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Onyx
Posts : 14 Joined : 2010-03-18
Ninja Profile Chakra: (260/260) Village: Konohagakure no Sato Primary Element: Lightning
| Subject: Onyx Tenshi (ready for approval) Thu Mar 18, 2010 11:20 pm | |
| Name: Onyx Tenshi Age: 19 Gender: Male Clan: Tenshi
Looks: Onyx is a medium build ninja, looking more beast than man he stands 6'5" and weighs 90kg. His dark features meld in with shadows making him often at times hard to spot even when hes not hiding. He has dark red eyes that seem to have seen countless battles, the rest of his face is covered by a matte black mask that doesn't reflect light. He wears a black cloak covering him from head to toe, the coat also seems not to reflect light. Under his outfit his skin has become pale from lack of sunlight, not liking this Onyx covered his body in tattoos almost covering every inch of skin. The tattoos start from his mid chest and symmetrically spread across his body.
Personality: Betraying his appearance Onyx has a very light heart but rarely shows it. He chooses his words carefully before speaking, making him rather quite in conversations. Regarding all life as equal Onyx will not kill an opponent unless forced to. When in battle Onyx never loses his temper, always keeping a cool head his mind and body are always 100% focused on his opponent and surroundings. Outside from battle the few times Onyx has lost his temper he rambles sentences very fast but will always compose himself to stop and think.
Basic Clan Information
Kekkei Genkai: Ranpu (light) - due to clan it is also known as 'Holy Light'. Description: This kekkei genkai is based in its wielders eyes, for a few moments it will seem the user has lost their pupil and iris. It allows the user to emit a blinding light from their eyes that encases the users body. Special Effect: This makes the user able to blind all opponents looking towards self. The Kekkei Genkai has stages, eventually making the light actually burn all individuals in a radius. It also gives the user the passive ability to see how someone is truly feeling. Link: none
Skill and Rank Information
Village: Konohagakure Rank:Jounin
Special Characteristics: Tattoo clones. Special Effects: The tattoos that cover Onyx's body give him the ability to create a single shadow clone without the use of hand seals.
Elements: Fuuton (wind), Ration (Electric). Combo: Lightning Clouds. Summons lighting clouds with devastating lightning attacks.
Skills Specialties: Taijutsu and Ninjutsu
Jutsu
Name: Dynamic Entry Rank: D Type: Taijutsu Element:none Description: He will start by launching a kunai at his opponent to distract them. Then he will quickly approach from the blind spot and attack.
Jutsu
Name: Lighting Hammer Rank: B Type: Ninjutsu/Taijutsu Element: Ration (electric) Description: Onyx charges his fist like a ball of electricity. He dashes forwards swinging his arm down in hammer motion smashing opponent with a heavy lighting fist. This move is used mostly to knock out or finish an opponent.
Jutsu
Name: Frenzy Rank: A Type: Ninjutsu Element: Ration (electric) and Fuuton (wind) Description: Using both elements to jolt Onyx forwards at an intense speed, fueling both his wind and lighting making a devastating unblockable attack on his opponent.
Jutsu
Name: Lightning Cloud Rank: B Type: Ninjutsu Element: Ration (electric) and Fuuton (wind) Description: Summons lighting clouds with devastating lightning bolts
Jutsu
Name: Ranpu (Holy Light) Rank: B Type: Ninjutsu Element: kekkei genkai Description: Covers body in an intense light. All opponents looking towards the body of the individual cannot see. The light is only active for a few seconds. Gives the wielder an attack opportunity or escape opportunity.
