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PostSubject: Oroshi   Oroshi EmptyTue Dec 30, 2008 12:47 am

Basic Character Information:
Name:Oroshi Akane
Age:13
Gender:Male
Clan:Akane

The Akane clan is a group focused on nature. They are settled among the outskirts of countries, making them discretely known. Their main village is Arata, a small village on the outskirts of the Fire Country. Members of the clan may include half-breeds, humans fused with creatures or animals. Ancestors of the clan studied the anatomy and genetics of humans and animals, finding similarities and differences in DNA. After many years of research and failed experiments, they discovered a way to combine both genes of humans and creatures. They tested these experiments on their own people, so most of their members have some genes of both human and creature, making them a very unique group. Another way to identify an Akane is their remarkable red eyes, making them opulent. They are basically down-to-earth people who are usually accepted by both humans and animals. All members are good with animals, half-breed or not. Normally, they bond with the specific animal or creature they share characteristics with. Many of this clan chooses to live in harmony with both worlds, while there are still a few who turn to only one race for acceptance.


Looks:Oroshi is small for his age he is 5ft. He has black hair that is really smooth. He has red eyes like most Akane.He is slightly tanned due to the years of training outside. He wears 'snakebite' piercings on his lips. The piercings are color black. He is in the Akane clan and he has cat ears and tail. His ears and tail have black and grey tabby stripes. He wears a short sleeve black shirt with a red Konoha sign on the back. He also wears skinny jeans that show his strong legs. He has a pouch on his left side and a kunai holder on the back of his hip. He wears black boots up to his knee. He has bandages going up his arms. It reaches up to his shoulders. He has a slight built and most of his childish streght is developing into thight tendons.

Personality:Oroshi is a kind of guy that enjoys peace and tranquility. He enjoys staying out of problems. He is those kind of guys that dont worry much. He loves cats and any other animal. He is really happy most of the time and is really lazy. He is a bad liar but he is an excelent fighter. He hates being underestimated and will not back down from a fight to prove himself. He hates animal abuser, mostly cat abusers. He relaxes by sitting against a wall and smoke a pack of cigarretes. He says it calms him down. Most of the time he jokes around and usually gets beat up but he has a strong will and never gives. Sometimes he is really hyperactive and picks at everything. He usually annoys people but he can influence other people. He has a certain aura that can make a person smile.


Basic Clan Information
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Kekkei Gekkei:The Akane clan is a group focused on nature. They are settled among the outskirts of countries, making them discretely known. Their main village is Arata, a small village on the outskirts of the Fire Country. Members of the clan may include half-breeds, humans fused with creatures or animals. Ancestors of the clan studied the anatomy and genetics of humans and animals, finding similarities and differences in DNA. After many years of research and failed experiments, they discovered a way to combine both genes of humans and creatures. They tested these experiments on their own people, so most of their members have some genes of both human and creature, making them a very unique group. Another way to identify an Akane is their remarkable red eyes, making them opulent. They are basically down-to-earth people who are usually accepted by both humans and animals. All members are good with animals, half-breed or not. Normally, they bond with the specific animal or creature they share characteristics with. Many of this clan chooses to live in harmony with both worlds, while there are still a few who turn to only one race for acceptance.
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Skill and Rank Information
Village:Konoha
Rank:Genin

Special Characteristics: -
Special Effects: -

Elements:Earth
Skills Specialties:ninjutsu/taijutsu


Jutsus

Name: Explosion Tag: Activate
Rank: E
Type: -
Chakra Cost: 5
The user will activate an explosion tag. Normally, the tag will be placed by them, so they know where it is and can easily activate it.

Name: Kakuremino no Jutsu (Magic Cloak of Invisibility Technique)
Rank: E
Chakra Cost: 5
Damage: -
Element: -
Kakuremino no Jutsu is a very basic Ninjutsu technique. The ninja uses a camouflage cloth to cloak themselves in the background.

Name: Nawanuke no Jutsu (Escaping Skill)
Rank: E
Chakra Cost: 5
Damage: -
Element: -
A very basic technique that allows a ninja to escape from rope binds.

