Akira Amizaru -Finite!-

Basic Character Information:
Name: Amizaru; Akira
Age: 15
Gender: Male
Clan: Amizaru

Looks: Unlike any Amizaru of his generation, he has a great set of a total of 'Six' Demon-like wings. Unlike any Amizaru, he has the ability to manipulate his Fuuinjutsu to his pleasing, using this, his hair and nails change color along with his wings, to the temperature of his mood, down to the power he uses along with it. With this ability of being immortal, he has a seal on the heart region of his chest, above it only the slightest bit. A small symbol of '700' is on the right side of his chest, showing the number of years he can live up to with the ability of his. Immortality, and great amounts of chakra allow him to use techniques more functionally, making him change form all too easily.

On his usual wears, he wears a light indigo jacket that reaches down to his knees, and a collar that reaches to his ears. This allows him alot of access to almost anywhere. On his neck, he embraces a small ox-head silver necklace, hiding the seal on his chest with just a simple motion of his chakra. His hair is mostly just a blond-like color, while his eyes are simply just a version of purple or a light blue.

On some forms of praying, he wears a long purple jacket on his torso, while wearing several crosses on his neck, arms, and ears. These earrings, and other jewelery are mostly a nice shade of gold and silver, each representing the god they pray to to keep their immortality. This type of silver is specially made for the purpose of praying to the god.

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Personality: Akira is the sort of person to be extremely cautious and think through a plan before actually doing it. He does this to actually make up his shy kind of nature, which overcomes his types of emotions over when he is in great peril, or just afraid of something. With that in mind, as shown below, his 'Unrelenting Nature' kicks in and reacts to any sort of danger that comes near him. It does take some chakra, but just lets his emotions calm down on the second of the nature calming down to nothing. This gives him time to think about what he did and such.

After maybe, an Intense experience, Akira likes to settle down in his room or maybe just travel alone to think in his own thoughts. He is Extremely indepentent when he thinks to himself. When he starts thinking on something, he has to finish it or he won't be all too focused when he is on missions. When he likes to settle down in his room though, he likes to read maybe novels, books, or other types of literature to his liking. He eventually just loves to play the violin, he has perfected his playing ever since he was a small boy. Even though that was over maybe 100 years ago.


Skill and Rank Information
Village: Konohagakure no Sato
Rank: Genin

Special Characteristics: Wings.
Special Effects: Ability to Fly w/ chakra.

Elements: Katon[Fire Release], Raiton[Lightning Release].
Skills Specialties:

Primary: Weaponry.
Secondary: Ninjutsu.

History and RP Sample
History:



Birth:

After being born in the Shichiyougakure no Sato hospital, he had his seals placed on the center most part of his chest, and the top of his forehead. Even though it was an Amizaru tradition, it was a special mote of seal, used in joyous times, to make sure no one was left out of happiness. With the seal, it had an eight-trigram state with the center of it being the symbol of 'Libra', or the all knowing. It was good for him to use, very good. After that sealing, his mother, May, picked him up in arms, wrapping him in a small cloth. She was happy that her baby was so healthy, and was all so strong to withstand that sealing. She knew at the moment her baby would be strong, very. The hospital didn't know it at the time, nor did his mother, but he had a small lump on his back, six of them in a perfect center motion to project where wings would grow. His father was an Amizaru to the stars, with over 10 Demonic wings in motion, he only have 6, so he would be close to his Father's span, all so close for his comfort. His eyes were a soft tint of crimson, with a small streak of white around the edges. It was rare, for any Amizaru to actually possess such eyes, but for now, they celebrated. And he had one trait, that hadn't been revealed, not just yet.

