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| Subject: Shizo Uchiha [WIP] Tue Nov 23, 2010 11:18 pm | |
| Name: Shizo Uchiha Age: 20 Gender: Male Clan: Uchiha Looks:Shizo is 6'1 (6 feet 1 inches) and 145 lbs. He has a lean build and peachy skin. His eyes are black, but turn crimson red with three tomoe when his sharingan is activated. He has long black hair that streams about wildly at times. Shizo wears the standard ANBU attire. He wears black and gray armor, metal arm guards, and a spiral tattoo on his left shoulder to distinguish that he is a male. He also wears a black cloak over his standard uniform which has four pockets to hold multiple scrolls. On his face he wears an animal mask to conceal his identity and to distinguish himself from normal shinobi within the village. Also to conceal his identity even further in the case that his mask falls off, he wears a black mask over his mouth that hides most of his face. |
When not in his anbu attire, which is a rarity, Shizo wears an outfit that closely resembles the usual Jonin attire. He wears a long sleeve blue shirt with matching blue pants. Around his ankles are bandages that go down to his ankles. On his feet he wears blue ninja sandals. Over this he wears a green Konoha flak jacket with pockets in the front that can hold scrolls. The only difference is that on the back of his flak jacket is the Uchiha clan symbol replacing the normal swirl to show his pride of being a Uchiha. His headband is wrapped traditionally around his head with the leaf village symbol on it. His hands are covered by gloves with metal guards on the back. |
Personality:Shizo's personality is one of cold ruthlessness. His cold exterior and professional attitude turns people away most of the time. Shizo is respectful to those he deems worthy - he considers the hokage and fellow ANBU to be worthy. He is confident to the point of arrogance, but with him having the thought that he is the strongest Uchiha alive, only helps this arrogance. Well-spoken and somewhat graceful, Shizo is universally calm, collected, and in control. He can be frustrated and caught off his guard, but this rarely happens. When Shizo is under very stressful situations he retains most of the above personality traits, but becomes murderous and vengeful. He also develops something of a messiah complex, proclaiming several times he is "the Ultimate Shinobi", destined to lead the village and become Hokage. His intelligence has increased vastly following his time as a ninja in the he absorbed knowledge from experience. At points Shizo even says he is greater than the Kages. He has become highly cruel and delights in mentally torturing his enemies. Shizo is also fiercely devoted to the Uchiha Clan and their cause, even though he believes to be above them. One of the things Shizo likes to do is kill people. He wouldn't dare kill his allies for the fear of the village turning on him and trying to kill him would get in the way of his goal to become Hokage. He has a likeness to reptile snakes. Specifically the highly poisonous ones. He hates having to be partnered with weaklings, and if at all possible, will try to dispose of them in secrecy. He loves discovering techniques that could make him stronger. He hopes one day to bring the shinobi world into a turmoil of war, so that the destruction and death may bring him pleasure. Uchiha Clan InformationKekkei Genkai: Sharingan Third Tomoe Description: Sharingan Third Tomoe- Spoiler:
"The first of the Sharingan's powers is being able to see the flow of chakra. The Sharingan can tell if a person is under a genjutsu because the person's chakra flow would be irregular. The Sharingan's second-most prominent ability grants the user an incredible clarity of perception, allowing them to easily recognize genjutsu and different forms of chakra, though not to the same extent as the Byakugan. This also allows the user to pick up on subtle details, enabling them to read lip movements or mimic something like pencil movements. As the Sharingan evolves, gaining more tomoe seals, this ability extends to being able to track fast-moving objects before finally giving some amount of predictive capabilities to the user. However, even though the user may be able to see an attack or know it is coming, their body may not have time to react.
The Sharingan's third and most well-known ability is that it grants the user the ability to memorize any technique that he or she witnesses, apart from other Kekkei Genkai techniques. The user can memorize ninjutsu, genjutsu, and taijutsu with near perfect accuracy, allowing the user to use the techniques as his own, or even modify them to create his own new techniques, much like Sasuke Uchiha's Lion Combo. In order to reproduce a copied jutsu, however, one must have the necessary skill or ability to perform them. A prime example is Rock Lee's brand of taijutsu. While Sasuke was able to copy some of Lee's moves, they put a much more significant strain on him since he hasn't trained nearly as much as Lee has. In addition to physical skill and kekkei genkai techniques, the Sharingan cannot reproduce jutsu dependent on other factors, such as summons that the user has not signed a contract with.
