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Ookami Ukiku S Rank Missing Nin
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Ninja Profile Chakra: (1220/1400) Village: Primary Element: Lightning
| Subject: Ookami Ukiku Update [Finished] Wed May 20, 2009 6:11 pm | |
| As a pre-application note, as the title of this topic states, this is an update of a character which has already been approved on this site previously. However, this character in general has become very inactive as of late, and therefor has not been used in a long time. I wish to become active again, and due to the certain changes in site management and/or restrictions including character creation, I feel as though an update for this character upon his return is necessary.Thank you.
Basic Character Information: Name:Ookami Ukiku Age: 26 Gender: Male Clan: Birth Clan: Ukiku ; Clan Deriving Kekkei Genkai Abilities: Shirogane
Looks: Ookami looks like a very gentle man despite his almost demonic appearance. While he has wolf ears, and a wolfish tail, red eyes, and sharp fang like teeth, his caring and smiling face just contradicts it to much to make him look very threatening, which is actually his intention. He tries to look like the friendly neighbor everyone wants to be around, and not the deadly warrior he really is at heart. Along with the wolf ears and tail, he has a very unnatural hair color. This color is white, and it exists on every single strand of hair on his body. This is mostly noticeable on his head, which is covered in hair that goes down his cheeks on his sides, and covers his forehead on the front. Also added onto this, are the white wolf ears that are extending out of his head. He is actually quite tall, reaching up to about 6"4, and weighs only 150 lbs. In all actuality he is quite muscular, which provides both speed in power in his usual and normal actions. His attire usually consists of casual clothing, nothing to special, most of the time its usually white and red to go along with his hair and eyes though. No one knows why he favors this kind of clothing, and he chooses not to tell anyone either. An example of how Ookami looks can be found in the avatar picture whilst he is wearing more formal and exotic clothing.
Personality: Ookami is a generally pleasant person. Despite anything thats ever happened to him, he never allows anything hostile to escape his inner thoughts. His greatest intentions whenever soicializing with anyone is to make the person in question feel as perfectly comfortable as possible, whether he do this by acting cheeful and outgoing, pleasant and polite, or maybe even dark. Some could say that for this reason he has a mixed personality, as he is always changing it to meet the other person's preference. Though, his general one is happy and positive. This however, is only a mask, the fake smile plastered on his face. On the inside is the torturing nightmares of his horrid past, and the strife that goes with it. Underneath all the happiness is really pain and agony. He wants to be happy, and make others happy despite anything thats happened to him or them. Though inside of him, the demon Ryuk speaks to him. Filling his head with murderous thoughts and urges, telling him to do horrible things. He easily overcomes all of these tempations easily, but the constant drone of it all is painful for him. Sometimes, he even recieves visions of himself killing all the ones he loves and cares about. While they never cause him to do anything out of the ordinary, they still scare him. For this reason he can sometimes appear to be very distant, droning off into space in the middle of a conversation he was suddenly not entirly a part of anymore. He can also appear to be more silent for a while on some days, only to bounce back the next.
While he may appear to be happy most of the time, he has locked away feelings, as have already been described. So for this reason, it is quite easy for him to get hostile with those that have betrayed him or others important to him. He also uses this hostility to others whenever they are not listening to him, or perhaps a student or students that are misbehaving. This way he evokes fear into those around him to make them obey his commands. He dislikes using this method when he has his head on, as it goes against his better judgment. For the most part, he has the kind of personality that causes just about everyone to like him, and respect him.
Basic Clan Information
Ukiku Clan Information
Kekkei Gekkei: Darkness Effect Chakra Cost: 20 Description: The Darkness Effect is the Ukiku's Kekkei Gekkei. It is a very different type of Kekkei Gekkei, and functions with the setting of the sun, and rising of the moon. Although stronger in effect at night, it can be very useful when the Eternal Darkness jutsu is in effect. It is activated the same as most Kekkai Gekkei, with a simple hand sign. Special Effect: The Darkness Effect draws the light out of a certain area making it dark and easy for the Ukiku's wolf- like abilities to be used, along with the wolves who are mostly nocturnal. The time this can remain in effect is undetermined, and the toll it takes on the body is terrible. If the darkness effect remians in use too long, major fatigue will set in, followed by shortness of breath, blurred vision, possible temporary loss of vision, and possible fainting or blacking out. Note: Ookami is unable to use this KG due to the fact that most of his Ukiku clan traits were replaced by Shirogane ones.
Shirogane Clan Information
Kekkei Gekkei: Stringless Puppetry Chakra Cost: 20 per puppet summoned Description: The Shirogane's clan Kekkei Genkai is the ability to spawn puppets, and control them without the use of chakra strings. They can control hundreds at once, though once more than ten have been summoned, the summoner can only give them commands to carry out, and can no longer control them directly. Most of these are weak, but there are kinds that can be quite powerful. The most common of these are called puppet walkers, and are simple human looking puppets with long blades that extend from each finger. They also have the ability to take a corpse, and make a puppet out of it. This is similar to what Sasori can do, but not exactly congruent. First of all, the puppet only goes as far as appearance and strength. No jutsu or clan abilities can be copied. Another notable thing is that once the puppet is done being used, it cannot be sealed away in a scroll or other object for later use. Lastly, the Shirogane clan each have their own signature puppet. These are generally very, very large, and take the form of some kind of animal. Most of them also have elemental affinities. They can also be sealed away, and repaired. Special Effect: Already explained in Description
Skill and Rank Information Village: No village Rank: S Ranked Missing Nin (Minoichi approved)
Special Characteristics:
Phazon Special Effects: Phazon is an unknown and alien element that was discovered in the form of a meteor in the remains of an abandoned mine in an abandoned village in the Earth country by Ookami and Orochi. The phazon itself, is almost like a parasite, it feeds off the living parts of a host to sustain life, even though it doesnt have enough characteristics of a living thing to really be classified as one. In a raw form, phazon will attatch to whatever it touches, provided it can leach energy off of it, and break down and decompose the object, like a fungas, and consume the energy that process creates. The only known way to make phazon detatch to whatever its on, is to soak it in water. This does not destroy or harm the phazon itself in any way, but just makes it slippery so that it slides off. This is the only /known/ way of saving oneself from raw phazon clinged to ones body. This element can be injected into someones body without killing them, but cursing them greatly. Once injected, the phazon binds to the host and becomes one with them. Once this process is done, the two then must depend on eachother. The host needs the phazon’s cooperation to be able to live with the new body functions that the phazon causes, and the phazon needs the host to get what it needs to stay superior in the hosts body. When someone becomes bonded with the phazon, they gain the ability to use it in different jutsus as a ‘replacement’ element. When the phazon is used as a substitute in a jutsu, it does not leech onto what it hits, however it will start to break it down for as long as it has contact with the object. The major disadvantage with the phazon bondage is that the phazon needs more of itself to survive. It can infect certain organs, or create smaller new ones in the hosts body to reproduce phazon, but it cant live off the same kind. For this reason, the host becomes addicted to the phazon, using it more often and searching for raw sources to absorb. The only immediate threat to this is that it can make the host very twitchy, and on edge. It can get to the point where they arent in control of their own emotions, they have ‘mood swings’ every other minute. A long term threat to this, is that over-usage of the phazon will cause the phazon to spread throughout the entire body, until is completely consumes the host. When this happens, the hosts brain rots, the heart stops, and the lungs burst. The host themselves die, and leave the body to be completely controlled by the phazon.
Special Phazon Jutsu:
Name: Phazon Mimicry Rank: S Type: Ninjutsu Range: All Around Chakra Cost: Same as jutsu copied Element: Phazon Description: This is the ultimate jutsu using the Phazon element. This jutsu works by allowing the user to copy any other kind of elemental jutsu, and replicating it, only using phazon as a substitute for the original element. The phazon will take on the shape and attributes of the replicated element. For example: If the element was water, the phazon will become watery and take more of a liquid form. If it was fire, the phazon would appear as blue fire and burn, as well as eat away at the enemy. The phazon in this form will NOT stick to the enemy upon contact except in the forms of lightning, and fire. Otherwise, it will just brush off. Any jutsu of any rank can be copied, except for a few clanal jutsu and forbidden jutsu. Ookami need only see the jutsu to be able to replicate it. He also has a phazon form of each and every one of his own jutsu. This is the one and only Phazon jutsu around, there are no original phazon jutsu.
