Rin Ukiku Updated Version.

This is an update of my application, along with a new found glitch in the Man Beat Transformation jutsu.

~Basic Character Information~
Name: Rin Ukiku
Age: 18
Gender: Female
Clan: Ukiku

Looks: She wears all black, it helps keep other people away from her. Has a fanged grin, blue eyes (the deepest blue seen in an Ukiku female.) Black hair, the only color that goes with her fur color. Always wears chains on her outfit, just to allow some of her personality to shine through (She Doesn't wear the chains while on missions). Rin is a very strange site to see in a village because she has wolf ears on her head, usually seen poking out of her black hair. When she's around her friends she is the same, but changes slightly in her darkness, and tends to smile a bit more.

Image of Looks:

~Rin's Wolf Forms~
Looks:
Information: This is the original result when Rin uses the jutsu; Beast Mimicry, Beast Transformation.It is a normal black wolf with deep blue eyes, and the fur is Rin's hair color.
Ability: All the normal wolf abilities, with the ability to speak, faster speed, and more agility.
Weakness: Darkness's counter part, light.

Looks:
Information:This is a highly planned and reasearched transformation. The ability to change the type of wolf is a glitch that was found in the Beast Transformation jutsu by Rin. This type of wolf has traits of the elemental wolves of the Ukiku clan, and seems to carry a very hot body temperature it could possibly burn human skin if touched.
Ability: This transformation is fire based so it has the ability to heat up a small protion of the surrounding area, making it possible for a few things to melt. The heat only reachs up to about two yards.
Weakness: This forms weaknesses are water and earth.


Looks:
Information: This is a highly planned and researched transformation.The ability to change the type of wolf is a glitch that was found in the Beast Transformation jutsu by Rin. This type of wolf has traits of the elemental wolves of the Ukiku clan, and has a wind based element. It is the second discovered transformation due to the glitch in the Beast Transformation.
Ablities: The capeability to fly, can summon slightly powerul winds, never reaching the strenght of a tornado, but is strong enough to generate a small sonic boom. This is caused by the wind generated by Rin's wings clashing together at hard, and fast rates.
Weankess: Fire.

Personality:Rin is the unsocial person everyone used to hate. She's just the type of girl that really gets under your skin. She tends to be stubborn, grouchy, and keeps to herself. Rin hardly ever gets very close to someone, but she will occasionaly become close to someone who shows her they can be trusted, easy to get along with, and they aren't too quick to judge her for what she is. Having as many trust issues as she does, she always seems to draw attention, and by this fact, she always seems confused when humans come up to greet her.

Likes: She likes wolves, drawing in her spare time, her ability to work with animals, and being respected.

Dislikes: Loud mouthed punks, disrespectful people, and people who are too cocky. She also dislikes people who think they're too god for someone.


~Basic Clan Information~
Kekkei Gekkei: Darkness Effect
Chakra Cost: 20 under moon ; 40 under sun
Description: The Darkness Effect is the Ukiku's Kekkei Gekkei. It is a very different type of Kekkei Gekkei, and functions with the setting of the sun, and rising of the moon. Although stronger in effect at night, it can be very useful when the Eternal Darkness jutsu is in effect. It is activated the same as most Kekkai Gekkei, with a simple hand sign.
Special Effect: The Darkness Effect draws the light out of a certain area making it dark and easy for the Ukiku's wolf- like abilities to be used, along with the wolves who are mostly nocturnal. The time this can remain in effect is undetermined, and the toll it takes on the body is terrible. If the darkness effect remians in use too long, major fatigue will set in, followed by shortness of breath, blurred vision, possible temporary loss of vision, and possible fainting or blacking out.
Link: N/A


~Skill and Rank Information~
Village: Leaf
Rank: Jounin

Special Characteristics: Ryuk is the demon Rin's family seald inside of her. Ryuk is a lesser demon, but is still dangerous if provoaked. He is a strong spirit that limited numbers of clans knew about. He had walked upon the earth for 1,000 years until he was seald inside of Rin. She also has black chakra that flows around her at the time she becomes possesed by him.

