Ochiroku Nara {Akatsuki}

Basic Character Information:
Name: Ochiroku Nara
Age: 21
Gender: Male
Clan: Nara

Looks Picture: (Avatar)

Looks Description: Black hair with white streaks painted down the front part. The hair is medium length. Sword carried on the back or shoulder that is curved at the end of the blade into a slight curve and the bottom half of the blade is painted black and the hilt is red. Usually wearing a ripped up set of cloths that are black in color with some dust in them.

Red and Black and white bands across the arms with an underneath long band of a red color. 3 rows of kunai holding pouches across the center of the chest and ending at the sides. Silver straight lines that are completely undamaged running down the sides of the coat.

Personality: usually calm. He is always ready for battle in case the need arises. If someone he would not give his life for his near him he will be on guard and ready for battle. He is ready to give his life for his village on a moments notice. He will do all he can for his village to the best of his ability without question. He is sometimes overly modest of his own abilities and does not talk openly about his skills and talents. He knows when he is beaten but if someone is threatening something or someone he holds dear he will stop at nothing to defeat them or do his best trying to stop them or hold them off. He enjoys spending his free time training or practicing his tactics with strategic games or arguing with people over things he doesnt really care about. He is good at politics but does not usually get into them and hates them for the most part. Enjoys a good laugh and having a good time with people he knows. He is overly protective of those he cherishes. He will meet new people but only if they were never part of anything he stands against. He can hold a grudge and always does but is capable of putting these things aside for the greater good. He is a natural and spotting traps before they are sprung on him and also a master of turning the tides of battle.


Basic Clan Information
[Optional, may not apply]
Kekkei Gekkei: Utilizing this ability the clan member can attach their shadow to the shadow of another individual, and then take control of the user. Resulting in the affected person replicating or "shadowing" the exact movements in mirror form of the clan member.
Chakra Cost: Minimal
Description:Utilizing this ability the clan member can attach their shadow to the shadow of another individual, and then take control of the user. Resulting in the affected person replicating or "shadowing" the exact movements in mirror form of the clan member.
Special Effect: Utilizing this ability the clan member can attach their shadow to the shadow of another individual, and then take control of the user. Resulting in the affected person replicating or "shadowing" the exact movements in mirror form of the clan member.
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Skill and Rank Information
Village: Ex Leaf Ex Cloud
Rank: Akatsuki

Special Characteristics: Nara clan Kekegenkai
Special Effects: Utilizing this ability the clan member can attach their shadow to the shadow of another individual, and then take control of the user. Resulting in the affected person replicating or "shadowing" the exact movements in mirror form of the clan member.

Elements: Earth Water
Skills Specialties: Fuuinjutsu Ninjutsu GEnjutsu

History and RP Sample
History:

Academy Arc: In the academy Ochiroku was a fairly average student. At least that was what he was pretending to be. Ochiroku was always very intellectually gifted but knew that if he didnt hide it he would be tested constantly and monitored and one of the ones that the whole village looked at and only saw the fame of. Ochi wanted only to show his genius while on missions or fighting so that it would be noticed only that he was a very capable leader and a strong minded man. Ochi passed all of the tests with exactly 89% and passed the final exam to become a genin with ease. However before he could celebrate his genin status with his parents his father was called away on a mission to another country and his mother dissapeared because she knew the mission he was sent on was for the most part a suicide mission so that the village could get out of a blood debt owed to the wind country.

Genin Arc: Ochi was never assigned onto a team during this session of being a genin. He was a loner genin who would go and help the groups do missions sometimes and when they needed him he was there. He would do solo missions and eventually would be assigned 2 other teammates to be on a team with for the chunin exams

escape Arc: Ochi angry about how little the village trusted him and how stupid they were not to notice him fled the village after stealing the building plans from the mansion under the ruse that he needed them to complete a mission and that he was going to get a mission from the hokage. Ochiroku used his skill of elusion and knowledge of the city to escape from the people who didnt trust him to do this and finally fled the village with the building plans. Once Ochiroku escaped he fled to the village that had once offered him shelter through a friend the village hidden in the clouds far away in the land of lightning. Ochiroku was 14 when he arrived there and he left at age 13.

