Jijitsu Mu Returns! (Ready for Grading)

(Please let me know what areas need fixing, if they need fixing. This is a character from the Ingoo site that I had.)

Basic Character Information:
Name: Jijitsu Mu
Age: 19
Gender: Female
Clan: None

Looks:
Her curvaeous body is complimented by her blond hair and blue eyes. Jijitsu wears a white ceremonial kimono tied with a violet obi. A milky white swirling pattern catches in the light at the right times. Tied to her hip is an ornamental ceremonial dagger, which is tucked into the tight rope which keeps her obi shut. She walks with a fluidity that expresses her intensive training over the past four years.

Personality:
By nature she is a relaxed and curious person, as well as kind. However she can be oblivious to the impacts of her manners and words as well. She's veiled in a constant mood of joy and playfulness so by many she is also considered childish. Beyond that, she has an intuitive sense and a deep empathy for others, which is shadowed sometimes with her fickleness and need to be right and only enhanced by a tongue as vicious as a whip.

Skill and Rank Information
Village: Konoha
Rank: Chuunin (750)

Special Characteristics: Chakra Absorbing (Specialty)
Special Effects: Siphon's foe's chakra to use as her own.

Elements:Water, Lightning
Skills Specialties: Henge Jutsu (transformation Jutsu), Chakra Siphoning, Genjutsu


Jutsus

Name: Angel's Bless
Rank: E
Type: Genjutsu
Chakra Cost: 5
Element: NONE
Description: Angel's Bless creates a warm, relaxed sensation in the opponent despite surroundings which may dictate otherwise. The genjutsu is easily broken if interrupted.

Name: Angel's Touch
Rank: E
Type: Genjutsu
Chakra Cost: 5
Element: NONE
Description: Angel's Touch enchants the opponent so that they are infatuated with the caster of the Genjutsu, wishing to do all they can to have them. The genjutsu is easily broken if interrupted.

Name: Chakra Devouring (Stage 1)
Rank: E
Type: Supplimentary
Chakra Cost: 15
Element: NONE
Description: At this stage, the need for consumption is not strong. It is most commonly used to cut chakra strings and pull loosely-woven chakra spells from most inanimate objects. At this stage it is still simple to stop the need to consume chakra.
Chakra taken from opponent: 15
Chakra gained from opponent: 3
Self-Damage if no damage dealt: 1 per round

Name: Largeform Jutsu
Rank: E
Type: Supplimentary
Chakra Cost: 10
Element: NONE
Description: A style of henge jutsu, the user of the jutsu can enlarge an object by three times its original size. It takes a release signal to bring the object back to its original form.

Name: Water Gathering in the Leaf
Rank: E
Type: Supplimentary
Chakra Cost: 10
Element: Water
Description: A supplimentary technique that draws water from the earth and creates a shallow pool around the user. It is heavily dependant upon the terrain, and in dry areas this technique is ineffective.

Name: Angel's Grace
Rank: D
Type: Genjutsu
Chakra Cost: 20
Element: NONE
Description: The target becomes swept over by a self-perpetuating feeling of elation, which leaves thier heads swimming in a state of warmth and comfort. The genjutsu is easily broken if iterrupted.

Name: Chakra Blades
Rank: D
Type: Offensive
Chakra Cost: 20
Element: Lighting
Description: Chakra manifests in a blade-like form from her hands, which can stun opponents when they hit. The technique is weilded as if the blades were Kunai.

Name: Chakra Devouring (Stage 2)
Rank: D
Type: Supplimentary
Chakra Cost: 25
Element: NONE
Description: Stage 2 Chakra Devouring has the capability to numb fine motor control in an opponent, as well as sensing the general presence of chakra (as in she can 'feel' a general direction where chakra is eminating from). Cancelling this technique takes a moment's focus to break it, or else the technique will unwillingly progress to Stage 3.
Chakra taken from opponent: 25
Chakra gained from opponent: 10
Self-Damage if no damage dealt: 8 per round

Name: Geyser
Rank: D
Type: Offensive
Chakra Cost: 30
Element: Water
Description: A simple jutsu that causes a geyser to erupt from the ground, sending a heavy deluge of water at the opponent.

Name: Mizu no Muchi
Rank: D
Type: Offensive
Chakra Cost:25
Element: Water
Description: Mizu no Muchi is a Ninjutsu technique that utilizes water to create a whip. The ninja can also send an electric current through the whip to electrocute their opponent. The whip will function in the normal fashion, such as allowing the ninja to whip the crap out of little kids.

Name: Partial Henge Jutsu
Rank: D
Type: Supplimentary
Chakra Cost: 35
Element: NONE
Description: Using a short string of hand signs, Jijitsu is able to partially transform portions of her body into tentacled appendages to aid in her fighting technique.

