Viera Narame [Approved by Washi]

Basic Character Information:
Name: Viera Narame
Age: 13
Gender: Female
Clan: Narame

Looks: Unlike most other Kunochi, Viera has a much fuller figure than most of her age, even though she is so young. The Crystal on her forearm indicates such emotion when she is talking to the opposite gender. It may turn blue, red, purple, pink, or any other color. It's a way of life of her to look different than anyone else.

Viera's hair is long, mostly like a blackish or a brown in her daily mood, but changes color when she is in a shy-like motion, talking to a guy, which is why she wears something to cover that hair. Maybe a hat or a type of crystal, it's hard for her to even think without something to hide her emotions.

In a shy state of mind, her hair is a long, blond sort of shade, her eyes a light purple tint. It's easy for her to look her best, since she has a fuller figure than most Kunochi of her age.



Personality: Viera, one of the Narame parts of her clan, the Kaosu. She is one of the more, special ones. Her emotions depend on who she likes or dislikes to talk to. She is extremely shy when it comes to talking to the opposite gender. When she does, it's like this, she will put her fingers together to try and distract herself, which will send her emotions to something else. At school, she likes to play her violin when the teacher is not around, or anyone else. Unlike most kunochi, she is the shy type, not falling for most guys, but when she does have a crush, she'll try to talk to the person and faint all the same.


Basic Clan Information
Kekkei Gekkei: Aneiharisaiten -Shadow Crystal Marking-
Chakra Cost: 40
Description: This particular Kekkei Genkai was founded by the Narame after finding a cavern full of a special crystal, known as 'Narusu', dangerous to the Kazura bloodline. These crystals were then formed to the Narame bloodline, through endless generations of the clan, many of them were prosperous in finding ways of their power over crystallization of chakra, in different shapes and forms of marking themselves with crystals at birth, and through mating through clans. Even with this in mind, the Narame men have always been training with their Kin and family. The women of the clan also trained hardly in severe situations, some of them pleasantly, some not. This so called, 'Crystal' is placed on the middle forehead and 'Manhood' or 'Womanhood' area of a ninja when at birth.

The Markings of the Ninja at birth are depended on what emotion they show when they are born. When they cry, they get a markings of a serpent on their back, made with chakra. When they are happy when they are born, they get a dragon marking along the side of their arms and legs, showing the intent of power through them. Any other emotion is placed with a marking of a snake, showing the intent of a slow, easygoing kind of ninja.

The crystal implanted within the user at birth grows with the chakra it feeds off of during the course of the ninja's life. At childhood is the time when the crystal is growing the most, protecting the ninja from most Taijutsu and Ninjutsu tactical attacks. The crystal can be easily manipulated at a certain age of the ninja, around the age of Chuunin and Jounin is the best age for the manipulate of the Crystal. Since this Kekkei Genkai was birthed in the Land of the Moon, this technique works much better in the darkness, more than the light. When the Crescent or full moon of the night is out, power of the crystal is manipulated at a better pace then a regular type of manipulation.

The Crystal is a dangerous sort of crystal, known for Absorbing chakra to a point where it can kill a user if too exposed to it. But when a ninja is implanted with the crystal, it actually absorbs the chakra and stores it for later use on the life of the ninja. Maybe to save their life, maybe for different kinds of purposes.

Special Effect: Manipulating of crystal.
Link: Kaosu Clan, Narame Branch.


Skill and Rank Information
Village: Konohagakure no Sato.
Rank: Academy Student.

Special Characteristics: Narusu Crystal + Kekkei Genkai Effects.
Special Effects: Ability to slightly manipulate the chakra Absorbing crystal on her left forearm. This effect requires chakra to do. Hariton[Crystal Release].

Elements: Hariton[Crystal Release]
Skills Specialties:

Primary: Ninjutsu.

Jutsus

Name: Kawarami No Jutsu
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Chakra Cost: 5
Element: ~
Description: This jutsu lets the user quickly switch places with another nearby object, such as a plant (normally a section of a log), an animal, or even another person within reach, leaving the opponent open to a counter-attack. Explosive tags can be attached to the replacement for an added surprise. Fundamentally, all ninja know this technique.

Name: Bushin No Jutsu
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Chakra Cost: 5
Description:This technique creates intangible clones of the user. The clones are simply illusions and will dissipate when they come into contact with something. The illusions can be seen through by the Byakugan and the Sharingan. A person with normal eyes can also distinguish the clones from the original, since the clones will not disrupt the area around themselves with their movement (won't kick up dust, crush grass, etc.).

Name: Henge No Jutsu
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Chakra Cost: 5
Description:This jutsu allows the user to assume the appearance of another person, animal, or object. Fundamentally, all ninja know this jutsu. The transformation jutsu is considered to be among the more difficult E-ranked techniques, since it requires constant emission of chakra while mentally maintaining the form. On top of that, the user would be, most likely, interacting with the environment. This puts much mental strain on the inexperienced ninja.

