James Wilhelmi (Finished)

Basic Character Information:
Name: James Wilhelmi
Age: 17
Gender: Male
Clan: None

Looks: James is five foot ten inches tall. He has hair that is brown like bark and it is about two inches long. His eyes are grey like steel. He has a scar on his right cheek where he was cut during one of his missions as a chunin. He likes to wear blue jeans and a tan sweatshirt. He chooses to wear this because he wants to stay warm. Also he wants to be protected in case there is a sand storm that comes by. He wore boots to deal with the sand that surrounds the village. The boots also help with his traveling because the boots don't break easily. He also has his headband that wears around his head like a normal ninja.

Personality: James is very intellagent. He is always the top student in his classes. He also studied alot to try and gain more knowledge about the world then the other ninja. James was kind to everyone he was around. He was someone that always went out on a limb to help people out. He was also strong one of the stronger ninja. He used his strength to help out the villagers as best he could. When he wasn't helping out the village he was training to become a great ninja.He never lets people push him around knowning that you have to be the best to servive. With that thought he had made it through the Chunin exams to become a Jounin.

Skill and Rank Information
Village: Hidden Sand

Ninja Rank: Jounin


Special Characteristics: none

Elements: Wind, Lightning

Skills/Specialties:
Major: Ninjutsu
Sub: Taijutsu

Jutsus:
Kawarimi no Jutsu
Rank: E
Chakra cost:10
Element: N/a
Effect: Allows user to replace body with a nearby object, be it a rock, log or even another person.
Skill: Ninjutsu

Bunshin no Jutsu
Rank: E
Chakra cost:8
Element: N/a
Effect:A Normal Clone
Skill: Ninjutsu

Konoha Reppuu
Rank: D
Charka cost:20
Element: N/a
Effect: Using quickness and agility, James moves low to the ground and spinning kick to sweep his opponent off their feet.
Skill: Taijutsu

Konoha Gouriki Senpuu
Rank: B
Chakra cost:70
Element: N/a
Effect: Using quickness and agility, James charges at his target and spins his body to do a flying round house kick on those opponents within his range of attack.
Skill: Taijutsu

Henge no Jutsu
Rank: E
Chakra cost:5
Element: N/a
Effect: Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.
Skill: Ninjutsu

Kanashibari no Jutsu
Rank: D
Chakra cost:25
Element: N/a
Effect: Kanashibari no Jutsu is an advanced Ninjutsu technique used to temporarily bind an individual or animal.
Skill: Ninjutsu

Nawanuke no Jutsu
Rank: E
Chakra cost:7
Element: N/a
Effect: Nawanuke no Jutsu is a very basic Ninjutsu technique that allows a ninja to escape from rope binds.
Skill: Ninjutsu

Shunshin no Jutsu
Rank: D
Chakra cost: 30
Element: N/a
Effect: The ninja will appear and disappear in an instant, allowing them to retreat or attack suddenly.
Skill: Ninjutsu

Konoha Dai Senkou
Rank: C
Chakra cost: 40
Element: N/a
Effect: Charge opponent and unleash a powerful kick which will spin opponent away.
Skill: Taijutsu

Tsuuten Kyaku
Rank: C
Chakra cost: 45
Element: N/a
Effect: Using monstrous strength, James will raise his leg in a high arc, and bring it thundering down causing massive damage to whatever it impacts.
Skill: Taijutsu


Daitoppa
Rank: C
Chakra cost: 50
Element: Wind
Effect: Daitoppa is a Ninjutsu technique which utilizes the Wind Element. After bringing his hand to his mouth, James will blow a large blast of wind capable of leveling almost anything in its way.
Skill: Ninjutsu

Kori Shinchuu no Jutsu
Rank: C
Chakra cost: 40
Element: N/a
Effect: Kori Shinchuu no Jutsu is a Genjutsu technique which causes the target to travel around in circles. If the ninja is unable to detect the illusion very quickly, they can become exhausted mentally and physically when they are unable to reach their desired target by traveling along the same path over and over.
Post lasts: 2
Skill: Genjutsu

Kasumi Juusha no Jutsu
Rank: D
Chakra cost: 30
Element: N/a
Effect: Kasumi Juusha no Jutsu is a Genjutsu technique that creates false attackers to delay and confuse the enemy. Though these servants are not real, the actual ninja is able to remain hidden and throw kunai and shuriken matching the movements of the servants. This makes it appear the false servants are capable of attacking. When the enemy attempts to attack the servant, they will merely disrupt the servants illusion body but not destroy it.
Post lasts: 2
Skill: Genjutsu

Name: Shikon no Jutsu, "Dead Soul Technique",
Rank: B
Chakra cost: 90
Element: N/a
Effect: Using this jutsu, a person can temporarily reanimate a corpse, creating the illusion of a living person. This is achieved by causing the heart to beat once more, allowing the user to control the corpse. The reanimated corpse can serve as either a short-time ally or an effective decoy.
Skill: Ninjutsu