Name: The Water's Thirst
Rank: D
Type: Supplimentary
Chakra Cost: 25
Element: Water
Description: A supplimentairy technique with her water jutsu. By extending her own chakra through the water, she is able to sap the target's chakra and disperse it through the water.
Chakra taken from opponent: 25, +5 per round when target remains in water. (Does not stack.)

Name: Water Wall
Rank: D
Type: Defensive
Chakra Cost: 30
Element: Water
Description: A wall of water jets up from the ground, deflecting blows and putting space between Jijitsu and the enemy. As long as the water remains on the battlefield, it can be re-formed with very little chakra manipulation involved.

Name: Angel's Embrace
Rank: C
Type: Genjutsu
Chakra Cost: 40
Element: NONE
Description: Due to the force in this genjutsu, it is ranked higher than the other ones. It is not ranked higher because as the lower-level ones go, it is still easily broken if interrupted. The target of this genjutsu becomes overcome with an overwhelming sense of heat in thier core. The joy and bliss they feel becomes overwhelming until it culminates in a final release of heated tension.

Name: Chakra Devouring (Stage 3)
Rank: C
Type: Offensive/Supplimentary
Chakra Cost: 50
Element: NONE
Description: Stage 3 Devouring begins the unbalanced need to consume chakra in the immediate viscinity. If it cannot be met through outside scources, it will tax the user to progress to stage 4. At this stage, Chakra devouring can siphon chakra from the enemy at a close, but non-physical contact range (about four to six inches). At this stage physical contact can cause a person to lose sensation in the affected area for a few seconds. Jijitsu must focus long enough to ground her chakra to cancel this technique.
Chakra taken from opponent: 50
Chakra gained from opponent: 20
Self-Damage if no damage dealt: 25 per round

Name: Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Octopus "Anki"
Rank: C
Type: Summoning
Chakra Cost: 55
Element: NONE
Description: Summons a large silver octopus the size of a malamute. Using handsigns, Jijitsu begins to spit up water and the summon rises from the pool. The octopus is an enigmatic thing and cannot speak, and specializes chakra absorption and genjutsu techniques.

Name: Man-Beast Mimicry, Soft-Body Jutsu:
Rank: C
Type: Defensive, Supplimentary
Chakra Cost: 50
Element: NONE
Description: Using this jutsu, Jijitsu's body becomes soft and mallable, making it easier for her to slip through constrictive spaces no smaller than the diameter of a baseball.

Name: Tenchi no Kenbu
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Chakra Cost: 50
Element: Lightning
Description: Chakra manifests itself in the form of a long blade (about 3 feet). It can remain manifest for about thirty seconds before the lightning chakra disspates. A hit from the blade can stun an opponent.

Name: Angel-Priestess Union
Rank: B
Type: Suplimentary
Chakra Cost: 90
Element: NONE
Description: After summoning, Anki can form a symbiotic bind with Jijitsu. The tranformation takes roughly a minute to complete, so it cannot be used in the heat of battle. Anki first crawls up onto Jijitsu's head and swallows it, forcing an organ down her throat that allows her to use his lung capacity under water. Second, he wraps his limbs around her as support, enabling her to move faster and strike harder than usual. The downturn is that Jijitsu is more prone to injury due to the incompatibility of human limbs in proportion to octopi, as well as the unique breathing organ involved.

Name: Chakra Devouring (Stage 4)
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Chakra Cost: 100
Element: NONE
Description: In Stage 4, the need to devour chakra overwhelms the user's ability to regenerate thier own chakra using this technique. An enemy must be dispatched quickly lest the user be unable to halt the technique altogether. The technique if not cancelled, will consume the user itself. However, they gain the ability to cause debilitating injuries to their opponent's physical body.
Chakra taken from opponent: 100
Chakra gained from opponent: 30
Self-Damage if no damage dealt: 70 per round

Name: Grand-Style Water Wall
Rank: B
Type: Attacking, Defensive
Chakra Cost: 80
Element: Water
Description: A larger version of Water Wall Jutsu, the wall is thicker, and can be used to trap opponents in a four-walled cielingless "room" which can be collapsed in on the opponent, or even closed in, but for its simplicity and versatility, it takes a large amount of chakra to keep going.

Name: Thousand-Armed Henge Jutsu
Rank: A
Type: Supplimentary
Chakra Cost: 150
Element: NONE
Description: After a string of complex hand-signs, a terrible transformation will occur. Jijitsu will lose all human appearence and become a thousand-tentacled octopus the size of a three-story building. In this form she can better sense the chakra of her enemies. Other skills include: the ability to breathe under water, change her skin color/tone, the ability to spit a hallucinogenic substance at her opponents, and an immunity to the influence of genjutsu.