Ryuk: Ryuk is the demon Ookami's family sealed inside of him. Ryuk is a lesser demon, but is still dangerous if provoaked. He is a strong spirit that limited numbers of clans knew about. He had walked upon the earth for 1,000 years until he was seald inside of Ookami. He also has black chakra that flows around him at the time he becomes possessed by him.
Special Effects: Once The black chakra takes hold he becomes 3 times faster than an olympic runner, and stronger than before, disconnects most of his human ability to fear for his life, causing him to be very reckless during battle, but can gain fear the less the strength of his possession, and becomes darker in presence. The strength and speed Ookami receives is smaller in amounts than with a biiju, and is not as concentrated, so it can vanish with longer usage. Along with these traits, Ryuk also causes the creation of physical features on Ookami. Because of him, Ookami has grown wolf like ears, and a wolf like tail. It has also caused his originally brown hair to become permanently dyed white.
Elements: Main: Lightning ; Sub: Wind Skills Specialties: Main: Tai/Kenjutsu ; Sub: Ninjutsu
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| JutsusClan Jutsu - Spoiler:
Name: Eternal Darkness. Rank: S. Type: Genjutsu. Element: Darkness Chakra Cost: 240 Description: This jutsu is a very unusual jutsu due to the fact that it does not target the victum's mind as does most genjutsu, but instead, it targets the victum's body. It allows for only a few inches of visability, and does not allow for much movement. The amount of gravity in this jutsu is bone crunching to the average, human shinobi, if they were to move too much, the force of the gravity would crush them entirely. Name: Summoning of the wolf. Rank: B. Type: Summoning Element: Darkness. Chakra Cost: 60 Description: With this jutsu, the user is able to summon a twin- headed wolf 2x's the size of a house. Once the jutsu has been activated, the wolf is free to attack in battle as commanded by the user. Name: Beast Mimicry: Beast Transformation. Rank: B. Type: Ninjutsu. Element: Darkness. Chakra cost: 20 (Reduced cost due to mastery) Description: This is a very hard jutsu to master, and use at will. Once the jutsu is learned, the user is able to shift from human to wolf in a matter of seconds. Once mastered, and handeled properly, the user is able to shift without handsigns. Glicthes have been found in this process that allow the user to have not only one form, but three. Looks: Information: This is the original result when Ookami uses the jutsu; Beast Mimicry, Beast Transformation.It is a normal black wolf with deep blue eyes, and the fur is Ookami's hair color. Ability: All the normal wolf abilities, with the ability to speak, faster speed, and more agility. Weakness: Darkness's counter part, light. Name: Sandwolf Devisation. Rank: A. Type: Ninjutsu. Element: Wind. Chakra Cost: 150 Description: This jutsu is a jutsu that was only mastered by those of the Ukiku clan. The user creates what seems like a huge wind/dust storm calling forth all the air they can gather, the user then uses the unsettled dust particales from the wind storm to make the wolves visable. The wolves then are able to attack, and possibly kill the victum. As the wolves charge at the victum, the wind becomes like tiny razor blades and cuts the victum while the wolves pass the victum, even if full contact isn't made. The wind left from those attacks then double back and cut the victum even more, creating even more serious wounds. This jutsu summons Three[3] wolves.
Lightning Jutsu - Spoiler:
Name: Raiton - Raikyuu (Lightning Ball) Rank: D Rank Type: Ninjutsu Element: Lightning Chakra Cost: 20 Description: Raikyuu is a ninjutsu technique that utilizes the Lightning Element. By concentrating chakra into the palm of their hand, the user can hurl a sphere of lightning towards an opponent.
Name: Lightning Release • Jolt Clamp [Raiton • Yusuburu Kasugai No Jutsu] Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Element: Lightning Chakra Cost: 40 Description: The user turns their chakra into electrical current and grab the opponent, sending a jolt of electricity into the opponent, temporarily paralyze an area of muscle.
Name: Raiton - Ikazuchi no Kiba (Lightning Bolt Fang) Rank: B Rank Type: Ninjutsu Element: Lightning Chakra Cost: 70 Description: Ikazuchi no Kiba is a ninjutsu technique that utilizes the Lightning Element. Reaching up into the sky, the user shoots a plum of electrified chakra-like essence into the clouds, causing a torrent of lightning to come crashing down towards an opponent.
Raiton - Rairyuu no Tatsumaki (Lightning Dragon Tornado) Rank: B Rank Type: Ninjutsu Element: Lightning Chakra Cost: 110 Description: Rairyuu no Tatsumaki is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Lightning Element. The ninja does a long string of hand seals which then causes a bolt of lightning to drop from the sky. The current will be contained within and around the user's form. They will then begin to spin in place forming a whirling vortex of wind and electricity. The vortex will take on the form of a dragon and strike out against his opponent. Even if the attack doesn't directly connect with his foe, the lightning can jump from the vortex to hit a nearby target.
Name: Flying Shock Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Element: Lightning Description: Gives any metal weapon an electric charge. The weapon must be held when the jutsu is activated. The required handseal only uses one hand, so the other hand holds the weapon. The weapon itself undergoes no visible change, the opponent would have no idea about it unless they witnessed the technique being used.
Name: Lightning Flux Rank: B Type: Ninjutsu Chakra Cost: 70-149 depending Element: Lightning Description: This jutsu is not very special as far as actual results go, but is a very nice sight to see. After putting in about 4 hand signs, The user will channel a small amount of lightning between cupped hands, forming it into a small ball form, and slowly push it into the air. Then, a large amount of chakra the user put into the form, will rapidly expand. One of two things could happen at this point, the form can either continually expand until there isnt enough chakra to make it grow anymore, or explode. If the form eventually just stops growing, it will disappear soon after that, but it can do some nasty damage if someone were stupid enough to touch the form. If it explodes however, small volts of lightning will be shot in all directions, which is rather hard for an enemy to dodge since there are so many, however one volt alone isnt enough to do very much damage.