Genin Arc: Once again a genin Ochiroku was assigned to a team. The members of the team were very skilled and himself included. They trained and completed over 100 missions in a years time which was a record for them. Ochi showed his genius and talents here. Instead of going to the chunin exams however Ochi needed a way to become a chunin immediatly if he were to get to that rank. Ochi personally restole the leaf building plans from the cloud village vaults after a network of lies were created to get him in there. The village soon found out and Ochi immediatly claimed he had no part. Ochiroku hid the plans away in the forest and delibratly sent his team in there for a training exercise one day. He made sure one of his teammates uncovered the scrolls and Ochi blamed him for stealing them in the first place. He then enlisted the help of the other member and got him to attempt to steal the cloud village building plans. Ochi however set him up to get caught. Immediatly the caught genin claimed Ochi told him to and that the other genin in Ochi's team stole the other plans. THe other genin was arrested and executed while the genin that was caught's word was tested against ochi's and after Ochi had in advanced made the plans so that he would be in favor of everyone who mattered in the village his word was believed and the genin was banned from the village forever.

Chunin Arc: This act made Ochiroku a chunin in the hidden cloud without having to take the exams. As a chunin Ochi spent most of his time memorizing the building plans learning all of the genin, chunin and jounin names strengths and weakness's learning the cloud's military plans. Ochiroku became very close in tune with the cloud village people and knew everything about them. Finally the mist village sent over an envoy after learning about his treachery with the leaf village and after figuring out what he was doing with the cloud village. This envoy was for him to sell them the infromation for immediate Jounin rank. Ochiroku went to the mist village and accepted the deal and on the day of the official taking of the rank and acceptance Cloud ninja supposivly assassinated Ochiroku. He dissapeared and his body was never found but official records claim that he was killed in the explosion lit up by a trap masters paper bomb dome around where Ochiroku was supposivly sitting at the time of the explosion

Missing Arc: Ochiroku had a couple of time heard of the akatsuki organization and knew that they were a very powerful group and very capably led. Ochiroku carefully manuevered his way in through bars of cities since he was now 16 and could not legally do so. He learned as much about the akatsuki as an unalligned ninja of jounin level skill could have. Which was alot and by the time Ochiroku turned 17 the akatsuki had noticed that he had taken such an interest in them. Ochiroku started up a band of rebellious missing ninja and finished recruiting at 18. During this time the akatsuki apprentices would ask Ochi to have him do a small task like raid a building steal a scroll assassinate an official or kill some bodyguards. He was loosely alligned with the akatsuki and did not deal directly with any of the senior members although one day he hoped to become a senior member of the elite organization.

Apprentice Arc: Finally at age 20 Ochiroku was accepted as an apprentice to the akatsuki and command of his ragtag little apprentice helper squad was given to another semi trustworthy possible recruit. Ochiroku now took orders from the senior members of the organizations and followed them as best he could. He was very good at his work assassinating high ranking officials raiding prisons for akatsuki informants. collecting and gathering information and organizing a network of spies. After a while he took down 3 anbu in a fight on his own. Though none of the anbu were at full strength the akatsuki recognized the feat. Ochiroku moved on to mass killings in his free time and eventually became an A rank fugitive. This status combined with his perfect apprentice record eventually got him to be admitted to the akatsuki as a full member.

Rp Sample: This is an average post for me and sorry its from another site"Aro...thats your name right isnt it? Aro anyways I am the Ochiroku that knew your father. I am the Ochiroku that saved your father from collapsing in the street of my village and slowly dying by himself. I saved his life along with my assistant Kugo. You dont need to fight this battle leave this time and come back later and your fathers debt can be repayed to me."

Ochi didnt expect that this plea for Aro to leave was not going to work in which case Ochi would have to fight Aro. (to self) Maybe i can at least convince him to let me burn him out defensivly so that he doenst have to go through with this. If that comes true then his father will be at peace with all of his debts and Amo would be able to finally meet one of his best friends sons. Aro's move against him or for him.

Jutsus

Name: Fuuja Houin - Evil Sealing Method
Rank: A
Type: Fuuinjutsu
Chakra Cost: Medium
Element: None
Description: Fuuja Houin is a Fuuinjutsu technique used to counter-act the effects of a cursed seal. The ninja writes the needed seal characters on the ground and body of the person cursed with the seal. The ninja then forms the needed hand seals and places his hand over the cursed seal and then activates the written seal. The seal characters will then retreat to surround the cursed seal in a circular seal. Though the Fuuja Houin can work well against lesser seals, it will not be able to fully stop a cursed seal placed by a powerful, skilled ninja.