Childhood:

Akira was the quiet-type when he was about 2 years old. In his previous year, he had been treated well for his prosperous sealing on himself. His hair had only begun to grow over his head. It was a shade of gray and crimson, it was a perfectly shifting color. It shifted with his moods, but the only mood he had at age 2 was happy. He had been treated very well, and he hoped to of been a good student in the academy when he reached of age, but for now, he would wait for the moment of greatness. When he went off on his own, to meet his father in battle, something terrible happened. A strike of thunder, a break of wind, and his father and an enemy of the clan were fighting to the death. Thunder roared over the area as his father, Zaruko Amizaru. It was truly devastating. Lightning surged from his hands in the techniques he used, smashing through the ground like nothing was there. True power, but at a price. The enemy was about 7 feet tall, carrying a large blade at his side. He thought it was nothing at first, but when he saw his father take out a large sphere of chakra, it was going to be truly powerful. He was setting out the technique, 'Herukasai', a deadly S ranked technique that burned through everything in it's path, including the caster. But since this was an Amizaru technique, it didn't harm his father one bit. Akira just watched. The fire tore through the ground, only to fade out near him, not touching him one bit. His father's clothing was torn and shredded, nothing was to of survived that. But in a moment, the enemy, holding the blade, struck the seal holding his father to life in the chest. It was terrible. Chakra waves poured through the area, burning through every last blade of grass in the area. His father had fallen. Nothing but ash was left of him. The enemy disappeared soon after, being struck by it and winning the battle, only for his life to be taken along with his victory.

Pre-academy:

By the time he reached the age of 5, he had been practicing the art of his clan, moving around with arrows at hand, a bow at his side. He was just practicing lightly with a short bow and some button-arrows, arrows with light tips. Akira was playing around with that, shooting targets he placed on trees, and moved along with the wind, practicing the way of the bow. It was nice, being able to practice on his own. But he really wanted his father to teach him. Yet that wouldn't happen, his father was dead, and now, he had to use his own tactical alliance to take matters in his own hands. His mother always helped him with meals and training, cooking him healthy meals with the utmost perfect ingredients, it was perfect. He had a mother who cared for him, and a sister and brother who also did. Cousins of his, Saruno, Kairi, and Kuroyami Kazura were also his family, helping out with training. But for now, he would simply help them all out with whatever he could do.



Class:

At the first part of the first year at the academy, he met his siblings in the class as well. It was good to have family along side of him. Yet most of them were at their last year, so Akira would have to do his best in tactical kinds of ways to get up to them before they graduate. Utilizing his chakra in place, his skill in weaponry at hand, he was awesome at it.

Utilizing his chakra in many ways, passing the art of Transformation in only weeks of practice, with help from his cousin, Saruno Kazura. Saruno had helped him into the ways of using his chakra with the greatest of ease, showing him how to channel it and everything. He was a Kazura, yet Akira was an Amizaru. The same clan, yet different Bloodline traits, but for now, he was taught everything by his family. His mother showed him how to use the Bunshin no jutsu, and use it to perfection, since she was half-kazura, on her father's side. Yes, even his great grandfather showed him techniques from his times, over 500 years ago. Yeah, the amizaru is amazing in some specks, but also some drawback.

Graduation:

At the graduation of the Academy, he was ready, ready to pull out a good technique from scratch. Pushing his chakra from every corner of his being, he summoned up at least 5 clones, Bunshin no jutsu. His teachers placed them at passed, since they were identical at the least. Every last speck was made into perfection.

Ninja Arc

Genin:

At the time of his Genin carrier, he was moved to the Konohagakure no Sat area, where he would be appointed a perfect Sensei for him. His sensei's name was something, but he couldn't remember much. Not at all. He was simply a newly formed genin, passing his Bunshin no Jutsu test and going into the Genin state. He was truly something to pass the academy at the age of 9, and now he would begin his life as a true shinobi to the day of his death.

