Zero Kiryu History (DONE ^^)

Basic Character Information:
Name: Zero Kiryu
Nickname: Sono shizuka kyuuketsuki - The Peaceful Vampire
Age: Unknown Looks to be 17-18 years old
Gender: Male
Clan: Kiryu
Birthplace: Oni no Kuni
Current Location: Konohagakure no Sato

Looks: http://fc03.deviantart.com/fs30/f/2008/056/4/c/Zero___FanArt___Vampire_Knight_by_EriDaiho.jpg Zero is not even human his past reveals it all he is a vampiric being his blood and his mind are very confused he has a deep purple eye colour that changes into a bright red colour when he has his Vampire side activated he stands at 5’10 and weighs about 69kg he has a light grey, white hair and has a very unusual mark on his neck given to him at birth this is his Vampire marking it’s a purple colour same as his eyes but it goes a redish colour when active.

Zero’s vampire for is exactly the same as his standard for but yet he has red eyes and the marking on his neck glows red aswell, he draws fangs and has a lust for blood, Zero in this form has complete control of how much blood he sucks from the person but yet he is not a night walker he walks both day and night the marking on his neck is a curse that makes him vampiric but he remains human when it is not active, when active the mark allows him vampiric abilities of inhuman strength and speed, his mind becomes very unstable the only way to calm it is to kiss him (this is the only solution only a female person can actually calm him from his rage though this seems like I am trying to make him get kisses I am not it is the only way to calm him) once kissed zero will return to his human state and collapse onto the floor he does have the ability to control the mark at any time to switch it on and off when he wants to.

Face: http://fairchildonrage.files.wordpress.com/2008/11/zero.jpg Zero has Purple eyes they are very mysterious and very beautiful though, he has white and greyish hair it is a very odd colour, he has a soft skin look his face is very calm and peaceful.

On his neck is the symbol of his clan and his curse known as the Kyuuketsuki Tsukimono or the Vampire Curse it is a marking only he has but yet he is able to pass it to others if he chooses it does not leave his body but yet infects them just like Orochimaru’s curse on Sasuke the seal cannot be broken or removed it is a permanent marking on the person it is unable to be controlled by another sealing jutsu only Zero can remove it from the person with a kiss and the words that only he can speak properly even one who can imitate his voice still needs the ability and the knowledge of what the saying means.

The words that need to be spoken to remove the curse are all in English the saying is “Ye who is infected with this curse you are set free as you have done what I have asked of you all that remains is to give me the kiss and your soul will forever soar” The words are spoken and the curse is removed from the person as are all the memories of ever having the curse placed and what they have done while they were in a vampiric state, Zero will replace them with a nice meeting of him in a romantic scene the person will no idea what happened to them until they are able to understand who he really is and what happened when they met.

Daily Look: Zero wear a black, white and red uniform it is a family clothing piece he will wear it every day he is seen he wears a black over coat with 3 buttons it is a very fancy over shirt under this is a lighter black formal shirt it is another part of his outfit this part of his shirt is viewable to all people since he will leave his over coat open at all times, he wears a light blood coloured tie around his neck loosely underneath all of his clothing is a pinkish white shirt it is plain but is part of his family uniform all together the uniform is very warm and very well planned out.

Personality: Zero is what is known as a vampire but he is a controlled vampire he is a very friendly male though although being a vampire he requires blood to sustain himself his life was very harsh when he was only a child he was turned into a vampire and has lived for many generations looking like he is 19 years old when infact he is over the age of a thousand no one knows of his past only that he was recently found to be very silent and very quiet, his past was rough thousands of years passed and many times has he felt pain and hurt but yet he pushes on, Zero is a very romantic and highly loyal to his lover. Zero at times tends to be very shy aswell as very powerful he is a very soft male.


Basic Clan Information

Kekkei Gekkei: Kiryu Curse Unleash
Chakra Cost: 150
Chakra Cost Each Post: 30
Description: This Kekkei Gekkei Is known as the Kiryu Curse Unleash, the mark on Zero's neck is the Kekkei Gekkei gives a Massive speed and strength increase this is an addition onto Zero's normal power and speed increase it is a permanent it can be activated and deactivated when not needed just like a Sharingan eye but yet once this Kekkei Gekkei is active the user becomes very blood drunk and very angry which can lead to a very costly and large mistake possibly even deadly or even leave them open to a killing blow, the only way to stop this once it is active is to have a young female kiss Zero and leave him powerless for the rest of the fight, Zero’s only backdraw to this is that in this state he will fight to the death he will fight anyone apart from a small child or a injured person in a wounded state that is near death he wont hurt anyone that is 15 or younger he may become a killer and a blood drunk monster but he wont kill and is incapable of killing a young female any female older than this he will bite at the neck and infect the curse mark upon making them part of the clan.

