Inaraka Koishuga [Finished!]

Basic Character Information :
Name: Inaraka Koishuga
-Nicknames: Ika, Ina, Ikara, Minoichi's big brother
Age: 19
Gender: Male
Clan: Kazura
Kekkei Genkai: Ayatsuriryoku -Power of Manipulation-

Looks:

Inaraka holds 1 Kunai in his hand and he has 2 Katana's for quick access strapped to his back. His pants have armored undergarments that are extremely comfortable when fighting. When fighting, he is a lot more accessible when wearing these pants. Also, he has 1 Tonfa in a strap hold connected to his Left Leg.

Inaraka has small senbon in his pockets. They inflict extreme damage when hit. They are also much smaller than everyday occasional senbon, but just as powerful. His weapon pack is located on his right side. It includes as followed: 100 Kunai, 100 Senbon and 100 Shuriken, 3 Large Shuriken and 200 Explosive Kunai.

Personality: Inaraka is harsh, but gentle and graceful. When battling, Inaraka is calm, collected, and not very easily distracted. In his targets eyes, Inaraka is graceful, calm, and swift. When training with fellow teammates, he tries his best to be fair, calm, and not to show off. People often think of Inaraka as the "Konoha Grace Fighter"

Why do people call him that? Simple, he is graceful in his swift attacking and always tries his best to never show off. If he does show off, he knows it is in good fun and laughter. Inaraka has a good sense of humor an always makes people laugh, even when he doesn't try to. He always tries to be swift in completing tasks and always wants to help the people in need.

Skill and Rank Information :
Village: Konohagakure No Sato
Rank: Chuunin if available.
Elements: Raiton and Suiton (Lightning and Water)
Skills Specialties: Ninjutsu and Medical Ninja Mastery

Jutsus

Basic Academy Jutsu’s
Name: Bunshin No Jutsu - Clone Technique
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Chakra Cost: 10
Element: N/A
Description: Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. The Bunshin technique creates a copy of the ninja without substance. The copy resembles the ninja in every way. This clone can function as a distraction or as means to confuse one's opponent. As soon the Bunshin gets attacked or comes into contact with an opponent, it will disperse.

Name: Bikou Ninjutsu - Shadowing Stealth Technique
Rank: D
Type: Basic Ninja Skill/Ninjutsu
Chakra Cost: 0
Element: N/A
Description: Bikou Ninjutsu is the technique ninjas use to follow their targets covertly. The manner in which the ninja shadows their target can differ, from the basic hiding under a nearby object, to using a jutsu to turn oneself invisible.

Name: Ayatsuito no Jutsu - String Reeling Technique
Rank: E-D
Type: Ninjutsu/Advance Ninja Technique
Chakra Cost: 0
Element: N/A
Description: Ayatsuito no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing wire. This string can be used in rappelling, or as a method to tie down and restrict the movement of an opponent.

Genin Rank Jutsu’s:

Name: Destruction Torrent
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Chakra Cost: 110
Element: Water/Suiton
Description: Suiton • Hahonryuu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. To use this technique Inaraka will generate water to use against his opponent

Name: Kokuun no Jutsu - Black Clouds Technique
Rank: C
Type: Attack/Supplementary
Chakra Cost: 60
Element: Water/Suiton
Description: Suiton • Kokuun no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique used by the ninja Inaraka which utilizes the Water Element. After forming the necessary hand seals, a black mist will emit from his body and rise into the sky. Black clouds will form, releasing a flammable rain of oil onto his targets

Name: Ikadzuchi no Utage - Lightning Bolt Feast
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Chakra Cost: 65
Element: Lightning
Description: Raisou (Lightning Burial): Ikadzuchi no Utage is a Ninjutsu technique used by Ikaraka Koishuga. Drawing together his dual short swords, electrical energy will begin to crackle. He will then implant his swords into the ground to send an electric current racing through the earth. When the current approaches its target, it can split into multiple tendrils to attack each target individually.

Chuunin Rank Jutsu’s:

Name: Bunshin Bakuha - Shadow Clone Explosion
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Chakra Cost: 100
Element: N/A
Description: Bunshin Bakuha is a Ninjutsu technique utilized by Koishuga Inaraka. At first glance the clone appears to be a normal Kage Bunshin, but Inaraka can detonate the clone at any time to form a very large explosion.