Name: Lightning Shield Rank: A Type: Ninjutsu Chakra Cost: 100 to start, 70 every use Element: Lightning Description: This jutsu isnt to hard to use effectively, but it can be rather hard to maintain. after putting in 3 hand signs, The user will summon a large concentration of lightning to surround the body, however this alone does nothing. The jutsu is used to block incoming attacks from all sides, so the user will obviously be attempting to use the lightning that is now floating freely outside of their body to block with. To actually use the shield intention of this, the user will use their chakra to grab on to a large amount of the lightning that is floating around their body, and force it to expand in a certain direction. It is for this reason that the user will usually throw their hand out in the direction they need shielding. the lightning will then expand into a large circular shape, and the chakra will then be used to solidify the lightning so that it can actually block oncoming things, instead of just shocking them. This jutsu can be a little dangerous to maintain, as it requires a lot of chakra to use over and over again
Name: Lightning Halo Rank: A Type: Ninjutsu Chakra Cost: Small Halo: 50 Chakra; Medium Halo: 80 Chakra; Large Halo: 130 Chakra Element: Lightning Description: This jutsu isnt to difficult to use, but it can take a lot of chakra to use for some people if they plan on using the same thing consecutively. After putting in 5 hand signs, the user will be able to use the jutsu as many times as they want without having to put 5 more in. After this is done, the user will put their hand out in front of them, and a large ring or 'Halo' will appear in front of their palm. The halo's are usually pretty large, but they can be small if wanted. Once the halo is created, it can either be shot off immediately, or held in place to form more around it to shoot more than one off at once. Once the halo or halos are fired forward, they will go straight into the direction pointed to. They usually move pretty fast, and will shock an enemy greatly if they are caught in the middle of a halo, but not so much if they touch the edge of it. The halos will disappear eventually if they travel far enough without touching anything. Small halos travel a distance of about 10 feet, Medium about 15 feet, and Large about 24 feet
Name: Lightning Explosion Rank: B Type: Ninjutsu Chakra Cost: 60 for first shot, 5 reduced for each following shot Element: Lightning Description: This jutsu is very easy to use for someone that is used to using lightning, and handling an explosive factor. In this jutsu, when the user puts in the 7 hand signs, it will cause the chakra to be explosive when mixed with lightning that is shot straight out of the body. The user will channel lightning and chakra into the palm of their hand, and thrust it forward to shoot the lightning off. The lightning will go into the direction thrown, usually taking a spinning funnel shape, and explode when it hits something. The explosions arent very large, but are enough to do some good damage if it hits a target directly. The shots start to deal less and less damage after each consecutive shot, but cost less chakra. The shots dont move very fast, but they arent very slow either. A dangerous factor is introduced when using this jutsu though, if the user isnt careful, the lightning and explosive chakra that gets channeled into the palm, can explode right there, badly damaging that hand
Name: Lightning Arrow Rank: B Type: Ninjutsu Chakra Cost: 120 Element: Lightning Description: This is one of Ookami's favorite jutsus of all time, and has been called his signature jutsu in the past. The user will first find a way to accelerate themselves in or into the air, this is usually done by jumping off a wall with full force. Once the user has catapulted themselves, they will let a coat of chakra cover them as they fly, and a coat of lightning cover them over that. The chakra and lightning coating will harden, and create an extremely sharp point towards the head of the user, thus turning them into a human arrow. This arrow can pierce straight through bone if the user is shot hard enough, however it can cause damage depending on how the user lands if they miss a target. After going about 20 feet, the user will stop moving altogether, and they will fall to the ground
Name: Lightning Fistweapon Rank: C-A Type: Ninjutsu Element: Lightning Chakra Cost: C: 40 , B: 80 , A: 140 Description: This jutsu comes in three levels. The first being C ranked, the second being B ranked, and the third being A ranked. In the first level, the user concentrates a small amount of lightning to form around the right hand of the user in the shape of brass knuckles. With this in place, the user can use that hand to cause a small jolt of lightning to shock the impacted area when punched. In the second level, that lightning spreads from simple brass knuckles, to cover the entire fist of the user, creating the shape of a robotic gauntlet. At this level, the user can cause a more violent shock the opponent once they make contact. In the third level, the lightning spreads to cover the entire arm of the user. The lightning takes unique shapes to make the arm appear to be robotic. When the user hits the opponent, they can tear straight through muscle and tissue with much ease. Unless the user has good chakra control, the jutsu will disengage after the first strike. However if they have good chakra control, they can keep it out longer.
Name: Lightning Saw Rank: S Type: Ninjutsu Element: Lightning Chakra Cost: 240 Description: This jutsu is used in conjunction with Lightning Fistweapon. Once the user has achieved level three, another extension to the jutsu becomes available. A small slot will appear on the fist of the arm the jutsu is activated on, and a very long chainsaw blade will shoot out. This is of course also made of lightning. However, this part of the jutsu has more of a slicing ability than a shocking one. When the user hits an opponent with the chainsaw blade, it tears through flesh , muscle, tissue and bone like a knife through butter. This extension is very hard to use more than once, and keeping it out too long can cause the users on arm to become shocked, and fried severely.
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| Wind Jutsu (Please note that these are all Kenjutsu) - Spoiler:
Name: Euros Loop Rank: B Type: Kenjutsu Range: Mid to close Element: Wind Chakra Cost: 60 Weapon: Shichiko-hoju Description: By combining Ookami's chakra with the chakra of the Shichiko-hoju, a few jutsu become available. The most basic of these abilities is initiated by swinging the blade in any direction. The two chakras form wind, and form into a strong gust. This gust blows in the direction the blade was swung, blowing wind strong enough to send an average weighted man flying off of his feet and into the air, and the more heavy men onto their backs on the ground.
Name: Notus Chord Rank: A Type: Kenjutsu Range: Long Element: Wind Chakra Cost: 150 Weapon: Shichiko-hoju Description: By combining Ookami's chakra with the chakra of the Shichiko-hoju, a few jutsu become available. A more powerful offensive jutsu that becomes available is the Notus Chord. After mixing the two chakras, Ookami will raise the blade high above his head, and slam is hard onto the ground in front of him. By doing this, a large tunnel of wind about 20 feet in diameter appears in front of Ookami, and shoots forward in a straight shot. The wind is so collective that it can smash into things rather than just blowing them away, as well as cutting them to pieces. The wind goes forward for a mile at most, but will stop then, and disappear. If it smacks into something larger than a person, it well then disappear a few moments later.
Name: Reject Out Rank: B Type: Kenjutsu Range: Close Element: Wind Chakra Cost: 70 Weapon: Shichiko-hoju Description: By combining Ookami's chakra with the chakra of the Shichiko-hoju, a few jutsu become available. The only strict defensive out of these jutsu is the Reject Out jutsu. Once the two chakras are mixed, Ookami will manipulate it around him to swirl around him in ribbon like shapes like an armor. Despite the fact that it appears as an armor, it doesnt actually block anything. When something tries to attack Ookami, he uses the wind to redirect the blow to go into a different direction, or send the blow back. However, it is impossible to send something directly backwards. Only solid attacks are possible, and things such as jutsu are can penetrate it. Using the jutsu correctly, Ookami can use it to push attacks aside to create an opening in the enemy, and strike.
Name: Wind Slash Rank: A Type: Kenjutsu Range: Close Element: Wind Chakra Cost: 140 Weapon: Demon Yamato Description: By using the wind affinity the Demon Yamato carries, Ookami can either make a single slash with the Yamato so fast that the enemy cannot see it unless they have the Sharingan, or create additional slashes along with a real one, or make slashes while the sword is still in the sheath. This is done by using the Yamato to send out wind to slash out in front of Ookami to, and take on its exact same sharpness, in order to create artificial sword slashes in the air. The wind also pushes the blade in any direction so that it moves fast enough that it cannot be seen. Obviously, this also increases the sharpness of the blade when this is done.
Name: Sliding Slash Rank: B Type: Kenjutsu Range: Short Element: Wind Chakra Cost: 70 Weapon: Demon Yamato Description: Ookami will first concentrate a small amount of wind at his feet before he starts the jutsu. Once this is done, he will slide forward, using the wind at his feet to easily glide across any surface. He will slide for about three yards, leaving a little bit of wind to float in the air above the ground he passes over as he goes. Once he goes three yards, he will have no more wind on his feet to glide with, and thus come to a complete stop. Once he stops, he will make a hard slash with the Yamato in front of him. By doing this, he triggers an effect. The wind he left behind will suddenly turn into sword slashes in the air throughout the area he crossed, slicing anything he passed into ribbons quickly.
Name: Judgement Cut Rank: A Type: Kenjutsu Range: Mid Element: Wind Chakra Cost: 180 Weapon: Demon Yamato Description: By combining the wind affinity of the Demon Yamato and his black chakra, Ookami will create a solid black orb in front of him about 5 feet or more away. The intent of this is to trap the opponent inside of the orb as it materializes. Once the orb has been formed, Ookami will make a nudge at the sword in the sheath, and thousands of sword slashes will appear inside of the orb, cutting anything inside to pieces. The slashes also extend a little out of the orbs, so therefore anything withint two feet of the orb can also be cut, but not as badly. Up to three orbs can be summoned per use of the jutsu. This can be done in either three orbs one after another, or three at once in any direction.