Special Effect: Increases Zero's power and speed by double to 4 times the strength and speed he already has this is the clans most prised ability as it is the only way that they have survived for so very long they are able to fight and keep going living upto the power they had been given, but by the end of the fight Zero's muscles are highly damaged and very weak, he has only enough energy to do one jutsu and then pass out for a multitude of days, even after he has recovered Zero's muscles are still weakend and are unable to do this for some time [[3 pages of combined posts with another person]] but yet Zero can still fight and use his jutsu. with his strength increase he is able to lift naturally without this kekkei gekkei active he can lift about 3 times his own weight but when active he is able to lift 5 to a maximum of 7 times his own weight, as for his speed he is able to move at the same speed as the first gate being open but this can only last for a short time as for the damage it does to the muscles can kill Zero (maximum usage is 6 posts then Zero will die if over usage happens, after the 6 posts Zero can still fight but is slowed by 50% of normal speed to the rate of a normal human that has just run a 500meter sprint he becomes very tired) While this is going Zero can move upto speeds of 80mph and he can lift upto 500 pounds (226.8 KG).

Skill and Rank Information

Village: Konohagakure No Sato
Rank: Genin

Special Characteristics: Inhumane strength and speed from his vampirism and can control it at any time he wishes, strange purple eyes that are like crystal purple they tend to draw people in and make them fall for him if he wants to but yet he doesn’t much search for love since he lost heaps.
Special Effects:

Elements: Ration, and Suiton
Skill Specialties: Taijutsu, Ninjutsu, Stealth

Name: Mizu Bunshin no Jutsu - Water Clone Technique
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Chakra Cost: 40
Range: N/A
Element: Suiton
Description: Mizu Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique that utilises water to create a Bunshin clones. Unlike a normal Bunshin, the Mizu Bunshin has the ability to interact more with the environment due to it having physical substance. This allows the clone to carry out limited attacks on its target. The range of the clone is limited however; it can not travel very far from the original body. If the Mizu Bunshin is injured, the clone will usually revert back into its natural water state.

Name: Thunder Roar Cannon
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Chakra Incantation: "Sprinkled on the bones of the beast! Sharp tower, red crystal, steel ring. Move and become the wind, stop and become the calm. The sound of warring spears fills the empty castle!"
Chakra Cost: 47
Element: Lightning
Description: Fires a massive wave of yellow lightning at a target.

Name: kuromeru Doragon Ken - Black Dragon Blade
Rank: C
Type: Taijutsu
Range: Close Quarters
Chakra Cost: 59
Element: Lightning + Suiton
Description: The kuromeru Doragon Ken or Black Dragon Blade is a technique unique to Zero only its power is combined of Suiton and Raiton it utilises the use of Zero's chakra and his Suiton and Raiton Elements it allows ban to create a dragon around his arm and then fuse the power into his attacks this combination is very rare indeed since water and lightning don't mix but this is Zero 's personal jutsu it can't be learnt from him due to the needs of the power inside Zero it may be none visible but he has a second source of power that allows him to use this tech it is very difficult and requires vast amounts of chakra is uses enough to almost exhaust Zero but it leaves him with enough to fight it will leave a large burn mark on the opponent that is extremely hard to treat but it does the same to Zero 's arm if he uses this to long it will cause nasty burns on his entire arm, any longer use can result in extreme burns and cause nerve damage.

Name: Suiton: Suirou no Jutsu - Water Release: Water Prison Technique
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close
Element: Water
Chakra Cost: 42
Description: Suirou no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique that utilizes water to imprison an opponent. The ninja forms the necessary hand seals which causes the water to form around the target into a spherical prison which only allows for limited movement. The ninja must keep their body touching the water prison to maintain its existence. If the contact is broken, the water falls away and their target is released.