Nature Kicks, Hard:

At first, none of his teammates liked him, not one bit. He was something to behold, his hair was multicolored when he changed mood, and his nature finally showed itself. A small cloud formed over his head when he was sad or depressed, and grew when he was angry. At one time of his Genin carrier, he was rushed to the hospital after on a mission to protect a bridge builder from death from an A ranked missing ninja. The battle was hard, fighting for his life with every last Kunai knife, Shurican blade, and arrow he had in stock. Blood arrows, explosive arrows, death arrows, everything. Boom. The missing ninja fell with great power being struck through him, and from that moment on, he was a true shinobi to behold. His teammates finally grew to like Akira, in some ways, more than others.

Weapons:

Name: ShiseiKuro Longbow - Dark Nova Longbow -
Type: Bow
Length: 9 Feet.
String: Dragon skin Wire.
Material of Bow: Wood(Center), Dragon tooth(Far edge/outer area).
Description: Being made of such hard-to-find substances, this bow can shoot arrows over 500 yards with absolutely no problem. Only one drawback on the matter. It utilizes chakra to shoot an arrow, so the bow string can move even the slightest inch. Within the bows interior, cannot be penetrated by any mere substances with just a slight touch of the rare material, it takes a great force to break the bow. The bow can withstand along power, so can the string. This bow is definitely, hard to break.

Name: Violin
Type: Musical Intrument.
Description: A Basic, non-harmful musical intrument that can make beautiful music.

Jutsu:

FuuinJutsu

Ninjutsu

Name: Kawarami No Jutsu -Replacement Technique-
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: E
Chakra Cost: 5-10
Element: N/A
Description: This jutsu lets the user quickly switch places with another nearby object, such as a plant (normally a section of a log), an animal, or even another person within reach, leaving the opponent open to a counter-attack. Explosive tags can be attached to the replacement for an added surprise. Fundamentally, all ninja know this technique.

Name: Bunshin no Jutsu - Clone Technique -
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: E
Chakra Cost: 5-10
Element: N/A
Description: This technique creates intangible clones of the user. The clones are simply illusions and will dissipate when they come into contact with something. The illusions can be seen through by the Byakugan and the Sharingan. A person with normal eyes can also distinguish the clones from the original, since the clones will not disrupt the area around themselves with their movement (won't kick up dust, crush grass, etc.).

Name: Henge no Jutsu - Transformation Technique -
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: E
Chakra Cost: 5-10
Element: N/A
Description: This jutsu allows the user to assume the appearance of another person, animal, or object. Fundamentally, all ninja know this jutsu. The transformation jutsu is considered to be among the more difficult E-ranked techniques, since it requires constant emission of chakra while mentally maintaining the form. On top of that, the user would be, most likely, interacting with the environment. This puts much mental strain on the inexperienced ninja.

Name: Nawanuke No Jutsu - Rope Release Technique -
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: E
Chakra Cost: 5-10
Element: N/A
Description: A basic jutsu that allows a ninja to free themselves if they have been tied up.

Name: Cloak of Invisibility
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: E
Chakra Cost: 5-10
Element: N/A
Description:

Name: Fire Power -Kasairyoku-
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Chakra Cost: 40
Element: Katon[Fire Release]
Description: Utilizing the ability to use a bow and Arrow, Akira can supercharge an arrow with fire-elemental chakra, and fire at his opponent with ease. Pulling the string back on his bow, he can fire it to a range where it can pierce steel and burn something in it's path with a silent whirl of wind.

Name: Great Fireball - Dai Endan -
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Chakra Cost: 50
Element: Katon[Fire Release]
Description: Dai Endan is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire element. The ninja will first gather the fire into the mouth and then spew a giant breath of fire constantly at the opponent.