History and RP Sample
History:
-Unlocking His Kekkei Genkai-
Born and raised in Konohagakure Onyx was brought up well. Having no siblings Onyx always envied other families but would never show it. Aspiring to be a great ninja Onyx trained himself in his early youth in the ways of taijutsu, brutally mastering his body. Once joining the ninja academy he showed great potential, easily completing anything he put his mind to. The academy further increased Onyx's skills, upon graduating Onyx couldn't wait to tell his parents of his success. Before Onyx could leave the academy however he was confronted by his teacher, upon learning the news of his fathers death he cried out to the heavens in pain. Months later Onyx had become sloppy and slack on his missions. His sensei became worried and told him to take the next few mission off to rest. During this time he tended to his widowed mother and spent most of his time alone thinking. On an early afternoon Onyx was walking home after gathering ingredients from the store for his mother when he heard two men having a discussion and his fathers name appear in their conversation. Onyx made his way closer keeping out of sight and listening to the men, one said, "It's a shame what happened to him, he didn't deserve that. The Tenshi clan must be shattered. How did you hear about this?" The other man replied, "Heard it from a guy who heard it from a guy, you know...anyway apparently it was some argument between the Tenshi and Uchiha that sparked into this guys death. No one officially knows who did it but apparently some guy named Aguri in the west side of the village knows all about it." Onyx dropped the bag of ingredients and raced to the west kunai in hand. After asking for what must of seemed hours he found his lead, Aguri's house. Inside Aguris's house he found a note, 'Sweety, I'm out to get some fire wood. Be back soon." Just outside the west gates Onyx found his man. After tying him to a tree and interrogating him for an hour he got the information he wanted, fueled by hatred he stabbed the man in the heart and left him there in the woods. He had a new target now but this would be harder, it was a chuunin ninja named Hoshiko Uchiha. Onyx spent the next part of the day stalking Hoshiko, waiting for a moment where he could confront his fathers killer. Finally his moment came, striking his opponent unprepared and knocking him out cold he took the body to an abandoned house in the far outskirts of the village. When Hoshiko came to he found himself tied down to a chair and Onyx patiently standing in front of him feet away. Onyx," Why did you do it?" "Do what?" he replied uneasy "Kill my father" "I was told to by my elder, I swear." "Why, Why did they want him dead?" Onyx said faintly holding his composure. "Something about something your father said" "SO THEY KILLED HIM?" Onyx bursted "He was saying some pretty convicting things about our family. They wanted him quite." "THAT GIVES THEM NO RIGHT!" "I'm sorry I'm sorry, It wasn't personal." Onyx felt the rage inside him fester, he wanted to tear this guy apart where he sat. He walked towards him, kunai in hand. "What are you doing?" Hoshiko said faintly. Onyx ignored him, making his way behind the chair. Hoshiko felt the rope tighten around his entire body and braced for the afterlife, and then the ropes fell away to his feet. "You can go now. What you did was wrong but I forgive you." Onyx's voice came from behind. Without words Hoshiko got to his feet and ran for freedom. Onyx knew letting him go was the right choice, taking a life for a life was wrong. He felt bad for letting his anger get the better of him killing that man outside of the village. Suddenly Onyx felt a pain in his head, it was an intense sensation hammer the inside of his head. He fell to his knees holding the back of his head, then there was darkness. He woke up in his bed at home, his mother at his side. "Good morning, I'm very proud of you." Still dazed from sleep he blinked to try and wake himself up. Onyx replied," What are you talking about mother?" "Honey, you have unlocked your kekkei genkai. I'm so proud of you." "How....? What..?" "Our bloodline holds a trait unlocked by ultimate forgiveness. We don't pass down this information because you must sincerely forgive another human, it is something you must discover on you own like you have. Well done."
-Chuunin Missions-
With his new found power Onyx was the top of his squad. Constantly able to save them from danger and capture valued targets easily. Although he found he lacked in actual fighting ability compared to his members, now standing at 6'5" he was an easy target for enemies. He consulted his sensei who told him his best tactic would be stealth. Training himself heavily in the art of stealth Onyx become excellent at surprise attack Taijutsu and Ninjutsu art forms. During his travels he stumbled upon a tailor in a remote location, asking the tailor why he was so separated from society the tailor replied it was because he had discovered a unique material that didn't reflect light. Taking immediate advantage of this find Onyx asked if he would fashion a entire outfit for him made out of this material, the tailor obliged and made it for him that afternoon. Onyx has worn the outfit ever since making him virtually invisible in dark locations without even trying. Onyx has since been promoted to Jounin and carries numerous recon mission for the leaf, some of which Anbu have not been able to complete.
RP: Onyx waited quietly in the shadows, it was a full moon tonight but that didn't matter as light didn't bend off his clothing. The guard was about 5 full steps away, Onyx redid the math in his head to confirm the distance. The guard heard the rustle and turned around to see. Onyx had no time to mess around, another patrol might be coming this way soon. Onyx lunged from the shadows stepping up to the guard Onyx drew the guards own sword plunging it deep into the guards chest. No noise..Good. Onyx made his way further into the castle. Three guards to the left. Making his way as far as he could unnoticed Onyx planned the attack in his mind. Swiftly moving forward he had a sudden regret, there was a fourth guard... not good. Rethinking the attack just in time 1,2,3...4 all down, good no noise. As he made his way closer to the center of the castle he could feel the heat tinge at his skin. What are they doing in here? No time for questions, orders are orders. Make your way to the center of the castle and eliminate the head. | |
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Posts : 111 Joined : 2010-04-22 Age : 31 Location : ....Mom's house o.O
Ninja Profile Chakra: (900/900) Village: Kumogakure no Sato Primary Element: Fire
| Subject: Re: Onyx Tenshi (ready for approval) Wed Aug 04, 2010 8:16 pm | |
| Few issues, otherwise it's professional . .; Typo's >--- Raiton, Suiton. Thanks <3
Clan name, and rank? If you don't have one, please make one or save the kekkei genkai for later. \=
History is a lot like an RP sample, but thats okay. Bump meh on PM when you're ready ;D | |
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