Name: Nawanuke No Jutsu
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Chakra Cost: 5
Description: A basic jutsu that allows a ninja to free themselves if they have been tied up.

Name: Cloak Of Invisibility Technique
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Chakra Cost:
Description: With this jutsu one uses a cloak or piece of cloth to make oneself blend in with the background, rendering oneself invisible.

Name: Crystal Release • Crystal Spark -Hariton • Suishouhibana-
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Chakra Cost: 20
Element: Hariton[Crystal Release]
Description: Utilizing the crystal on her left forearm, Viera can shift a small amount of it into a thin piece of a toothpick-shaped object. This object can piece a small amount of skin and place it in the target. Since this crystal is 'Narusu', a chakra draining crystal, it can drain a small amount of chakra from that target. This prick of crystal can easily be removed in moment's of time, but with it's sharp figure, it might be painful to do so.
Post info: Each post that the Crystal is in the opponent, it drains -5 Chakra, then keeps growing by 1 chakra. The more the posts, the higher it goes, but it only keeps adding '1' chakra loss.

History and RP Sample
History:

Childhood Arc

At Viera's birth, she was named after the god of animals, Viera Mazurka. When her mother gave birth to her, it was a happy time, peace was shrouding the clan in joy and the clan cheered the day. The crystal of Narusu was implanted in her left forearm, out of the normal places where they place the crystal. This was a special place where the most prestigious Kunoichi of the clan was implanted with the crystal. Years began to pass and her will of the crystal increased. Within the time of the early years of her childhood, she was all so happy with life, she had cousins to play with, to make sure she was as joyful as she is. Her hair was slowly growing to a length where it would have to be cut every week on end. Her hair grew fast when it did, it made all of her cousins want to make sure they kept her safe. Saruno was one of her cousins, older kinds, he was 6 years old when he played with Viera, he was learning how to use chakra, while she learned how to control the crystal on her arm. Sometimes on the day they began to use chakra on the crystal, something terrible happened. The darkness of the night overshadowed the clan as a blast of crystal sent Saruno and Viera to the hospital, each of them with Narusu crystal implanted in their arms. It was an accident of Viera's sort, she wanted to use a technique that never worked for her. And it hurt her cousin, which is why she is shy to the day, she never likes to use her crystal unless needed for some reason.

Rp Sample: A swift wind began to enter through the darkness of the night, shifting through trees, brushing leaves across the ground, coursing through her hair. Viera was sitting atop a large household's roof, her eyes staring up at the sky. She was always in a depressed state at night, it reminded her of her cousin, and the death of her beloved brother. It was on the night of a full moon where it happened. She looked down to the fire below her, the fire was in a small wooden bin, being slowly burned. It wasn't starting a fire, but it reminded her of the fire of war that started three years ago.

"Viera?" a voice began to say within the darkness of the night behind her.

She turned around, seeing a large figure behind her, "M-mori?" she started to say within her shy kind of voice, reaching out for his hand.

It was nothing more than an illusion, the figure of Mori, her lost brother faded into the night, the moon shining into her eyes. As the figure vanished, she fell to her side, tears streaming down her cheeks and her hands in her face, she was all so sad when he died seven years ago, on the attack of the Kazura, and when the beginning of the war was. Her brother had helped them, but died in vain. A small forming of clouds slid over the light of the moon, blocking out the moon's light from Viera's gaze. It was truly a sad time.

ok first of all nice character

Name: Crystal Release • Crystal Spark -Hariton • Suishouhibana-
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Chakra Cost: 20
Element: Hariton[Crystal Release]
Description: Utilizing the crystal on her left forearm, Viera can shift a small amount of it into a thin piece of a toothpick-shaped object. This object can piece a small amount of skin and place it in the target. Since this crystal is 'Narusu', a chakra draining crystal, it can drain a small amount of chakra from that target.

How much Chakra does it drain?

Fixed...

Approved

But please next char that dies no matter what rank you make it have a history.

Kay....
Siigh.....

Needs to be moved.

Seriously, this needs to be moved.

-Unapproved-

KKG needs more chakra to activate despite the fact your character starts at AS, 10 chakra is far too cheap.

Secondly, explain what you mean by multiplying with itself (The chakra draining jutsu).

Sorry for double posting, but i would like this checked. >.>

Need History and RP sample (it's easy, just copy and paste -_-).

How is that crystal thing a D rank jutsu?

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It's the size of a toothpick, about less than 5cm long...

Cirrus wrote:

How is that crystal thing a D rank jutsu?

Yeah I have a similar feeling towards it. After a couple of posts, the user will have technically spent no chakra and at its chakra cost, it's easily spammable. These two traits combined means that it could potentially be overpowered, which is why I think the chakra draining should be lowered and it should also be mentioned that the crystals are easily removeable.

Kay, i'll keep it at a low chakra system and add that as well...

I guess I'll approve and an admin can check it later anyway.

-Approved-