Name: Kage Bunshin no Jutsu - Shadow Clone Technique
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Chakra Cost: 150
Element: N/A
Description: Kage Bunshin is a Jounin level Ninjutsu technique. When Ikaraka stole the scroll of seals, he learned this technique as well. The normal Bunshin technique creates a copy of the ninja that lacks any substance. The Kage Bunshin distributes the ninja's chakra evenly among the clones and creates a real copy with form and substance. The clone itself can also utilize any jutsu the original ninja knows. When the clone finally disperses, any new knowledge it has gained is passed back to the original ninja and any additional clones. This makes Kage Bunshin an excellent training method if the ninja has the chakra capacity and stamina to maintain the Kage Bunshins for an extended period of time. This allows the ninja to essentially reduce the time it takes to train and learn with each clone added. This is especially true when used with Tajuu Kage Bunshin.

Name: Gousuiwan no Jutsu - Strong Water Arm Technique
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu/Attack - Supplementary
Chakra Cost: 100
Element: Water/Suiton
Description: Suiton • Gousuiwan no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. Using his ability to transform his body into water, Inaraka will reform his arm in a more muscular form. This stronger arm allows him to deliver more powerful swings with his head cleaver sword.

Kazura Techniques

Basic Ninjutsu:

Name: Kakuhan no Chakra -Chakra Whip-
Rank: C - A
Type: Ninjutsu
Chakra Cost: 50 - 190
Element: N/A
Description: With the efficiency of the Kazura clan's Chakra manipulation, a member can create a short-stemmed or long-stemmed whip with a little flaw in the technique. A constant flow of chakra in the brim of the whip can keep it's painful strikes in a constant motion. A simple crack of the whip, charged with enough chakra can snap through skin in a second, and only a small density-kind of steel. Higher amounts of chakra and great amounts of training can easily increase the strength of the whip, being able to do as a member pleases.

Name: Tou Chakra -Chakra Blade-
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Chakra Cost: 100
Element: N/A
Description: On the efficiency of the Kazura Clan's Chakra manipulation, a member can create a blade of pure chakra. The blade can be as hard as steel, and as sharp as a dagger. The chakra of the member will begin to flow out from the desired point of the body, (arms, palms, etc), and begin to take shape into a blade. The amount of chakra used, depends on the
size of the blade, and can be cast away by a higher-level technique.

Name: Kunai no Chakra -Chakra Kunai-
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Chakra Cost: 60
Element: N/A
Description: On the efficiency of the Kazura Clan's chakra manipulation, a member can create a small or large kunai made of pure chakra, the kunai can be as tough as steel, and sharp as a normal kunai. The kunai can only travel up to to a short or long distance, based on what is in the way or resisting the air flow around the kunai, and it will disappear after a certain amount of time. The density of the kunai depends on the amount of the chakra used.

Medium Level Ninjutsu:

Name: Chakra Blade Slash - Chakra Tou Tateru
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu/Kenjutsu
Chakra Cost: 120
Element: N/A
Description: With the efficiency of the Kazura Clan's Chakra Manipulation, a member can use this along with the Chakra Blade Technique. Within the Blade, a member can slash a large amount of chakra with the blade, causing a slash made of pure chakra, and can be cut through a small density steel, but travels in a straight line, making it easy to dodge. The length of the Slash depends on the amount of chakra within the body.

Name: Chakra Kunai Explosion - Chakra Kunai Bakuhatsu
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Chakra Cost: 120
Element: N/A
Description: With the efficiency of the Kazura Clan's Chakra manipulation, a member can use this along with the chakra kunai Technique. Within the kunai, a small mass of chakra can be condensed within the tip or the middle of the handle of the kunai. Once impacted on something, the kunai will explode immensely with the condensed chakra inside being pushed towards the impacted point, blasting away at anything in it's path. The blast is only a small diameter, so it can be easily avoided in a small term.