Name: Improved Judgement Cut Rank: S Type: Kenjutsu Range: Everywhere Element: Wind Chakra Cost: 500 Weapon: Demon Yamato Description: This jutsu is much like the original Judgement Cut, only much more powerful. This jutsu can only be activated when Ookami is either possessed by the demon or phazon. He will first jump high into the air and appear to disappear from moving so quickly. He will then send out massive ammounts of the Yamato's wind affinity and his own black chakra. The combination of the two will rain down on the ground below him, forming hundreds of the black orbs all over the ground, leaving very little moving space. The orbs appear everywhere within a half a mile diameter. Normally, this jutsu would completely drain Ookami, but because it can only be activated using the demons own pure chakra, it will usually, but not always, knock him out of the demon's possession, allowing him to move on with his own chakra reserves.
Name: Ghost Cut Rank: A Type: Kenjutsu Range: Close Element: Wind Chakra Cost: 170 Weapon: Demon Yamato Description: This jutsu is first started out by Ookami energizing and surrounding the Yamato with the wind infinity it carries. When this is done, the blade will glow green accordingly. Once this is done, the jutsu can be carried out. The jutsu works by Ookami slicing into enemies with the Yamato, however leaving no signs of even touching them. He will then stand a distance away, and completely sheath the sword. When the final *Click* sound is heard, all the areas in which Ookami sliced will fall apart, causing massive damage. This is accomplished as when Ookami slices into an enemy, he leaves behind a small amount of wind in each cut to hold them together, and nulify the pain. Once Ookami sheathes the blade, the wind will activated, and not only release the cuts, but also slash deeper into them, completely severing anything that was cut. History and RP SampleHistory: Ookami was born in a place that would eventually become a nightmare to remember for him. The original Ukiku clan base was where he lived for not even a year of his life, so he has no recollection of anything that might have happened to him there except what he sees in dreams. To put things simply, he was born into one of the higher class branches of the clan, but his creation was not desired by anyone except for his parents. The leader of the clan had selected his family to create for him a female in which he would bestow the clans demon into. However, what they got was Ookami. The leader was outraged because his family refused to attempt to carry out his demands again. No punishment was taken upon them at that moment though, but they knew it would come. So, what they did, to show the leader that Ookami could be great and to just show an act of defiance, his parents gave the clans demon to him. However, they did not have enough ability to completely do this, so they ended up only giving half of the demon to him. The other half would later be given to one named Rin. Knowing that now they couldnt stay in the clan, or at least stay together, they made a decision. The father would run off with Ookami to another village to raise him into a great warrior that would some day show the Ukiku clan that he could be powerful, while the mother stayed and pronounced the two of them dead. She hoped that this supposed trauma would convince the leader that it was punishment enough, and leave her be. Ookami and his father ended up at the cloud village, where his last happy years would be spent, and where nightmares would also be born. At first, Ookami lived with his father all on their own, just trying to survive until he was old enough to begin training as a shinobi. What his father didnt expect though, was to meet another woman. The two of them ended up spending much time together, but he felt guilty for it. He then decided that it was best, Ookami could have a mother then too, and it would also provide cover. Better yet, she belonged to her own clan, and he could enter the two of them into that clan to cover themselves even more. So, the two of them ended up getting married, and Ookami had a mother too. By this time, Ookami was 4 years old, and was easy to convince that she had always been his mother. The two of them were also entered into her clan. Not long after this, Ookami even had a brother too. Unlike him though, he would become a full blooded Shirogane, which made him pretty jealous of him, but he got over it though. With all the good things in his life now, from a good family, a brother, and even a bright future of become a powerful shinobi, his life was set to fall. Now that Ookami was at the best point in his life, the point where everything was good and happy, to the extent where he thought his life was just simply perfect, it was time for it to come crashing down around him. It started with a visit. His mothers clan came to their house with a request. The Shirogane clan had been very inactive due to the fact that their members were few and scattered, as well as leaderless. But now, they were rising, and gathering members. They had come to collect their family to aid them in their uprising. However, they didn't want to, his mother wanted nothing to do with the Shirogane clan anymore. So with that, they left. Everyone had hoped that that was the last of them, but they were dead wrong. About a week later, while Ookami and his brother were out playing, separated from eachother, they struck. Without warning or noticed, they stormed the house and killed everyone in it. An explosion went off, and both of the brothers heard it. They ran to see what had happened, and met the other on either side of their parents corpses. For whatever reason, both of them had blood on their hands, and that led to a major problem. Each brother accused the other of killing their parents, and without listening to reason or accusations of the other, they ran off in opposite directions, vowing to one day kill the other. Running off in no positive direction, Ookami ran from his ruined house and out of the village. He wandered for many years, living on his own and simply surviving. However, while he was out by himself, his Ukiku heritage reemerged, and he started making bonds with wolves, as well as becoming much more feral than he had been before. Another important realization he came to out here, was his first look at himself in a long time. The last time he had seen his reflection, was when he was 10. Now however, when he was about 15, he noticed something when he looked at the water in a pond. He had wolf ears. This confused him greatly, he had no idea where they had come from. He didnt let it bother him to much though. Also in his isolation, his demon finally started to become active. He started hearing voices in his head sometimes, telling him to do odd things, he could usually ignore them though, he still had a sense of right and wrong at that point. He did however become possessed by the demon once while he was out. It wasnt anything serious though, he was just extremely mad and confused as to why his life was like this, why he had to live alone when he could still be with his parents. The anger consumed him, and he went on a rampage. Luckily though, when he came to, he was surrounded by freshly killed, and even skinned animal hides and meat. Apparently he had only majorly stockpiled his supply of food. This didnt seem like something Ookami should be happy about, and he was wondering if his life could get any worse now. However, the worst was yet to come for him. After a couple of years just surviving wherever he happened to be, he decided he needed a reminder, a reminder of what and who he was. He decided to go back to the cloud village to see his parents and the house again. Heck, he was old enough to look after himself now, he had proven that greatly, maybe he could start his own life there. After all, he had never done a crime. This decision would bring many horrors into his life, but a few pleasantries would follow as well. When he arrived there, he was happy to learn that no one recognized him, for all anyone knew, he was just a traveler that was looking for a home. However, he could not return to his old house, not yet. He needed a real home now, and seeing them right off the bat might kick him right back out of the village with his tail between his legs, literally. Ookami had also grown a wolf tail to go along with his ears as well, but he was good at hiding them. He found himself a home which he was able to pay for, as he had a lot of money from the people he stole from in his isolation. He got settled in, and he started a good life all over again. He did recognize a few faces when he returned, but none of them recognized him. He looked completely different than when he had last time he was there. That didnt bother him though, he didnt want people asking where he had been and all that. Instead, he might be able to know them again. That wasnt the case. About 5 months after he had settled into the village, a large group of people saw his ears. He was in a park, playing with a few kids when all of a sudden what he was using to hide his ears was knocked off. His ears stood stood right out for everyone to see. That little number started a chain reaction. People started avoiding him, looking at him suspiciously, and even calling him a demon from hell. Ookami was able to ignore most of this, but some of it really got to him. He finally decided it was time to see his parents, he didnt care if it scared him out of the village, he was ready to go anyway. He never saw them though. The house was on the top of a hill, and he was followed up it by a group of kids. When they got to the top, the kids started jeering. They called him a obsessive demon, said that he was probably looking for the souls of the people that once lived there so he could eat them. He was able to ignore these comments with a huge effort, but one boy went to far. The boy made a comment on his parents that was extremely rude, and just plain horrible. Not even a second after the boy finished the sentence, Ookami exploded. The demons energy swirled around him in a fury of anger and despair. a pillar of the black chakra shot into the sky as a beacon of the villages upcoming death. Ookami became completely possessed by the demon, and turned around to slaughter the kids. They were dead before they even knew what hit them. They werent enough though, now that Ookami was completely possessed with the anger of the people of the village, he sprinted off to kill all of them. He did just that too, killed every man woman and child of the village, reducing it to ruble. The village would later rebuild it in a different area, but this would be a constant reminder of what happened. When Ookami came too, he looked across the ruins of the village with horror and self disgust in his eyes. What had he done?