Name: Shikumi no Jutsu, "Death Foreseeing Technique"
Rank: A
Chakra cost: 150
Element: N/a
Effect: This jutsu is much like the Temporary Paralysis Technique, but paralyzes the foe by showing them a vision of their own gruesome death. In addition to the paralysis, the enemy is overwhelmed with fear, and will no doubt suffer severe mental stress.
Post lasts: 2
Skill: Genjutsu

Name: Kaze no Yaiba, "Blade of Wind",
Type: A-rank,
Chakra cost: 170
Element: Wind
Effect: This jutsu creates a blade of wind. The blade is said to be impossible to block because of its intangible nature, although since it uses wind a fire attack of equal strength might be able to block it. Unlike the Cutting Whirlwind Technique, this jutsu requires no tool.
Skill: Ninjutsu

5 Spark Finger Jutsu
Rank: A
Charka cost: 120
Element: lightning
Effect: The user creates a small ball of electricity on the tip of each finger that he can shoot out at any time he wishes, while the jutsu is active (gets 10 shots max before having to be re-used)
Skill: Ninjutsu

Rairyu no Tatsumaki [Lightning Dragon Tornado]
Rank: A
Chakra cost: 199
Element: Lightning
Description: Gathering electricity onto one spot, the user spins around very quickly, forming it into the likeness into a head of a dragon. Once lightning is drawn upon his body, a spinning current will occur affecting anyone or anything in the area, temporarily trapping them in a spiral-like vortex and causing great damage. This is a fairly destructive jutsu.
Skill: Ninjutsu

Zenshinfuzui [Total Paralysis]
Rank: S (Kinjutsu)
Chakra cost:400
Element: Lightning
Effect: total paralysis is where you focus enough electrical current into the central nervous system of the target's body that it makes a complete nerve shutdown, making the target limp as a rag doll. however since this requires an exact jolt and exact location it means the user has a much smaller target to aim for, and must be very close. so in other words using this on a person requires that the user make a connection with their hand and the top or backside of the target’s head
Skill: Ninjutsu

Wind Fists
Rank: B
Chakra Cost: 80
Element: Wind
Description: The user forms hand seals and make punching motions towards target. Using the wind the target will feel blows of wind hit their body and be pushed back or halted/hindered. This only works at max 10 feet away
Skill: Ninjutsu

History and RP Sample:

History/Background Story:
Pre Acadmy Arc: James was born to an average family. He had a mom and a dad plus himself and a brother. He was always quick to study and learn techinques. He liked to train to become stronger so that he would be respected. He believes that he can earn respect from becoming stronger. Unlike most ninja he prefers to use taijutsu to ninjutsu. He believes more in physical strength then in the tricks of ninjutsu and genjutsu.His dad was a jounin for the village hidden in the sand and he prefered to use taijutsu. Since James looked up to his father he decided to take the skills his father had and imporve on them. He trains with his father who knew techinques from all over the five countries. His dad had taught him the taijutsu techinques that he uses right now. He also learn some ninjutsu because he thinks that pure strength won’t be able to win a battle. His father was a wind ninja which gave James his wind element and James aquired his lighting element from his mother who was a medical ninja.

Acadmy Arc:As a student at the acadmy James studied all he could. He wanted to become the best ninja possible. He got along well with his fellow students at the acadmy. He trained on his own when he wasn't studying for his classes. This is when he learned the importance of ninjutsu compared to taijutsu. He passed all the tests with ease because of his constant studying. He ended up graduating in what seemed like no time.

Genin Arc: After gaduation James was excited to be with a team actually going on missions. His fellow teammates were nice and wanted to become great ninjas like him. Their first training session they had to see how strong each of them were. So they decided on a tournment style fight to see who was the strongest. James easily defeated the first teamate as did his other teammate. In this last round James and his teammate were equaly matched and when they both couldn't give anymore then called it a tie. James and this teamate developed a great friendship. They did alot of petty missions like retriveing cats and finding lost items. Their last mission they had to capture a theif. This is where James and his team showed their strength by capturing the theif with ease. They went to the chunin exams and easily went passed the first round. In the Secound round they fought a couple of tough teams but was able to move onto the next round with minimal injuries. On the last round of the chunin exams they had to face others in one on one combat. James and his friend on his team both made it to the last round with relative ease. In this last showdown between the friends James was able to squeeze by his friend and won but with many injuries.

Chunin Arc:James now a chunin was happy that he could go on more dangerous missions. His friend made it to chunin too. They were both on a mission to capture a rouge ninja one day. In that day they thought he was no where to be found till the last couple hours of the day they found him. The ninja attacked them and James was able to get out of the way but his friend wasn't so lucky. His friend ended up dieing by the hand of this rouge ninja. James was angered by this and quickly followed the ninja to his HQ. James had to fight his way through the HQ untill he got to the rouge ninja. When he fought the ninja it was a tough battle. James got a scar on his right cheek. James was barely able to stop the ninja with help of a sand ninja that had been in the area and noticed the trouble. After this close fight he earned the rank of jounin.