Name: Eye Sealing me chouin no jutsu
Rank: A
Type: Fuuinjutsu
Chakra Cost: Medium
Element: None
Description: me chouin is a fuuinjutsu technique used by many ninja. By forming the needed sealing chakra on there fingers the ninja is able to poke someone in the eye(s) and for a full 5 minutes eliminate there eye related Kekegenkai.

Name: Gogyou Fuuin - Five Elements Seal
Rank: A
Type: Fuuinjutsu
Chakra Cost: Minimal
Element: None
Description:Gogyou Fuuin is a Fuuinjutsu technique used by the Sannin Orochimaru. Orochimaru forms an elemental seal on each of his fingers, one for each of the following five "elements": water, metal, earth, fire and wood. He used this odd numbered seal to disrupt the affects of the even numbered Shishou Fuuin placed on Naruto's stomach by the Fourth Hokage. The Gogyou Fuuin would disrupt the Shishou Fuuin's ability to let the Kyuubi's chakra blend into Naruto's chakra.

Name: Shikoku Fuuin - Finger Engraving Seal
Rank: C
Type: Fuuinjutsu
Chakra Cost: None
Element: None
Description:Shikoku Fuuin is a Fuuinjutsu technique used by the Leaf Sannin Jiraiya. By forming the needed sealing chakra on his finger, Jiraiya can engrave a message into an object.

Name: Transformation Technique Henge no Jutsu
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Chakra Cost: Minimal
Element: None
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.


Name: Substitution Technique Kawarimi no Jutsu
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Chakra Cost: None
Element: None
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themself with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.

Name: Clone Jutsu Bunshin no Jutsu
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Chakra Cost: None
Element: None
Description: Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. The Bunshin technique creates a copy of the ninja without substance. The copy resembles the ninja in every way. This clone can function as a distraction or as means to confuse one's opponent. As soon the Bunshin gets attacked or comes into contact with an opponent, it will disperse.

Name: Earth Sealing yochi chouin
Rank: A
Type: Fuuinjutsu/Ninjutsu
Chakra Cost: Medium
Element: EArth/None
Description: yochi chouin is a ninjutsu technique. This technique is preformed after the needed handseals are preformed. This jutsu causes small earth balls to emerge from the ground around an opponent. After a full minute if the opponent is still in the middle of the earth balls each ball takes away a portion of chakra from the one in the middle. The balls take a chunin level of chakra away from the one trapped but they need to remain still through the entire process.

Name: Earth Release: Double Suicide Decapitation Technique Shinju Zanshu no
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Chakra Cost: Minimal
Element: Earth
Description:The user, emerging from the ground below the target area, pulls down the opponent so that only their head is above ground. Unable to move, the opponent can easily be decapitated or tortured.

Name: Kage Nui - Shadow Sewing
Rank: Clan
Type: Ninjutsu
Chakra Cost: Medium
Element: None
Description:Ninpou: Kage Nui is a Ninjutsu technique developed by the Nara clan. To perform the technique Shikamaru will first form the needed handseal to extend his shadow. Shikamaru will then change the handseal to cause the shadow to emerge from the ground in tendrils. The tendrils can extend and whip about and are strong enough to pierce nearby targets

Name: Kage Mane Shuriken no Jutsu - Shadow Imitation Shuriken Technique
Rank: CLan
Type: Ninjutsu
Chakra Cost: Medium
Element: None
Description: Kage Mane Shuriken no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique developed by the Nara Shikamaru. Using Asuma's knives, Shikamaru can imbue his shadow chakra to create "pins" to stick his opponent in place. These knives absorb the chakra nature of the user and give off the nature's effect. In this case, the knives take on the Nara clan's shadow binding properties. By implanting the shadow chakra enhanced blade into the shadow of his target, they will be frozen in place; just as if they were caught in one of the clan members extended shadow bindings.