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| As if it wasnt bad enough, Ookami's problems werent yet through. There was one last thing he had to go through before his life turned around for the better.....for awhile anyway. He skulked out of the burning remains of what used to be his village, but what was now going to be a nightmare to haunt his every night, just thinking. Thinking about what it was he had become, what it was that was causing him to do all these things. Was he going insane? Like he knew. He did now realize though, that the anger that had fueled him to do the terrible deed, was not his own, but something living inside of him. He had heard of demons before, maybe that was the cause. With that in mind, he reached an even greater depression, realizing that he had been the host of a demon, an evil creature of great destruction. It gave him power, but at what price?
He decided that he would find a way to tame this demon, and make up for what he had done using its power, meaning he couldnt leave this world yet. He still walked slowly, thinking about what he was going to do, when he found himself at the top of a hill at the outskirts of the destroyed village. The sun was going down, and he was tired. So he decided he would go to sleep on this hill that he would always remember as the turning point. When he woke up, he went to get something to eat. When he got back, a deer leg hanging loosely out of his mouth, he picked up a scent. He knew that scent, he knew it well, but he hadnt caught it for a very long time. It was the scent of his brother, the man he had sworn to kill. He found him creeping up on his supplies he had left by a tree, but then stopped. Apparently he had picked him up to. When Ookami approached him, it wasnt pretty. He had more guilt thrown on him when his brother had a speech about killing their parents, and now their village. That led to the fight, which lasted a very long time, tearing at the very foundation of the hill. In the middle of the fight, that power came back, the power of the demon. He also noticed that his brother had the same kind of power, but from a different kind of demon. The fight ended with the both of them on the brink of death. Only then was the truth found. They had a speech with each other with their dying breaths, and only then, after hearing both sides of either story, did they truly know. Their own clan had killed their parents.
With this new information in mind, Ookami now had two tasks to carry out. But for now, he decided he would take care of the first one, it seemed easier that way. Even though the two brothers had just made up, they still decided to go their separate ways. Ookami went in his own direction, and his brother his. For a little while, Ookami's life from this point on was just surviving again, with only a few small events going on. The first of these, was meeting a member from the Akayoru, and organization that he would later recreate as the Shiranui. Ookami was looking for food in the Sand country, when the mans little brother got caught in his trap. This led to a fight, not because the two were mad, but just because Ookami wanted to test the mans strength. The fight ended with no major casualties, on either of them. Only moments after he left that area, he met a jounin sleeping by a tree. The mans name was Raidon, someone Ookami would come to be close friends with. Not much happened there though, they just introduced each other, had a little talk, and went their separate ways.
Now, something interesting happens for Ookami. During his travels, he starts to grow a little more defiant of life, hating it and all creatures more and more. This is of course, the work of the demon, trying to get him to bend to his will. It was working to, Ookami was starting to become evil to a very bad degree. It didnt help him much when he met a very strange man, whos name he can not remember. The man had a demon, like him, and he had a plan. He gave Ookami an offer, to help him basically destroy the world. Ookami agreed without much hesitation, and the man led him to an abandoned village in the rock country. Ookami wouldnt be stay here for long, but a lot of things would happen here. The man would come to turn this place into the headquarters of a very destructive and evil organization, where human slaves criss crossed everwhere, carrying out tasks just to hope to live tomorrow. First however, there was a meeting. It was at THIS place that he saw a man named Orochi. He had a past encounter with this man. He had fought him on the outskirts of Konoha village, and only barely won. He didnt seem to happy with his life, so it wasnt a surprise to find him here.
So, Ookami was now part of an organization that was out to destroy the world, along with a former Konoha Chuunin. He wouldnt be part of it for very long though, it would eventually crumble on itself before they really got to do much before expand the village a little. In the middle of the reconstruction of the village, Ookami found a mine. Inside the mine, he found the walls mutated, and strange looking creatures that scuttled across the wall. When he got to the end, he was attacked by a robotic looking statue, and defeated it along with Orochi's help. One the robot was destroyed, they both found a meteor. This meteor was loaded with something called phazon, an alien element that would come to haunt Ookami, but also give him power. Only seconds after it was discovered, the meteor exploded, corrupting them both with the phazon. They both found themselves at a strange state that gave them power with the new element, that would later be named as 'Hypermode' by Ookami Unfortunantly, this state in which they found themselves in would soon leave them, leaving the powerful jutsu Ookami now calls Phazon Mimicry in its place. Orochi and Ookami exited the mine with a new power, and they were loving it. But the man that had recruited them, was gone.
The two of them didnt really care about this much, because they were still excited about this new power. To test it, they had yet another spar with each other to determine its power. This fight didnt last very long, but it was very destructive. It made the fight between he and his brother look like child's play, which was really saying something. Luckily for the two of them though, hypermode hadnt developed a corrupted state yet, so they were both good. However, Raidon was the one that stopped this fight. The two of them were both about to go at each other with their strongest attacks, Orochi with his blood typhoon, and Ookami with his raikon. If these two had collided, it would be extremely destructive, probably tearing the entire area apart. They were extremely fortunate that Raidon had been there to stop them. Not very long after this, Orochi left, and left Ookami to talk with Raidon. During their conversation, Raidon asked if Ookami would give him phazon, and also, if he would train him. Ookami was surprised indeed, but he accepted, corrupting Raidon with the phazon. A training session followed this, Ookami teaching Raidon how to control and use the phazon correctly, and then he was gone. Raidon left, saying he had to get back to the village. Ookami questioned the man, like he would for a long time to follow, but a friendship had been established.
After this, something interesting happened. Ookami looked at what his life was now, and he didnt like it very much. He had a small window of time to look at the world without the sheen of the demons red hate, and found that he didnt like what he was doing in it. He fled the village, leaving it behind and never looking back. Ookami knew what he had to do, he had to do something good. He had to do something that would make up for the path he had taken. He decided he would join a village, Konoha to be exact. He took his trip there, and entered without much problem. No one had every actually seen him inside the village before, and he did a good job of just making himself look like a traveler. Once he was there, he went to the Hokage's office. Through many interesting events, Ookami gained a half citizenship to the village. He was able to stay in the village, but he was still considered a half threat, and couldnt participate in some things normal citizens could do, yet he was still the villages weapon. That was good enough for him, he would be able to make up for past mistakes now.