Roleplay Sample: James woke up one day and got some breakfest to get have some energy for his training. Once he was ready he went in a field where he had a dummy set up for training. Then James warmed up by streching and running a little bit. After warming up James practiced the Konoha Reppuu. He did it over and over until eventually the bottom of the dummy gave away and James needed to get a new one. He felt a little sore so he took a break to get some lunch. For lunch he had an apple, fish, and water.

Once his lunch digested he decided to practice a ninjutsu. Since ninjutsu wasn’t his favorite thing to do he had to warm up by using a easy jutsu. He first practiced the Bunshin no Jutsu to create clones. He successfully created several clones. Since he was bored he dicided to use the Kanashibari no Jutsu to bind them together. After they were bound together he used the Konoha Senpuu to make the clones disappear. Since ninjutsu makes him tired he decided to go rest to regain his energy.

James woke up and went into town to get some food for the house. Once he went to market he noticed that fish was on sale so he went and bought some since fish was not normally on sale since they were in the middle of a desert. After the fish James went and picked up some fruit and vegtables. James took the food home then went to finish training. He brought a new dummy with him since he broke the old one. He warmed up like he did before to make sure he could move quickly. Then he practiced his newest techinque the Konoha Dai Senkou and watched as the dummy spun away from him.

James was happy about the strength of his new move. It would be a good techinque to use in any upcoming battles or spars. He had done a lot again today so he decided to relax for the rest of the day. He went over to the Ramon Shop to get something to eat. While he was there he saw and old friend and went over there. “Hey, how have you been Joe?” He asked the ninja. “I have been pretty good. It is a nice day outside today. Have you been training you seem tired?” Replied Joe. “Ya I have been training. I’m getting bored of waiting for a mission so I waste some time away by training.” Said James.

“That sounds fun.” Said Joe sarcasticly. Joe wasn’t someone who liked to train a lot. He was more of a relaxed ninja compared to James. “Well Joe I just stop by to say hi. See you around.” Said James. “Ok, see you later.” Replied Joe as he continued to eat his food. James just grabed something to go and ate while he was walking through the town. He noticed that a festival was going on so he went to see what was up. At the festival James played some of the carnival games to keep him entertained then went back to his house. He was feeling tired from his eventful day so he grabed a light dinner and went to sleep.

James woke up the next morning and grabed an apple to eat and some water to drink for breakfest. This day he decided he would leave the village and come back around dinner. So he left with some money just in case he needed it. He started walking through the desert and after a while came up to a moutain. He started to climb and see how far he could go before he stoped for lunch. After a couple of hours he came to a plain and sat down for lunch. He had some fish that he bought yesterday and he also had some beans. After lunch he decided to start heading back.

It took him another couple of hours to climb back down the mountain. Then while on the way back he ran into a villager whose cart was broken. James stoped by to see what was wrong. “The wheel is broken can you help me replace it?” asked the villager. “Of course I will help.” Said James. He helped the villager replace the the wheel and the villager thanked him and was on his way. James was happy that he was able to help the villager since he likes to help people out. By the time he got home it was late in the afternoon. He decided to grab some dinner. He ate some fruit and the last of the fish. When he was done he cleaned up and brushed his teeth getting ready for bed. When he was all done he went to sleep smileing from these eventful days.

Ok,

5 more sentences of looks and 4 more for personality
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Thunder isn't an element, Lightning is.
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I see that you have a lot of cannon jutsus, please use the right descriptions. Use Leaf Ninja or Naruto Wikia.
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James wrote:

Kori Shinchuu no Jutsu
Rank: C
Chakra cost: 40
Element: N/a
Effect: Kori Shinchuu no Jutsu is a Genjutsu technique which causes the target to travel around in circles. If the ninja is unable to detect the illusion very quickly, they can become exhausted mentally and physically when they are unable to reach their desired target by traveling along the same path over and over.
Post lasts: 5
Skill: Genjutsu

Make it last 2 posts
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James wrote:

Kasumi Juusha no Jutsu
Rank: D
Chakra cost: 30
Element: N/a
Effect: Kasumi Juusha no Jutsu is a Genjutsu technique that creates false attackers to delay and confuse the enemy. Though these servants are not real, the actual ninja is able to remain hidden and throw kunai and shuriken matching the movements of the servants. This makes it appear the false servants are capable of attacking. When the enemy attempts to attack the servant, they will merely disrupt the servants illusion body but not destroy it.
Post lasts: 5
Skill: Genjutsu

Make it last 2 posts
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James wrote:

Rairyu no Tatsumaki [Lightning Dragon Tornado]
Rank: A
Chakra cost: 140
Element: Lightning
Description: Gathering electricity onto one spot, the user spins around very quickly, forming it into the likeness into a head of a dragon. Once lightning is drawn upon his body, a spinning current will occur affecting anyone or anything in the area, temporarily trapping them in a spiral-like vortex and causing great damage. This is a fairly destructive jutsu.
Skill: Ninjutsu

Make it 199 Chakra Cost
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Make your History have 600 words and your RP Sample 800. Use Microsoft Word or any other system that can count words.
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