Name: Kage Kubi Shibari no Jutsu - Shadow Neck Bind Technique
Rank:Clan
Type: Ninjutsu
Chakra Cost: Medium
Element: None
Description:Kage Kubi Shibari no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique developed by the Nara clan. To perform the technique the clan member will first bind their target using the Kage Mane no Jutsu technique. Once the target can no longer move, they form the needed hand seal to initiate this technique. The clan member uses their shadow to form a hand which will creep up their opponents body to their neck. Once the hand reaches the neck, it will constrict in such a manner so as to strangle the opponent. However, the clan member will need to be careful. If their target has a lot of chakra, they can turn back the shadow hand and prevent it from binding their neck.

Name: Kage Mane no Jutsu - Shadow Imitation Technique
Rank: Clan
Type: Ninjutsu
Chakra Cost: Medium
Element: None
Description:Kage Mane no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique developed by the Nara clan. It's original purpose was as a skill to help delay any pursuers. After forming the needed hand seals, the clan member is able to manipulate their shadow along any surface. By using other nearby shadows they can further extend the reach of their shadow, however they are limited to the surface area of the original cast shadow. Once the clan members shadow reaches the target shadow, it will attach itself. While attached the target will be frozen, only able to replicate in mirror form the actions of the clan member. If the clan member is low on chakra, the Kage Mane will falter and the shadow will return to its normal form.

Name: Kokohi no Jutsu - False Place Technique
Rank: C
Type: genjutsu
Chakra Cost: Minimal-None
Element: None
Description:Kokohi no Jutsu is a simple Genjutsu technique which changes the appearance of a nearby object.

Name: Kokuangyou no Jutsu - Journey into Black Darkness Technique
Rank: A
Type: Genjutsu
Chakra Cost: Medium
Element: None
Description:Kokuangyou no Jutsu is a Genjutsu technique which causes the ninja's opponent to be enveloped in total darkness. While in the black void, the ninja will be unable to see any incoming attack or threat.

Name: Narakumi no Jutsu - Hell Viewing Technique
Rank: D
Type: Genjutsu
Chakra Cost: Minimal-None
Element: None
Description: Magen • Narakumi no Jutsu is a Genjutsu technique that causes its target to see a horrifying vision. The ninja will use the serpent hand seal to cause a circle of leaves to spin and envelop the target and then fall away. Once cast the world will appear normal to the target until they see the illusion.

Name: Baku Suishouha - Bursting Water Collision Waves
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Chakra Cost: Medium
Element: Water
Description:Suiton • Baku Suishouha is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. After forming the needed handseals, Kisame will expel water from his gullet. This will then expand into a large volume of water. Being from the Water Country, Kisame is at home with this type of jutsu. He can control the water by riding on top of the waves.

Name: Daibakufu no Jutsu - Grand Waterfall Technique
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Chakra Cost: Heavy
Element: Water
Description:Suiton • Daibakufu no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. After doing the needed hand seals a column of water will circle the ninja and then a large force of water will erupt to hit the attacker. Due to the force of the water the target will be fully enveloped by the water and at its mercy as is pulls them away.

Name: Dochuu Senkou - Underground Submarine Voyage
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Chakra Cost: Medium
Element: Earth
Description:Doton • Dochuu Senkou is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. After forming the needed hand seals, Kisame can sink below ground and quickly travel through the earth. By extending his Samehada above ground, he gives off the appearance of a shark travelling underground.

Name: Domu - Earth Spear
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Chakra Cost: Medium
Element: Earth
Description:Doton • Domu is a Ninjutsu technique utilized by Akatsuki member Kakuzu. After forming the needed Snake handseal, Kakuzu will harden his body using the Earth Element. This provides greater defense against attack and will also strengthen his arm to increase his striking ability. Like other Doton based jutsu, it is weak against Raiton attacks.

Name: Doryou Dango - Mausoleum Earth Dumpling
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Chakra Cost: Medium
Element: Earth
Description: Doton • Doryou Dango is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. After striking the ground with his hands, Jiroubou is able to overturn the earth into a large dumpling shape chunk of earth the size of a mausoleum. Using his immense strength, he can lift up the ball and hurl it at his opponent, flatening all in its path.

Name: Doton Kekkai • Dorou Doumu - Earth Barrier • Earth Dome Prison
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Chakra Cost: Heavy
Element: Earth
Description:Doton Kekkai • Dorou Doumu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. After striking the ground with his hands, Jiroubou is able to overturn the earth and cause it to rise up around his opponents. Placing his hands against the dome he is able to suck out the chakra from the people trapped inside and bring it into his own body. At the same time Jiroubou will use his own chakra to spread throughout the dome, this allows him to repair any damage his opponents manage to inflict on the inside. The chakra is not evenly spread out though, as the chakra flows away from Jiroubou, it becomes more and more weak. Allowing the dome to be broken on the far side if hit by a hard enough force.