Name: Kawarimi no Jutsu (Change of Body Stance Technique)
Rank: E
Chakra Cost: 5
Damage: -
Element: -
When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack. Explosive tags can be attached to the replacement for an added surprise.

Name: Henge no Jutsu (Transformation Technique)
Rank: E
Chakra Cost: 10
Damage: -
Element: -
Allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.

Name: Bunshin no Jutsu (Clone Technique)
Rank: E
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage: -
Element: -
Creates a copy of the ninja without substance. The copy resembles the ninja in every way. This clone can function as a distraction or as means to confuse one's opponent. As soon the clone gets attacked or comes into contact with an opponent, it will disperse.

Name: Shunshin no Jutsu (Body Flicker Technique)
Rank: D
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage: -
Element: -
The ninja will appear and disappear in an instant, allowing them to retreat or attack suddenly. To facilitate the movement the ninja will often use nearby elements such as mist, sand or leaves to mask their appearance or disappearance.

Name: Kai (Dispel)
Rank: D+
Chakra Cost: 20-200+; Depends on the genjutsu being dispelled
Damage: -
Element: -
A jutsu that destroys/cancels out an illusionary jutsu attempted on the user. Only shinobi with strong chakra control can perform this. The user releases a large amount of chakra then quickly halts it. The genjutsu is usually dispelled after that, depending on how strong the skill is.

Name: Doton • Shinjuu Zanshu no Jutsu (Headhunter Technique)
Rank: D
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage: -
Element: -
Doton • Shinjuu Zanshu no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. The ninja will travel through the ground to appear below their target. They will then surprise their target by then pulling them into the ground. Once in the ground their target is thus immobilized.

Moguragakure no Jutsu - Mole Hiding Technique
CC: 45
Rank: C
Range: -
Type: Supplementary


Doton • Moguragakure no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. This technique allows the ninja to burrow into the ground and hide out of sight. This allows them to avoid attack or travel underground. Tobi used this jutsu to place Deidara's C2 Doragon spheres underground.


History and RP Sample
History:Oroshimo Was born on the outskirts of konoha in a small village of Arata
they where exeperementing with his dna with a cat.At the end of the expirement Oroshi begun to grow a tail and two ears.a few moths later Oroshi could walk he was troublesome.He could move from here to there in a small amount of time.His dad ended up dieng from a heartatck.So Oroshi was raisend and born with only his mother.They where a poor family his mother was dressed in a long skirt with the edges torn.She woor an apron all the time even to sleep she has brown eyes and black hair.He finaly learned to talk at the age of two the other parents begun making fun of oroshimo's mother beacouse he was a slow learner but she never did listen to a word they said.Oroshi was now five his tail was long about two feet his ears where about six inches tall.His nails would grow long rapidly when he cuted them so he stopped cuting them.He enrolled at the academy in konoha at the age of seven he failed once,he then promised his mother he will become a sucesful shinobi.At school the second year oroshimo had meat a girl named Tami he had fallen in love with her but she thought he was weird beacouse of his ears and tails.Tami had then begun to like him but one day she didnt come to shcool she was sick with a verry bad dieses at 10:42A.M she was annouced dead.Oroshi then fell apart he ened up missing school and ended up mising graduation oroshimo had ran away temporaly.Then he enrolled once more at the age of nine.At the age of of ten he finaly graduted for three years he went missing he was training up at the mountain but no one new where he was.When he came back he was buffed his legs wich increased speed and he increased his upper body he had.He found out that his mother was assasinated he swore revenge on his mother victum.He had now enrolled for genin hoping he can fulfill his promiss with his mother.


Rp Sample:Rp Sample:

Oroshi was walking thru the park in the barren city. It was pitch dark but he didnt care he just kept walking around the park thinking about his past, "Why- Why couldnt I be strong enough to protect my mother!" He sat down on the nearest bench. He looked at his cat tail and smiled. He enjoyed playing with his own tail. He started trying to catch while he was moving it. He caught it and laughed to himself. He layed back on the bench and took out his lighter and a cigar. He lit it up and started smoking, The embe of the cigar lit up the area around the bench. He took the cigar out of his mouth and exhaled the smoke. He did this for a few minutes and then he dropped the cigarrets on the ground. He was gettting sleepy so he slept in the alley across the street. Cats started going towards him for warmth. it was morning and people where going in and out of the alley. He started walking towards the market. Iw was swarmed like a bee colony. He walked towards 'Ichiraku Ramen Bar'. He lit up another cigar and smoked on the way. He made it to the small shop and ordered a 'super pork ramen.' He ate it slowly and paid the man. "Thank you," he said. He then walked around the village, sight seing. He sighed and said, "i better get home." He walked home and slept for the rest of the day.