Now Ookami's past would come rushing back to him, but in a way that he wouldnt realize. He decided to take a tour, with his new citizenship, he was able to do that. He took a trip to the academy, to see what that was like. He had never actually been to one after all. While he was there, he saw two girls, a Jounin and a Chuunin. Ookami was stunned at the Chuunin. There she stood, with two wolf ears, and a tail, just like him. He approached the two, who seemed to be in a heated conversation that wasnt exactly friendly. He spoke to the two of them, the Jounin introduced herself as Tategami, and the Chuunin as Rin Ukiku. That name, Ukiku, clicked in Ookami's head. It seemed to familiar, yet he still just couldnt place it. After a few words were crossed between the three of them, they decided to have a three way spar. Ookami accepted of course, he loved to spar, and this Rin person seemed like the kind who loved violence. Like most fights Ookami had been through so far, it didnt last long. What was most important, is what happened after. Ookami found Rin and Tategami breaking down and crying, and not because of Ookami. They each had a blade in their stomachs, and they couldnt stop. They were talking about their clans, and their past. Ookami didnt talk to much, just stood back with a stone face. He didnt feel like talking about his horrible clan, his second one anyway. But then, Rin made an offer. She asked if the two of them would join her clan. Ookami accepted gratefully. He hated his clan, and was happy to have a new one. Or so he thought anyway. He didnt know that what he was actually doing, was rejoining his birth clan, by the hands of his younger sister. | |
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| Subject: Re: Ookami Ukiku Update [Finished] Wed May 20, 2009 6:58 pm | |
| Ookami was privileged to meet and become friends with many more honorable shinobi after that day. However, one of the most important in his life was someone named Hana. This person was actually an Akatsuki, the exact kind of person he should be against with his place in Konoha. Even still, she was his first love. Their meeting happened in a very small place. Ookami was watching a thunderstorm in the Lightning Country on top of a boulder, when she happened to pass by. They had some small talk, and maybe even some bigger talk, but that was about it. They went their different ways after that, but they met again soon later. This time, interesting things happened. Hana was at the ruins of a village she herself had destroyed when she was little. Ookami found her asleep on a bench in what was a church. She awoke to have an emotional breakdown, which Ookami was there to comfort. Much talk was exchanged between the two, and a strong bond was formed between that talk, filled with much emotion and tragedy. Ookami helped her make things right with the spirits that lived in the village, and she came with Ookami to the ruins of his old village to do the same. What awaited Ookami though was something that made him very upset. He found the ruins of his old house from long ago. What was so upsetting though, was the condition he found his parents. They were still laying on the floor with the murder weapons and dried blood sticking out of them. No one had bothered even going into the house while they were excavating the ruins for materials for a new one they were going to build. It angered Ookami to a very extreme level, and if Hana wasnt there, he probably would have gone on another rampage. But, she was, and together they made gravestones for the members of the village, and sent silent prayers to them. A few weeks of travel followed this event, but one in particular, which ironically was the last, led to a few events. The two of them had separated for awhile, and Ookami found her buried in snow in the middle of the snow country. Ookami saved her life, and together they went to the nearest town to get some food and rent a room. Nothing to special happened while they were eating, but something did when they got to a hotel. To put it simply, Ookami went berserk from demon possession after a personal discussion. When a room keeper came by to check on them, Ookami pinned her to a wall, and almost took her life by slamming his clawed hand into her heart, when Hana stopped him. She used a few jutsu to paralyze him, and tie him to the wall. After that, he calmed down, and Ookami asked Hana to kill him. He knew he was turning into a monster again, and he didnt want that, he begged her to kill him. But she didnt, and she left. Not long after this, Ookami found Hana near her death in the middle of Konoha after confronting her evil father and killing him. She died in Ookami's hands, and he felt like he had lost a large piece of his heart. He made a grave for her, and made a decision to continue on in his life, so that he could maybe destroy the real evil in the world. The kind of evil that goes deeper than just the Akatsuki's simple world domination plan.
Many, many more things happened in Ookami's life from there on, some included meeting different special people such as Kisa, Flora, Mitsuhide, and many more. The ironic part about Flora, was that she ended up being Ookami's second love, even though she was his brothers killer. But two of the most important people are Sakuya and Okashi. Sakuya would come to be someone very close to Ookami's heart. She was only a student when they first met, and she was handicapped. She was in a wheelchair, but was able to walk using chakra supporters. The two of them met on a late night. She possessed a cat demon within her, so naturally the first few moments were tense. But Ookami was slowly able to soothe her into comfort. She ended up passing out on the ground after a little bit of talk. She had announced that she lived practically alone with no parents, and Ookami did what he thought he should, offered to be her father. When she passed out, he took her back to his place, and the agreement was sealed there. things between them got very close from there, they developed the kind of bond that could never be broken, not matter what. Then there was Okashi. Ookami met HIM in the middle of the snow country. He was wondering around, and looked like he was about to die. He, and someone else that was traveling with him, helped Okashi survive to the nearest town. From there, he was fed, and they all got a room together. This created a bond as well, a bond between friends.
Now, it was time for Ookami to relive his past, and detach himself from the village he was starting to love. He awoke one day knowing it would happen. Hes demon was gaining to much ground on his body. If he didnt do something soon, he would be completely possessed. So, to avoid this, he did what he had to do. He unleashed his demon upon a small town, killing everyone and everything in it. After this, he was discovered by a few people not far from what was now a ruin of yet another village. Mitsu showed up, and so did Rin. He fought the two of them, and almost killed a third when he stopped himself. He left back to the ruins of the village to face whatever punishment awaited him there. A jounin was there, and he fought him. No one won, but Sakuya showed up. She willed Ookami to kill her, but he didnt. Rin followed him as well, and peace was settled after some emotional discussion. In the end though, Ookami had to leave the village for his crimes.
Shortly after Ookami left, he and Okashi hatched an idea. Ookami remembered an organization called the Akayoru what was now dead. They were both missing nin, and they both had a common goal of wiping out the evil in the world. So what they decided to do was recreate the Akayoru, with the purpose of cleansing the world of as much evil as they could. They named it the Shiranui to disguise what they were recreating. As far as most people knew, the Akayoru was an evil organization, and they didnt want anyone thinking that. Ookami and Okashi met with a group of a few other missing nin's they knew, and formed their organization. Their primary goal was to take out the akatsuki, and are still in the process of doing this. Ookami went back to Konoha for a visit, which was when he was able to pull Sakuya out of it, and have her travel with him.
Not to long after this though, Ookami was kidnapped. He was caught off guard by a band of bandits who wanted to offer him as a ransom. They never got around to actually threatening him to anyone, and they kept him nice and tight so that he couldnt get away. He spent a long time in captivity, getting harder and harder emotionally every day. He was finally able to break free when one person let their guard down. They came to close to his chained body, and the man was carrying oil. Ookami gave him a nice headbutt, and flicked the oil can with his tail to rain on the chains around his arms. They became slippery, and he was able to slip out of them. He then did the same with his legs. From there, he was easily able to overpower everyone and escape.
Since his escape however, it has been as though, at least to most others, that he never really came back to anyone. Claiming to have faced horrors that he had to get rid of on his own, he informed all of his friends and relatives that he was going to live on his own in a remote location for a long time, in order to work certain things out that were causing him great problems. Some thought that this was just his excuse to go and die in a hole, but what he said was true. During his captured state, both Phazon and Ryuk had gained to much ground on his body, and were practically tearing him apart every minute. He needed to get away, to be alone, so that he could get both of these things under control in order to ensure the safety of all those he loved. So, for a very long time he stayed out in the wilderness, his location not actually known by him or others, and fought off the demons within him. It took a very long time, but he was able to emerge victorious over his own body, and threw both of them in check. While this may be so, Ryuk is still able to haunt him whenever he pleases, but that is something Ookami can now overcome without a second thought. Now that his own horrible problems are out of the way, he plans to return to those he loves. Once again he can become the older brother Rin always looked up to, the father Sakuya always relied on, and the friend everyone else believed to be great. | |
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| Subject: Re: Ookami Ukiku Update [Finished] Wed May 20, 2009 7:01 pm | |
| RP Sample:The crowd of kids, most of them at the age of ten, walked out into a ring within a familiar building they all had been in many times before. It was graduation day for them, and all of them were excited. Finally, they would become genin, and they were at the final stage of their test. In the middle of them stood a few distinct boys, one of them being known as Concorta. He had a happy smile on his face that he was able to do this with his friends, and they could all move on and become genin together, and take on the world united. But everyone else had weird looks on their faces, evil grins it seemed like, and they were all eyeballing Concorta. He tried to shake off the weird feeling that was causing in order to get into whatever it was that would lie ahead. He had been looking forward to these exams for a long time now, and they were here, and he couldnt help but shake with anticipation. His own grin was ear to ear as he elbowed one of his friends next to him. "This is it! The final exams! I'm so excited, I know I'm going to be a genin! he said in a whisper towards the boy next to him, his friend Itimashi. In reply, he gave a small, worried smile almost as he answered, "Yea, good luck Concorta.".