The Sharingan's final commonly-used ability is capable of inducing a unique brand of hypnosis that involves suggesting actions and thoughts to the opponent through genjutsu cast by simple eye contact. More advanced Sharingan users can take the hypnosis ability even further to the point where a powerful summon like Manda or even the Nine-Tailed Fox may be controlled. When this was used against Manda and the Nine-Tailed Fox their eyes took on the tomoe pattern of the users' Sharingan while under hypnotic influence. The hypnotic ability coupled with the other aspects of the Sharingan, can make the user appear as if they can "see the future". First, the user must perfectly mimic every move their opponent makes and possibly their thoughts and words through careful observation. Then, they suggest an action to the opponent such as hand seals for a jutsu that the opponent and Sharingan user already know and copy that. With these things done, the user can complete the action even before the opponent does, possibly using the Sharingan's genjutsu to confuse or delay them. As with other genjutsu, genjutsu cast by the Sharingan are capable of putting an opponent to sleep, inducing paralysis, replaying memories to someone else, or creating various illusions to deceive someone. The potency of the Sharingan's illusion is dependent on the user's knowledge and skill with implementing genjutsu.
In addition to these commonly used techniques, the Sharingan allows the user to perform the genjutsu Izanagi. Using Izanagi, the user can warp reality for a short amount of time, changing reality into illusion and illusion into reality. However, this technique has been dubbed kinjutsu, because use of it causes the user to go blind.
Although the Sharingan consumes the user's chakra while active, the chakra levels that the user must exert is so insignificant that they can keep it active constantly. In fact, Itachi Uchiha was so masterful of it, he was able to keep it active for most of the time, only once deactivating it after using Tsukuyomi on Sasuke and Amaterasu to escape Jiraiya. However, when a Sharingan is transplanted to a non-Uchiha, the chakra drain is significant, leading them to cover it up when not in use, to stop the drain."
Note: Description of the sharingan taken from Wiki. Skill and Rank InformationVillage: Kumogakure Konohagakure Rank: ANBU - Jounin Special Characteristics:Special Effects:Elements: Fire, Paper Skills Specialties: Main: Ninjutsu | Sub: Doujutsu History and RP SampleBirthHis birth would take place in the hospital of Konoha. His father hoping for another son with greater strength than is first, while at the same time his mother wanted a beautiful girl. Shizo, named after his great grandfather, was born into a well known Uchiha family. His Father, Orochi, was revered for his snake summoning jutsu. His mother, Aiko, on the other hand was known for her great Doujutsu ability with the Sharingan. He also had an older brother six years older than him named Ichiro. Tears would be shed as the new baby boy opened his eyes for the first time. Ichiro in the corner feeling neglected craved for attention from his parents. Running up to the baby he would ask to hold him. Criminal thoughts ran through Ichiro's mind as he held the baby. Maybe he could through out of the window, or simply let him fall to the marble floor below. Before he could act his father would reach for the baby unknown of his intention if he hadn't ChildhoodShizo spent most of his childhood being with his older brother who he followed like a puppy. Now at the age of five, it was visible that he took most of his looks from his mother. He even had an interest to Doujutsu as she had. Ichiro, now eleven, made sure that his younger brother would never surpass him by training constantly with his father. He had already activated his sharingan and was now working on progressing it. Shizo would learn little things here and there by listening and watching. Ichiro noticed this and was beginning to become insane with hate and jealously. The acknowledgement that Shizo got was something that Ichiro had to earn. It was unfair and unjust, but it wasn't intentional. His father only was preparing him for what was to come as a ninja not to make him a monster. A year had past and Ichiro's mental stability had only fallen more. Shizo was walking home from a friends house when he saw in the distance, a raging fire engulfing his home. He ran towards it and found his brother standing outside of it. As he got next to his brother, he asked him "Where's mother and father!" Ichiro would only give him a nod towards the house. Shizo fell to his knees. Tears flooded the ground below him, but the eyes that came from him changed. They were now a crimson red, with a single tomoe on it. As Ichiro saw this, his eyes went under a change to, a third tomoe now on them. Shizo was told that it was an accident by Ichiro. With his trust, Ichiro led him out of the village where they would travel for another year. The destination Ichiro had set was Kumogakure. During this time, Shizo went into a deep depression, usually keeping his head down and not speaking. Ichiro was filled with glee at this sight, thinking he had beat his brother at a game that didn't exist. At the age of seven, Shizo and his brother reached Kumogakure, where