Name: Riakiri Dragon
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu + Taijutsu
Chakra Cost: None
Element: Lightning
Chakra Cost: 29
Description: This is a melee move that empowers Zero with Lightning in his punches on hit these punches are like a small Electric shocks they explode in the size of a golf ball they don’t cause extreme electric burns they do cause only light singe marks but they can hurt a fair bit if Zero is moving faster and with speed these punches do a little bit more damage.

Name: Mizu Kick
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu + Taijutsu
Chakra Cost: None
Element: Water
Chakra Cost: 29
Description: This is a combination Melee move after the Riakiri Dragon has been used u can then use this to maximise damage done after the punch connects if it does then Zero can then spin around stomping on the opponents foot so they cant move he engulfs his other foot with explosive water bomb or with another small Water ball kicking the opponent in the chest sending the back about 10 feet.

Name: Mizu Odori - Water Dance
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Chakra Cost: 22
Element: Water
Description: The Mizu Odori or Water Dance is only a small technique that allows Zero to call forth a large rain cloud to start a small storm. This can only be used when Zero is around a large supply of water around him to do this, Once active this jutsu lasts for 5 posts of time and can cause the opponent to lose their ability to use high speeds without falling over or slipping up and making a mistake, Zero gains teh better ability to fight in the rain when using lightning jutsu on an opponent, This jutsu can be avoided with the Act of Water Surface Walking technique it is very easy to avoid but can be very helpful to Zero when needed.

Name: Kawarimno no jutsu
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Chakra Cost: None
Element: none
Chakra Cost: 7
Description: The user quickly replaces himself with another object, such as a plant or an animal (usually a section of log). This technique usually confuses the attacker and leaves them open to a countertype-attack.

Name: Act of Water Surface Walking
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Chakra Cost: None
Chakra Cost: 9
Element: none
Description: A variation on the Kinobori no Waza (Act of Tree Climbing), the art of water surface walking allows a person to walk on water as if it was a solid surface.

Name: Kai [Release]
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Chakra Cost: None
Chakra Cost: 5
Element: none
Description: This is a technique that allows the user to avoid the effects of an Illusion.

Jutsu Name: Act of Tree Climbing
Rank: E
Chakra Cost: 5
Element: None
Description: Kinobori no Waza, the art of tree climbing serves a dual purpose. Taking part in Kinobori Shugyou (Tree Climbing Training) helps a ninja learn how to focus their chakra. It also teaches the ninja how to run up trees and walk on vertical walls. The training helps the ninja learn how to focus just the right amount of chakra to a particular part of their body. The amount needed to climb is small but it must be precise. The feet are regarded as the hardest location to master chakra focusing. So by gaining the art of this skill, the ninja will have any jutsu available (theoretically) because they will be able to focus their chakra as needed.

Name: Explosion Tag: Activate
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Chakra Cost: 5
Element: N/A
Description: The user will activate an explosion tag. Normally, the tag will be placed by them, so they know where it is and can easily activate it.

Name:Bunshin no Jutsu - Clone Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementry
Chakra Cost: 6
Element: -
Description: Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. The Bunshin technique creates a copy of the ninja without substance. The copy resembles the ninja in every way. This clone can function as a distraction or as means to confuse one's opponent. As soon the Bunshin gets attacked or comes into contact with an opponent, it will disperse.

Name: Henge no Jutsu - Transformation Technique
Rank: E
Type: Supplementary
Chakra Cost: 12
Element: -
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.

History and RP Sample

History:

Child Hood: Zero was born over a millennia ago his age is unknown he was a very shy child when he was born he was infected with the Vampire’s Curse given to him the very day he was born into the Kiryu family line, the Kiryu family is a hidden family now extinct that resided inside Onigakure no Sato a very, very long time ago his main family consisted of his mother Miranda, his father Kirra, his brother Kikarin and his very young and little sister Julietta, the family was small but very powerful, Zero’s mother was a highly skilled medical ninja and yet his father was an S ranked Akatsuki member.

Time Of Escape: At this time Zero was about 16 years old, Zero’s father was rarely home and if he was he was very cautious of Zero knowing that Zero was one of his creations that he didn’t want to have brought into this life seeing as Zero has the full and most dangerous volume of the curse inside of him, knowing this his father would treat Zero horribly even trying to make Zero kill himself to get away but yet Zero never gave in to the punishment and torture that his father put him through.

