Tenshi Karuto • Angel Card [finished]

Name: Tenshi Karuto • Angel Card

Appearance:

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Front: The card looks like the one above in the picture. It has an ace in the middle and an 'A' on the corners of the card. It is white.

Spoiler:

The back of the card has a black backround with a white 'A' on it. It stands for angel.

Special Abilities: Tenshi Karuto has the ability to multiply. Each card being an exact clone of the last one. The card will start to multiply when he chants, 'Multiply, Ace!!'

AS: 25 Cards [35 Chakra]
Genin: 50 Cards [45 Chakra]
Chuunin: 100Cards [110 Chakra]
Jounin: 500 Cards [195 Chakra]
S Rank: 1,000 Cards [220 Chakra]

Each card being as sharp as sword being sharpened for 5 days. It can cut through most metals and each one moves at the command of Yuki or they all move at once. If the cards are destroyed they will revert back into one original card. That is why the card is called 'Tenshi Karuto' because it is immortal. The individual card before he chants, it cannot go more than 5 feet away from him.


This is the only power that Yuki has found out about.


Origin:Origin: When Yuki was born and the crystal was inserted something weird happened... A card appeared beside him and it had a heavnely aura. They myth was that God has chosen Yuki for good, they say that an Angel delivered it. It is more of a special ability because it is a part of his body becuase the individual card cannot leave more than 5 feet away from him. [/spoiler]



There was a clan called the Nakamura clan. They were weapon makers used to destroy monsters. Then war erupted between them and their country in the Heaven Village. Then they made the immortal weapon 'Tenshi Karuto.' It would reincarnate in heavenly kids when they were born. it was foretold that the last holder of the card would bring peace to the world. ((Awaiting appoval))[/spoiler]

ok all i have to say is: there should be a chakra cost on the cloning of the cards and the controlling of them, other than that its great!

the amount of cards bring created can be kinda rediculous if you think about it... how you your mind be able to concentrate on 5000 things at once?? the concept is nice... but the numbers are insane, it would be basically unstopable as well since the card itself cannot be destroyed...

thats one of those things that you can stop someone at chunin rank as an AS with that weapon... and I'm sure you have placed out many more possibilities that I have since I have only looked at it for 5 minutes... maybe tone it down some on the numbers...

Edited.......

still need toning down. AN AS WITH 25 OF THESE sorry major tones down like divide by 10 then round up to nearest whole number. thats my opinion.

2 cards....... Omfg!

M'kay, so far so good. xD

~STAMP~

Approved. xD

<~ Doesn't feel like thoroughly checking it.