History and RP Sample
History:

Born/Academy Arc
Inaraka was the older brother of his younger sibling, Minoichi. Though Minoichi never knew of his older brother, as he left the village at the age of 8, after the academy completion, he left and was never to be seen in the Konoha village again.

Genin Arc
At the age of 12, Inaraka had found shelter in the village of Hidden Mist, or Kirigakure in Japanese. When he found out he was accepted as a Genin in the village, he quickly participated in the Chuunin exams, and won.

Chuunin Arc
Now, at the age of 19, Ikaraka was comfortable in the Hidden Mist village, and was the Jounin apprentice for team 8. He has always pondered of what Minoichi would do if he found out he had a brother 7 years older than him.

Inaraka is in the process of perfecting the Kage Bunshin No Jutsu technique from his Jounin sensei. He almost always corrects it, but still makes quite a lot of mistakes during training. He has also returned to the Hidden Leaf village, and Minoichi now knows of his brothers existence.

RP Sample: Inaraka lay there quietly in his bed. His roommate was snoring loudly, so he decided to sleuth out of the door to take a walk around. “Why does he have to snore so loudly?!” He said to himself in his head. His roommate always snores loudly, but tonight, he snored extra loudly just to annoy Inaraka.

Inaraka decided to go outside the village for a quiet walk. “This might as well happen, I've been meaning to take a walk from this village” He said to himself, again. Up ahead he found a certain... sight he did NOT enjoy. A Rouge Ninja Hideout, with Guards.

Inaraka decided to slowly walk backwards, but one of the guards spotted him. “Hey, you!” Yelled the guard as he chased him. Inaraka quickly made hand signs and yelled out “Strong Water Arm Jutsu!” He yelled as his arm grew abnormally. He then attacked the guard.

In about 20 minutes, Inaraka had killed and destroyed the camp. The Rouge Ninja's that were planning to attack his village were stopped dead in they're tracks. He quickly ran back to the camp and told the Mizukage. He quickly thanked him as Inaraka left to go back to his house. He quickly flew into a bed of dreams and didn't wake until morning. Thankfully, he did not hear his housemates snoring.

Ok,

Have 10 sentences of personality and looks, even if providing a pic.
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Inaraka wrote:

Name: Goukakyuu no Jutsu - Great Fireball Technique
Rank: D-C
Type: Ninjutsu
Chakra Cost: 30
Element: Fire
Description: Katon • Goukakyuu no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. The ninja does the necessary hand seals, draws chakra from their mouth into their chest and them immediately exhales it. They then blow a stream of fire which erupts into a large sphere of flames. To better manage the flames the ninja will bring their hand to their mouth to control it.

Name: Housenka no Jutsu - Mythical Fire Phoenix Technique
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Chakra Cost: 50
Element: Fire
Description: Katon • Housenka no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. The ninja does the necessary hand seals and then emits a series of small fire balls. The ninja can also hurl a projectile which is covered in these same flames. To the opponent the attack appears to be only the balls of flame, they do not see the hidden threat within the flames. Meaning that even if the flames are put out, the projectiles still converge on the target. The flames can be used to cover different projectiles like shuriken or kunai.

Remove these, you don't have fire as an element.
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Inaraka wrote:

Name: Jibaku Bunshin - Self-Destructing Clone Technique
Rank: B
Type: Attack, Supplementary
Chakra Cost: 105
Element: N/A
Description: Jibaku Bunshin is a Ninjutsu technique used by Ikaraka Koishuga. High in skill, Ikaraka can create the one unique bunshin without the use of his hands. The clay bunshin can ingest some of Ikaraka’s explosive clay and focus its chakra to that internal spot in its body. The chakra will activate the clay causing the bunshin to blow up in a violent explosion. The bunshin and explosion can also act as a decoy, allowing Ikaraka to escape from enemy detection.

This is Deidara's jutsu, remove it. You can replace it with the A Ranked Bunshin Bakuha.
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I would like you to have arcs in your history and make them 3 paragraphs each.
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Edited, check it now :)

I'm actually gunna make him Konoha, I prefer this place rather than Kiwigakure.

You didn't edit personality and looks.

Also, 1 Paragraph=5 Sentences

Edited.

Approved