Zero being the strongest of his entire family fought against his father in a fight to the death Zero was fatally wounded and his father had been killed, Zero had killed his father in the match by activating his bloodline technique and tearing his father apart in a crazed blood rage, Zero figured his mother would have been devastated by this fight so her took off but he left a note for his sister who was 11 years of age the note read.

“Dear little sister:
I am leaving the village due to my fight with father he was killed in the fight and I have been wounded bad I am going to seek help in the closest village, city, or town I come across I will come back for you and take you with me to start a new life in Konohagakure no Sato, if you want to you can stay with mum and Kikarin but I'm going to start a newer life inside Konohagakure I want you to come with my on this trip you’re my little sister and I love you, I wanted to show you the world since without father you wouldn’t be able to see it, I want to bring you along on my trip to get you to a safe city where u can be happy and marry a young ninja and spend your life with, I just want you to be happy inside a more safer and happy in a big city I’ve heard so much that its so beautiful and that its got so many nice people and that the Hokage is really good to his people I just want you to live a better life…instead of being stuck in the house cleaning, cooking, washing and being treated like crap all day by mother, I hate seeing you cooped up in that house I am going to come back and take you to Konohagakure…please come with me when I come back…I know you love it there but I'm worried about you marrying the person who would only use you for entertainment…and I wont have that…please come with me…bye sis…I love you so much…I will be back…soon”

Zero left the message on her bed and walked out kissing her on the cheek and telling her she has a present on her bed, Zero opened the door and walked outside he heard her scream and felt her dive into his back she was bursting into tears and begging him not to leave and that their mother would forgive him, Zero turned around and hugged her, her head in his chest, she was crying Zero was holing her tightly and like a brother should he held onto her not letting go, her tears were almost pouring out he began to speak.

“Julietta…I’m leaving to explore this world without father for once…I'm going to Konohagakure no Sato…I want you to come with me to Konoha…start a new life over there, marry a nice person, stop being a slave and doing all the house work…come with me”

Julietta took his words so much to her heart she felt like she would be alone if he left her there she tried to speak but her voice was covered in tears and words that couldn’t be spoken through her tears, she was holding him crying into his chest shaking her head at him leaving she was begging him to stay.

“Julietta…I cannot stay here…things would only get worse for you here if I stayed I cant put you in this danger the Akatsuki will come looking for me after they hear that I killed father they would come here and kill you all if I were here and I cant put u or mother or brother in that danger I'm going to get help for all of you inside Konohagakure I am coming back soon okay I wont let you live alone in this world without me sister”

Julietta was having so much trouble about her brother going away she knew he wouldn’t come back and see her so she stopped crying and turned around she walked back into the house but before she could Zero grabbed her and kissed her forehead like he use to when she was very little he made her a promise.

“Julietta…I will come back for you…never forget my promise”

Leaving Oni no Kuni: At the age 16 Zero had left his only home and wondered around the world he stopped in so many cities and villages, he saw a lot of good and bad things on his journeys he took a diary with him and a sketch book and drew all the beautiful things that he had seen on his trip, a few months later he reached Konohagakure no Sato the Village Hidden In The Leave’s, Zero went to walk in the front gate but was stopped by two ninja’s on his approach they spoke to him.

“What is your business here traveller we don't have time for lies we have work to do so speak up before we decide to remove you from this area”

Zero wasn’t in the mood to talk he needed to see the Hokage and needed to see him now about a matter of privacy and importance.

“I will ask you to stand aside I require your lord Hokage’s assistance to save my family I am in dire need I have an 11 year old little sister who is trapped with a family in danger of being hunted by the Akatsuki I need your help aswell for I have murdered my father…he tried to kill me so I attacked him back…he was an Akatsuki member and I fear that they will come after my family I need your help to save them…please you must help me”

Zero was taken immediately to the Hokage's office and talked to him about what had happened.

“Lord Hokage I beg you for your assistance I need you to help me save my little sister and my family my father was an Akatsuki member and we had a fight I accidentally killed him and I fear that they will go after my family I don't want to lose my family I beg of you please save my family I'm not strong enough to fight them I don't know much jutsu I only managed to survive because I'm the only person fully infected with the Kiryu vampire curse please help them"

The lord Hokage was shocked to hear that he has the Vampires curse from the Kiryu clan but to have the full power of it and use it at such a young age he was amazed to still see the boy alive and not insane.