Name: Goshokuzame - Five Sharks Eating
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Chakra Cost: Medium
Element: Water
Description:Suiton • Goshokuzame is a Ninjutsu technique utilzing the Water Element. Kisame will form the needed hand seals and then place his hand to the surface of the water. A shark of condensed water will emerge from each of his fingers to attack his opponent who is in the water below.

Name: Hari Jizou - Underworld Guardian Spikes
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Chakra Cost: Minimal
Element: None
Description:Ninpou - Hari Jizou is a Ninjutsu technique used by Jiraiya. After forming the needed hand seals, Jiraiya's hair will grow in length to surround and protect his body. In this form it also becomes ridged and spiked, forming a layer of protectiong from direct strikes and blows.

Name: Iwa Yado Kuzushi - Stone Lodging Destruction
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Chakra Cost: Medium
Element: Earth
Description:Doton • Iwa Yado Kuzushi is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. This technique allows the ninja to control nearby stone and rock. This can be especially useful if in a cave or a stone lodging. The technique can loosen the rocks and cause them to come raining down on whomever is trapped inside.

Name: Kage Bunshin no Jutsu - Shadow Clone Technique
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Chakra Cost: Medium
Element: None
Description: Kage Bunshin is a Jounin level Ninjutsu technique. When Naruto stole the scroll of seals, he learned this technique as well. The normal Bunshin technique creates a copy of the ninja that lacks any substance. The Kage Bunshin distributes the ninja's chakra evenly among the clones and creates a real copy with form and substance. The clone itself can also utilize any jutsu the original ninja knows. When the clone finally disperses, any new knowledge it has gained is passed back to the original ninja and any additional clones. This makes Kage Bunshin an excellent training method if the ninja has the chakra capacity and stamina to maintain the Kage Bunshins for an extended period of time. This allows the ninja to essentially reduce the time it takes to train and learn with each clone added. This is especially true when used with Tajuu Kage Bunshin.

Name: Kanashibari no Jutsu - Temporary Body Paralysis Technique
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Chakra Cost: Minimal
Element: None
Description:Kanashibari no Jutsu is an advanced Ninjutsu technique used to temporarily bind an individual or animal. With the person frozen in place, the ninja can either take the opportunity to attack or to retreat.

Name: Kage Yado- Shadow lodging
Rank: S
Type: Ninjutsu
Chakra Cost: Great
Element: None
Description: Kage Yado is an advanced Ninjutsu technique used by high ranking missing ninja and some akatsuki members. With the jutsu completed fully the user is able to call upon a great mass of shadows to arise from the ground and completely cover an area and/or opponent or target. Once covered the shadows cause a pressure and after a few minutes the pressure becoms bone breaking.

Name: Kirigakure no Jutsu - Hidden Mist Technique
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Chakra Cost: Minimal
Element: Water
Description:Kirigakure no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilized by Hidden Mist ninja. The ninja causes the area surrounding their target to be covered in fog. The low visibility allows the ninja to silently and secretly assassinate their target.

Name: Mikadzuki no Mai - Dance of the Crescent Moon
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu/Taijutsu
Chakra Cost: Minimal
Element:None
Description:Mikadzuki no Mai is an advanced Ninjutsu technique used by the Leaf ninja Gekkou Hayate. As the ninja charges at his opponent, he creates mutiple shadow copies to confuse his opponent. Using the confusion, the real ninja will attack from the opponent's blindside.

Name: Shikon no Jutsu - Dead Soul Technique
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Chakra Cost: Medium
Element: None
Description: Shikon no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique that uses a dead body to create the illusion of another living person. The ninja can either animate a normal dead person, or alter the appearance of the dead person to resemble another. To do the second version, the ninja first changes the appearance of the dead body to resemble the person to be portrayed. Then using this jutsu they make the heart beat again, allowing them to control the actions of the dead body.

Name: Shoushagan no Jutsu - Vanishing Facial Copy Technique
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Chakra Cost: Medium
Element: None
Description:Shoushagan no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique used for spying. A dark technique, the jutsu involves the removal of the face of the person to be impersonated. By wearing their face and clothing, the ninja can impersonate the original without others being aware.