they were escorted by a man hidden behind a mask. Shizo recognized this mask as the same one Ichiro had in his possession after a mission. After they were given a room, he was told that he would be enrolled into the Kumo academy. AcademyHis stay at the academy would neither be an enjoyable one, nor a hated experience. Everyday he was escorted by men in masks. He had no idea as to why, but he didn't care to ask. With guards surrounding him twenty four seven, Shizo couldn't make friends as his guards scared the other children so most of his time was spent in solitude. This however gave him the chance to give complete focus to his studies at the academy. He excelled mostly in the Ninjutsu arts, not worrying about Taijutsu or Genjutsu while at the academy. As the years went by Shizo became taller and let his hair grow out longer. He was now thirteen and his brother was now nineteen. Shizo was descending into darkness while his brother leeched off his sadness to strength his own existence. With no family present at his graduation, Shizo was given his Kumo headband that he hesitantly wrapped around his forehead, marking his advancement in rank. GeninOnce becoming a Genin, Shizo was placed into a squad with two other Genin and a sensei. Having a Jonin leader to watch over him, Shizo no longer needed the guards to watch him. He would carry out his orders swiftly, but in silence. His Jonin leader noticed how he secluded himself and decided he would try to get him involved by teaching him his ninjutsu, but his ninjutsu was something not regularly seen. He could actually use paper as if it was a ninjutsu element. Leaving Kumogakure Reinstatement to KonohaGeninChuninKonoha vs. KumoANBUFinal Showdown: Brother vs. BrotherANBU - JoninRp Sample: - Spoiler:
Yuri was on his way to meet with a master of the lighting release skill. Even though he didn't like fighting in general, he thought it was necessary to learn some formidable techniques so that he may defend himself if ever caught in a situation where he must fight. Walking on the streets of Konoha, Yuri made his way to the master's home. He was in an almost run down part of Konoha and the only people he saw were sitting on their porches. This made it easier for him to maneuver around the village quicker. A couple of minutes late, he reached the house that was at a dead end street as described to him. It looked like a normal home that you would see in the Leaf Village, with the exception of a large lightning bolt looming over the front door. Even though the spectacle was an intimidating one, he took a deep breath, walked up to the door, and gave it a knock.
A man with a large build answered the door. He had no hair on the top of his hair, but a brown goatee was grown on his broad jaw. "Hello sir, my name is Yuri of the Aburame clan. I came here to learn the lightning release. I was told that you take students and I was wondering if you could teach me." Yuri waited for the mans reply. He looked as if he was hesitant in taking another student, but he replied "I will teach you, but know this; many have tried and failed to learn the release from my teachings. If you truly think you are strong enough to take on the challenges that will lay before you, then follow me. How nervous Yuri was, he couldn't describe. The man made it seem as if this was a do or die situation. It took all his will to move his legs and follow the man.
He was lead up to higher ground on a naked hill top. The man then spoke to him once again. "Allow me to show you what you will be trying to learn." He started by making circular motions with with his arms while extending his index and middle fingers on both hands. Then sparks of lightning started to form seemingly from nothing. First barely visible, then they shown with vibrant blue color. Yuri could tell that the lightning that the man had produced was very hot, even from his distance he could feel the warmth of the lightning on his skin. "Before you start you must mentally be completely absence of emotion and at peace of mind. Physically you must separate negative and positive electric charge. Then when the negative and positive charge come back together and become whole again, the lightning for lightning release ninjutsu is created. At first you will only be its guide, then eventually when you have become adept at the lightning release you will be able to control it entirely.
Yuri started by clearing his mind, making sure he was completely at peace of mind before continuing. Once he felt like he was ready, Yuri requested that the man teach him the motions to which the man was obliged to say "yes" with a small smile of dismay showing his doubt that Yuri would get any farther. It didn't take long for him to master the form that would help him produce lightning. The next step would prove much harder than the simplicity of the form. Separating the electric charge proved a daunting challenge. With his left arm he would take the negative, while with his right he would take the positive. Then he would bring the tips of his index and middle fingers together and then apart, which would create a stream of lightning. Unfortunately the only lightning he was able to produce so far were little sparks that would dissipate immediately, but he kept at it, determined to learn the ninjutsu release.