“I will do everything in my power to help save your family and for you to be one of the Kiryu clan…inside my village…at this time…I do recommend u keep your vampiric tendencies gone otherwise I will have to have you killed for murder inside my city if you are going to do this go to another city and feed there I will have no people being infected with your curse inside my city…do you understand this, boy”

The Hokage's words were powerful and fearful Zero knew what would happen if he fed off one of these people and he knew the punishment would be death for him.

“Lord Hokage I wont feed of your townspeople but in order to not have this happen I need a supply of blood and it is hard to travel when in need of food I would like to ask to have a small amount from the hospital every now and then so I don't end up feeding off of the lovely people in your city I have my urges to feed off people but it is easy to sustain with blood packs I only wish you to save my family”

Zero had no idea how to fight the Akatsuki by himself he only knew basic jutsu and it wasn’t enough to save him in a fight he was only young and had no idea how he would beat an Akatsuki member without going blood drunk with the curse, there wasn’t time to train though he needed to get back to his family and save them from the Akatsuki.

The Return To Save Ones Family: Zero took the time to train as Anbu squads were sent to Oni no Kuni to retrieve the family they didn’t have any luck for when they got there the house was burning and had a younger looking lady and a young boy next to her but there was no little girl to be seen they thought the worst of it and sent the news back to Konohagakure and told the Hokage that they found the body of a young women and a teenaged boy but no little girl and that she could possibly have been taken in as the newest member of the Akatsuki, the message read.

“Lord Hokage:

We have bad news the mother and son seem to have been killed and the house burned down but there is no sign of the girl anywhere no footsteps leading off even we fear that she has been taken by the Akatsuki and is being either tortured or brain washed by them as we speak we are heading out to try and find her though there was a small note reading from her that said she has gone to a hiding place that her brother Zero knows he will need to be sent here to help us retrieve her back to the city for safe and possibly intensive care there was a small blood trial leading into a forest clearing we are currently following it and it seems that she could have gone this way the blood is in some large amounts we fear she is mortally wounded and we will need a squad of medically trained ninja to help us if she is badly injured”

The Hokage told Zero of the bad news and Zero dropped to the ground his face became very cold and his eyes became cold and dark looking he stood up and walked out of the office, a little while later he reached the gates of Konohagakure and was confronted by the chuunin yet again but this time Zero had nothing to say they had tried to stop him leaving but yet Zero grabbed them both around the throat and bashed their head together throwing them to the side continuing to walk out the gates and head to Oni no Kuni.

The Trip Back Home…The long hard journey Zero spent days travelling to his home town he came to his house and met a few Anbu members and was told about the letter and how there was a small trail of blood leading into the forest, Zero became worried and ran off following every trace of blood with the Vampires curse active to help him follow the tail he took lefts, rights and even travelled through the tree tops along the hidden path only they know of.

Zero travelled tracing the blood as he came to a small cavern indent on the ground after jumping from the tree and free falling into the water coming up inside the cavern the Anbu followed afterwards they came up to see Zero hugging her in his arms she had bled to death and died of the cold, Zero’s eyes were cold and inhumane he picked up her body and cleaned her off crying while he was doing it, Zero could never forgive himself and took her body to her favourite place on the edge of the lake under the only cherry blossom tree at the lake.

Zero buried her infront of it the blossoms falling onto her grave he stood there and made the only vow he would make for a very long time to come, he got on his knees and took out a kunai slicing down his arm and put the clan curse mark on her grave painted in his blood leaving its stain on her grave so that all know it’s the Kiryu’s family daughter’s grave disturb it and dies.

The Return To Konohagakure With The Lost Heart: Zero went back to Konohagakure with the Anbu after seeing his sisters dead body, cold and lifeless, Zero never spoke a word on the long trip back the Anbu were concerned that his curse would take effect and he would attack them resorting to the last member of the Kiryu clan to die, Zero kept silent his eyes cold and lifeless his mind torn apart and his anger for the Akatsuki grew higher and higher every passing second his body felt more and more powerful he could feel the rage passing through him but all of a sudden one of the Anbu grabbed Zero’s arm, Zero swung around his eyes still lifeless he had a kunai up to the Anbu’s neck ready to slice it open the other Anbu prepared themselves for a fight if he cut open the man’s neck, the Anbu holding onto Zero let him go and Zero drew his blade back from the man’s neck, the Anbu was actually scared of dying at that time but they knew Zero would have been able to put up at least some fight in him, they took him back to Konohagakure and told the Hokage of what happened to the family and on the trip back, the Hokage was slightly furious at Zero for putting a knife to one of his ninja’s necks but yet he knew that Zero would have done much worse if the mark was active.