Name: Shunshin no Jutsu - Body Flicker Technique
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Chakra Cost: Minimal
Element: None
Description:Shunshin no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. The ninja will appear and disappear in an instant, allowing them to retreat or attack suddenly. To facilitate the movement the ninja will often use nearby elements such as mist, sand or leaves to mask their appearance or disappearance.

Name: Shuriken Kage Bunshin no Jutsu - Shuriken Shadow Clone Technique
Rank: A
Type: NInjutsu
Chakra Cost: Minimal
Element: None
Description:Shuriken Kage Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique that uses Kage Bunshin to create multiple physical clone copies from one thrown shuriken.

Name: Suigadan - Water Fang Projectile
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Chakra Cost: Medium
Element: Water
Description:Suiton • Suigadan is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. The ninja does a string of hand seals to cause a nearby body of water to form a spinning drill.

Name: Suijinheki - Water Encampment Wall
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Chakra Cost: Medium
Element: Water
Description:Suiton • Suijinheki is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. The ninja will first do a string of hand seals and then proceed to blow out a jet of water from their mouth to act as a water barrier from incoming attack.

Name: Suirou no Jutsu - Water Prison Technique
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Chakra Cost: Medium
Element: Water
Description:Suirou no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique that utilizes water to imprison an opponent. The ninja forms the necessary hand seals which causes the water to form around the target into a spherical prison which only allows for limited movement. The ninja must keep their body touching the water prison to maintain its existence. If the contact is broken, the water falls away and their target is released. When combined with a bunshin technique, the ninja can imprison their target but still allow for a clone to attack others nearby.

Name: Suiryuudan no Jutsu - Water Dragon Projectile Technique
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Chakra Cost: Medium
Element: Water
Description:Suiton • Suiryuudan no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. The ninja does a long string of hand seals which then causes a column of water in the form of a dragon to rise from the water and then strike their target.

Name: Tajuu Kage Bunshin no Jutsu - Multiple Shadow Clone Technique
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Chakra Cost: Heavy
Element: None
Description:Tajuu Kage Bunshin no Jutsu is an advanced variation of the Kage Bunshin Ninjutsu technique which was banned by the First Hokage. This has not stopped many Jounin-level ninja from learning the technique however. Instead of creating several clones, several hundred clones are created. Like normal Kage Bunshin a ninja's chakra is split evenly among the clones when created.The clones themself can utilize any jutsu the original ninja knows. When the clones finally disperse, any new knowledge they have gained is passed back to the original ninja and to any additional clones. This makes Tajuu Kage Bunshin an excellent training method if the ninja has the chakra capacity and stamina to maintain the Kage Bunshins for an extended period of time. This allows the ninja to essentially reduce the time it takes to train and learn with each clone added. With the great number of clones in Tajuu Kage Bunshin, the ninja can effectively learn in a few weeks with a hundred clones what would take one ninja numerous years.

Name: Kuchiyose • Tsuiga no Jutsu - Tracking Fang Technique
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu/Summoning
Chakra Cost: Medium
Element: None
Description:Ninpou: Kuchiyose • Doton • Tsuiga no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique used by Hatake Kakashi utilizing the Earth element. Kakashi will withdraw the tracking scroll from the pouch on his vest and wipe the blood of the one he wants tracked on it. After forming the needed handseals, he will slam the scroll onto the ground. This will release his nin dogs into the earth to follow their excellent sense of smell to track the targets blood. This allows Kakashi to track his short range target, even when he can not see them. This technique can also be used to set up his Raikiri. After finding their target the dogs will emerge from the ground to bite and pin down their target. This can allow Kakashi to execute the Raikiri without fear of a counter attack.

I know its a tad rude to ask but could someone please look at this

So far, your doin good, but I don't have the final say, gona have to wait for a Mod.

You have me a mods approval however you need the akatsuki leaders approval to make it offical just pm him/her. im not sure who it is just ask about lol also torigoma STOP POSTING your not a mod

^_^ just trying to Help um set up, every little bit can help make it better, wether from a Mod or a Player.

thank you to both of you for the looking good comments and now we wait for Luxuria

ya its good to go. also have approval by AKA leader (coming in maybe 5 mins >>)