Special Effects: Once The black chakra takes hold she becomes a few times faster, and stronger than before, disconnects most of her human ability to fear for her life, causing her to be very wreckless during battle, but can gain fear the less the strenght of her possession, and becomes darker in presance. The strenght and speed Rin receives is smaller in amounts than with a biiju, and is not as concentrated, so it can vanish with longer useage.

The down side to the demon is the fact that it is constantly feeding on Rin's life force and is slowly killing her and has messed with her emotions so much that she is constantly having uncontrolable outbursts of anger and sadness. Rin also has uncontrolable bursts of bloodlust. If Rin does not soon find a way to control the demon, she will die prematurely.

Elements: Wind and Darkness
Skills Specialties: Her skills are a result of her family ties and a demon bestowed upon her as a young child. She can communicate with animals of any type, has the ability to shift her form from human to wolf, and she uses very complex jutsu that only her and her clan members know. She also specializes in weaponry, and animal training.


~Jutsus~
Bunshin no Jutsu - Clone Technique
Character Use: General Skill
Rank: E
Range: -
Chakra Cost: 5
Damage: -
Type: Supplementary
Description: Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. The Bunshin technique creates a copy of the ninja without substance. The copy resembles the ninja in every way. This clone can function as a distraction or as means to confuse one's opponent. As soon the Bunshin gets attacked or comes into contact with an opponent, it will disperse.

Kawarimi no Jutsu - Change of Body Stance Technique
Rank: E
Range: -
Chakra Cost: 10
Damage:
Type: Supplementary
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themself with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack. Explosive tags can be attached to the replacement for an added surprise.

Nawanuke no Jutsu - Escaping Skill
Rank: E
Range: -
Chakra Cost: 5
Damage:
Type: Supplementary
Description: Nawanuke no Jutsu is a very basic Ninjutsu technique that allows a ninja to escape from rope binds.

Kakuremino no Jutsu - Magic Cloak of Invisibility Technique
Rank: E
Range: -
Chakra: 5
Type: Supplementary
Description: Kakuremino no Jutsu is a very basic Ninjutsu technique. The ninja uses a camouflage cloth to cloak themselves in the background.

Henge no Jutsu - Transformation Technique
Rank: E
Range: -
Chakra Cost: 10
Type: Supplementary
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.

Name:Bikou Ninjutsu - Shadowing Stealth Technique
Rank: E
Range: -
Chakra: -
Type: Supplementary
Description: Bikou Ninjutsu is the technique ninjas use to follow their targets covertly. The manner in which the ninja shadows their target can differ, from the basic hiding under a nearby object, to using a jutsu to turn oneself invisible. The skill and length in which one can stay hidden varies by rank and ability.

Kinobori no Waza - Act of Tree Climbing
Rank: -
Type: Supplementary
Chakra: -
Kinobori no Waza, the art of tree climbing serves a dual purpose. Taking part in Kinobori Shugyou (Tree Climbing Training) helps a ninja learn how to focus their chakra. It also teaches the ninja how to run up trees and walk on vertical walls. The training helps the ninja learn how to focus just the right amount of chakra to a particular part of their body. The amount needed to climb is small but it must be precise. The feet are regarded as the hardest location to master chakra focusing. So by gaining the art of this skill, the ninja will have any jutsu available (theoretically) because they will be able to focus their chakra as needed

Muon Satsujin Jutsu - Silent Homicide Technique
Rank: -
Type: Attack
Chakra: -
Muon Satsujin Jutsu, the ability to commit a silent homicide, is a technique to dispatch your foe with no warning. Your quick speed and skills will instantly kill them before they can provide a defense

Suimen Hokou no Waza - Act of Water Surface Walking
Rank: -
Type: Supplementary
Chakra: -
A variation on the Kinobori no Waza (Act of Tree Climbing), the art of water surface walking allows a ninja to walk on water as if it was a solid surface. Focusing an even amount of chakra out of the soles of their feet, they can balance themselves on the very surface of the water.

Explosion Tag: Activate
Rank: E
Type: -
Chakra: 5
The user will activate an explosion tag. Normally, the tag will be placed by them, so they know where it is and can easily activate it.