Name: Fire Release • Fireball -Katon • Endan-
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Chakra Cost: 50
Element: Katon[Fire Release]
Description: Katon • Endan is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. This jutsu allows the ninja to emit a jet of fire from the mouth.
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RP Sample:

Akira was simply walking down the darkness of the forest around him, seeing nothing but the tip of his nose. It was quiet alright, almost too quiet. A quiet shrivel of leaves brushed past his form, making a small ruffle. It was all too quiet. Not to his comfort. Two kunai roared through the trees, aiming for Akira. Slamming his left palm towards those two kunai, they were instantly flashed to the ground. A pierce in the ground was made when the two kunai hit the ground, the bow on his back slightly shining in the light breeze. The moonlit night began to light up the area, flowing through the forest with the utmost of ease. The clouds began to dissipate, showing nothing but the great blue sky. An Archer with a knack for fighting and alone time didn't like the outdoors all so much without people to make sure he was protecting. He liked being an archer to his advantage, the wind through his hair, the bow in his hands. It was like heaven.

Simply raising his left palm towards the bow on his back, a figure jumped down from the shadows of the tree it threw the kunai. "You, are an Amizaru, are you not?" the figure said, in a womanly voice. It was a female alright, to his taste, it would be something of an ease. "I am Akira Amizaru, to you..." he said in his dark kind of tone, his hair shading to a crimson and white streak, staring at the woman before him as the light began to shine over the figure. A full-ish figure and a flowing hair was the woman's form, but not, it wasn't going to be pretty.

"I am sorry if i caused you trouble, i was simply awaiting someone to arrive, an enemy..." the woman said, "I am Kazira Mashikuro..." she continued in her womanly voice. It was interesting alright, almost too much to his taste. "Well...hello Kazira..." Akira said in his dark kind of tone, placing his palms down onto his sides, "Sorry about the kunai..." he said in a sorry kind of voice.

Bump for joy. ~ xD

You have Viera and Saruno. This is technically your 3rd character and your not a mod.

Character will be left until one of his other characters die. In which case he is permitted to down rank it to genin.

Uh yeah with the new rules your allowed this character but you've got to down-rank.

...I've had to lower it down from jounin once, and had to type the entire history, what the hell can i do to keep it Chuunin?!

No exceptions, genin or AS.

Wasn't this app posted before the AS and Genin rule though?

True...

Eh, fixed it anyway...

Nothing can burst through anything, the arrow is a no.
Dragons, we will discuss that later. I beleive ket said no to Dragons.
As a bow that uses chakra, it takes chakra to use. Also, bows are usually made of wood, im guessing it can be broken with a descent force, even if the material is strong.
No to all your special characteristics. (Includes your rain/lightning thing.)
Is your clan approved?

Fire release power is not a D ranked jutsu, seems to be a High C-B ranked.
Fire Power, im curious as to how it can pierce steel? Also, you don't have the wind element. Amplifying an arrow with fire would do just that, if it got hot, it would melt the arrow. Steel is a substance that takes a HUGE heat to get through, that would be a no. ^^

An arrow that pierces darkness, interesting. Thats ok.

Eh, Immortality effect is a type of a deadly thing to actually have. Read the clan's description and find out...If even the slightest pierce in the chest, or the seal on the head, instant....BOOOOOOOOOOOM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

So i doubt that's God-modding...

Anything else...fixed...

Uhm, I still see all the special effects i said to remove, present.
Please remove all those that I stated to remove.

I removed as you said, but the Amizaru specialty is the Immortality effect, which is highly fragile, as i said a few times before...

One pierce, go BOOM!

Obvious...Read the history/Clan description in the clan section..

Provide a full description of the immortality effect.
You need also know that I have absolutly no concern for what you think is 'a good amount of negative effect' for something that is powerful. I honestly say that I don't care if you think it is 'balanced'. When I say it is to go, then it is to go. Otherwise, I will remove it for you. Period. Im no longer tolerant of your arguments on applications. Thank you.

Now, as far as I know, immortality means to never die. If your seal has something to do with never dieng through any means, age, damage on self, etc. Then please, remove it, and do not waste the time on making a better description then what you have.

If your clan is not approved, then the character cannot be approved with abilities of the clan. Thank you.

Also, your branches of the clan you currently have need to be seperately posted to allow easier acces. Thank you.

There...

Approved.