The room became silent quickly after that, as the instructor came before all of them. He stood while he waited for the talking to end, and then spoke in a loud voice. "Welcome to the final test, students. Today, one of you shall emerge from this building as a genin, and leave the rest of you in shame. Concorta's eyes widened at that moment as he looked worriedly at Itimashi. "What does he mean by only one will become a genin?!" he asked with equal worry in his eyes. In reply, Itimashi just shook his head and told him to be quiet. Concorta looked back up at the instructor, a new fear growing. "But I've done enough talking for now. You all know what the deal is today, and now its time for you to act! Let the final test begin!" he yelled with a roaring voice, arm extended forward. Concorta spoke desperately, feeling shame that he didnt know what the final test actually was. "Whats the test?! I didnt hear him!" He looked around for Itimashi, but he wasnt there. Looking around some more, none of his friends were. They had all left him alone in the middle of the ring.
He looked around hopefully to see what was going on, when suddenly someone shouted from behind him. "Lets see how tough you are now!" DIE! The voice came from the most the jealous boy in the academy, Hokuno. Concorta was the best student in the academy, learning everything easy, and acing all tests. He was very good at sparring as well, and he was sure to become a genin. However, this was also bad thing. All of the other students knew they didnt have a chance to defeat Concorta, so they decided to take him out first, all at once. As the words 'DIE!' were shouted, what seemed like hundreds of blades slammed into him from all sides. Where there was nothing a moment before, there was the face of a student looking at him with victorious look, all of them holding something bladed. Every part of his body was hit by a weapon at that point, and the only people that werent holding a weapon were his friends. They were nowhere to be seen, but he thought he could hear sounds of them struggling. He looked to his right to see Hokuno leering at him, his own mouth agape. Blood trickled out of his mouth, and his eyes suddenly widened and became empty. A quick gasp caught his throat, and the worst happened.
Bones shot out from all directions on Concorta's body, pushing the blades away from his body, all the while his mouth was kept open, his eyes wide and empty. This was a first time deal. Everyone knew Concorta was a Kaguya, and were actually surprised by how bloodthirsty he wasnt, but since he had gone so far being a normal shinobi, no one guessed he had developed the clan's Kekkei Genkai. But they knew it now, and a large bone shot into his hand like a sword, and he slowly turned his head to look at Hokuno who was looking at him with a horrified look on his face. The blow was swift, but painful. The sword like bone in his hand was plunged quickly into Hokuno's heart and twisted. Concorta opened his fist into a palm, and pushed the blade all the way through his heart and out of his back, plunging his hand into the boys chest now. He wrapped his open hand around the heart, and ripped it out quickly. The heart, still beating in his hands, was crushed as Hokuno fell to the ground dead. Then, he turned around slowly, his eyes now glowing blue as the rest of his chest and face were soaked crimson, looking at the people in which Hokuno had called his friends, and then it began.
Concorta was upon them quickly. He made one quick snap from right to left with a new, longer bone, and stood in a position as the upper parts of their bodies slid to the ground from the lower parts, leaving four sets of legs just standing there, shooting up lines of blood like a fountain. He turned around, his eyes now narrowed normally as he looked out. A couple strands of hair fell in front of his eyes as he glared at the rest of the kids in the room, all of them just frozen in fear. He extended another bone in his left hand as he used body flicker to appear in front of one boy, making an upward slash to throw him into the air. He jumped up to him quickly, and started slashing at the body in the air like it was some kind of game, slicing all of his appendages off before he even hit the ground. When he did hit the ground, it was before Concorta. While he descended, he started spinning, coming down on top of the boy as he made a spin, slamming the sword into him, cutting him in half right there. He then stood up slowly, and looked towards another, a girl this time. His face remained impassive as he used body flicker again to appear in front of the girl, impaling her with both of his blades at once, one above the waist, the other below. He quickly lifter her up over his shoulders, and started pulling on the blades. A sickening sound was heard as the two halves of the body were torn apart slowly, both of them shooting off in either direction as they did.
He looked to his right to find another girl had finally gotten her sense, and turned around to run, not even daring to fight anymore. Concorta pulled back, and hurled one of the bone swords towards her. The bone flew at high speeds, spinning directly for the back of her head. Just as the whole room assumed, and as the girl screamed, "Noooooo!!!!!" with a horrific tone, the bone slammed into the back of her head, tore it off of her neck, and carried to to the wall where it hung there. Later inspection would reveal that the face had been crying horribly. At this scene, Concorta made no facial expressions still. Where were his friends though? He didnt bother looking for them, but they were in fact fighting as well, feeling as though they were doing so along side Concorta now. But they were dead wrong. Concorta was blind, and his only intention was to kill everyone he saw. And thats what he did. His next victim was also killed be decapitation. He ran towards a boy that was distracted, letting a bone pierce the palm of the hand that had once held the bone that was thrown. The bone was large, long, and sharp, and it was plunged right into the boy's forehead, splattering his brains out onto the floor behind him. Concorta's foot was placed on the boy's chest as he pulled back, tearing the head off.
This process continued, Concorta brutally killing one child after the next in brutal, gory ways, and by the time he was down to the last four people, his friends, he was entirely soaked in blood, as was the whole room. His eyes still seemed to glow blue amongst the crimson however as he stood towering over them, breathing slowly. "Wow Concorta, that was amazing!" Itimashi said a little hesitantly. Concorta didnt answer though, and as Itimashi started to repeat his name, he was quickly impaled in the stomach with a blade. As he opened his mouth to scream, another bone was shot into his mouth, tearing through the skin on his neck from the other side. The two parts of his body were separated, as the upper part of his stomach and up went one way, and the lower part of his stomach and down went another. Concorta then looked to the left to see another one of his friends frozen completely. Concorta grabbed his arms, tore them off with amazing strength, and threw them to the ground. He then grabbed the top and bottom of his mouth, and pulled them apart so that his jaw was completely removed from his head. From there, Concorta picked the arms back up, and threw him hardly into his throat, leaving him there to die eventually from choking on his own blood and arms.
Then, the last person alive turned around and started to run. Concorta didnt bother using Body Flicker again, and slowly started after him, two sword like bones in his hand. He ran after him, his last friend in the world, and caught him quickly. He spun him around, and jumped on top of him. Now, the boy, his friend, had his face looking with a look of the utmost fear into the cruel, scary face of Concorta. Sparing him no mercy, and instead opening into a new form of brutality, Concorta took the two blades and held them like daggers. One after another, almost to quick to make out, the blades were plunged into the boys chest, over and over, for a whole minute. The boy was not dead yet though, and to finish the carnage, Concorta ended by plunging one bone into the bottom of the boy's chin, and tearing his head off of his body, part of his spine still hanging down.
Concorta, the man who was now soaked from head to toe in crimson blood, stood up slowly, his head downcast. Suddenly someone started clapping. "Very, very impressive Concorta! I have never seen such brutality in a long time, consider yourself a genin! We shall be expecting great things from you." And then he was gone, walking off out of the room to leave Concorta by himself. The bones sticking out of his body were retracted into him, and any bone weapon his was holding was dropped, and the glow left his eyes. Suddenly, he blinked as though he was just waking up from a dream. He looked around the room, and found all of the dead bodies. He spotted Itimashi instantly, and ran over to him. "Itimashi?! What happened?! ITIMASHI!!!" he cried desperately. Indeed the boy had been out of it completely during the mass murder, and now that he was back as his normal self, he looked down at his right arm to see a bone extending from his palm. His eyes widened, and he crumpled to the ground crying. He had killed all of his friends brutally, and mercilessly. | |
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| Concorta slowly opened his eyes, awakening from the horrible dream of the day he had killed everyone in the academy, all of his friends and students. He was crying while his eyes opened, he himself feeling the regret and fear of it all. But now, he was emotionless, and was unable to show his feelings the way he had back then. Instead, the tears just flowed easily. When he opened his eyes to look up at the sky, he lied there for a moment before saying out loud, "It was only a dream, and now its over." But even as he said this, he knew he couldnt just shake it off that easily. It had been a long time since he had that particular nightmare, and remembering the fact that his accursed 'ability' had killed his friends and family didnt sit well with him. He looked up at the blue sky as a few clouds rolled slowly along, when all of a sudden there was a flash and all the blue became blood crimson, and the cloud above him seemed to morph into the face of Itimashi. "Why Concorta?! Why?!! We were your friends!" he heard the voice, but the cloud did not actually move in such a way that the face it created appeared to be talking. "DAMNIT!!!! He suddenly screeched, his voice straining by the tears. He laid there and just let tears flow out of his eyes until he could will himself to move again.