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PostSubject: Re: Oroshi   Oroshi EmptyTue Dec 30, 2008 1:16 am

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Inaraka Kazura
Chuunin
Chuunin
Inaraka Kazura


Posts : 54
Joined : 2008-12-29
Age : 28
Location : Walking to Konoha with Meg.

Ninja Profile
Chakra:
Oroshi Left_bar_bleue200/200Oroshi Empty_bar_bleue  (200/200)
Village: Konoha
Primary Element: Water

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PostSubject: Re: Oroshi   Oroshi EmptyTue Dec 30, 2008 1:44 am

Well, first MAJOR Mistake is that you need to look at the Jutsu Template in the Application Template, it tells you how to right them out.
More Personality.
A LOT more History
A much bigger RP Sample.
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Harsh Hashi Hyuuga
Jounin
Jounin
Harsh Hashi Hyuuga


Posts : 175
Joined : 2008-12-25
Location : Dancing to da FUNK! *Funk music plays*

Ninja Profile
Chakra:
Oroshi Left_bar_bleue1600/1600Oroshi Empty_bar_bleue  (1600/1600)
Village: Konoha
Primary Element: Earth

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PostSubject: Re: Oroshi   Oroshi EmptyTue Dec 30, 2008 1:41 pm

Ok,

Use the coded template to make the app look better and more organized
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10 Sentences of Looks AND Personality
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Why is your chakra black?. How is it black?. How do you get it black?. Remove or Explain that, and remove your chakra being visible, chakra isn't visible, only for real high chakra costs and for some jutsus.
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Only One Element.
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Make your history into arcs and make them 2 paragraphs each. Ok, a HUMAN BEING CANNOT BE BORNED FROM A CAT!. Your History makes no sense, make a REAL History, look at all the other approved apps and look at their Histories. Make a WAY longer RP Sample.
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Fill in the chakra costs of the jutsus using the Chakra Template located in the Rule Book.
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Kai is a D+ Techinque, not B. Remove all of your jutsus that are higher than C Rank.
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Remove Shikon no Jutsu and Kage Shuriken no Jutsu
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Use Microsoft word or something to fix all of your grammar and punctuation errors. Their horrible.
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That is all :D

That is all :D
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Inaraka Kazura
Chuunin
Chuunin
Inaraka Kazura


Posts : 54
Joined : 2008-12-29
Age : 28
Location : Walking to Konoha with Meg.

Ninja Profile
Chakra:
Oroshi Left_bar_bleue200/200Oroshi Empty_bar_bleue  (200/200)
Village: Konoha
Primary Element: Water

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PostSubject: Re: Oroshi   Oroshi EmptyThu Jan 01, 2009 3:53 am

More Jutsu's
3 Paragraph Roleplay Sample AT LEAST
Create your clan if its not already created by someone else, and make sure you have permission from the clan leader if its made already, also, add the Kekkei Genkei if your in a clan, and any up to C Rank Clan Techniques.
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PostSubject: Re: Oroshi   Oroshi EmptyThu Jan 01, 2009 12:31 pm

Yeah Meg did give me permission to join the Akane clan.
Fixed the probs.
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ANBU
ANBU
Shinju


Posts : 309
Joined : 2008-10-20
Age : 31
Location : .::In the Back of Your Mind::.

Ninja Profile
Chakra:
Oroshi Left_bar_bleue1250/1250Oroshi Empty_bar_bleue  (1250/1250)
Village: Konohagakure no Sato
Primary Element: Wind

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PostSubject: Re: Oroshi   Oroshi EmptyThu Jan 01, 2009 2:02 pm

~Ummm, looks good now. I say it's ready for approval! :DDD
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