Starting The Academy: Zero was the oldest in the academy he was 17 by this time he started the academy and joined the Konohagakure ninja school he was the oldest so far in his class but yet he only seemed to look about 18-19 years old but he was only 17, Zero took his time in the academy he passed through it with extreme ease he had no problems with the people although some were frightened by his curse if he activated it but he had it all under control, Zero stayed alone he had no place to live and had no where to stay but while in the academy he met a young girl 15 years of age named Yuuki she was sweet, innocent, kind, shy and loving, Zero stared to think of her a fair bit he was distracted by her a lot he found her a very beautiful girl but yet when he thought about her all he could think was feeding on her blood from her neck he tried to shake the thoughts out but she approached him and whispered her name in his ear while he was sitting down and she told him to meet her after class.

Zero took her offer and met her after class alone in the shower rooms he was worried that she was going to try something he stood in the middle of the room only to hear the door close and lock behind him, Yuuki came up behind him and started to whisper in his ear.

“Mmmmm…so you’re the new boy…the one from the Kiryu clan…sounds…good…I brought you here so…you can bite me and give me the curse…so you can command me…your a slave…so…dig in”

Zero was amazed to hear her just offering her blood to him, letting him infect her with the virus was just so amazing to hear, Zero turned around and looked at her, she had her neck leant to the side just offering her blood to him, Zero drew out his teeth and bit into her neck, Yuuki let out a small yelp that was quiet but hearable to him, Zero began to feed from her blood and drink it the curse started to appear on her but Zero pulled of as the blood felt weird to taste, it tasted like more of a sensitive and a very different tasting blood than normal, her blood tasted like it was very rare and very unique to anyone else but he didn’t know why.

A little while later Zero passed the exams and graduated into the rank of Genin.

Genin Arc The Girl Named Yuuki: Awhile after graduating the academy Zero started to stay with Yuuki the girl he met and bit into in the academy, he started to live with her, ever since the academy they were almost best of friends you could even say lovers she was his most treasured lover but yet she was the one who gave him a home to live in.

Zero being a vampire needed blood and yet he would only feed of humans for animal blood was tainted, Yuuki being his almost slave would have him drink her blood, his time as a genin was actually extremely short, Zero spent his time as a genin yes but he had pure talent and power he was taken in as the Kiryu Family Leader since the rest of his family were dead and he is the only Survivor of the entire clan that is known of so far that is alive others are unknown as to their whereabouts in this world.

Zero fed off of Yuuki for a very long time she was always strong the next day and Zero would give her time to regain her blood before feeding again he took perfect care of her not taking to much but leaving enough to keep her in good health, Zero spent every day training out in the fields of Konohagakure to perfect his jutsu, he became a master of his fire and lightning element he was able to be able to use it to fuse them together into a plasmic form through mastery he was even able to use them both together in one attack.

