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 Kazuki Shirubaken [Finished]

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PostSubject: Re: Kazuki Shirubaken [Finished]   Sat Oct 18, 2008 6:02 pm

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Hmm.
It makes no sense that he senses danger twice for one single enemy.
If he sense danger for an enemy, then he continues to sense danger, what would he do, he wont be having a teaparty after being attacked..

Hey Guys, i just want to point out, A WHILLLLLEEEEEEE BAck, when Ingoo was still around, i was talking to jodi. And she was telling me about an "Enhanced Chakra Sense" or something along those lines that a CANON character had. I'm Sure Daedalus can find it somewhere. Idk the Characters name/when it happened, i didn't read/watch those episodes. but i Can get around to ask Jodi if you want.
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PostSubject: Re: Kazuki Shirubaken [Finished]   Sat Oct 18, 2008 6:06 pm

Well, if thats what he would like to do, it isn't my character.
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PostSubject: Re: Kazuki Shirubaken [Finished]   Sat Oct 18, 2008 7:16 pm

I can't find it so the ability has been removed. Am I approved yet or what?
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PostSubject: Re: Kazuki Shirubaken [Finished]   Sat Oct 18, 2008 7:27 pm

Oh no. im still reviewing your jutsus. I see a few things that should be changed, and will post them when I am done.
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PostSubject: Re: Kazuki Shirubaken [Finished]   Mon Oct 20, 2008 6:12 pm

reading the arguments it seems fine, and it is logical to sense danger more than once from one enemy.. remember your tactics todd attack hide attack hide attack hide... this would give him a slight advantage against the one thing and it makes sense (also I do know what dream is talking about... I think it might have been ranmaru but that I think is not the same thing)

Name: Omnipresent Robe
Rank: E
Cost: 10 regular, 15 elemental boosted (per post)
Type: Weaponry
Element: None
Description: By focusing chakra into his robe, the robe takes on powerful defensive, as well as offensive. qualities. The robe can be moved by the will of the user and can be turned into various forms such as spears or shields. When in use, the robe generally floats freely around the user. By focusing elemental chakra into the robe, it can take on increased properties. Wind would cause it to become razor sharp and able to cut through most substances. Lightning increases its overall attack range and defensive strength.

this is quite well thought out but I dont see how lightning would increase defensive stature
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PostSubject: Re: Kazuki Shirubaken [Finished]   Mon Oct 20, 2008 6:16 pm

Well, Wind increased its attack, so I simply figured that lightning would be defense is all. I can change that if needed.

And I checked Ranmaru already, he had some modified byakugan ability. Could see through walls and stuff but also see chakra systems in greater detail than byakugan.
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PostSubject: Re: Kazuki Shirubaken [Finished]   Tue Oct 21, 2008 4:29 pm

Okay, thanks to a friend of a friend, my special ability is back.

Kagura Shingan - Kagura Mind's Eye
Kagura Shingan Character Use: Karin
Rank: -
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m ~ 10m), Far (10m+)
Type: Supplementary
Note: Secret Technique

Kagura Shingan
Kagura Shingan is a Ninjutsu technique used by Sound ninja Karin. Using her inate ability to sense chakra, Karin can determine the location of her opponent, the size of an approaching unseen force and their chakra capacity.

Made a few small adjustments.

P.S. Fixed the robe jutsu.
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PostSubject: Re: Kazuki Shirubaken [Finished]   Tue Oct 21, 2008 7:06 pm

well all the problems I had noted are fixed as well as all those todd had noted ^^... unless its reviewed and I missed something its good to go
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