Once he was ready, he tried to get up, deciding he couldnt just lay there forever. But, as he tried, he noticed a weight on his chest. He looked down his body and his eyes opened wide as a gasp pierced through his mouth. On his chest, his rib cage extended outwards, and further down, a few spikes were sticking out of his chest. Resting on these two protrusions on his chest and stomach was the body of another boy, looking to be about 15 years old, dead. "No..." he whispered in denial as he looked at the body on him. He then turned away, and looked at his arm. Sticking out of his arm was a head that was pierced through by another spike that extended from the arm. The man's mouth was open, so the bone could be seen coming from the bottom of the mouth, and going up through the roof of it, finally emerging again from the head. He looked around himself to find many more individual body parts pierced by bone spikes on his body. Without saying anything, his eyes only getting wider, he retracted the bones, and stood up quickly. What he found once he did stand up did not sit well in his stomach.
He looked around to find himself in a field like area surrounded by grass. Resting within the grass however were more than five dead bodies, some of them missing their parts, all strewn about the ground. Around them was even more blood on the grass. Looking at himself once more, he noticed what before he had not. He was also soaked in blood just about. Touching his hair, he felt it dried by blood as well. Unable to contain himself any longer, he screamed at the top of his lungs at this. Then he looked down to find a decapitated female body that was small, but looked to be matured to the age of 19. He gasped once more as he ran towards the body. "Please no, please dont be Emma!" He said in desperation, and looked at the body closer now to find that it wasnt in fact Emma's body. He gave a sigh of relief and stood up. Taking on last look at all the bodies, he just finally snapped.
He turned around and ran as fast as he could away from the field, and towards the beach, and water. He ran, rambling on terribly about random things that didnt even make sense. Nothing made sense anymore, nothing was right, he was killing people in his sleep! Men woman and children, none of them survived his wrath. He couldnt control it anymore! It happened whenever his mind wasnt working, or he just couldnt control himself. It was like his nightmare all over again. By the time he reached the beach, he was crying freely, showing emotion that he hadnt in quite awhile. Where was Emma when he needed her? She was probably at the base, receiving some kind of training from Tenrai. She would understand, she could help him through this, convince him that he wasnt a killing machine that knew nothing else besides. But she wasnt here, and he couldnt be convinced. He tripped in the sand quite promptly spreading blood into the blond particles as well. He was like a sponge of the stuff at the moment, and it didnt take long for it to spread as though he had an open wound on his body.
He picked himself up, took one look at the water now, and turned over to puke. In that small glance, the water changed from a sea like blue-green, into a lake of red blood, like the sky had earlier. Once he was done getting rid of whatever scraps he had eaten lately, he stood up completely. He turned to the side, and just started running in the sand, still crying slightly now as he went, rambling about all the people he had killed, and all the lives he had surly ruined. A few things could be understood as he talked to himself, calling himself nothing more than a killing machine, and how much more suffering he would have to put people through before he could be removed. He just kept running though. After awhile, his head jerked up as he felt a chakra presence to see a shadow far in the distance. "No! Not a person!" He said to himself as he involuntarily extended a bone from his palm. He knew very well that in his condition, there was no way he would be able to resist killing the person he saw in front of him. But he was unable to stop stumbling forwards, but he was able to retract the bone into his body. Maybe if he was lucky, the person would take one look at him, think nothing of him other than 'freak' and let him just pass. After all, he wasnt wearing his akatsuki cloak, and not even his ring was on his finger. He remembered passing out after training, which must have been when he went out to kill people. He had remembered to put the ring in a pocket, as out on his hand, it just would have caused a problem. To his dismay however, he accidentally tripped in the sand just in front of the person, a female, he was hoping to run by. He lay still, not daring to make a movement. | |
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| Personal Weapons(I could not find a proper weapons template, so I hope the one I use is fine) - Spoiler:
Name: Demon Yamato Appearance: Weapon Position: When not in use, the weapon exists in a different dimension used as a holding realm for certain types of weapons that have bonded spiritually with Ookami. For this reason, it is possible for the blade to be summoned into use. When this happens, the blade materliazes in Ookami's hand, inside of its sheath. Skills/Abilities: The demon yamata has the ability to absorb demonic chakra or energy that is pumped into it by Ookami. When this happens, a black flame erupts around it. When this is done, the power and sharpness of the blade is increased by 200%, as well as Ookami's speed with it. However, it ends after the first three strikes, hit or no hit. It also has a small wind affinity that allows it to strike without being seen at all, or in some cases, without being removed from the sheath. It can also be summoned to Ookami the same way the Shichiko-hoju is. Source: The Demon Yamato is a gift from Ookami's demon, Ryuk. A little after leaving the Cloud village for the second time (The time he destroyed it) he had a small spasm in which he was possessed by the demon. Only he wasnt possessed in the way that he went around and killed everything he saw. Instead, he had a vision where he spoke to the demon. It was at about that time that Ookami was still very angry at the world, and still partially evil, so what the demon spoke to him made much sense, and he listened intently. Towards the end of the conversation, the demon told him he would recieved a gift in order to increase his own abilities. This gift was in fact the Demon Yamato. A sword crafted of his own chakra, and wind element. Jutsu for this weapon can be found within the wind jutsu section of Jutsu as they are all wind jutsu.
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Name: Shichiko-hoju Appearance: Weapon Position: When not in use, the weapon exists in a different dimension used as a holding realm for certain types of weapons that have bonded spiritually with Ookami. For this reason, it is possible for the blade to be summoned into use. When this happens, the blade materliazes on Ookami's right arm, thus fusing into it literally turning the bottom half of his arm, into the blade. Skills/Abilities: The Shichiko-hoju has the ability to conduct wind, allowing Ookami to use certain wind jutsu that would require a large fan otherwise. Despite its size, it is actually very lightwieght which allows Ookami to move it around and attack quickly. Because of its size though, it can still be hard to use. It also has its own kind of special chakra within it which, when combined with Ookami's chakra in certain ways, can do different jutsu. Alone however, the chakra is useless and does nothing. To the very few that know of the blades existance, it has been known to be the majestic blade that moves like the wind. Source: Ookami received the Shichiko-hoju while he was traveling around the deserts around the sand village during the time that he was supposedly away from everyone. While he was wandering around, he found a merchant that looked very disturbed. Upon question of the merchant, he described a rumor of a large cult that was growing out in the desert that was just days, not even a week, away from attacking the sand village. Ookami, feeling as though he would investigate this cult, starting searching around the desert for this cult and where it was located. After about a day, he had found it. The cult had set up a headquarters in a large underground system of tunnels rooms, which Ookami promptly snuck into without setting off any kind of alarm. Without going into detail, Ookami eventually found out from a few men he interrogated while he was there that the cult planned on using an extremely powerful weapon called the Shichiko-hoju as their means of attack against the village. Of course, Ookami had never heard of such a weapon, but figured for the sake of the village that it really must have been powerful. He had eventually killed every man in the underground system silently and stealthily, and came upon the largest room there. In it, held the leader who had a large weapon attached to his arm. A fight ensued, and Ookami won in the end. He noticed that the weapon was indeed very powerful, but the wielder was dwarfing its power with his own weakness. Once the man was killed, the weapon came off, and seemed to float in the air. Ookami approached the weapon with the intention of destroying it, but as he held his hand over it, it appeared to disintegrate. He felt a warm breezing presence about him at that moment, and the blade suddenly materialized on his right arm, then quickly went away again. It was then that the weapon had bonded with him. Jutsu for this weapon can be found within the wind jutsu section of Jutsu as they are all wind jutsu.
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