Jutsu Name: Kai - Release
Rank: D
Element: N/A
Chakra Cost: 25
Description: Kai is a Ninjutsu technique which allows the ninja to avoid the effects of a Genjutsu illusion. After forming the needed handseals, the Genjutsu technique will not affect the ninja. The ninja can also use the technique on another individual who was unable to avoid the attack. After forming the needed hand seals, the ninja touches the one affected to end the affect of the spell

Magen • Narakumi no Jutsu - Demonic Illusion • Hell Viewing Technique
Rank: D
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m)
Type: Supplementary/Genjutsu
Magen • Narakumi no Jutsu is a Genjutsu technique that causes its target to see a horrifying vision. The ninja will use the serpent hand seal to cause a circle of leaves to spin and envelop the target and then fall away. Once cast the world will appear normal to the target until they see the illusion. This lasts 2 user posts.

Chakra Kyuuin Jutsu - Chakra Absorption Technique
Rank: D
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m)
Type: Attack
Chakra: 25
After activitating the technique, user's hand will glow with chakra. When he touches his palm on his opponents body, he can withdraw the physical and spiritual energy out of them. By reducing their chakra, it greatly increases user's advantage over their opponent. Withdraws 10 chakra per post. User must have a hand on the opponet to withdraw chakra.

Name: Eternal Darkness
Rank: S
Type: Genjutsu
Chakra Cost: 240
Element: Darkness
Description: This jutsu is a very unusual jutsu due to the fact that it does not target the victum's mind as does most genjutsu, but instead, it targets the victum's body. It allows for only a few inches of visability, and does not allow for much movement. The amount of gravity in this jutsu is bone crunching to the average, human shinobi, if they were to move too much, the force of the gravity would crush them entirely.

Name: Summoning of the wolf.
Rank: B
Type: Summoning
Chakra Cost: 60
Element: Darkness
Description: With this jutsu, the user is able to summon a twin- headed wolf 2x's the size of a house. Once the jutsu has been activated, the wolf is free to attack in battle as commanded by the user.

Name: Beast Mimicry, Beast Transformation
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Chakra Cost: 60
Element: Darkness
Description: This is a very hard jutsu to master, and use at will. Once the jutsu is learned, the user is able to shift from human to wolf in a matter of seconds. Once mastered, and handeled properly, the user is able to shift without handsigns. A slight glitch has been found by Rin, and has been mastered by her as well. Rin can now transform into different types of wolves while she is using this jutsu.

Name: Man,Beast Ultimate Taijutsu, Dark fang Over Fang.
Rank: B
Type: Taijutsu
Chakra Cost: 60
Element: Darkness
Description: This is the Ukiku version of the Inuzuka's Fang Over Fang. Once the Ukiku clan whitnessed the Fang Over Fang technique, they decided that they would form a jutsu that was almost the exact same, but meant for the shinobi of the Ukiku clan. After many hard years of development, the Dark Fang Over Fang was created. This jutsu allows the user twice the speed and power of the origianal Fang Over Fang, and is every bit as deadly to the victum.

Name: Sandwolf Devisation
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Chakra Cost: 150
Element: Wind
Description: This jutsu is a jutsu that was only mastered by those of the Ukiku clan. The user creates what seems like a huge wind/dust storm calling forth all the air they can gather, the user then uses the unsettled dust particales from the wind storm to make the wolve visable. The wolves then are able to attack, and possibly kill the victum. As the wolves charge at the victum, the wind becomes like tiny razor blades and cuts the victum while the wolves pass the victum, even if full contact isn't made. The wind left from those attacks then double back and cut the victum even more, creating even more serious wounds. This jutsu summons Three[3] wolves.

Darkness is not an element.

Also you have a Kekkai Genkai along with a demon which I am not sure about. I want an admins approval/disapproval on this.

Eternal Darkness: Genjutsu ALWAYS affect the victims mind, never the body. You can make them feel like they are being crushed my gravity but it wont actually happen to them physically.

Beast Mimicry, Beast Transformation: More info on these multiple forms I would assume you would have only one wolf form with similar looks to your human.