The sparks of lightning produced from his being were beginning to grow. They now formed a thin line when he separated the tips of his fingers. The feeling of even the beginning stages of lightning was exhilarating. His body was beginning to become warmer each time he did another cycle through the circling motions. Sweat to keep his body cool formed all over his body. The man who had brought him to the spot watched with contempt as if he had seen many make it to this stage in training, doubt still held in his mind that Yuri would even be capable of learning such a unfamiliar release. The notion of the man's feelings did not consume Yuri. He was much more focused on maintaining the lightning he guided in the motions he had been taught to him by the man who was a so called “Master of the lightning release”
Yuri had lost track of time, but the man who was monitoring him was fully aware of the hours that had passed by. He was beginning to feel strain on his muscles, slowing him down slightly. Even with the added shade from his hate, Yuri was feeling very warm and drenched in sweat. The lightning was beginning to have a light blue coloration to it. The thin line from before was becoming more visible and stronger. The man sat watching him, the doubt on he once held on his face was starting to fade as Yuri got to stages of the release that few of his students had ever gotten to. Yuri was beginning to have a more natural feel of producing the lightning as he progressed. His continued motions were starting to flow much smoother than before. This made it much easier to focus on keeping his mind at peace.
Time kept going by as Yuri did the continuous cycle of the motions. Is rate of progression continued. This time his lightning didn't improve that much visibly, but it had a much more controlled look to it. Yuri was still its guide, but at the level his lightning was at, he had a certain level of control over it, but this would and could not last for long. It was around 6:30 pm, which meant he still had a lot of time left to train for the day. As he kept cycling through separating, combining, then guiding the lightning produced from the negative and positive charges, the man's look of doubt had completely faded from his expression. Now he just sat with an emotionless look. Devoting all of is attention to see what Yuri would do next. His arms had now become numb from the strain he was feeling not to long ago.
The time was now 9:00 pm. The sky that lied over them had now become dark, revealing the stars that were hidden in the daylight. The full moon acted as the sun, providing light on the hilltop at which they were located. Blue was also illuminating on the hill top. The source came from Yuri's lightning that he was producing. It had grown considerably since last examination. The blue light now only served as a wall, surrounding the white light in the middle. His lightning was now half the size of the man's lightning from his demonstration. “I believe that is enough for the day. Return home and get rest so that you may FAIL in your foolish attempt tomorrow.” Even though the man showed great disrespect towards him, Yuri gave a bow and headed home to follow his orders given to him.
Yuri was at the naked hilltop once again. He hoped this would be the last time he had to train the lightning release so he could move on to learning actual techniques. The man had brought him there at 8:00 in the morning. His lightning was now growing at a slower rate than it had yesterday. Visibly it was almost the same as where he had left off. Keeping peace of mind was very easy to him now when creating lightning. He also noticed he had almost complete control over the lightning at it's current level. His memories of the warmth from the lightning started to resurface as his temperature raised in correspondence to the heat radiating from his lightning. He could tell that the lightning was a dangerous weapon to be held, but he also saw the beauty in its illuminating blue glow. The man seemed to be impressed also. He must have passed a certain point that only those who learn the release or fools who end up killing themselves in an expected accident got to.
His lightning had grown exceptionally over the course of about five hours and was now about three fourths the size and strength of the man's lightning. The time was now one o'clock in the afternoon. The sun was now high over head, bringing in extra heat along with the heat from his lightning going through his body. His motions were almost as fluid as the man's form with a few minor imperfections. The cycle at which the motions were performed were now second nature to him. He was attempting to execute every motion with perfection to help with the creation of his lightning while the man sat and watched quietly. The light still reflecting upon his skin with a blue glow.
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| NinJutsuName:Rank:Type:Element:Description:Academy Jutsu- Spoiler:
Name: Kawarimi no Jutsu Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Element: N/A Description: This jutsu lets the user quickly switch places with another nearby object, such as a plant (normally a section of a log), an animal, or even another person within reach, leaving the opponent open to a counter-attack. Explosive tags can be attached to the replacement for an added surprise. Fundamentally, all ninja know this technique.