History and RP Sample
History:
Born in the land of Waves, Jijitsu was born to a middle-class family of no important note. She joined a shrine at the age of seven, and learned the ways of purification and enlightenment in a world of turmoil. As a rite of passage at age fourteen, she went out on a pilgrimmage to find her inner truth. What she found instead was an old, forgotten god that blessed her with his gift (chakra absorption). When she returned, she was marked as a blasphemer against the teachings. She left, given a wanderer's life.

This changed when she turned fifteen. In a far-flung territory in Konoha, she was met by a Konoha jounin who felt a deep potential hidden away in her for the ninja arts. After much deliberation, she was taken in and taught under the academy. Though her heart still longs to return to the wave country, she is fiercely loyal to her new home. With the mark of an outsider, she had to fight many odds to prove her worth to the village.

It seemed, however, that it was not to be. The call of her purpose grew stronger. After making a handful of strong friendships in Konoha, she found herself drawn to another land. Konoha had not left her heart, and she vowed to return. The years in distant lands shaped and formed her as she learned the techniques handed down to her through Anki, the messenger of her mysterious god, and of the scroll Mitsuhide gave her before they both left.

In the four years outside of Konoha, Jijitsu met many men and many more monsters on her path. She met monsters more like men and men more like monsters than she could ever number. Under the tutlege of a second teacher, she learned to bring strength and form into her delicate technique and add the bite of a sword's edge to her unique chakra-devouring traits. Even still, she remained much of her time away from civilization and with the wild things on the brink of humanity, so many things she knows about the lands beyond men. On her eighteenth birthday, she felt the pull to travel back to Konoha and share with the land of fire the lore of those living on the brink of humanity.

Time has turned the gifted Jijitsu into a fully-blossomed flower. Her skin is fair and her hair is long, her curves are gracious and her lips angelic. There's an air of serenity about her as well. It's in the way she walks barefoot on the cruel stones underfoot as if she's only a stream passing over them. Her long blond hair trails behind her, catching the sun as she goes. From head to toe and in the weave of her kimono, she is of an inspirational comeliness. Her arms are well-muscled and her hips sway with confidence. It is time for her to return and share with them the beauty and grace that is life.

Rp Sample:
The echos of aeons were the sounds that filled her ears with music in this deep, dark cave. The stars spilled from the pillars of stone dropping down from the sky of nocturnal slate. A cold, stiff shudder made her spine tingle as it wrapped about her shoulders. In this gasp and gaze, she could only whisper in reverant tones to who she worshipped.
"Kami-sama," her breathy voice escaped her. The woman could feel his interest focus on the center of her forehead like a pressure that could split the sun in two. At first there was only the searing pain of his mind reaching out to hers, to speak and commune with her. Then, the images began to focus. She saw herself in a past imposed over the future, saw herself re-tracing the steps to the village that had taken her. There'd be questions, naturally, as she'd left without a word to the others as to where she had gone. She wasn't naturally one of them. Thier suspicions would be ferocious.
His support filled her with calm as he revealed the path to take. Fly like a sparrow and sing as the morning bird in spring. Sweeten them, let them know that she had to brave the wilds to return stronger and more knowledgable. And, in time, he could descend from his lofty throne, extend his hand, and embrace her in full.

She shuddered in a cold sweat, eyes snapping open. Her head hurt and her muscles ached from the nocturnal dream. Hands rolling down the sides of her white garment, she smoothed the wrinkles and hid away the droplets she woke with. Anki dozed on a nearby stone, but there was an overwhelming need to return to the land of fire. She'd have to abandon her teacher again, pulled by a stronger force that sung the songs in her dreams.

Okay
Just a short note
For the Jutsu's:
E = 5-19, D = 20-39 C = 40-59 B = 60-119 A = 120-199 and S is 200+ Chakra Points.

For example:

Name: Grand-Style Water Wall
Rank: B
Type: Attacking, Defensive
Chakra Cost: (Being a B Rank, it would be 75, just try your best and take a rough assumption on what it would be. Try not to make it to high or low, right in the middle if you can :))
Element: Water
Description: A larger version of Water Wall Jutsu, the wall is thicker, and can be used to trap opponents in a four-walled cielingless "room" which can be collapsed in on the opponent, or even closed in, but for its simplicity and versatility, it takes a large amount of chakra to keep going.

Awesomeness Morch, great to see you and your octopi again, haha. Well, everything looks fine to me. The only problem I found was the chakra absorbtion, as well as the techniques used for it. If you could just tell how much chakra is drained from each chakra draining jutsu, that would be fine. Also tell if it's a one post drainer, or if chakra is continuously drained for a set amount of posts. I was also wondering whether you just drain the opponent's chakra, or if you sap their chakra from them, taking it as your own. Other than that, everything seems okay. :DDD

everything specified was cleared and I saw nothing out of place ^^ I call it good to go as of now