Sandwolf Devisation: Sand Manipulation is unique to the Jinchuuriki of Shukaku. Remove.

Longer History and rp sample.


Summoning of the wolf: More info please description of the summon strength in terms of ninja wise. Make it a miniture app.

~Ehh, sorry to tell ya BB, but you're wrong in some places.

- Darkness is indeed an element, one of the most basic in fact. Usually, it is known as an advanced element, created from the combination of two elements. However, in Rin's case, it is a part of her clan, so is kinda like a Kekkei Genkai, and has been approved by the admins as far as I know.

- I'm also quite sure the demon was approved, since this is just an update of her application, and in the original application, she had the demon and was approved.

- About genjutsu, that could be debated. Depending on the genjutsu and rank, some are capable of harming the opponent physically. Though, I'm going to review her Eternal Darkness.

- Again, Sand is also an element, another advanced one in fact. Sand is a combination of the Wind and Earth elements. Yes, Sand can also be manipulated by Shukaku demon, as seen in the anime, and has specific jutsu for just Shukaku. Do note, if you're far enough in the anime, that Sasori was capable of using the sand element, as well as hardening it into a new element. In your situation Rin, I would make your elements Wind and Earth, giving you the advanced element, Sand. You would still have the element of Darkness due to the fact that it is Kekkei Genkai related.

- Well Darkness isn't an element, although you could say it has something to do with Yin/Yang. If it's a KKG however, then I don't suppose it really matters.

- As for Sand, well I have qualms about this one but this site isn't supposed to entirely follow the series and it isn't granted by the Shukaku Demon, just enhanced. Gaara didn't lose his powers after Shukaku.

~Exactly my point Alex, but Darkness is technically an element, as well as Light. I think Darkness is the combination of Wind and Water, and Light is the combination of Wind and Lightning. They're advanced elements as far as I know, but it doesn't matter much in this case, since it's a Kekkei Genkai.

No it's not an element. That's just due to the widespread belief that the Narutoc Advanced Element Template is canon on rping sites - (Technically according to Narutoc, it's wind+water = Shadow not darkness).

The only canon advanced elements are Mokuton, Youton and Hyouton. Poison isn't an advanced element, it's a ninjutsu with no element, and was used by Shizune and various other ninja. Shadow/Darkness isn't an element, otherwise we're expecting Shikamaru as a genin to have both water and wind elements, not to mention I think its pretty illogical. I just want to get this point across.

~I see, I see. I just thought the other admins were allowing the advanced element on here, to allow more creativity to members. Shame on us Alex, we need to stop spamming Ash's application. @.@

I have had this same application since Ingoo started, and it has been approved each time. My element is allowed to remain the same, Todd has already said that I was free to update from time to time.

~Ashley is correct, and you can look at Todd's post on her original application if needed. ^-^

Well that was a mistake on an Admin or Mods part which is going to be addressed here. I understand it must an annoyance for you but we are going to have to address some of the problems in the app that were not picked up on last time for whatever reason.

Your element will not remain the same because if anything it is almost the same as shadow manipulation used by the Nara clan, which ofc is clan unique. You already have a clan that specialises in wolf based jutsu's and idelogy so adding a second almost KKG ability would be OP. Not to mention the fact you have already a demon, which I am strongly opposed to, means you are already over the limit of normal members.

Please also address any matters raised by other mods on the app so we can move the approval process on swiftly.

If you ask me, I think you just have a problem with me BB, if you do, I suggest you address it soon, other wise, I'm going to go to someone else, no matter how much you dislike me or my character. If you have an issue with me, then kindly take it up with me via PM, not on my application that has remained the same for over a year now. Also, just because you don't like something, doesn't mean it should be completely removed. I refuse to be told what to do when I already know what I'm allowed to do, being told otherwise by a less polite person will simply make me rebel against everything, I know how much that would annoy you. It would be appreciated if you were a bit more polite and asked me to fix things instead of just saying that you don't like it. If nothing else, I'll remove my character from here and go to a different site.