Name: Henge no Jutsu Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Element: N/A Description: This jutsu allows the user to assume the appearance of another person, animal, or object. This is one of the basic jutsu taught at the Konoha Ninja Academy. Fundamentally, all ninja know this jutsu. The transformation jutsu is considered to be among the more difficult E-ranked techniques, since it requires constant emission of chakra while mentally maintaining the form. On top of that, the user would be, most likely, interacting with the environment. This puts much mental strain on the inexperienced ninja.
Name: Bunshin no Jutsu Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Element: N/A Description: This technique creates intangible copies of the user. The clones are simply illusions and will dissipate when they come into contact with something. The illusions can be seen through by the Byakugan and the Sharingan. A person with normal eyes can also distinguish the clones from the original, since the clones will not disrupt the area around themselves with their movement (won't kick up dust, crush grass, etc.).
Name: Nawanuke no Jutsu Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Element: N/A Description: A basic jutsu taught at the Konoha Ninja Academy, this jutsu allows a ninja to free themselves if they have been tied up.
Name: Genjutsu Kai Rank: E-S Type: Ninjutsu Element: N/A Description: Kai is a Ninjutsu technique which allows the ninja to avoid the effects of a Genjutsu illusion. After forming the needed handseals, the Genjutsu technique will not affect the ninja. The ninja can also use the technique on another individual who was unable to avoid the attack. After forming the needed hand seals, the ninja touches the one affected to end the affect of the spell.
Name: Shunshin no Jutsu Rank: D-S Type: Ninjutsu Element: N/A Description: This jutsu is a high-speed movement technique, allowing a ninja to move short to long distances at an almost untraceable speed. To an observer, it appears as if the user has teleported. A puff of smoke is occasionally used to disguise the user's movements. It is accomplished by using chakra to temporarily boost the user's reflexes. The amount of chakra required depends on the overall distance between the user and their intended destination.
Name: Kinobori no Waza - Act of Tree Climbing Rank: N/A Type: Ninjutsu/Chakra Control Element: N/A Description: Kinobori no Waza, the art of tree climbing serves a dual purpose. Taking part in Kinobori Shugyou (Tree Climbing Training) helps a ninja learn how to focus their chakra. It also teaches the ninja how to run up trees and walk on vertical walls. The training helps the ninja learn how to focus just the right amount of chakra to a particular part of their body. The amount needed to climb is small but it must be precise. The feet are regarded as the hardest location to master chakra focusing. So by gaining the art of this skill, the ninja will have any jutsu available (theoretically) because they will be able to focus their chakra as needed.
Name: Suimen Hokou no Waza - Act of Water Surface Walking Rank: N/A Type: Ninjutsu/Chakra Control Element: N/A Description: A variation on the Kinobori no Waza (Act of Tree Climbing), the art of water surface walking allows a ninja to walk on water as if it was a solid surface. Focusing an even amount of chakra out of the soles of their feet, they can balance themselves on the very surface of the water.
Name: Ayatsuito no Jutsu - String Reeling Technique Rank: N/A Type: Ninjutsu Element: N/A Description: Ayatsuito no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing wire. This string can be used in rappeling, or as a method to tie down and restrict the movement of an opponent. The Uchiha clan also utilizes the wire in their Sharingan Soufuusha Sannotachi technique. The wire allows the clan member to pin down an opponent, and then unleash a torrent of fire upon them.
Name: Bikou Ninjutsu - Shadowing Stealth Technique Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Element: N/A Description: Bikou Ninjutsu is the technique ninjas use to follow their targets covertly. The manner in which the ninja shadows their target can differ, from the basic hiding under a nearby object, to using a jutsu to turn oneself invisible.
B Rank- Spoiler:
Name: Dance of the Shikigami Rank: B Type: Ninjutsu Element: Paper Description: Shizo will turn his body and clothing into many sheets of paper. He can control and reshape every sheet at will, making such forms as weapons for attack, butterflies for spying, or simply covering her enemy in sheets of paper, restricting and asphyxiating them. He can also hide exploding tags amongst his papers to add a deadly surprise to his opponent. Weak to fire and oil attacks.