Rp Sample: Amazigh awoke one day in a hospital after he had been in a mugging out side the city walls by rouge ninja’s a beautiful nurse about the age of 21 walked in and sat on Amazigh’s bed telling him that his sword and his gear had been stolen and that he was lucky to be alive and that he had lost so much blood they thought he was dead Amazigh was not impressed to hear that his stuff had been stolen he got out of bed and stumbled to the door telling the nurse that he was fine even though he was clearly in so much pain that his eye’s started to water the nurse helped him back to his bed telling him that the other Jounin of Konoha were out looking for the attackers and if the find his gear they will bring it back to him “Amazigh get back in your bed before you kill your self” the nurse had said to Amazigh “Women I have no time to wait my sword is like my child I must care for it and right now I need to get her back” Amazigh was not impressed by the nurse’s words he tried to make another break for the door but this time he collapsed onto the ground because his left knee had been fractured by a massive chunk of wood “Amazigh your body needs more time to heal unless you want to be a paralysed ninja and be no good to Konoha keep trying to run away but if you do this again I wont help you” the nurse had walked over to Amazigh and helped him to his feet taking him back to bed she had helped him onto the bed but she feel right on top of him her face to his he looked into her beautiful blue eye’s and he leaned his head up to catch her in a kiss the broke it off once another nurse had entered the room to check on how he was going the other nurse had seen her kissing Amazigh even though a staff and patient relationships weren’t allowed to happen she didn’t care after the other nurse had left again the pretty young nurse had given her name to him it was Rain Mikamura she was 21 and beautiful she kissed him again winked and left his room Amazigh was surprised to see that even after his brutal attack he was still able to pick up cute girls even though he had a scare running from the top of his left eye down to the bottom of it he had realised that his eye was cut but not his eyeball it was only the skin that was cut so he was safe as she left he began to become bored so he struggled out of his bed walked over to the closet and fell over the young nurse had seen him collapse again but she was sympathetic towards him “Amazigh are you okay?” she ran over to him helping him up yet again “thank…you……I was having trouble…getting dressed could you…help me please I’m hopeless……at the moment could you help…me?” Amazigh wasn’t trying to get the nurse to undress him he was in serious need of medical attention due to his injuries “thank you rain I appreciate your help so much but I need a drink and if you have time would you like to come for one or two with me Rain will you come drink with me” Amazigh had always drunk alone since he was the proper age but know that he had found a girl friend to chat with he was happy again “Sure why not I get off work in about 10 minutes, can you lay here for that time Amazigh?” “Sure I can I can wait for a pretty face to come get me any day” Amazigh was a smoothie when it came to talking to a girl even though he had no idea what they were like he knew what to say just by looking at them. 10 minutes was up and Rain had come back for Amazigh but she found him on the window seel she snuck up behind him and yelled BOO! At him he fell out the window falling 3 stories to the ground he hit the ground leaving a massive bloody mess on the floor she had just killed Amazigh but in an instant he appeared behind her scaring her making her fall out the window she had no ninja techniques to save herself Amazigh leapt out the window grabbing her and using the Advanced Body Flicker Technique to take them both to the ground safely he had her in his arms she was light and skinny framed he put her down and she brushed herself off grabbing his arm and taking him for a walk back to her house she needed to change from her medical outfit and into her casual one “Amazigh why did you scare me out the window today?” Rain was curios as to why he did it “because you did it to me making me fall to my death Rain you killed me haha nah I was playing around but hey I saved you didn’t I” “yes but did you have to almost kill me while you had fun and how does this dress look is it okay” Rain was wearing a red flower dress like an Akatsuki wore but it had a blue body not a black body Amazigh looked like he had been hit with a bat his jaw dropped when he saw Rain standing there looking like an angel itself “Holy hell Rain you are one smokin babe so where to Rain your choice” Amazigh was wearing his uniform with the his emblem on it Rain didn’t like it much because it looked to much like the Akatsuki robes but only with his emblem on it he had a demon face on both his shoulders and a wolf crest on the front with the dunes behind the wolf signifying that he is the Desert Wolf. Amazigh and Rain left for the restaurant on their way there they saw a young boy being beaten up by adults because he had taken a loaf of bread “OI you there scum pickin on that kid leave him alone or I’ll bust your heads in” Amazigh was enraged to see people treating a kid like that “WHAT are you gonna do about it you ninja scum hu bring that’s what I thought you cant fight because you don’t wanna get messy for your little date now run along and you won’t get hurt” the adult said in a tone that signified that he was in the mood to kill anyone who got in his way “that’s it Rain can I bust some heads together we’ll come back for them later but this kid needs help look at him” Amazigh asked Rain while he cracked his knuckles “I thought I told you to move on you dirty ninja trash now beat it before we BEAT YOU AND YOU LITTLE LADIE FRIEND” Amazigh was outraged he was so mad his chakra was becoming visible around his hands “YOU SCUM ARE GOING TO PAY!! FOR THAT” Amazigh was furious first they beat up a child then they insult his girl that was the last straw he used his Advanced Body Flick Jutsu to appear in between the 2 men and slammed the man that had threatened Rain head first into the wall knocking him out cold while he hit the other one with a Dolphin Strike jutsu smashing him around at an incredible speed putting the man onto the floor bleeding from the face Amazigh had found out that these men had taken his sword so he grabbed to man slammed him against the wall yelling at him “WHERE IS MY SWORD YOU PIECE OF CRAP Konoha TRASH………WHERE IS MY SWORD!!” Amazigh was crazed with rage as the little kid ran to Rain she checked him out for any severe damage he only had light bruising from the punches “Amazigh let him go please don’t kill him we have a date I don’t want you to go to jail or become a missing ninja please let him go” “As you wish Rain…SCUM never return inside this city again or I will kill you and your boss now where is my sword tell me or lose a finger or worse your life” “Alright I’ll tell you just please don’t kill me your…your sword is just around the corner I will go get it just don’t kill me please” “You had better hope to your god that your not lying about my sword or so help me I will KILL YOU UNDERSTAND” the man nodded and ran around the corner and retrieved Amazigh’s blade the Mithrodin he had returned with it as promised and he had taken his friend back to their hide-out “Kid you alright how is he Rain any severe damage or is he okay?” “Well I don’t see any bad bruises on the boy we must have only been a few seconds away when it started” “boy tell me why they were hurting you” Amazigh was concerned that the boy had killed a man of their possie and was now on their hit list “I took a loaf of bread from them and then they started to attack me I'm so glad you helped me sir I will go home now” “alright boy be careful where you walk okay kid’o” “sure thing mister hey I love your jacket it looks like the Desert Wolf’s ja…are you the Desert Wolf?” “That’s right kid the Desert Wolf saved your hide I'm new and improved kid now hurry home go on skat” Amazigh had his sword back helped out a kid and fought for his honour for his girl he made a big impression on Rain now she had hearts in her eye’s now she loved him all he did was sighed took her arm and went to dinner without even a scratch on him with his sword by his side and his girl close he had won the day. Time came and went Rain and him had a beautiful dinner and went to a hotel and a few days later got married and had a baby girl Amazigh was now a father to his own clan to come.