Oh wow you think I have a problem with you? Seriously? I have shown you along with other members nothing but the utmost respect, sounds to me like your trying to pull the same stunt you pulled with DCP when she first highlighted problems with your app when you first made it. You threw a hissy fit and she dropped it and now guess what your actually trying it again. Well instead of being an immature child try and follow what us mods are pointing out is wrong with the app, maybe it was approved doesnt mean that arnt problems which are now being found. So instead of whining about it deal with it.

I'm not opposing to you Rin, BUt BB is right, You asked me earlier to check your app when everthing BB said, I found. So I do not have a problem with you, but BB IS right.

Oh brother, BB could possibly be right about some things, but, calling me a child is hardly polite. I'm not throwing a 'hissy fit' as you think I am, I just don't like the way people act toward me is all. Calling me a child and saying that I'm complaining is hardly polite, or grown up for that matter. I'll admit that I did go back and look at some of my stuff, and even added in information, but being insulted is not something I will tolerate. You all have known me for quite sometime now, and know exactly how I am when it comes to poeple telling me a bunch of crap, and to top it off, are completely rude to me and treat me like crap.

~History and RP Sample~
History: As a kid she was kept locked away due to fear of her emotionless expression she maintained. While in the darkness she develpoed a love of the dark, after growing in her level as a ninja she began devloping her own jutsu that were distructive to anyone other than herself. When she was only two years away from becoming an academy student, her clan revealed that they were going to use her to rid them of an evil demon that had been destroying their village just north of the Sand Village. A few days later, the plan the village used had worked, but they soon learned it was the biggest mistake of their lives. While still in the process of getting used to the demonic power inside her body, she became inraged and went on a killing spree destroying her clan. She was one of the few kids in her group that had actually killed another human by the time she had reached the genin level. At the age of 14 she became a chuunin. Her dark, and sadening secrete was never learned. Now at the age of 16, she has learned a limited amount of jutsu that she uses during fights, has managed to calm herself enough to try and live a normal life in her new home village, the Leaf, and has a pack of 20 to 30 wolves that accompany her during important trips she must make during her missions. The wolves never venture far from her side even at her home village, they are always a howl away, and her newly obtained friends are very helpful and supportive of her. She's also managed to return her clan to the way it used to be, and discover a few of her family members who were thought to be long lost or dead. Taking her rightful place as the Ukiku clan leader, she began to discover new things, and new friends along the way. Even though she has friends, she still feels like a million miles away from the people she holds dear.

Rp Sample: As the pale moonlight began to fall over the Hidden Leaf Village, a howl could be heard off in the distance as a lone black wolf with unusual blue eyes looked up to the moon, its pale light forming a reflection in the wolf's eyes. Long silence followed after the howl, then the lone wolf lifted its head, allowing a sadening howl to escape its maw. As the howl ended, a new shape appeared, it was that of more wolves. "You guys seem to be all I have left in this world," said the black wolf, who would come to be known as Rin, leader of the Ukiku clan.



I had to repost this section of my App because I edited it and the original post was too big.

First off:
I, for being bullied for quite many years, know what this is. Yes, Ashley is right, she doesn't need to come on, re-make her character and get crap in return.

OK, Now to the good stuff.
Darkness is indeed an element, also, Narutoc aren't completely right. Shadow isnt quite Water + Wind, Water + Wind equal a complete and total OP Element.
Darkness is a "Custom" made Element, and has been used in anime's episode production, but taken off of the episode because of overuse & overpowering techniques.

No more fighting, OK Ash, and BB?
Hashi, he IS right, on some spots, on others, he's wrong.

Ash, I would personally just put darkness as your element, maybe later, get a teacher and, if you can FIND another Darkness Element user, try learning how to separate them and learn new elements, on the other hand, you could research and find out the elements that are combined to make Darkness.

I checked out the approved app before, and yes, Todd himself, has proven both BB & Hashi wrong, he approved the darkness element, and has approved the app more than once, let alone on Ingoo, which means, on my standards, I would have approved this ages ago, but, I missed by 1 post.

Does that mean that I cam finally use the updated version of Rin? After all, I did edit everything to fit the standards that was presented to me to meet.

Yeah, on my opinion, your very well Approved

OKay? You can now use the updated version of Rin :D