Name: Paper Angel Wings Rank: B Type: Ninjutsu Element: Paper Description: After the use of the Dance of the Shikigami, Shizo will create angel wings on his back using paper mainly from his legs. This can be used to transport through air. Weak to fire and oil attacks.
Name: Paper Clone Rank: B Type: Ninjutsu Element: Paper Description: By infusing his chakra into paper, he can shape the paper into a perfect replica of himself that he can control remotely. When the clone is hit or disperses, it merely collapses back into sheets of paper. Shizo can conceal exploding tags in the paper clones as well. The user must first use Dance of the Shikigami.
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| DouJutsuB Rank- Spoiler:
Name: Demonic Illusion: Shackling Stakes Rank: B Type: Genjutsu, Doujutsu Element: None Description: This genjutsu requires the use of the Sharingan. The opponent is caught in the mind world created by the user, and the victim will be tormented with the sensation of having spikes driven through their limbs, completely taking away their body's freedom. At the same time, the physical pain accompanying the illusion reveals the great use this technique has for primarily torture and such.
Name: Demonic Illusion: Burning Paper Body Rank: B Type: Genjutsu, Doujutsu Element: None Description: This genjutsu requires the Sharingan and eye contact to be activated. The illusion traps the victim in a dark empty space where their body is made of paper that burns from toe to head while the user is watching. The technique will make it harder for the target to move properly.
Name: Demonic Illusion: Mirror Heaven and Earth Change Rank: B Type: Genjutsu, Doujutsu Element: None Description:The user decrypts a genjutsu that has been applied onto them, and casts back a technique with identical effects onto the opponent. It's a form of illusion reversal, but in order to instantly read through a technique and cast it in return, the Sharingan's power is necessary. As genjutsu is initially used to confuse the enemy, this technique which sends it right back to its caster deals a high amount of mental damage, more than anything else.
A Rank- Spoiler:
Name: Izanagi Rank: A Type: Genjutsu, Dojutsu Element: None Description: A Genjutsu cast on oneself instead of others. When activated, the caster removes the boundaries between reality and illusion within their personal space. To a degree, this allows the user to control their own state of existence. When Izanagi is activated, it is capable of turning injuries and even death inflicted upon the user into mere illusions. Whenever the user receives a fatal injury, he or she automatically fades away as a genjutsu, and then returns back to reality, physically real and unscathed. The use of Izanagi comes with a deal. The user must sacrifice one of his or her eyes to eternal darkness, never to be opened again.
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| Subject: Re: Shizo Uchiha [WIP] Wed Nov 24, 2010 9:40 am | |
| If you could Zarok...Please stick to the original template. It'd help. Your set up is indeed pretty, but theres no need to show off.
Second note~ If you forget to say something, dont post twice. The edit button is there for a reason.
Keep up the good work~ | |
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| Subject: Re: Shizo Uchiha [WIP] Wed Nov 24, 2010 4:41 pm | |
| Sorry I come from a site where a lot of people use their own custom templates, but changing it back to the original template that was made for this site is no problem. Also the two post above that say "Ninjutsu" and "Doujutsu" were where my jutsu were going to be. | |
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| Subject: Re: Shizo Uchiha [WIP] Thu Nov 25, 2010 12:18 pm | |
| Please add Academy jutsu? It'd help you survive in the Naru-world. Knowing the basics is essential.
I'd prefer you had your Jutsu in the main, but posting your compiled jutsu in a second topic isn't against the rules...
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| Subject: Re: Shizo Uchiha [WIP] Thu Nov 25, 2010 8:19 pm | |
| this is great. i cant wait for it to updated. |
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| Subject: Re: Shizo Uchiha [WIP] Thu Nov 25, 2010 11:50 pm | |
| Kekkei Genkai: Sharingan Third Tomoe/Eternal Mangekyou Sharingan
No way in hell is anyone starting with the Mangekyou Sharingan and there is no way in hell for the Eternal Mangekyou Sharingan
So please Edit it to only Three Tomoe Sharingan Plz. | |
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| Subject: Re: Shizo Uchiha [WIP] Fri Nov 26, 2010 12:20 am | |
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| Subject: Re: Shizo Uchiha [WIP] Fri Nov 26, 2010 12:38 pm | |
| Ah...Thanks for that Lark, Im not too sure about all the clan stuff xP
Gimme me a PM when you're ready for acceptance Zarok. | |
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