This Is The Story Of The Desert Wolf’s Love To A Medical Ninja.

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Now THAT is extreme detail my friend.
So easily approvable...
Except I don't know whether Wanderer is still around...

Ok, Zero asked me to post so here it is.

All in all, I like the Idea, thought I think it's more suited for a VP RP than a Ninja RP, also, you might want to be a bit more Original, alot of what you've done came from Vampire Knight, thought this can be fixed realy easy, to conclude, You've got a good idea here, just needs a bit polishing in the originality department, but just a little bit, like change his name and such. Looking forward to RPing with you ^_^ keep it up.

Yet again, I see no chakra costs. Please read the rules people, they are there for a reason. Also, Wandering Ninja can only be obtained through RP atm. Explain your Blood techniques more thuroughly, for it is basic fact that we cannot lose vast amounts of blood without dying. You need to explain if this is your blood, and/or a Kekkei Genkai of yours with much more detail as to why you can use blood for jutsu. Fix that, and I'll take a more thurough look at this app.

Alright i took out the main of my jutsu and fixed my history for Genin arc only

u cant have 3 elements as a Genin fix that

Alright its Suiton, Raiton no fire jutsu and left and he doesnt have 3 elements anymore sorry about that i forgot to change it my bad

Lark wrote:

u cant have 3 elements as a Genin fix that

Half Correct
You can have 3 if you train for them.
And depending on the training depends on how high the level of jutsu you can use.
Minoichi - 3 - Wind, Fire, Lightning - Wind = Up to B Rank - Fire & Lightning = Up to S.

eh i'll trian for it later on though once he gets higher rank i just need Megz to check now since i fixed wht she asked ^^

mino... I'm just gonna say you fail... the standards are for starting gennin... gennin are hardly gennin level when they go into the chunin exams and beyond >> and actually when you start you only have access to ONE element that is stronger than the others unless you have some way that was extensive training >>

Or unless your born with it.
And Yes, I do fail.

So i cant have 2 elements?

Alright i took away the Chakra drain but gave him an increased speed and strength on top of what he already has but it costs him 150 chakra and by the end of the fight he can use probably 1 shushin then pass out for 3 days plus i fixed up the jutsu to have a precise amount of chakra cost added all up to 450 points ^^

With everything cleared up over PM and such, I find this character application approved.