

Spelling error

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The steel was hidden under it to keep it's shade

Grammar error

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his eyes were lit up like the demon's,

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Black crow etchings in his Wrist, arm, leg, shin, foot, and wing armor, glowing with a flow of black and white chakra.

Grammar error, fragment.

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This wasn't Saruno's will,

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it's

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Fires races across the broken set of warriors, beginning to race towards the center of the stroke, racing around in a complete circle.

All Grammar errors, last one is a fragment.

I suggest you put this ito Microsoft word or my review will basicly be doing this the whole time.
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PostSubject: Re: Saruno Kazura [Wedding Update]   Fri Jan 02, 2009 10:25 pm

Eh, grammar....Okay, is everything else okay?
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PostSubject: Re: Saruno Kazura [Wedding Update]   Sat Jan 03, 2009 9:49 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Saruno Kazura [Wedding Update]   Thu Jan 08, 2009 5:48 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Saruno Kazura [Wedding Update]   Thu Jan 08, 2009 8:46 pm

Heres what ill be doing with you from now on.
You cannot over exagerate the power you think you have. You cannot god mod, if you do, I remove whatever you god moded or overexagerated with. This is my set rule for you.

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